Reviewer: 1Word (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 10:45 PM · On: The armchair
Any plans to finish?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2021 07:15 PM · On: The Reason
Good question. What is Justin doing?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2021 02:36 PM · On: Babylon
I'm thinking Justin didn't notice.
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2021 08:48 PM · On: The Reason
Brian who doesn't want to admits that he cares. Love this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it, hope you'll like the next one as well.
Hugs
Estelle
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2021 08:27 PM · On: The Reason
Woah, Justin sure got under Brian's skin!
Author's Response: He definitely did! Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
I appreciate it a lot. (:
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2021 08:59 AM · On: The Reason
Thanks for the update. Justin really pushes Brian's buttons! I hope all will be well anyway.
Author's Response: He really does push his buttons. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Stay hooked for the next chapter.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2021 08:59 AM · On: The Reason
Thanks for the update. Justin really pushes Brian's buttons! I hope all will be well anyway.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2021 01:39 AM · On: The Reason
Ha-ha-ha! Brian's got his hands full with a mischievious twink! Justin is really pressing Brian's buttons. I can still hear his, "Brian Kinney gives a shit!" from canon. This was something very similar.
And no matter how Brian tries to play ferocious and mean toward Justin - I'm thinking he just wants to scare him and make him realize the dangers that exist. Because I don't think Brian could ever bring himself to truly hurt Justin.
I'm so glad to see you around again. I had been very worried there for a while when my emails went unanswered. With everything that was going on this last year, it was a time to worry when friends were absent. I, myself, ended up in the hospital for over two weeks with Covid, so I always worried about others. So take care of yourself, Estelle.
I'm still loving your story!
Hugs,
Cathy
Author's Response: Oh, he definitely is. And yeah, it's quite similar to that particular scene.
Well, he definitely does care. But who knows what will happen in the next one.
Doesn't sound too good, hope you're doing well now! It's not too bad where I live, at least not in my circle of friends and family. But for it was mostly finding motivation, not having the time and stuff. Stay safe, Cathy!
I'm really glad you do! Thank you so much.
Hugs
Estelle
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 09:51 PM · On: Babylon
Well, I'm LOL... I really didn't think my 'Brandon' comment would reach anybody... But who knows, all the evil guys could be vampires!
Yes, I know it was Kip that Brian admitted to changing. But how many has Kip changed??? LOL..
Super Hugs,
Cathy
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 09:44 AM · On: Babylon
It's nice to see a new chapter and I hope you are doing well and that yes you will finish this story! I wonder who attacked Justin? Hope the next chapter will be posted soon !.
Author's Response: I'm doing well, thank you for asking! Just not much time for writing.
I'll try to update as soon as possible! Thank you for your review (:
Hugs
Estelle
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 05:20 AM · On: Babylon
To Briton Manor, I thought Kip was the bad guy?
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 05:18 AM · On: Babylon
This was an amazing chapter. The way you wrote it, the realization that he was bitten. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it, I was unsure to even post it since I have not edited it properly yet.
Thanks for the review!
Hugs
Estelle
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 01:00 AM · On: Babylon
Hey you! I've missed you! It's like you dropped on the face of the Earth! I'm so glad to see you and your story back! Are you still in school?
Anyway, the chapter was really good... and I'm guessing it was Brandon who came up behind Justin and bit him??? WOW!
Now I wonder what kind of revenge Brian will eke out...
And what was up with Mikey? Was he hitting on Justin? Was he hoping for more???
Welcome back! Don't be a stranger!
Hugs,
Cathy ❤️
Author's Response: Hey Cathy! Aw, I missed you too! I've started an apprenticeship and work at a gas station as well. So it's little time I have to work with but oh well.
Thank you, I appreciate it! It was hard for me to get back into the story since I didn't remember quite as much! Well, you'll see in the next one.
Mikey is just Mikey, haha.
I try! But life keeps me busy.
