Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2021 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 35

Thank you for the new chapter.

I'm glad Granny put Kate in her place.  I knew you were building up for something to happen with Linday, by her eratic behaviour.  I'm presuming she will end up in a facility again.  Interesting twist with the Mel domestic abuse line!

What's happning with Mad Mikey?  You haven't mentioned him in a while?

Hope you're jabbed and safe.

Deb L.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2021 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 35

Thank you for this new chapter. It's pretty impressive how Kate still feels on a mission despite what her mom and brother tell her. Grandma would have to tell Brian to press charges, a little stint in jail might put his mind back together. Gus is happy to see JR but I think he needs Peter to be sure he will return to his fathers. Ted and Blake are very nice. Where's Michael in there? I hope that with what is happening his landlady will understand his lies. The Liberty Avenue world is small. Lindsay is crazy. She will surely be interned. Leda will be able to support Mélanie, who will realize that despite her behavior she has friends who help her. Without Lindsay's manipulations she will be able to be forgiven. I think she will get there. I started reading this story again and at first she was very aware of everything Brian and Justin did for them. I don't really understand how she could have become such a witch ...

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2021 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 35

Yay! A new chapter!

Wow!! Lindsay certainly let the crazy lose. I have to wonder if this is just an episode or if she has tipped over into the world of her own imagination to forever stay.  Is she now going to be accusing Mel of abuse? The way the hospital staff are acting and the tidbit about abuse counselor sure sounds like it.  I think she needs to be institutionalized.

I have to admit I felt sorry for Mel, but at the same time fully acknowledge that she pushed everyone out of her life and she is the reason she is all alone. What will she do now? Will she take JR and run, will she ask Ted and Blake to take JR (because JR is not safe with Lindsay around), or maybe Deb?

Ted and Blake are such good, sweet and wonderful people.  Love them.

Loved Ed's presence at the meeting with the architect and his teasing of Granny. Glad Ed told Jeff that Kate was giving them false information and that he sent Kate the pictures of how happy and great their mother looked. I can just picture Kate huffing and puffing because her lies were found out.  I was also glad that Granny called Kate and told her if she didn't stop she would let Brian try to get charges pressed against her basded on the cookie drugging test.  I wonder what Kate will try next.

Glad Gus got to see JR again.

Thanks for another great chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!!

Holly



Author's Response:

Hi Holly, Lindsay does seem to have fallen off the edge of normal behavior.  Mel is kind of her own worst enemy.  She continues to be abrasive and overwhelmed.  That is not a good combination to get support from those around you.  I always liked Ted & Blake, we didn't see enough of them in the show.  Ed appears to be a sensible person.  He was relieved that Granny is happy & healthy.  Kate if the one who is odd man out now, no one believes her stories.  I wanted to get Gus & JR together but it had to be done in the right way.  Happy to know you are still reading & enjoying!!!  Always look forward to your comments!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2021 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 35

Thank you for another great chapter. This continues to be my favorite story. Lindsay just continues to be cookoo for coco puffs!  Ready for another Mikey smack down. 



Author's Response:

Happy that you enjoyed the latest update and flattered that it is your favorite story!!!  Lindsay does seems to get more disturbed, not less.  I was thinking it has been a while since we heard about Mikey.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2021 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 35

Great chapter!!   I could tell that things had been brewing with Lindsay for a while now and something big was getting ready to happen, but I never thought she'd set fire to her artwork.   Suicide attempt, yes, but the fire, no.  Her mood swings are not good.    She has some real problems and hopefully, she'll now that she's in the hospital, she'll get some much needed help.   



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.  Lindsay is deeply troubled and not acting in a rational way.  Not such a great result from her last hospitialization, time will tell what happensn now.  Thanks for the comments, always great to hear from you!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2021 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 35

TrTres beau chapitre. Un conseiller Violence domestique , elle met le feu presque à la maison, essayé de se suicider, elle a besoin d'être placé ,elle est un danger pour elle même. C'est pas un conseiller Violence domestique  qu'il lui faut. Ils ont pas son dossier précédent qu'elle avait des traitements et qu'elle était suivie..



Author's Response:

 

Je crois qu'ils n'ont pas encore accédé à l'histoire de Linsay.   Ils constateront qu'il n'y a pas d'abus seulement une maladie de sa part. Elle ne semble pas pouvoir se remettre de son traumatisme d'enfance.  Merci de m'avoir fait savoir que vous appréciez mon histoire.  Bill

 

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2021 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 34

Sorry for the late review! 

Loved this chapter.  Short but great! Loved Granny's little trick on Ed and then telling him exactly why she wants to live there.  I liked Ed. I'm glad he wasn't a stinker like Kate but was instead happy to meet Justin's family and absorb the reasons his mother wanted to live there with all of those kids. He acted like he was family and was very accepting.  Hope to see more of him. Would love to know what he tells Jeff and how he deals with Kate.

On the one hand I can see why Lindsay wouldn't want to see Leda, I mean who wants to spend time with your partner's ex? But at the same time, I was creeped out about Lindsay's reaction. When will she be showing her art to Sydney and Justin? Because I see a complete breakdown when that happens.

Thanks for the chapter! Eager for more.

Holly



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reponse.  I thought I had answered your comments but obviously I didn't.  Sorry!!!  Granny made sure Ed knew the truth and also made it clear she didn't like being checked on.  Lindsay gets creepier - new chapter just posted.  Thanks for all your reviews, commenst from the readers is what keeps this story going!!!  Bill   

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2021 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 34

Uncle Ed's visit was fantastic. I'm delighted he got to see how his mother was truly happy. I think Kate is going to throw a hissy fit lol. Fantastic work as always. 



Author's Response:

I think everyone enjoyed Uncle Ed's visit.  It was good he got to see the truth to refute Kate's lies.  Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2021 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 34

It was great to see a new chapter and so soon. Hooray.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Hooray!!  Bill

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 34

I lost the ability to review for sometime.  Now that I have that ability back, I just wanted you to know how much I love this story.  Thanks for sharing your amazing talent.  

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Welcome back!!!!!!  I appreciate you letting me know you are still reading and enjoying.  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 34

Great chapter!!   Well, Ed and Granny had their chat, and Ed got a firsthand look at the Kinney-Taylor house and what a happy and lively household it is.   I don't think Ed has anything to worry about where Granny is concerned.



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter.  Ed was sincerely concerned about Granny but he found out she is happy to be part pf the Taylot-Kinney household.  There is always something going on.  Thanks for taking time to post comments.  You know I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 34

Thanks for this chapter! Eventually Ed saw that his mother was very happy with all the Taylor-Kinneys and could tell his brother everything. Gus is adorable and loves everyone. Leda what a surprise! I imagine Lindsay will fall apart when her art is rejected and she will end up in psychiatric hospital. Mélanie will stand up with Leda's help. I made my happy ending LOL Hope you have time to write another chapter fast enough but I know real life is a bitch sometimes

Author's Response:

I think Ed was truly concnerned about his mother but now he knows all is well.  Gus lived a good part of his young life in Canada with no "family" as part of his life.  He loves being part of a big family, there always seem to be new "family" to meet.  Lindsay just seems to be falling deeper and deeper into her black hole.  Mental illness is very frustrating to live with, no one can seem to help her and she is incapable of helping herself.  Interesting "happy ending" you forecast.  Thanks for your review!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2021 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 34

 Sweet Baboo, I as the problem certainly enjoyed your latest chapter. Ed seemed truly interested in Granny's new life, appears he has no agenda other than his mothers health and happiness, he of course fell under the spell of Gus and the twins, how different he treats Justin from Craigs parents just burst right in and demanded attention and respect. I kinda hope Lindsey has her breakdown pretty soon when her art is rejected that will cause a major drama as much as she cheated on Mel I thought she was a bit high handed, I'm all for Leda and Mel. It's time for Mel to not see Brian as the devil but as a loving partner and a great father and Leda as a person who loves her. Lindsey is only interested in what she wants and needs. Hugs and kisses, always your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, hope all is good with you!!  Always brings a smile to my face to see your comments.   I agree, Ed was concerned about his mother but now sees she is happy in her new envionment.  We may hear more from the senopr Taylors but they have to get a clue about real life instead of Craig's view of life.  Lindsay sure doesn't seem to get any better.  Not to forgive Mel's bad behavior but she is between a rock and a hard place.  She has to work in order to pay expenses but her family is falling apart.  She & Lindsay have alienated most of their support system.  Huag & Kisses back to you!!!!  I remain, as always, your sweet Baboo 

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 34

Happy Birthday month to me!

i am going to start in a less obvious spot Linz and Leda I see problems for JR ahead...

