Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2019 04:52 PM · On: Enchanted
What a fantastic story. Love how you took the original story and have turned it into a Brian and Justin story. Absolutely amazing writing.
Author's Response: I feel humbled by your feedback since I still feel very unsure about my writing. Yeah, I thought it would be a good story for the both of them, especially since I'm interested in the whole Succubus/Incubus topic (: thank you so much for reading!!
Lacri~
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2019 06:35 PM · On: Exhaustion
Oh this is really getting good. Now Justin appears not just in the night. Fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like the idea c; Thank you for reading and giving me feedback!!
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2019 02:29 PM · On: Exhaustion
Being called out for his lack of sleep wasn't good, but following it up with liqouir didn't help. Catching sight of the blonde at Babylon was scary.
Author's Response: It definitely wasn't good. I wanted it to come across as a little bit scary (; Thank you for reading!!
Lacri
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 09:24 PM · On: Revelation
Good chapter!!! Well, Brian got the evidence this time that what's been happening is real - the bite mark, but now what? I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it (; Brian had to keep his sanity. Hope you like the next chapter as well, I've just uploaded it!
Thank you!!
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 06:49 PM · On: Revelation
Really liked this. Shame Mikey is such a dweeb. How to identify the person taking advantage of the Stud of Liberty Avenue?
Author's Response: Glad you did (: Well, he's really skeptical xP Soon Brian will find the one he's been looking for (;
Thank you for reading!!
Lacri
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 01:47 PM · On: Revelation
Hello, Lacri! First of all, as many have mentioned on our FB page, your banner is amazing! Kudos to you or whoever made it. It's great!
That first part was hot! I'm not surprised that Michael had that reaction to Brian's story; after all, it IS hard to believe, even for Brian. But I love how you made it 'real' by Brian having that bite mark; now he knows that he's not imagining all of it.
Looking forward to the rest of your story! Thank you for posting this on here. :) ~Kim
Author's Response: Hey, Kim (: Thank you so much, I'm really into graphic stuff, so if you ever need someone for a banner I'm your girl! (:
Glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I thought how to let Michael react to Brian's story and that was the most logical for me. I think if he didn't have any proof that it is real, he would have gone mane or thought that his imagination is playing tricks on him.
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment, I really appreciate it.
Lacri c:
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 03:26 AM · On: Revelation
Great chapter. Love how this is progressing. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Hope you'll like the next chapter, too (:
Lacri
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 01:33 AM · On: First Time
This story is looking good. Sounds first season when his friends didn't act like friends.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. About the timeline, more like Season 3. actually, I wanted that it comes across more like banter between friends ;)
I hope you'll like the next chapter, also (:
Hugs,
Lacri
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2019 11:04 AM · On: First Time
Great start to the story!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: It makes me happy to know that you enjoyed the first chapter! Hope you will enjoy the rest as well (: Thank you!!
Lacri
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2019 09:44 AM · On: First Time
Hi!!The banner is very beautiful. But I do not really like supernatural stories. I will wait until the story is complete to read it. I will leave a comment.
Author's Response: Thank you I loved making the banner! That's fine and I know where you're coming from, I don't like supernatural stories that much either but when I saw the movie I just wanted to write about it!
Lacri
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2019 04:01 AM · On: First Time
Great beginning, Lacri! Loving the plot, and how profoundly his blond ghost is affecting him. I'll be looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting this! ~Kim
Author's Response: Oh yeah, he's really affecting him. I'm really glad you liked it so far and thank you so much for your feedback, Kim!!
Lacri
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2019 03:38 AM · On: First Time
Oh, this is good, very, very good. And, we all know who the blond is. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Yeah, we know :P
Lacri
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