Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2019 11:27 AM · On: The Secrets One keep

Wow what a brilliant chapter. My hear is breaking for Brian no matter what he lost his mother even thought they didn’t get along. He found out this huge secret and his sisters lies. Claire needs to help with his and give that box back to him and explain everything she knows. I hope things get better. I can’t wait to find out more 

 

 

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2019 10:22 PM · On: The Secrets One keep

Quick question: Why is Gemma calling Brian by his first name?  "I did daddy, where’s Brian?” she asked as she looked around for her other father."



Author's Response:

It will be explained in the next chapter.  I'm basing her on this little girl that i know.   She has two daddies but when she's with one she uses daddy when she's with the one that she's with and for the strangest reason and not because they taught her she'll refer to the other one by his name if they are both together.  You know like if they are both in the room together its not like daddy and daddy or daddy and papa it's daddy and which ever the other one name at that time i think it's weird but it's like a cute quirk it's like she knows their both are her daddy but she also knows they have names.   It will all be explained in the next chapter coming soon.

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2019 10:08 PM · On: The Secrets One keep

Quick question: Why is Gemma calling Brian by his first name?  "I did daddy, where’s Brian?” she asked as she looked around for her other father."

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2019 08:57 AM · On: The Secrets One keep

Wow two babies !!! Please more.

Author's Response:

Yes like what's up with the two babies.

Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2019 04:12 AM · On: The Secrets One keep

Hmmm, two babies in the picture?  The plot thickens.  It will be interesting to find out what that clue is all about.  Hugs, Grammy



Author's Response:

love that you were the first to say something about there being two babies in the picture.   That's a big clue, like two babies why does she have only one?

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2019 03:01 AM · On: The Secrets One keep

Very intriguing. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2019 10:17 PM · On: The Secrets One keep

I think Claire needs to fess up to Brian about what she knows.    He's going to find out the whole story, and he also knows that Claire knows more than what she is saying.   

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2019 09:01 PM · On: The Secrets One keep

I think Claire should tell Brian then she wouldn't have any secrets and be free.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2019 08:17 PM · On: The Secrets One keep

Great chapter.  Happy that, even though the circumstances aren't the best, Joan is not Brian's mother.  Can't wait to see where you go with this story.  It is terrific writing.

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