Uncle Ed got to see what Kate couldn’t Granny is very happy living with her favorite grandchild and all of his family.

i look forward to the next chapter which I assume will be the boys invading the house. I wonder if Gus could have a sleepover night at Kevin’s with John already there it would be the perfect time.



Author's Response:

Ditto on birthday wishes.  Poor JR is having a pretty crappy life.  All Kate really saw was a way to get money out of her mother.  Ed was actually concerned that his mither was okay, he found out that she as better than okay.  I'll keep you guessing about what will happen in the next update.  Shirt comments for a relatively short chapter, Thanks!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 34

Leda...I smell trouble! Sorry it was short,but thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter.  I'm not sure Leda is trouble but who knows what the future holds.  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 34

I will always enjoy this story and it seems to get better and better.  I think that Ed got a true picture of what goes on and Kate is going to be out of luck.



Author's Response:

You have been such a great support right from the beginning.  Thank you so much!!!!!!!  I think Ed may be blocking Kate's number like Granny did.  I hope you know how much I appreciate you!!!!!! Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 34

oh, and i gotta say brian needs to get a grip on his concern about gus and 'old ladies'. 

firstly, gus loves everyone in  his family and i would think  that even includes the noxious michael so no surprise he likes granny and grandmom.

secondly, what kid wouldn't love to have granny and grandmom in his family??? no one i can think of... lol



Author's Response:

Brian has never had any lady fixations, so this is unfamilar ground for him.  LOL  Gus is certainly happy with having a Granny & Grandmom!!!!!  Thanks for taking time to review, love to heard from the readers.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 34

thank you, bill, that my faith in you was not misplaced! lol

it WAS short, but it was also a great chapter.

eddie saw that granny is completely happy and in a much better place than with kate and he's a great guy and could understand and appreciate brian and the whole family.

very well done, bill! but please, hopefully the next on will be longer???  pleeeeese.... hugs



Author's Response:

Short is quick, long takes longer.  Glad tyou enjoyed the chapter. Ed is a great guy just concerned about his mother.  Your comments always make me smile.  Bill

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 34

I can't blame Lindsay about Leda.  He has a strange fascination for old ladies, lol "snorts"



Author's Response:

Lindsay was not an innocent in the whole Leda debacle.  I think Brian is really somewhat concerned with Sonny Boy's fascination with old ladies.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 33

lol, bill. i don't THINK you would reneg on a promise. but, yes, time will tell!! still can't wait!



Author's Response:

New chapter is posted.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 33

yea!!! new story tomorrow.. can't wait!!! lol



Author's Response:

you do know the consequences if I don't deliver on a new chapter for tomorrow!  Time will tell.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2021 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 33

 if I fail to live up to that promise I will stop writing this story.   

Um I would rather reread and wait, then to have you stop writing

 

Your reviews always make me smile!!!!! 

I generally amuse me when I write reviews, the fact you are getting the gist is enough to have me continue to review



Author's Response:

Glad we are both amused.  

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 33

So glad to see a new chapter.  I read these with a smile on my face.  I just love this series.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoying.  Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 33

This was fantastic and I cannot wait to see the brother visit granny and see the fallout from that. That will keep us all entertained. All the boys once again are amazing and John's birthday was perfect. So loved seeing a new chapter for this amazing story. 



Author's Response:

Glad to kknow you are still reading and enjoying this saga.  Eddie will relize thathis mother is the same take charge person she has always been.  John is aware of the massive improvment in his life since he came to live with his uncles.  Than for the nice comments!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 33

i  think that joan has made remarkable progress since she left rehab. she's friends now with roofer guys mother, been nice to debbie, eating out with the other ladies in the parish, helping and contributing to the food bank and had a truly wonderful lunch with john and peter. that's nothing to sneeze it.

i could easily see joan actually reach out to the priest to discuss brian's being gay and trying to understand him and his way of life. i think she's open to at least discussing it with him and i think/hope she could get the knowledge to find her way to acceptance of his lifestyle even if she can't so a happy-dance over it. and brian has it in him to forgive. he has taken care of his mother for years, in spite of everything and there's that confused part of him who doesn't want to see her die alone in her house... her acceptance of justin will mean a lot to him and seeing her develop a solid relationship with john and peter will also help a lot. they may never be best buds but i do think there is a real possilility of civil, semi-normal relationship developing. brian's bark is always worse than his bite with family.

i'm thinking something is going to push linds over the edge and it may be a refusal to show her  mediocre art. and i even feel a little sorry for mel with linds' issues. mel is overwhelmed and doesn't see what she can do to "fix" linds. she's been riding out the out of control lilnday and just grateful to see the susy homemaker linds  when she pops up. i think the nut house is in linds future... and i worry about jr being alone with linds when she's not doing well.



Author's Response:

Joan realizes hiw much she has missed out on because of her alcoholism and is determined to continue sobriety.  It is still difficult for her to abandon lifelong beliefs and fully accept Brian & Justin.  That may be beyond her capacities.  Mel amd Linds are trapped in a sad situation.  Lindsay is seriously ill and needs support, Melanie has to work in order to fullfill their financial obligations.  Not a recipe for sucess and porr JR is caught in the middle of it.  Not a happy household!!  Your reviews always give me food for thought and I appreciate that!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 33

Fantastic update.  We got a little of everything and everyone.  Can't wait until Granny Taylors son comes out and sees how well she is doing.



Author's Response:

Always happy to see your review.  Eddie will learn in no uncertain terms that Granny is firmly in control of her life.  Thanks for your continuing suppport!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2021 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 33

My Sweet Baboo, So happy to see a chapter. Love Jen she sure handled the fools (the Hawkins father and son )Can't wait to meet Jen's brother, hope he's on Granny's side or poor Alice will be cleaning up a mess by the time Brian, Jen, and Granny finish with him,after trying to drug her mother Granny should have her daughter arrested she had no feelings for her mother just pure greed. I think Joan now has a clue what she is missing it's a shame she is her own worst enemy. Love and many hugs, your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, always happy to hear from you!!!   Jen has a history of dealing with Joe Harkins, now Frank knows she is no pushover.  Both of them are bullies used to intimidating people.  It takes a lot to intimidate Grandmom Jen.  The Harkins are not equal to that task. I think Granny won't need any help dealing with Eddie, she is just waiting to explain how things REALLY are to him.  I think it would be too painful to Granny to expose Kate's behavior to the world.  You are right Joan is her own worst enemy and is starting to realize how she has wasted her life.  Not quite ready to dismiss he long time beliefs and accept her son for the person he is.  Love and many hugs back to you.  I remain as always, your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 33

just a thought... didn't granny cover a lot of what was happening with her and kate in the letter she sent? thought she told them she was moving to pittsburgh and that kate was trying to get her declared incompetent.... it sounds like they are totally in the dark about everything...



Author's Response:

That letter was sent before Kate's visit.  Kate is now trying to rewrite history about how she behaved when she visited.  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 33

Great chapter as always!!   I'm looking forward to Eddie's visit and for Granny to fill him on Kate's behavior.   I have a feeling he is in for a rude awakening!!!    I was very happy to see Joan getting along so well with John and Peter and them filling her in on everything Brian and Justin have done for them.    After going through the rehab, I'm not surprised that she is now more easy going, but was happy to see her being pleasant with Justin and even telling him they could be on a first name basis.    I am, though, still waiting for some kind of meeting with Brian and Joan, now that she is sober, as I think that would be very eye opening for him.   While I don't think he could forgive her for how she treated him growing up, I think it would be nice if they could at least be on even ground with each other.       



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.  I think you are correct about Eddie.  He is going to find out the truth from Granny,.  I think Joan realizes how much she has missed out on in life.  Her long time beliefs are difficult for her to dismiss and admit she has been so so wrong for so long.  Brian may be reluctant to meet with Joan because he doesn't want to be tempted to forgive her.  He has a very full life without her and may not want to dreg up his painful past.  Just a thought???  Thanks for taking time to review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 33

J'ai adoré. C'était super.