Hugs
Estelle <3
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2021 11:34 PM · On: Decisions
OMG, I was thinking about this story a few days ago and hoping we would
get an update. Bless your heart for making that happen. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 05:21 PM · On: Decisions
I hope we really don't have to wait an eternity, I know RL sucks up your time but I hope your able to update soon
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2019 02:35 PM · On: Decisions
Love it, hope there be updates soon
Author's Response: I'll try to get to writing as soon as I can! And thank you so much for reading (:
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2019 11:26 AM · On: Decisions
Are we sad to see Ethan go? NOT! Lying, cheating imp! Hopefully, he left nothing behind so he has no reason to come back.
I have to wonder where Brian has been hiding. And why?
So, Michael couldn't help getting in his jab... Brian doesn't do boyfriends. I always have to roll my eyes at that comment. Just because he never wanted Micheal as one, doesn't mean he didn't want one. (okay... I'll keep my inner Anti-Michael feelings to myself.)
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Sorry for my late response Cathy, I haven't looked in here for quite a while!
Yeah, he really was as bad as in the series.
Brian's been hiding but soon he'll make his comeback!
Haha, but I meant Michael to warn Justin in a good way but no worries, it's okay to state your opinion (:
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Hugs,
Estelle
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 08:34 AM · On: Decisions
I'm glad that Ethan is gone. Let's hope he'll see Brian at Babylon. Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's out of the picture for now. We'll see in the next chapter. Thank you so much for reading and writing a comment!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 03:51 PM · On: Decisions
Love it, hope there be an update
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 09:09 AM · On: Decisions
Now that Ethan is out of the picture, all you have to do is find Brian, where is he? Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Well, I'll hope the next chapter answers your questions! And thank you so much for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 02:11 AM · On: Decisions
Great chapter. Glad that Ethan is gone. Never did like him. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response: Haha, seems like no one quite likes him. Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2019 01:15 AM · On: Decisions
Now things seem to be going in the right direction. If only Brian was around.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I've finally had to end their relationship to get things going. Don't you worry, he'll probably be around in the next chapter!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 11:47 AM · On: The Talk
Now that Justin knows who attacked him and why, not to mention what Brian is what will he do?
Author's Response: Well, I hope your question will be answered in the next chapters! As always, thank you so much for leaving a comment!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2019 04:26 PM · On: The Talk
Great chapter. How long will Brian have his self-control.
Author's Response: We will see how he's doing in the next chapters, haha.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2019 06:30 PM · On: The Talk
it seems to me it would have been better to kill Kip, I mean when he turned him he made him forever around.
Author's Response: Haha, you're probably right. But Brian thought it was a suiting punishment.
Thanks for commenting!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2019 02:03 PM · On: The Talk
I really liked this chapter. Kip Thomas was definitely a twist I didn't see coming. It worked so well, and gave the canon aspect to the story.
I'm thinking if Brian is Kip's maker, Brian should have some control over Kip. That doesn't mean Kip can't strike when Brian isn't around, but I think he would have to answer to him.
Kudos to Brian for being able to stop after he had that one little taste. It could have sent him into a frenzy.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Then I'm glad I could suprise you with this ine, haha.
Well, we'll see if he has any power over him (still thinking about it, honestly).
Indeed!
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on here! It really means a lot to me.
Hugs,
Estelle
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2019 11:51 AM · On: The Talk
Great chapter. So different from the usual B & J stories. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad to hear this and it's a big compliment! As always, thank you for reviewing and reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2019 10:54 AM · On: The Talk
So I am a little confused has Kip turned Justin or has he just marked him to go at again?
Author's Response: He hasn't turned him. In my fic you can't be turned by simply being bitten. He made sure Brian knew of the attack and who did it.
Thank you for reading!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2019 08:29 AM · On: The Talk
I can say that it is more and more surprising and it makes me shudder but I like it. I can not wait to see if Brian will suck the blood of Justin !!! Thanks for the update even late.
