Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 8

Great story!!   Brian has met his match in Justin; he gave as good as he got.   But I'm glad that once Justin got Brian, he held up his end of the bargain and moved his stuff across the street.  LOL   



Author's Response:

It was an equal exchange ;). I'm happy you're enjoying these older stories. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Nanna Nat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2020 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this. A great read. Thanks! x

 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed my story! Thank you for the comment :).

Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2019 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 8

I really liked this story a lot.  Thanks for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the comments. I'm happy you enjoyed this story :). 

Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2019 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was hot.  I love the idea of them watching each other.

Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2019 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 3

Loving the banter between them.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2019 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 8

good one

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2019 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 8

Nice story, I wish I had more! Brian and Justin are ready for a life full of love and success.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for reading and all the nice comments! I appreaciate them so much! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2019 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 8

Sounds like Brian and Justin are going to have a fun time working together.



Author's Response:

I'm sure they will :). Thank you for reading and being so supportive! I really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 8

That was so much fun.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 8

A great story, sad that its complete.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed it :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 8

Really enjoyed this I wish you would continue, alas .We could explore Justin's list  LOL

 



Author's Response:

Hah, yes, Justin's list would make a nice sequel. Unfortunately for now, this story is finished. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

I’m disappointed this is complete already!  I enjoyed it so much.



Author's Response:

Aww, you're the sweetest. Thanak you for all the comments! I appreciate them!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2019 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 8

Just perfect.  Love happy endings.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed the ending :). Thank you for all the supportive comments. I apreciate it! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 7

This is Brian's decision and Justin is so attentive and sweet that Brian could like that! It only remains for them to conquer the world.

Author's Response:

Yes, Brian could have said no any time but he didn't :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 7

So he finally got his graphic designer.  How is it going to work.



Author's Response:

Yes, he did! I guess now that the "worst" is over, anything's possible :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 7

Finally. Justin was considerent of Brian's feelings and still had fun.

Author's Response:

He was always, he just wanted to push Brian's buttons a little :P. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2019 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow, fantastic chapter.  Finally got them together.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

Yep, finally! I'm glad you enjoyed it :), Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

Heidi, that was hot, hot, hot!  I could pretty much tell how Brian was leaning in his decision if you read between the lines in the previous chapter. But I think you wrote this chapter very well; you portrayed Brian in such a way that even as the bottom, he was still very much in command along with Justin. 

Well done!  I could read about them conducting business this way every day - ha!  Looking forward to more. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter ;). Yes, he slowly changed his mind and I think that's all to thanks to Justin. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2019 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

Wow!



Author's Response:

I hope that's a good wow :). Thank you for the comment. 


Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

I wonder what a Justin thinks? Does he think about Brian too? I hope he gives him a chance.

Author's Response:

I think you'll get an answer in the next chapter if you can read between lines. I did not say it directly, but it still kinda is there :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Brian will go crazy. He wants so much Justin and anyway. This is a big novelty for him..I do not know if it was supposed to be funny but to see Brian watching porn was quite fun

Author's Response:

yes, he wants him badly but things didn't go exactly like Brian planned them to. Brian and porn... yeah, that was meant as a slightly humorous scene :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 6

I think Brian is slowly going insane.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that and having extremely bad day, not feeling like he isn't in control which I think Brian is used to. Not a good combination. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 6

Poor baby, so scared. Brain really needs to broaden his experiences. Justin seems like the perfect choice.

Author's Response:

Yep, so scared and in addition, having a very bad day. Brian has closed his mind from so much. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2019 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

OK Brian is a goner soon...loving yhis

 



Author's Response:

Yep, the first stage is always freaking out and getting scared until you slowly calm down :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2019 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh wow, Justin has really gotten to Brian.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian really didn't handle that well. I'm glad you liked it :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2019 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oh I just love this!  Leave it to Justin to come up with this stipulation.  I think it’s great! Let’s see just how far Brian is willing to go to get Justin to “work” for him.  I hope Justin remains strong in his demands.  No backing down.



Author's Response:

Hah, yeah, Justin did get his 1500 SATs. He's a genious! Let's see what happens :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: jayjaykmm (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2019 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

Oooo.... brian is screwed. I'm sure he will give in. But i'm wondering what will happen if he didn't. That is gonna throw justin in for a loop.



Author's Response:

That he is! We'll have to see if he gives in or not :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2019 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

Who will win this part? Justin knows how to play too! I like this. Brian is so surprised !!

Author's Response:

Yes, Justin definitely knows how to play and take the upper hand :D. Brian is pretty shocked right now. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2019 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

Is Brian a little scared of blond boy in his ass?

Author's Response:

You know what, I think he might be ;). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2019 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

Ha! I am so loving this game of cat and mouse! Also love this 'take-charge' Justin who is throwing Brian off his game. This story is such fun, Heidi! "Hazelnutty" - LOL! Thoroughly enjoying this one, and eagerly waiting for more. Thanks for posting this. 🙂 Kim



Author's Response:

Yep, Justin really is taking the charge. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2019 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

Love that Brian has met his match.  Now who will win???  Great chapter, wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin ain't the harmless little blondie :D. That is an excellent question. Guess you have to keep reading to find out :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2019 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 4

Talk about HOT!



Author's Response:

Hah, I'm glad you enjoyed it ;). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 4

Obviously Mr Taylor isn’t as ammune as he pretends lol

Author's Response:

Oh Justin is soooo busted! :D Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was hot!!!!!

Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter ;). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh wow, just wow.  



Author's Response:

Good wow or bad wow? 

Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Will Brian win in the end?



Author's Response:

We don't know yet :). Anything could happen! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 3

Love this cat and mouse game they our boys are playing.  Justin is good, but don't think he knows that you can't beat The Master.  Great writing.



Author's Response:

Hah yeah, Justin can't beat the master at his own game...  or well, who knows? :D. I'm glad you've enjoyed this story up to this point. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3

I love this game of cat and mouse so much. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear that :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi! It starts interesting and I'm looking forward to more. Luckily I still have 2 chapters. :) <3



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the beginning. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love that!! I do not know what else to say. The email exchange was funny and the meeting at Justin's studio was electric.

Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that you had fun reading this chapter :). That is enough! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great tension. The email conversations were hilarious.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you had fun reading :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2019 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Excellently written you could almost be in the rooms.  The descriptions are delightful.



Author's Response:

Thank you :). I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2019 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter.  Love the descriptions of the painting.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I tried to put everything I had into those descriptions. I'm glad you liked it :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2019 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hmmm, is Brian making up the fact that Justin's favorite photo person is coming and how does Nick feel about being replaced?



Author's Response:

You have to read more as I post to find out :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2019 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am so glad to see a new story of you. And I like this beginning !! Justin does not seem to be easily impressed. Brian will have to do some effeots. I like this! I can not wait for more.

Author's Response:

Aww, you're the sweetest :). 

Yeah, Justin might not be that easily impressed in this story. Brian might have to actually work this time. 

I'm happy you liked the first chapter. Thank you for the comment! 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2019 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1

What fun...I can just see these two playing cat and mouse. Looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

Yep, there will be some of that :). I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2019 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning,  Heidi! Love the premise. I already know I'm going to enjoy this one! Looking forward to reading the rest. ~Kim

P.S. And to the 200+ readers who read your first part and didn't comment, well, I don't understand it. I appreciate every story you post. It's a shame more don't take the time to do that. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the beginnig :). More is coming later.

It would be so much better to know why people don't comment. Not knowing is the worst, because I have no idea what I did. 

Thank you for the comment! 

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