Author's Response:

Vraiment heureux de savoir que vous avez apprécié ce chapitre.  Merci de me le faire savoir!!  Bill   

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 33

So glad to see an update thank you! Despite all it's nice to see Joan sober but it's a shame that she does not want to accept the love of Brian and Justin, she is really a loser, especially since she sees the happy life that the family has. Gus and his brother and sister are adorable. Ted and Blake's neighbor should be prosecuted for invasion of privacy (not sure that it exists!). Now I am waiting for Eddie to visit, he will surely get his mother reframe and he will be able to explain to his brother the lies and the jealousy of their sister. I wish Granny would press charges against Kate, in the end she deserved it. Lindsay is still so crazy. I can't wait to hear what's on her mind. See you soon, I hope not so long, take care of yourself.

Author's Response:

Joan is a sad person, wasted life.  She is not happy and she has never made anyone else happy.  Her beliefs are more om[ortant than people.  At least now she is starting to see where she might be wrong.  I always thought babies were fascinated by small children.  It is like they can relate to kids easier than full grown people.  The nighbor is like a lot of people who like to stir up trouble and attempt to act innocent about what they have done and try to act like a victim.  I think Granny will leave not doubt in Eddie's mind that she is fully capable of running her own life.  I don't belive Granny would ever play a role in sending one of her children to jail.  Lindsay is not well and getting worse.  Thanks for the review, I do love it get them!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

Eddie's visit should be fairly non-stressful. it soounds like he will be coming with an open mind and will certainly understand all is well and granny is in no danger at the taylor-kinney's home. granny is a wealthy woman, even more so than her sons think, and i think there is nothing wrong with them showing some concern for granny, especially due to the nonsense kate filled them with. it should be quickly understood and accepted, i would think.

i'm really happy that joan and the boys had such a good lunch and that joan treated justin with respect and i'd even say a bit of friendship and acceptance of him as a person. i'm hoping she can talk with the parish priest, who seems pretty enlightened on the gay situation to help joan understand not everything in the bible can be read with today's eyes and not know the history of some of the words and what was acceptable in biblical days. jt secrets in his "forever yours" very long and wonderful story, goes deeply into explanations of what some of the words used in the bible meant then vs what they have come to mean today. homosexuality was not looked down on or condemned back then... but men, some with agendas, wrote the bible and all is sometimes not quite what it seems. i'm catholic myself and had no problem understanding the points made in jt secrets coverage of the topic. it is a super story and i highly recommend it for those who may not have read it. like this one, it does not have all the terrible angst b/j go thru in so many of the stories about them, which makes it a joy to read, as this story is.

will say more later but wanted to hit these two topics first.

 

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 33

I love Gus interacting with the twins 


I am looking forward to Jen’s brothers arrival he will realize fast how wrong Kate is.


i hope Viola looks at Ted and Blake’s past as they were the lucky ones who have managed to overcome what her daughter couldn’t 


i am intrigued by the fact that Joan did not try to push John and Peter to see their Mom nor did you mention anything about her calling for John’s Birthday 


I wonder how bad Lindsay will react when Sidney and Justin see nothing worth showing in her artwork 


I don’t really mean this in a bad way but Joan being sober makes her a boring character 


Now I am going to start over at chapter 1 of this part of the story and with luck when I get to the bottom of chapter 33 there will be a next button for Chapter 34


I like Birthday presents as much as John, and mine is in October and I would love at least one Chapter to magically appear before the end of October if you can do 2 EVEN BETTER



Author's Response:

I am enjoying writing about Sonny Boy relating to Princess & Sunbeam.  They make a pretty cute & interestin trio.  I think Eddie will be quickly convinced that his mother is fully capable of handling her own affairs.  There will be a late card from Claire.  I think Joan just wanted to enjoy time with her grandsons and she & Claire on not really on the best terms after their last phone conversation.  Not sure Lindsay will get around to showing her art.  I think Joan was always a boring character, at least siber she is doing something positive for a change.  I will promise a new chapet on 10/1 and one later in the month.  if I fail to live up to that promise I will stop writing this story.   Your reviews always make me smile!!!!!   Thanks,   Bill

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 33

YAY!!!!  I was so happy to see this new chapter and it was so great!!  

Loved getting some updates on what was happening with everyone.  UGHHHH...that lying, conniving Kate.  I can't believe Jen's brothers are believing all the crap she lied about.  Hopefully when Eddie arrives he will get set straight and start helping contain his lying greedy sister and gullible brother, instead of causing trouble himself. I am really really looking forward to reading all of that and the fallout that Kate will suffer (and I really want her to suffer as anyone who would do that to their own mother should suffer - have I mentioned I get really vengeful??). Glad to hear Kate's lawyer got fired and censored.

I was happy hearing about what happened to Ted & Blake's nosy neighbors snoopy friend and that she was reprimended and suspended for what she did.  I hope Violet is understanding of Ted's past; that it won't be a problem with them adopting Nina. I would think she would know that both Ted & Blake are recovering addicts.  Hopefully she will be understanding about the arrest.

I really liked the Joan scenes and glad it was for the most part good for her and the boys and that she treated Justin much better.  I hate she still can't accept Brian's lifestyle, but she is starting to see the good too.  

I LOVE GRANNY!!  and Grandmom Jen!!  I just had to get that out. 

Glad we had no whiner in this chapter, but have to say that I still think Lindsay is batshit craycray! I feel Deb's concern and am more and more creeped out by the lalalaland she lives in, and her continued opinion that Justin has no say of what goes in his gallery. Creepy CrayCray!!

 I love this story and have been missing it so much!!!  I can't wait read more (especially about Eddie's visit and fallout) and I am begging you on bended knees bring it to us very soon!

Love this story!

Holly



Author's Response:

Hi Holly, happy to know you enjoyed this chapter after the lonf wait.  Kate is trying her best to get some control over Granny and her money.  She is doomed to failure.  I'm pretty sure that Granny is going to set Eddie straight about her being able to take care of herself.  I hate people who try to stir up trouble and try to play the victim when they called on their actions.  The great thing about writing a story is you can make events turn out like you want.  Joan is realizing what she is missing out on in life but it is difficult to overturn your life long beliefs.  Nice to see her making some progress in her view of life. I love Granny and Grandmom Jen too!!!!  Lindsay mental health seems to be getting worse instead of better.  Mel seems unable to unwilling to realize what is going on with her wife.  I get the distinct inpression that you enjoy my long sagq, thank you!!!   Always enjoy reding your reviews, thanks for all your support!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 33

Love the new chapter...well worth the extra long wait😉



Author's Response:

So happy your enjoyed it!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2021 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 32

Hi Bill, hope you are doing well.    I noticed that a new chapter was downloaded yesterday, Chapter 32, however, I just wanted to let you know that this chapter was previously downloaded in June and that that new chapter didn't come into the system.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for the update.  Sadly we are having issues with the web site.  The update was a test - as soon as our current issue is corrected - still not sure what caused it - the new chapter will be posted.  Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2021 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 32

Just finished rereading the whole series for the 5th time. Still love it as much as i did the first time!  Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2021 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 32

Hi, you know I love your writing and I totally understand you are busy in these, very trying times, but if at all possible could we have a new chapter soon as it's been 10 weeks and I'm really desperate for my fix!!!

I just want to say, as I think your profession lies somewhere in the medical field (assuming from previous posts), that all you guys are the best.  We do the whole clapping and make noise in recognition in the UK, hope you get that recognition in US.

Okay, feel guilty now for requesting update.

All my best wishes to you,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Not in medical field at all, sorry to destroy any illusions.  I had a brother and have a niece who are doctors.  I am well but real life has had some challenges but I am working on am update and hope to post it this week.  I aologize for the delay and U know what it is like to wait for an update to a favorite story.  Thanks Deb for the kind words!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2021 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 32

JUNE 18 LAST CHAPTER.... SIGH

ANY IDEA WHEN THE NEXT ONE IS COMING?????

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2021 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 32

glad to see the site back... any chance of a new chapter soon???

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2021 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 32

I notice a lot of reviewers ask about hockie.  I don't remember if the girls went to Canada in this tale or not, but Canadian's seem big on hockie.  Maybe that's where it came from?



Author's Response:

Sweet of you for trying to excuse me but it was just careless of me or a senior moment.  I can always count on your for a boost!!!

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2021 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 25

Hey Bill, 

I know I'm pretty late in reviewing this chapter (even though I read it before now), but something has really been bothering me about the reviews regarding Ben's money. First, it is NOT Ben's responsibilty to financially support JR. Let's just be clear and remember that it falls to Michael as the other person responsible for JR's DNA.