Author's Response: I'm really glad that you do like it! Thank you so much for reading! It means a lot.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2019 06:47 PM · On: Epiphany
So Brian is a vampire? Does Mikey know? What about Emmett and Ted? I think Justin will be safe if Emmett is around.
Author's Response: He's definitely one. I hope you'll get the answers to your questions in the next chapter(s)! Maybe he is. Thank you so much for reading.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2019 06:41 PM · On: Epiphany
Wow now Justin knows !!! I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Yes, he definitely does. Thank you so much for reading and your feedback!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2019 12:51 AM · On: Epiphany
Squeeeee! thanks for finally confirming what we all knew to be true. Justin sure is taking what he just witnessed so very calmly. I would have been halfway to Calaifornia if I'd just seen Brian sinking fangs into some poor guys throat. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha, you're welcome. He was pretty scared at the beginning but I think the alcohol was affecting him a little so he was easily convinced that Brian had said the truth. Thank you so much for read and leaving a comment! I really appreciate it.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2019 09:15 PM · On: The armchair
More is needed.
Author's Response: Haha, more will come for sure!
Thank you so much for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2019 06:54 PM · On: Epiphany
Grr.. That was good, well we knew Brian was a vampire, but still a very informative chapter. Thanks for the update, it was well appreciated.
Author's Response: Yeah, haha it was pretty obvious but now at least Justin knows it as well! Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2019 05:21 PM · On: Epiphany
Oh, wow. Great chapter and now Justin knows what Brian is. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, now he definitely knows! Glad you liked this one.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2019 11:53 PM · On: Patched up
Nice update! Methinks there's another vampire on Brian's turf? ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it (:
Maybe there is!
Hugs
Lacri
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2019 02:33 AM · On: Distraction
The story is getting interesting. I can't wait to see what the phone call was he received before Michael started pounding on Brian's door. (Dang Michael.)
And I am anxious to see what all will happen at Babylon
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to write a review here! Hopefully, the next chapter answers some questions and you'll like it as well (:
Thank you so much for all!
Hugs,
Estelle
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2019 08:28 PM · On: Distraction
I always look forward to each new chapter. Intriguing story!
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2019 08:07 PM · On: Distraction
I like Mrs. Brown. And where is Brian. Curious about the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, she's a sweetheart and a Britin shipper, haha. Thank you so much for reading!! Hope you'll find out in the next one!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2019 07:11 PM · On: Distraction
I always look forward to each new chapter. Intriguing story!
Author's Response: That really means a lot to me. And I always look forward to read the comments of my lovely readers!
I'm glad you like it! Thank you so much for your feedback.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2019 02:47 PM · On: Distraction
The best part was Ethan being gone. Hope Brian is okay.
Author's Response: Haha, you're probably right. Thank you so much for reading and giving me feedback!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2019 02:29 PM · On: Distraction
Always so weird. I like it ! Where is Brian ? Ha ha good question. Looking for the next chapter. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Well, weird is they keyword in this story, haha. I'm glad you do! Hopefully there will be more Brian in the next chapter.
Thnak you so much for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2019 08:25 AM · On: Distraction
Great to see an update. Really hoping Justin and Brian meet up again soon.
Author's Response: Don't you worry, there'll be more interaction between those two in the next chapter! Thank you so much for reading!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2019 07:17 PM · On: Distraction
I'm glad you updated but there wasn't a lot going on, but glad for the update.
Author's Response: Haha, I know. It's a very quiet chapter but in the next one there will be a little more action. Thank you for reading and commenting! It means a lot!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2019 06:13 PM · On: Distraction
Wonderful update. Glad you are back. Think everyone is busy right now as there have been few updates or new stories. It is that time of the year. All we have had for over a week is rain so it is very depressing. One thing we learn as readers since we can't write it patience. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess you're right. Well, I guess a little bit of rain is better than the unbearable heat over here.
