Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

Lol Justin is loving this and I'm so happy he annoyed Michael. Gosh I hope this brings him and Brian even closer together. 



Author's Response:

Me too.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2019 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

I like all the little changes that Justin brings to his experience. I hope you will make some scenes more finished than in the series because sometimes we wait so much but nothing comes. Waiting for more.

Author's Response:

I'll do my best.  Let me know what scenes you feel need more finishing.

Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2019 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

Hi! Ahh chapter two and I'm not disappointed. I like the way Justin is acting differently with his experience. I'm curious what will change and how Brian reats and how it is now with the robbed loft. Next chapter comes sunday? I love it! Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  I might be posting the next chapter on Wednesday.  Hope that's okay.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2019 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

Hi, Phyllis!  Finally had a chance to catch up on some reading.  This is a fascinating premise - seeing how Justin might change things and react if giving the opportunity. I wonder, though, how things might be changed for the good...and the bad.

Can't wait to read more of this.  Loving it so far.  Thanks for posting this.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks, high praise coming from you.  There will be some interesting changes, whether they are for good or bad will be up to you.  Hope you continue to enjoy reading.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2019 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

enjoyed this second chapter, happy to see the update.  Love when Mikey looks bad.  Bill



Author's Response:

My favorite thing is to put Mikey in his place.  I can just see him pouting now.  Thank you for reviewing.  I'll be looking for another chapter from you!

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2019 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

Okay, loved the whole Swayze change and the going back to the loft together, and no George showing up. One more jab at Miley. I love how justin added the ... for Mikey after how embarrassing. You said, Like last time everyone laughed. They didn't this time? Also, now all the guys are aware Justin is a repeat. So, what will that make for his night at Babylon and the stealing of the tricks? Will Justin still go with Brian, or actually steal the trick?

When I first read the last line: Looking back on it everything Brian said back then Justin realized everything he’d said was the truth. It made me sad that Justin thought that, as Brian changed at the end. BUT... then I realized... hey! We're having a do-over. Brian can realize it this time a lot sooner.

Apparently, Justin was in New York for three years. I'm assuming he and Brian didn't keep in contact with each other... correct? And this is the reason fate has intervened? Your tags show Mysterious Marilyn... hmm. They also don't show anti characters... bummer.

I also suggest Justin hang around for the loft robbery and see who the culprits are. Maybe not inside the loft, but watch from someplace outside, ready to call the cops. (Starema's horrendous story put a damper on inside the loft.) *shudder*

Are you having to rewatch all the shows prior to writing your chapters?

Really looking forward to more of this. Thanks for writing again and sharing your story with us.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

I'm not sure if Justin feels New York was his opportunity of a lifetime.  But we have to be realistic, Brian is still Brian and what he'd said then was what he felt.  I couldn't figure out how to do anti-Mikey or anti-Lindsay.  I had enough problems to figure out how to post.  lol.  I hope you'll like how I reworked the robbery because I wasn't happy with how it ended up.  Yes I'm rewatching all the shows.  There a quite a few spots where Justin wasn't featured, so I tried to work around them.  Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2019 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Episode 2-(Queer, There and Everywhere)

I'm loving this  Justin gets to relive it all, but this time, make the little changes he needs to have better outcomes. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Some of the changes turn out surprising.

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