Secondly, regarding Ben's salary as a tenured professor: I'm not sure, but isn't Ben still positive in this story? The reason I ask, is that there are several written recently where he isn't, but that's beside the point. For the sake of argument, let's just say that he is. I really don't understand folks thinking that even as a tenured professor that Ben's health insurance would automatically cover his HIV medication. That is a MISCONCEPTION if I've ever heard one. In fact, it very well could possibly be looked at as a PREEXISTING CONDITION, especially since a tenured professor at a college or university does NOT begin their respective careers that way. They are known as Adjunct Professors until they get tenure, and therefore only have at most basic insurance based on how many hours they work (usually about 25 to 30 hours which is still considered part time). So all of this talk about what Ben should contribute is inaccurate, especially since he would STILL need to pay for his HIV medication.

So let's go on and say that he is making $75K per year. The cost of his meds PER MONTH would by at least $3000, which in actuality is the cost of one chemo pill. I know this because I have a family member, who has been living with the virus going on 30 years now and the new medication she is on is about $3500 for a 30-day supply. As for the chemo pill, my father passed from two types of cancers in 2012, and his insurance only covered PART of that and only because he was a Veteran. So, back to Ben, if you were to take $3000 and multiply it by 12, it equals $36,000 and that doesn't even include taxes and fees. All that said, I'm very curious to know just how Ben is supposed to be the one to pay for EVERYTHING, including but not limited to, the house and all that comes with owning or renting one, insurance for himself and Hunter, other basic needs including his meds AND HUNTERS, plus support his mooching-ass husband? If anything, Michael should get the hell off his ass and realize that having a child is not an IN NAME ONLY situation. That would be the adult thing to do! 

So in conclusion, if I were Ben, I would certainly have required Michael to pay back every damn copper penny to my retirement fund as well as pay full child support whether Mel wants it or not, because that's what a noncustodial parent is supposed to do. And if Michael couldn't do that, then I would leave but sue him privately for my funds back. I really don't give a damn that they are 'married', that fund was what Ben WORKED HARD for, and unless Michael was contributing to it, which he was NOT, then the Joker-looking idiot had no right to access it. 

Just my take on things, but you know how us writers are.

HUGS and LOVE, Boo!

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Hi Nichelle, So nice to hear from you!!!!  I agree about Ben paying for JR's upkeep.  Michael has kept him at arm's length where JR is concerned.  Justin is Papa, Ben is Uncle Ben.  In one of the earlier chapters I mention Ben being glad he was able to get his meds covered by his insurance.  You are correct there is no must be covered for preexisting conditions  Michael getting a fulltime job was to allow him to pay back Ben and to get his own health insurance.  Ben gave him an ultimatum to get a job.  Poor Ben just had the misfortune to fall in love with a man-child and I think in some ways that is what appealed to Ben.  Personally I never understood Mel choosing Michael to father her child.  Hope all is good in your world.  Hugs back to you!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2021 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 32

ok, i have a question that just popped into my head...

linds leave at the gallery had to be extended so she was covered by insurance. wondering why she wouldn't be covered by mel's insurance. i know many things involving gay rights have be improved to protect them legally as married couples are... but maybe not enough yet? one would think a law firm might be enlightened enough to provide partnership coverage, but i don't know so am asking. 

and, if she isn't covered under mel's insurance, how on earth is she going to get the help she needs? brian and justin should certainly not provide any more monetary assistance to them and i would really hate to see that happen. here in california we have medicaid, which is similar to medicare but i think it is state provided and often for younger people who have little or no income.  just curious how that would work... sorry to be so ignorant about this stuff...

 



Author's Response:

Lindsay's gallery insurance had to be extended because she was aready hospitilized under that policy.  She couldn't switch to Mel's insurnce untilshe was released from mental hospital.  Apprently Mel was able to get Linds covered for her preexisting mental illness.  Gus had always been in Brian's health insurance.  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2021 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 32

Okay, I will try not to sarcastic but thanks for the eventual update. (I said i'd TRY!!)

Anyhoo, good update but not a lot happening.  Although you have cunningly set the seeds about for future chapters.

What will Brian and Justin do about Gus' contact with his contact Moms'?

How will they find out about JR and the whole neglect/daycare thing?

What will Michael do next?  Also, whilst on the subject of dear little Mikey, why has no one pulled him up on his treatment of Justin anytime he enters the Building.  If Brian hasn't noticed surely Ted or the eagle eyed Cynthia should have?  We know that the other receptionists don't like him, so would have no problems dobbing him in.  And, Cynthia has an in built radar for office gossip.  If I was part owner of a company and someone treated one of my co-owners like this, they would not only be fired but feel my foot up their arse!!!

Thanx hun,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Bad author!!!  I think Brian and Justin will follow Lena's advice and only arrane a meeting when they are sure it will be a positive experience.  I think Debbie will provide a place for JR & Gus to get together.  Justin ignore Mikey, he is secure in Brian's love.  To me, Mikey is like Brian's brother - too much history to just break off all contact with Mikey.  All Justin would have to do is to tell Cynthia to fire Mikey and he would be gone.  That would make all interactions with Debbie very awkward.  They prefer to iognore Mikey rather than making a family situation unpleasant.  If it was all just about Mikey's behavior he never would have been hired in the first place.  Debbie's tears get him the job.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2021 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 32

Author's Response: 

 

Where the h--- did hockey come from??????  I must be losing it, maybe time to stop writing??

DON’T YOU DARE STOP WRITING, I WOULD RATHER BE AMUSED AT THE TYPOS AND GAFFES THEN NOT READ MORE OF THIS AMAZING STORY. I just had to point this one out most of them are not this wonky...



Author's Response:

I though that would get a response.  It annoys me when I make grammatical errors because I do try and catch rhem before I post a chapter.  I truly cannot understand where hockey came from.  

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2021 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 32

Thank you so much for the new chapter.  So glad that Gus has all of this family to love him and make him feel safe.  My heart was hurting  for him whe he was talking to Justin. I hope Lindsay's art is refused because I think if it is she will really crack so bad that she will have to be hospitalized, and that would be a good thing because she would have to take her meds and get help.  I know from experience that you cannot make a mentally ill person take their meds.  I try not feel bad for Mel but I do, but I don't think she will get better until she is over her resentment of Brian.  Michael? I just cannot stand anything about him.  Just curious but what happened to Ben?  I know he is not related to JR but he always cared about her and it would probably be could for JR  to see him.  He could tell them that he does not want anything to do with Michael just that he wants to see JR. I love this so much and all of Justin's and Brian's "Love Family".  Thanks again for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Sorry I made you waity so long for a new chapter.  It is a good thing that Gus confided in his Papa since no one was considering how he felt about no contact with his mothers. Lindsay does seem to be getting worse and not doing anything to get better.  Some people cannot overcome the pain that was inflicted on them early in life,  I think Mel will always be jealous of Brian.  I think Ben is probabky missing Mikey, he does care about him, and is not ready for any reminders of him.  Mikey was careful to keep Ben from getting too close to "Uncle" Ben.  I am really happy that you are still enjoyng my long saga,  Thanks fr the nice comments, I really appfreciate them!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 32

Hope you are doing well!!    Good chapter!!!   I don't even know what to say about Melanie and Lindsay.   They shouldn't have custody of a stuffed animal, much less a child.   Mel is working all the time and Lindsay with all of her issues, doesn't even seem to realize that she has JR half the time.   Thank goodness that Debbie realized that JR needs help and is looking into daycare for JR.   And that was so sweet of Joe to give some of his money to help out with the daycare; he realizes that JR's situation is not a good one for her and will only lead to problems.   



Author's Response:

Real ife has been hectic on a few froints but I am good.  Mel & Linds are not likely to be getting any parenting awards.  Sadly I don't see that changing anytime soon.  Lindsay is deeply troubled and not getting better.  Mel is driven by financial demands.  Debbie is trying her best tp help the situation.  Joe understands needing someone to help you and is fond of his Little Miss.  Lucky for JR that she has them on her side.  Thanks for taking time to review I love to get them!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 32

Wow what a fantastic chapter.  Gus has a lot of love.  JR is getting her share.  Shame her dad is unable to help.  Best chapter ever.