Thank you so much for reading and writing a review!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2019 11:29 PM · On: Patched up
OOOOOOH, this story is getting so intense. Who or what attacked Justin and left him for dead? And as for Brian coming to the Kid's rescue, well he must have a clue or two. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Well, Brian might or might not have a clue about what's going on! Hopefully, you'll find out more in the next chapter. Thank you for reading and taking the time to write a comment!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 04:37 PM · On: Patched up
Does anyone else have an "Angel" vibe going on about Brian. A vampire that hunts his own kind. I don't know about the cursed part. And "Ian", lol, is a douche bag.
Author's Response: Wow, that's a nice theory! We'll see if you're theory will come true (: Oh yeah, Ethan definitely is, haha. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment, it means a lot!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 02:36 PM · On: Patched up
Oh. I’m just loving this! Brian makes one sexy vampire and he definitely is fighting his need for Justin.
Author's Response: Oh, I totally agree with you! He definitely is. I'm so glad that you like it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 02:18 PM · On: Patched up
I think Brian knows who attacked Justin. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Maybe he does, we'll see. Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 12:54 PM · On: Patched up
This story has a definite Vampire vibe. You leave us wanting more information in a good way.
Author's Response: That's not only the vibe though. I'm glad you see it that way, thank you so much for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 08:43 AM · On: Patched up
But who has attacked Justin, does Brian have any idea? This story is more and more weird, but I like it. Even vampires are not my cup of tea. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, even though you don't like vampire stories. I think it might get weirder and I hope that maybe some of your questions get answered soon!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 02:23 AM · On: Patched up
Great chapter. Love this story even though I usually stay away from vampire stories. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your kind words mean even more to me because you like it when though it's not your cup of tea. Thank you so much for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2019 08:21 PM · On: The morning after
Haha! Yes Ethan is a selfish asshole in this! Brian to the rescue.
Author's Response: He most definitely is. Maybe he'll get better with time. Yes! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2019 08:06 AM · On: The morning after
I like a selfish Ethan and Brian the savior. Just like that, Justin and Brian are getting closer and closer, even though Brian is so weird.
Author's Response: Yeah, it opens up the perfect opportunity for them to get to know each other some more! Glad you like it and thank you for leaving me feedback!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2019 05:08 AM · On: The morning after
Yep, that Ethan is one selfish dude. At least Brian braved the sun and found Justin.
Author's Response: Yes, he is indeed. It took him a lot of clothes but he made it.
Thank you for commenting!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2019 11:09 PM · On: The morning after
Great chapter. Never liked Ethan so you can make him as bad as you want. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Haha, I only liked him in the beginning, but glad I can make him look bad! Thank you so much!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2019 08:22 PM · On: Going out
more please Estelle
Author's Response: I'm working on it! (: I think Chapter 5 will be up today/tomorrow! Thank you for all the feedback, Angelika!!
Hugs,
Estelle
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2019 08:11 PM · On: Discovery
interesting, always thought Ethan is an ass
Author's Response: Yeah, I actually liked Ethan at the beginning but then the tables turned and he's a hypocrite. Thank you for reading!!
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2019 07:49 PM · On: The armchair
love it already. That is Brian for you
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you do! Yeah, he's a jerk at first haha.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2019 03:59 PM · On: Going out
Oh no you can't do this to us. I can't believe you are seriously going to leave us dangling from that cliff. The drama has me clutching all my pearls so please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry but I really couldn't resist to leave it at that! Haha, but I hope to update soon and make up for the cliffhanger!! Thank you so much for reading.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2019 08:16 AM · On: The armchair
Can't wait for next chapter. I think it might be Ethan in the alley?
Author's Response: Well, who knows? ;) Thank you for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 07:52 AM · On: Going out
OMG, I really hope its Brian. Or that Brian will rescue him soon. Can’t wait to read the answer.
