Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
I don't like how Deb is treating Justin, he did nothing to her. Maybe Micheal is talking behind his back or something. I think Justin handles Gus perfectly when Mel started mouthing off. I really hate her so much. Can't wait for more x
Author's Response: I have to agree with everything you said.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2019 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
For this chapter not having Justin involved... I found him in quite a bit of it. hehe!
I'm so glad Justin can witness all the bitchiness of how the other's treat Brian. Maybe it will help him understand things more so from the get go.
Melanie is downright vicious. Her actions toward Brian should help Justin when it comes time for the giving up parental rights. Justin could point out her faults and attitude. Does Brian really want someone who talks and acts the way she does, raising his son?
Debbie needs a cutting down. Who's the owner of the diner? I think a little visit is in order to see him. Let him know what goes on. Two can play games. Who is Debbie to decide Kiki should have all the grunt work? That is so wrong on so many levels. We still haven't learned why she cut his hours. (I'm betting Mikey complained to Mommy about Brian spending time with the kid instead of ME... his best friend.) Maybe Justin should make a comment to Brian. Explaining when his mom tells his dad (now that she knows) he is going to need money to get his own place.
Never a truer statement... Vic is the sane one in that family.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: I had to rework the story line so that Justin found out what occurred and that helped. It's a little tricky but I think when we get to that part you'll see a difference. Debbie is jealous of Justin and while she thinks she's punishing Justin, it's poor Kiki that's caught in the middle. Telling tales don't work so much in this story, but somehow it all comes out in the wash. Justin plans to stay out of Michael's way as much as he can and learn to stand on his own two feet. Luckily Vic comes out much better in my version.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2019 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
Really enjoying the alternate universe. Can't wait to see what you do with all the episodes. I remember the first time I watched Season 1 and saw the bashing. it was devastating. I am looking forward to how you handle that one.
Author's Response: I've got a few tricks up my sleeve. Hope you like them.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
Some things the same, others very different. You are taking us on a fascinating journey. At least Mikey is still a big jerk!! Bill
Author's Response: As we go along little things change, that makes a big difference. Some things change for the better. Unfortunately Michael isn't one of them.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
What happens with Debbie ? Brian is a little different here. It 's Wednesday soon ?? Love your story.
Author's Response: Debbie will be on the outskirts, since Justin isn't going to coddle her. Brian is Brian without the walls, the walls he put up because he was dealing with abusive parents and a Mikey that wanted more than Brian was ready to give.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
What's up with Debbie? I can understand trying to shine a positive light on Michael, and even pushing him towards Justin. But, why is she cutting his hours back, and treating him oddly?
Can't wait for more...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Debbie is responding to Justin the way she would if Michael hadn't introduced them. The fact that Justin is more mature than he was and well liked at the Diner, making bigger tips, has her in Mikey mode.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
I'm really enjoying this. But what's up with Debbie - Micheal's probably got something to do with that. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Debbie loves to think she's helping everyone, only Justin doesn't need help.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
What does Debbie have a problem with Justin? And Brian seems different or just beause of the changed Justin? When I'm finished with the chapter, I'll look for the next one. ;) I'm looking forward to more. Thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: She seeing that he's getting more tips than she is, is what I think.
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2019 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Episode 4 (Ted's not Dead)
Think Michael has been bitching to his mommy about Justin..... great chapter
Author's Response: I'm not sure why, but if Deb was as wonderful as she thought she was more people would have her on their side.
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