Author's Response:

Thank you my firend for your always kind comments.  I am thrilled you enjoyed this chapter so much.  You know I always look forward to your review.  When your reviews stop, I will know it is time to end this saga.  THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 32

like brian and justin, it didn't dawn on me that gus would be so upset by mel and linds not reaching out to him, but they handled it well and granny and john contributed wonderfully to help gus understand.

when mel went upstairs to open the bedroom door to check on linds, i had a quick flash of her dead in bed from suicide. fortunately, or perhaps not, that wasn't the case but linds is a real mess and needs some serius help. and i hate to admit it, but mel really needs help too. she has had way too  much stress since linds had the fight with her parents and it has snowballed into something she simply can't handle. she needs to go back to the shrink and really work her issues but not sure she's quite ready yet to admit she was the problem and not brian.

deb and carl might actually be able to over the care of jr... between daycare and school, deb could keep her job and joe seems to be a big help getting jr to eat better and probably behave better too. and it would be good for jr. of course, mel would have to kick in decent support for jr, but with just her, she could sell the house, pay b/j back and get something a lot smaller for just her and linds... if she can even keep linds in her life. linds is so unstable i'm not sure she's gonna be able function normally enough to be at home alone or be anything but a total financial drag on melanie.

joe is a wonderful kid, as are all the kids in this story... it's a bit unrealistic, but so very heartwarming to see such great kids behaving and contributing to their families' happiness and supporting each other as friends should do.

i'd like to see deb and mel have a come to jesus moment with michael, telling him he has to start seriously contributing to jr's upkeep or get all custody rights taken away from him. if that means he gets a second job and quits buying his toys, so be it. it's time that worthless piece of shit ran headlong into the karma he so richly deserves.

a great story that just keeps getting better. can't wait for jen to get involved with gus and his moms. she'll have more encouraging words to build on what he's already been told and that is good.

so many irons in the fire and can't wait to get the details on them all... tyty



Author's Response:

Gus dismay at his mothers' abandoment ocurred to me at the last minute.  That was not my plan for this chapter.  Poor Lindsay seems to be getting worse instead of better.  I think maybe the longer you keep hurt inside the worse it is when you recognize that hurt exists.  Mel is definetly ub over her head with Lindsay.  So difficult to deal with a mentally ill person which if have experienced first hand.  Not sure Debbie is up to caring for a 5 year old fulltime but she is provind needed care and love.  So you think wonderful kids are unrealistic, that is interesting.  I do agree that most of the kids in the story are don't forget Joe Harkins.  I don't see Debbie ever confronting her precious son.  She knows he has issues but that brings her quite a bit of guilt over how she raised him.  Thank you for you very kind comments.  I can hardly believe this saga is still ongoing after several years.  The reviews are what keep it going.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 32

He can take Gus, his brother and Josh to school and take himself to hockey practice."

You meant soccer....



Author's Response:

Where the h--- did hockey come from??????  I must be losing it, maybe time to stop writing??

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 32

My heart was breaking for Gus right throughout this chapter. His mothers have a lot to answer for. Plus poor JR she needs a more stable home and that is not with her mums. I am loving this so much. So much love and respect within as well. 



Author's Response:

Melanie and Lindsay are pretty selfish people.  Lucky for Gus,he has a bunch of people who love him.  Things are looking uo for JR, Grandmom Debbie is taking on a bigger role in her life and Little Miss enjoys spending time with her Joey.  Glad to know you are enjoying the story.  Thanks for the nice comment my friend.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 32

Wow Gus made me cry. But everyone’s response was exactly what he needed, I had a feeling that was going to blow up and Brian and Justin handled it the best they could I do think John might have been the best at getting Gus to see how good life with his Dads is and will always be.

Granny is going to have a beautiful place to live even Brian will be ok with it. Justin will just have to be fine with it. 

Lindsay is mood swinging all over the place and when Sydney and Justin pass on showing her art something is going to blow, I think JR is going to get caught in the cross fire and that scares me. 

I like the relationship JR has with Joe, but it also shows just how much she misses Gus.

i figure John is getting a decent sized SUV so he can take everyone to school, though I doubt his schedule will have him bringing anyone except himself home. 

I have been rereading the first part of this SAGA and was so happy when I checked and there was more NEW.



Author's Response:

Always look forward to your comments.  I think making you wait for updates makes your comments more positive??  Gus loves his Daddy & Papa but John is a big boy and assumes hero status in Gus's eyes.  I think John's comments were the icing on the cake for Gus.  Granny talking about loving people for years & years was a great message for Gus to get and understand.  Lindsay is deeply troubled, I think maybe the longer you hold something inside the more damage it does when you finally release those memories.  Brian always knew he had shitty parents but Linds held those hurts deep inside.  Joey & Little Miss have a fun relationship that benefois them both.  I don't think John will get too large a car and I'm sure he won't do all the chaffeuring for the family.  I have never started at the beginning and read the whole story.  I read parts to refresh my memory.  Sometimes I enjoy it but sometimes my errors annoy me.  Thanks for the review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 32

I was so happy to see this update, I was looking forward to it.

I hope Gus was completely reassured about the people who love him he's such a nice little guy, he will eventually understand that his mothers are responsible and not him.

Melanie seems to have started to see that she is the cause of a lot of problems in their family. Lindsay is crazy. I can't even imagine the reaction when Sydney and Justin turn down her exposure. She is so imbued with herself.

JR has a great time with Debbie Joe and Carl and Joe is a really good guy. He knows what it's like to have a broken family. Michael seems to be jealous of his daughter's good time with Joe, what a despicable man. He does nothing for her but is unhappy with what others are doing. Michael well! Unfortunately no surprises here.

Author's Response:

Sorry to make you wait so long for this chapter.  I think everyone telling Gus about lifetime love reasured him that his Daddy & Papa would not suddenly stop loving him.  Mikey thinks everyone shoud be taking care of him, expecially his mother & Brian.  He is missing out on a lot hapiness by refusing to grow up.  I appreciate all your support for the story!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 32

Très beau chapitre. Michael pourrait participé au frais de garderie. Mais malheureusement dans la vrai vie ça existe. Sinon j'adore. 



Author's Response:

Merci pour les bons commentaires. Mikey n'est pas capable d'être un bon père parce qu'il n'a jamais grandi et accepté des responsabilités d'adulte. Heureusement, il y a d'autres personnes pour prendre soin d'elle.      Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 32

Thanks for the new chapter. I am sorry JR is getting the short end of the stick when it comes to parental care. Sounds like Lindsay is still crazy.

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the update.  I think things are getting a little better for JR.  She hasd Grandmom & Grandpop and her Joey to help take care of her.  Poor Linds is very distrubed and doesn't seem to be getting better.  Thanks for reviewing, you know I love them!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

thank you so much for the update; it's a good one! i want to read the chapter a few more times and think a bit before i do a full review but i have to say i am so disgusted with michael i could cheerfully slit his throat. again someone has to take over paying out for his daughter and it's a kid, for god's sake! michael has no bills, low rent and no reason on earth not to kick in to help his daughter financially... except i would bet he's still buying his toys off the internet. grrrrrrr.....

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 32

Yay!  A new chapter!  And, it was great! I know you have been so busy, and I have tried to wait so patiently, but boy have I missed this story! 


My heart broke for Gus and his fears and tears were rolling down my face when Granny held him and got him to finally believe in lifelong love in families.  At least I hope he did. And John's words to Gus, again tears. John is such a good guy, who would have thought he would turn out to be such a wonderful person. Just wonderful scenes that you wrote about lifetime love and "love" families. Great job!


I believe that Lindsay is showing manic depressive symptoms.  High highs, low lows, possible imagining things (like seeing her parents at the grocery store). For the first time in a long time, I felt sorry for Mel. Small steps to seeing how her behavior has made her lose a lot of things lately. Hopefully she will start correcting her behavior.


Joe is a sweety. Why do I get the feeling whiney ass is going to not like Joey being around JR?


Love this story and I am always anxiously awaiting more chapters from you (no pressure, just know this story is LOVED).


Holly



Author's Response:

Hi Holly, happy top know you emjoyed the chapter.  it verred in a direction I had not planned but I am happy with the result.  I would like to say that Granny reassuring Gus is the reason I brought her into the story but that would be a lie.  This long saga just kind of lurches along on my inspiration of the moment.  This chapter started on a whole different tangent before iI thought about how Gus would feel about being abandoned by his mothers.  Poor Lindsay is very troubled.  I have personal experience with a couple people who had difficult choldhoods that came back to seriously affect them as adults.  One told me that he kept his abuse locked in a room in his brain but when he went to counseling and discussed that issue he could never get it locked away again.  I don't think ti was really locked away sincehe had become depressed which is why he started counseling.  His story did not have a good outcome. Mikey doesn't like anything about Joe being taken in by Debbie.  He believes he should be sleeping in his old bedroom not Joe.  Happy that you enjoy the story so much.  Thanks for all your nice comments.  Bill 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2021 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 32

thank you so much for update.  I do NOT feel sorry for Mel



Author's Response:

You are welcome, sorry it was such a long wait.  Mel is her own worst enemy.  Thanks for the review!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2021 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 31

Hi Hun, know you're busy, but an update would be really welcome.  Been 8 weeks since last update.