Author's Response: Sorry for the cliffhanger! I hope the next chapter'll makue up for it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it really always makes my day!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2019 02:43 AM · On: Going out
OK, well I didn't see that ending coming... but I'm thinking now, that I probably should have, LOL!
Author's Response: Well, I admit when I planned on writing this chapter I had a completely different ending to it but well. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2019 09:30 PM · On: Going out
Oh dear I hope that’s Brian 😦 Justin has been playing with Fire lately
Author's Response: Oh, he has definitely been playing with fire! You'll find that out in the next chapter! ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It means a lot.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2019 07:32 AM · On: Going out
That's a cliffhanger!! I want to know more quickly! Is Brian attacking him or is he going to save him? I like this chapter Justin really had a bad day. Let's see the night ???
Author's Response: It definitely is! I'm trying to write the next one as soon as possible! You'll find out in the next one (: Thank you so much for reading!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2019 10:30 PM · On: Going out
Oh my, Justin is having a very bad day. My question is - is it Brian stalking him?
Author's Response: He's definitely having a bad day! Well, you'll hopefully find out in the next one! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2019 07:03 PM · On: Going out
I think I want to read more and right away! What a tease!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for stopping it there! But I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2019 05:18 PM · On: Going out
Wow, great cliffhanger. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Haha, thank you. I thought a cliffhanger would be a great way to end this chapter. Thank youuu!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: addict_writer (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 06:18 PM · On: Discovery
Ah, poor Justin. He has no idea what he's getting himself into!
Author's Response: Oh he definitely doesn't. Even though he's suspicious! Thank you for all your feedback! It really means a lot.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: addict_writer (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 06:01 PM · On: The fall
poor Justin.
I'm loving this Brian.
Ethan deserves a shove down the stairs
Author's Response: Yeah, he has to put up with a lot.
I'm glad because I have a great time writing him this way!
Oh, I agree with that one, at least with his current behavior.
Thank you!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: addict_writer (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 05:48 PM · On: The armchair
hah! I bet there will be more encounters with Brian.
Author's Response: Oh, there will be. A lot of encounters! Thank you for reading and giving me feedback, it means a lot!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 02:02 PM · On: Discovery
Hold up. What just happened? Sun allergy and blood stains? Is Brian a Vamp? I love vampire stories.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Well, I guess you figured me out, haha. It'll definitely be a Vampire story!
I'll try my best!
Thank you for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 01:59 PM · On: The fall
Brian really knows how to rattle Ethan's cage. From Justin's response to being rescued by Brian I have a feeling the Fiddler's days are numbered.
Author's Response: They will get into each other's hair more often for sure. Well, he's definitely smitten with Brian. Thank you for reading!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 01:56 PM · On: The armchair
Wow! The guys didn't make a good impression on each other at all. This first chapter is very different and I can't wait to see some chemistry between them.
Author's Response: They had a little bit of a rough start. I'm glad to hear that and there will definitely be more chemistry coming! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 01:01 PM · On: Discovery
Interesting. Brianis acting like a jerk alright, but a ravishing one at that.
Author's Response: Glad you think that! I totally agree with you on this. Thank you for reading and giving me feedback!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 07:35 AM · On: Discovery
Brian is more and more weird. Poor Justin he is going to be eaten alive. Mrs. Brown shared a lot! Thanks for the update
Author's Response: I'm sorry to say that he'll get even weirder. He'll probably will if he continues like that. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 08:40 PM · On: Discovery
Wow now that is an interesting new point where was the blood from Brian obviously
Author's Response: Glad you think so! Well, hopefully you'll find out in the next one. Thank you so much for your feedback!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 07:25 PM · On: Discovery
Something weird is going on. I like the new neighbor, but is what she said the truth?