Sos, don't wanna push.  But I Love, Love, Love this series so much, it's like an addiction!!

Take care,

Deb L.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry real life is hectic at the moment but should update in the next couple days.  Just doing some final edits.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2021 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 31

nothing since april 17... wondering when an update will appear...



Author's Response:

Sorry lots going on in real life right now.  I will update soon.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2021 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 31

ok, michael's big mouth at the reception desk with his partner and the lady from finance or wherever...

the comment he made about brian wanting time away from "justin's brats" should be reported to cynthia, the receptionists supervisor. totally inapproprite, even saying to another employee let alone two of them. brian would be very upset if he knew about it and considering michael represents the company at that front desk, he should know what he is spewing there for anyone walking by to hear. he should not get away with that. 

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2021 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 31

anyone heard from bill? getting worried... not even any responses to reviews... hope all is well with him.



Author's Response:

So sorry to worry you.  Real life has keot me busy but all is good with me.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2021 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 31

Sweet Baboo, hit the submit by accident. I feel sorry for Joan she led a horrible life not so different from Janet except she has just about killed herself with the drinking.Her daughter in jail but to scream at Joan after all the mistakes the daughter is as delusional as weasel boy, Brian was the one that was abused his whole childhood. I'm waiting for Granny to do a smackdown on weasel boy, that will give him a reason to whine.            your loving Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I told another reviewer that Janet & Joan might get a group discount with a therapist.  They are both victims who lacked the strength to break free form their abusers.  I think Granny doesn't think Michael deserves her attention.  Youe Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2021 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 31

Hi Sweet Baboo, Still loving your story.Adore Brian and Justin, but Jen,Granny,and Kevin have become fast favorites, unfortunately the weasel boy is dumber than a rock guess he thought Deb would just throw Joe out. I hope Ted can get the woman who his neighbor talked to do find out about Nina, any body should know that info should never given out .Now for Ken and Janet they truly galling-I kinda felt for Janet but she must have known how controlling Ken was but she has had years where she could have grown a back bone, so she knew this wrong and sadly Ken taught Craig how to control his family but Jen divorced and did'nt care what the family and their friends thought. I think it's so cute Gus and Kevin can calm the twins,especially when Gus sings to them.



Author's Response:

My Darling Sally,  I have been a very, very bad Baboo.  So sorry not to have replied sooner to your comments.  Mikey is very reliable, completely clueless and sefl-centered but unchanging. I think Ted will take care of the neighborhood gossip.  Janet has been dominated for years.  She has let it happen but it starts out slow and builds.  Not sure she has the strength and resources to break free at this stage of her life.  Jennifer was a stronger person but also put up with Craig for quite a while before breaking free.  Almost seems like Lily and Liam know Gus is their big brother and loves them so much. As always it was great to reasd your comments.  Again sorry for my tardiness in responding.  I remain as always, your Sweet Baboo

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2021 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 31

Thanks for update!  Glad Justin put the other grandparents in their place.  I hope Michael gets his smackdown soon.  If anyone else was a rude about the owner of the company he works for, he would be fired long ago!!

Looking forward to more,

Deb L.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Deb, truly sorry not to have responded sooner.  Justin always protects his family.  Brian has too much past with Mikey to completley abandon him but it Mikey comes close to Brian's breaaking point.  Thanks for the review!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2021 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 31

thought some more after reading comments sympathetic to janet and ken.

janet tries to blame hubby and sons for her ignoring justin and molly for so many years. but for me the bottom line is that if you know your grandson was almost killed  in a bashing incident and did NOTHING to find out about his condition, you clearly show you don't really care what happens deep down. NOTHING on this planet would keep jennifer away if one of her grandson's were injured and i think that is true of most grandparents. janet is more concerned about staying married to a dominant man and not disrupting her comfortable (to Her) lifestyle that she deserves no sympathy at all to me. unlike joan, she clearly knew ken was wrong in keeping her away from justin when he was bashed, but let it happen anyway. she, her husband and sons are worth nothing but disgust and to blame their behavior on their precious old testment makes it even worse. too many people use the bible to justify their actions and some of them, like ken, janet, craig and the other worthless son, slam up hard against karma, as they deserve to.



Author's Response:

You always make me smile.  Janet has allowed herself to be dominated.  Ken was better at it than Craig was but it took something drastic for Jennifer to pull away from him.  Janet was really wrong not to reach out to Jennifer and Justin (Just realized all the J names) but she is a victim of spousal abuse.  May she and Joan (another J) can get a group rate with a counselor.  They both need a booster shot of self esteem.  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2021 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 31

Hey Bill, hope you are doing well!!   

I am very proud of Joan.   I think she has really come a long way and is definitely turning things around.   And if she continues the way she is, maybe she can try and reach out to Brian again.   I know they have a ways to go, and there are a lot of issues to work through, but I really think the two of them can actually have an honest to goodness talk and maybe even make some progress.   I guarantee it would go a lot better than that chat between Justin and his grandfather...   LOL 



Author's Response:

I am doing well but am a very bad author for not respoding to comments sooner.  I apologize!!!!!  Joan has a ways to go, she has to accept Brian and Justin for who they are.  Almost any talk would be better than the Justin/Ken discussion.  Thanks for the comments!!!  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2021 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 31

This is a lot to unload . What is going on with Lindsay? Poor Ted having to deal with busybodies. I'm waiting for Mikey to do the next stupid thing.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2021 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 31

So fantastic to see a new chapter of this amazing story. I feel for JR she deserves to have a better home life just like Gus is getting. Debbie is doing a wonderful job with her and Mel and Linds need to be careful and be thankful that. Brian and Justin have been through so much so it's great seeing the good people in their life stay and the bad get weeded out. Nina is such a wonderful little girl and Ted and Blake love her so I hope that wicked woman across the road gets dealt with. There are so many emotions and beautiful moments in this. Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

I will start with an apology for not responding sooner, that is very wrong of me!!  Happy you enjoyed the last chapter.  I suspect some big changes are coming to JR's home life.  I think Debbie is enjoying spending timw with her granddaughter but will not accpet unreasonable interference.  Ted will come out ahead.  His neighbor is a fool.  Thanks for all your kind words!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 31

well, that was quite a chapter! justin and molly handled things perfectly with craig's parents. glad they will not get to see the kids and spread their venom.

brian's confession to granny about seeing justin lying on the garage floor proves that he loves and accepts granny as a valuable addition to his family and clearly believes she loves them all.

was very glad ted contacted brian's lawyer about the busy body across the street. should be fairly easy to find out who "bev" is and take appropriate measures. would like to see both bev and the neighbor sued. that would teach a good lesson.

i loved how tillie has taken joan under her wing and even gladder the joan allowed that to happen. joan needs some help from the parish priest to help her understand that brian and justin's relationship is not an abomination. joan needs a firm introduction to the new testament. joan seems really motivated to stay sober and i hope can start to have her grandson's around again. brian is a good man and he will forgive joan if he sees real progress. he talks tough but he really is a softie, especially when it comes to family.

mel has serious issues regarding males, as well as many others. it was nice to see debbie climb all over her when complained about "joey" being around JR. as i think about it, debbie rarely really goes off on family but recently she has seriously jumped both michael and melanie and it was good to see.

also glad it looks like kate's lawyer will be disbarred. not sure exactly what can be done to the law firm, but i would think granny could, and should, sue them into bankruptcy. she certainly has grounds to do it. and the best thing to do with them it hit them in the pocketbook and provide the bad publicity of a court trial to make other clients run to new law firms.

also happy to see that brian enjoyed his return to work altho he does miss being home with the twins and his family.

i really want to see what happens when brian and justin go to pick up all gus' clothes and toys from the munchers... 

great chaper!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and I am sorry not to have responed sooner.  I so appreciate all your comments and support and fell down on my job to reply.  Justin is fiercely protective of his family.  Whatever feelings he may have for the Taylor grandparents, he won't allow them the opportunity to hurt Brian or their children.  Ted is notgoing to let gossip create a probelm for his family.  Joan is lucky top have support but she needs to revaluate her view of Brian and Justin or she will not be accpeted into their family.  Mel see how Lindsay had been impacted by her "father's" abuse but has passed the ine of reason.  The lawyer will be disbarred but I think Granny wants to put the whole episode behind her.  She was so hurt by Kate I think she prefers to just move forward with her life.  I see Grandmom Jen playing a role in getting Gus's possesions.  Thanks as always for your comments and I promise to do better about responding.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 31

Joan has come a long way.  Not so Craig's father.  Brian has found piece with Justin and his kids.  Shame Michael is stuck in his believe that Brian can't possible be happy.  Poor Ted, I'm looking forward to reading what you give us concerning the nosy neighbor.



Author's Response:

Joan still has a ways to go.  Ken is happy with his life view, just like his son was.  Mikey is as solid as the rock of Gibralter, clueless but solid.  I think Ted will win this round with his annoying neighbor.  Sorry to take so long to reply!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 31

So happy to see an update. Hope everything went well and you will start enjoying your home.

Mélanie is crazy! I think she's trying to get locked up by attacking Debbie like that. Michael is also going to get lost in his fantastic life, I am waiting for the moment when it will happen.

It's sad for Janet to agree to follow her husband even when she wants to know her grandchildren, but for what reasons? She must feel lonely. I don't know her situation but she should take Granny's example and take charge of her life without Ken but I think it's too late for that.

I had a tear when Brian spoke about Justin's assault, it's so deep in him this pain.

I hope Ted knows the right people and Anabel Harper is one, to silence the neighbor and prevent her from harming more people.

Life is always happy at the Taylor-Kinney's and I hope Joan can take advantage of it on a few occasions, Christmas, birthdays, we'll see but I think she's very aware of what she's done but she deserves it. let him open the door a little. The nephews can help and Tillie is a good person to helpher too.

.That's it and I'm already waiting for the next update. Take care of you.

Author's Response:

Start with an apology for not reponding sooner.  You are always so supportive by posting comments, I appreciate that and should have posted a reply.  I think Mel is just completely overwhelmed.  She see what abuse has done to Lindsay and is seeing issues where none exist.  Linds is still deeply troubled.  Janet has taken second place to Ken for so long I'm not sure she can break away from his control.  The bashing is something neither Brian nor Justin will ever completely get over.  I think Ted will come out on top of the neighbor situation.  We will have to see if Joan can continue with her recovery and open her heart a little to dispel her homophobia.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 31

Melanie=Meanie love it!!!



Author's Response:

Now I am the Meanie for not reposnding to reviews.  I am sorry for my neglect.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

I knew the Taylor grandparents were where their sons learned their hate, and that they would be unable to accept Brian. 

Brian talking to Granny about the bashing was so out of character for Brian and could only happen with someone who also truly loves Justin.

i hope Ted finds out who talked and gets them fired and the neighbor in trouble, the neighbor reported all to my Mom about me and my sisters got extra eggs at Halloween...

I loved Brian’s short day back at work he snubbed Mikey and fired someone and may bring Gus with him to work soon (that might need to happen next chapter) and then he comes home kisses everyone and almost burps a baby in his suit. 

Mel and Linds are up to something I don’t know what but I feel sorry for JR already...

i guess I end with Joan, I don’t like her, I don’t trust her and I worry her getting on Debbie and Jens good side will have them doing something stupid to Brian.

Now please go write Gus going to work with Daddy I need to read that SOON!

i know how much I hate moving so I hope yours was better then any of mine and you are now all moved in and can write the next chapter...



Author's Response:

I have been a very bad author and not reponded to reviews in a timely manner.  That is bad and I really do apologize.  I love to read the comments so I need to respond.  All of us are products of our enviornment but some people are able to overcome their upbringing.  Craig was not one of those overcomers.  I think Brian trusts Granny.  He can sense she loves his Sunshine unconditionally.  I'm sure Brian enjoyed being back at Kinnetik for a short time.  It made coming home all the sweeter.  Truly a doting parent not to consider suit damage with a burping attempt.  Lindsay has some serious issues that I'm not sure she will be able to overcome.  I don't think Joan has moved to anyone's good side.  I would say that Debbie and Jennifer are cautiously optimistic.  I think Gus will lobby hard to go to work with Daddy. Bill

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 31

YAY!!!!  My begging for a new chapter that I did to my computer screen yesterday resulted in a new chapter!!!

I feel for Janet, but she did sort of bring this on herself. She made the choice of being subservient and letting her bigoted closed-minded asshole husband not give a damn about her feelings. And she continues to allow it to happen, so she must not really want her grandchildren in her life.  Or at least not Justin & Molly. It just makes me appreciate Jennifer all the more that she had the strength to not allow that to happen to her and loving her children more than willing to settle for a comfortable life with a controlling bigoted asshole. Maybe Janet will grow a spine, but I doubt it. Her loss.

Had to laugh at your typo calling Melanie Meanie. LOL  I recently read that typo in another story and thought how appropriate the typo was. Meanie is just out of control. Deb was right in the fact that Meanie just hates males, no matter the age which led to the mistreatment of Gus and the spoiling of her daughter by making Gus pay for JR's misdeeds.  That is how she feels about men, she is all about blaming males for her mistakes, fuck-ups and hatefulness. She really needs a psychiatrist right along with her cra-cra bitch of a wife.  And wow, I feel like I am really cussing a lot this evening, but when the words fit, they fit.

Speaking of bitches, poor Ted having to deal with that trouble-making, gossiping bitch neighbor of his.  Glad he stood his ground and let Sybil know he didn't like her thinking that either, even if it was for just a moment. Ted is a good father and a good man and he did not deserve that at all.  I wouldn't have told the biddy anything and served her with a slander lawsuit since she was spreading vicious lies about Ted & Blake. But Ted is way nicer than me.  As I have mentioned before, I'm a vindictive bitch myself. LOL

Loved the trust that Brian has of Granny and love how much she loves the kids (especially Gus) and how happy she is living there.  I was actually wondering if there was any news about Kate's unethical lawyer. Glad to know that they are still trying to make that disbarment happen.

Creepy  is as delusional as ever. Loved Brian enjoying his day at work.

I'm glad Joan is rejoining the world a bit. Tilly is a good woman. I was surprised that Joan went to talk to Deb, but it was a good talk. I don't know if she can ever truly be forgiven or not but I thought it showed a lot of growth in how she is currently viewing things. But who knows what she will think or say next time.  I do believe in redemption for some, not sure if Joanie deserves it, but I am glad to see her growth today and the knowledge and acknowledgement of the horrible things she has done in her life and her understanding it will probably be impossible for her victims to forgive or want to be in her life.

I have to admit that I teared up in two places in this chapter; 1) when Brian told Granny he still can see Justin on the garage floor, and 2) when Joan started crying (never thought I would cry for her -- okay, I'm a crier, don't even let me near a Hallmark movie).

Great chapter!! Thank you for posting.  Can't wait for a new chapter!

Hope your move went well and you are all settled in at your new house.

Holly  



Author's Response:

Move was good, still some unpacking to do.  It is very hard to change the habits of a lifetime, Janet doesn't see, to be making any changes.  Joan on the other hand seems to be making needed changes.  Several people seem to enjoy my unintentional categorization of Melanie.  She doesn't seem to realize her life is wildly off course.  I think Ted will come out on top with his neighborhood dispute.   Brian knows that Granny is genuine and that she really loves two of the mopst important people in his life:  Justin & Gus.   You really have a pick against poor Mikey.  He knows he is right even if the rest of world doesn't realize it.  Joan is really making positive changes to her life.  I hope it continues.  Very falttering that I can move you to tears, thank you!!!  Always move to ready your comments!!!  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2021 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 31

thanks for update.  stay safe



Author's Response:

Happy you enjoyed it.  I have had both shots of vaccine.  I hope soon life will become more normal.  Take care!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2021 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 31

C'etait Super. Je voulais pas que sa s'arrête. Ken est un idiot.  J'en étais sûr que rien n'allait changer. Je suis contente pour Joan c'est bien. Pour Ted, j'espère qu'ils vont trouver cette assistante sociale. 