Author's Response: Just a little weird. I'm glad you like her! Well, you'll find out in the next chapters ;)
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 07:15 PM · On: Discovery
Great update. Wonderful writing. So many writers are not updating now so it is good to get a new chapter. And, no mistakes that I saw. Love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, I know :O. It's great that you like it so far, let's hope you'll like the rest as well!! Thank you for reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 12:28 PM · On: The fall
"I'm Brian Kinney, and it's a pleasure meeting you, well not really." LOL! Oh, this is too funny! Ethan doesn't stand a chance here. He is totally clueless and so out of his league! Loving this, Lacri, and looking forward to the rest of it! Thank you. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Haha, Ethan and Brian will behave like cat and mouse for the rest of the story. Well, I can totally agree with that. Your feedback really made my day! Thank you so much, Kim! Hope you'll get a good laugh out of the rest of the following chapters as well!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 12:25 PM · On: The armchair
Hi, Lacri! I'm so behind in my reviewing, but I want you to know that I'm loving this! The bantering back and forth between Brian and Justin is priceless, and their snarky responses are too funny! Poor Ethan's going to be dust in the wind soon.;) So glad you started a new story! Thanks for posting this! Onto Ch. 2! ~Kim
Author's Response: Than I'm even more grateful that you take the time to leave me feedback, Kim. I'm glad you think so and enjoy it, it's really funny to write the banter between them! Haha, Ethan will have a hard time to measure up to Brian! Thank you for reading, dear.
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2019 02:23 PM · On: The fall
Oh I'm loving this. Brian to the rescue and so easily done too. Ian doesn't stand a chance.
Author's Response: No, he really doesn't stand a chance, haha. Glad you enjoyed this one (:
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment !!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 03:08 PM · On: The fall
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Brian to the rescue? Ian being an ass.
Author's Response: I'm really glad you did! Yeah you pretty much summarized it there. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 04:11 AM · On: The fall
Ethan watch and learn, this is how you take care of someone. Instead of only thinking of yourself. Step 2 if Ethan who doesn’t have a chance. Again a great chapter!!
Author's Response: Haha you are right. He should really watch and learn! Well, his chances are very slim x) thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2019 10:57 AM · On: The fall
Wonderful chapter. Terrific writing. As if Ethan stands a chance now that Brian is in the picture.
Author's Response: Well, it's definitely gonna be difficult for him to get Justin's attention. And thank you so much, I appreciate your feedback !!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2019 07:57 AM · On: The fall
Ethan is very selfish and jealous. Brian who helped Justin is still sarcastic. I like this. And the attraction becomes stronger. I can not wait to see how Justin will get rid of Ethan. Yhanks for the update.
Author's Response: Yes, he is in this one even though he doesn't want to be. Oh, it will definitely become stronger. Me either, haha. Thank you for your feedback, it motivates me!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2019 10:48 PM · On: The armchair
I can tell from the first chapter that this story will be smokin' hot.
Author's Response: Haha, let's hope so! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 07:23 AM · On: The armchair
Great chapter. How will a cold shower help after a meeting like this?? Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: It probably won't help him at all. I'm really glad that you liked the first chapter to this story and I hope you'll like the next one as well. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2019 08:10 AM · On: The armchair
I like this beginning. I love when Justin and Brian meet in bad conditions and they scream on it but the attraction is already there. I wait impatiently afterwards. I have not been able to read your last story but I think I will appreciate this one.
Author's Response: Glad you do like it. Yeah, I'm also a big fan of a little bit slowburn, so yeah. That's fine if the other one was not your cup of tea, I hope you'll enjoy this one instead (: Thank you for your feedback!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 10:26 PM · On: The armchair
I think it’s great! Love it so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me. Hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as well. Thank you so much for reading and the feedback!!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 03:47 AM · On: The armchair
Tut-tut. I can't see Ethan lasting long.
Author's Response: Well, who know how long he'll last :D thank you for commenting and reading!
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 03:01 AM · On: The armchair
Wow, great first chapter. So different from the usual Brian & Justin story. Can't wait to see where you go from here. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You think so? I really appreciate it. Hope you like the next chapters as well (: Thanks for the feedback!
Hugs,
Lacri
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