Author's Response:

Heureux que vous avez apprécié cette mise à jour. Ken se coupe de beaucoup de bonheur et la pauvre Janet va avec lui. J'espère que la vie de Joan continuera de s'améliorer.   Bill     

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2021 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 30

Well those grandparents are something else.  Don't like them at all.  Hope there are big changes in them.  I hope Michael says something about Justin again so Brian can punch him and fire him.  I so dislike that so call man.  I am very suspious of Lindsay, this all of a sudden looking after Jenny Rebecca and keeping house.  I think she is trying to win Brian and Justin over so she can say how much JR misses Gus and can he come and visit and then she kidnaps him.  Don't trust her at all, she's nuts.  I hope no one falls for any of her antics.  So sorry for such a long thought, and for a delay in reviewing but just like before if something unpleasant happens in my life I start this saga from the beginning. Thanks again for your update and this wonderful story.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry not to have replied sooner.  The Meeting with the Taylor h-grandparents did not go well.  Lindsay is a trouble soul.  Thanks for your comments!!!!!!  I do love to get reviews.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2021 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 30

i have no symapthy for janet and ken. they funtion as fairly normal people only when they are in their safe little white, hetero bubble of protection. expose them to the real world and they are just as bad as craig. you reap what you sow and they deserve to be kept out of justin's life. actions have consecquences and there should be consecquences for janet and ken... and michael, mel and linds. if you want to spend your life being nasty and judgmental and out for everything you can get and do your best to turn gus from brian, don't expect hugs and kisses from those you have hurt.

if anyone deserves some understanding for bad behavior, i think it is joan. she never in her life knew how differently people could act from her mother and jack and what a real family was like. she has no self confidence and no idea that change is possible for her. i'm hoping tilly and the parish priest can help her find a better road to travel. 

like some of the qaf characters, too many people in this country today think they can be as nasty and hateful as they want to anyone who doesn't agree with them, just like the ones in this story, and that it is ok. it isn't and i find it disgusting. i don't have much tolerance for irrational people with closed minds.

like mel and her thought about "no more private school for JR" when Brian got custody of gus... public school is fine for other kids, but not her daughter. nothing but a fucking hypocrit.... like so many others...



Author's Response:

My spologies for somehow missing your review earlier.  Janet and Ken did not have a very good meeting with their grandchildrens.  More on Joan in the next chapter.  Mel has many issues,  Thanks as always for your comments.  They are always food for thought.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 30

Hey Sweet Baboo, I didn't mention mikey I really can't talk about him without cussing like a marine. Just wondered if maybe Cynthia could go off on him and shock him so bad that he can't speak, or in his case whine. silence sweet silence.



Author's Response:

Poor Mikey, you wish such bad things for him.  He remains sure he is correct and the rest of the world is wrong.  You made me laugh...  your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 30

Hi Sweet Baboo, my vote is Janet and Ken 0 the Taylor Kinneys 100   ! Janet is acting like a loving grandmother but is blaming her husband and late son as an excuse. She was a grown woman and no one had a gun to her head, as far as Ken goes he is every bit the homophobe and lives to have people fear his power. Send them home, angry or not, don't need anymore homophobes from the Taylors, Molly and Justin would just stress and Brian would angry has hell. Ken wouln't be able to hide his true feelings from the family although I'd like think of Jen and Granny getting into a mud fest with Ken and Janet, I know Jen and Granny would win! I got my covid first shot today, hope you got yours. By the way moving to another state or town? Love you S. Baboo, Your Sally always.



Author's Response:

Darlinf Sally, so sorry to be so late in replying.  Life has been busy, moving SUCKS!!!  I agree that Janet has given at least tacit support to the life view of Craig & Ken.  I moved to a different town then last residence but I now live less than a mile from where I grew up.  Kind of funny to be back here so many years leter.  Some things the same, many things different.  Drive past my old grade school almost every day.  Also got my 2 vaccine shots so that is a good thing.  Hope all is good with you.  I remain as always, your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 30

i reread this chapter again and am now thinking that craig's mother is just as bad as her husband in her thinking... from some of the comments she made at lunch... she just covers it up better. i don't think either one of them deserve to be in the twins lives.



Author's Response:

The Taylors have not learned from past events and are in danger of being being ostracized by the Taylor-Kinney family.  We can't forget they raised Craifg and supported his view of Justin & Brian.  They have a lot to relearn or will be alone.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2021 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 30

ya know, i find as much as i detest michael, that i agree with another reader about michael needing psychiatric help. if anyone really loves him, meaning deb or ben, they should get in into see a shrink. i have never met anyone on this planet who is so blind to the truth and oblivious to what others say and think. either that or he needs a lobotomy.... lmao



Author's Response:

Blake has suggested counseling to Miket a few times but he is certain he is correct about his view of life.  The rest of the world is mistaken!!  Bill

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2021 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 30

Loved the new chapter.  I had nearly given up hope. I knew you were getting ready to move but was desperately missing this story. Thanks for posting!

Ken Taylor is just like his son, which is a very bad thing. I feel for Janet, but she will never get the chance of being able to be a part of Justin's family if she and Ken don't hear and understand what they will have to do to be a part of it. I thought Justin laid it out very well what it will take for that to happen.  Now, will they listen and learn or will we see a replay of Craig's so-called attempt at reconciliation?  I can't wait to find out.

Loved Molly and her support. I liked that she made Justin think about the request from the Taylors and I had to smile at the narrowing of her eyes at the Taylors and looking like Jen when she did so.  

Creepy is just down the rabbit hole. Where are the men in white coats carrying a strait jacket to take him to a padded room.?

What is going on with Lindsay.  Such a huge turnaround. The fact that Deb has a bad feeling is making me very concerned. I so need to know right now!!! ;-)

I'm glad that Jay is standing up for himself but doing it in a reasonable, knowledge-based way.  

I have missed this story. I know you are incredibly busy but I hope you can squeeze in a new chapter soon.

Great chapter!

Holly



Author's Response:

Ho Holly, happy to know you enjoyed the latest chapter.  The Taylors seem kind of clueless.  They need to understand that Justin and his family do not need them and need to adjust course if they want to be included in that family.  Molly loves her brother and she is her mother's daughter, strong and confident.  Mikey is like the rock of Gibralter firm and unmoving.  I don't think Lindsay's chnage is really a good thing.  Jay is getting good advice from his new friend, Peter.  Peter is getting good advice from his Papa and Grandmom.  Andrea is not getting any good advice.  My intentions are always to update quickly but somehow that diesn't happen.  I apologize.  Thanks for your comments I enjoy reading them.  Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2021 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 30

I love how Mikey lives in his own alternative reality. The Taylors have got some nerve. You can love your son and not abandon your grandchildren.

Author's Response:

Mikey is a firm inhabitant of Mikey World!!!  The abandoned their grandson, they did send a gift to Molly but it was returned by her mother letting them know her children were an all or nothing deal.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2021 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 30

Wow, that was a decent cliffy! I hope it works out, they seem pretty old and pathetic and need some sort of family ties. Ken is being kind of arrogant atm but that could be rectfied by a few quik kick in the shins by the wife. And honestly, what old, white, (well off?) male isn't at least a little arrogant?

Both the G-'rents seem to also have been fooled by Craig's misinformation which makes them victims too. I hope it works out

Sorry that Mikey continues to spiral down the rabbit hole to Wonderland and madness. That's a pity.



Author's Response:

I guess that is true about old, white males being a little arrogant is true but I try my best to comtrol it!   You have a lot of sympathy for the senior Taylors, you have me considering a different outcome for them.  Mikey is dependable, not sensible.  Thanks for the comments!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 30

Hi ! Glad to see an update. Good luck with the move, it's always quite stressful even if you prepare as well as possible.

There is a lot going on in this chapter and it leaves a lot of questions. The Taylor grandparents are like Craig especially Ken and I think they lost their chance to meet the twins. Even Molly seeing Ken's behavior understood why her brother was so reluctant. I don't see this improving.

Michael is a big liar who never sees that his immature behavior will end up falling on him. Already when he says that his landlady does not go to Liberty Avenue, it's rotten since he got the accommodation by the GLC. And if he reports rumors about Justin to Kinnetic and it happens to Cynthia or Brian's ears he's going to be fired. Maybe he needs to be on his own and with nothing to finally grow up, we'll see what you do with him because I already told you you're too nice to Michael, finding him all kinds of apologies when he doesn't deserve them LOL

I'm also waiting to see, like Debbie, what Lindsay is up to and if it's something about her art, she must not forget that she stole the Bloom Gallery and that especially Sydney is angry with her a lot of her. behaviour. Jay follows his path, listening to Peter and Jen's advice on resisting his mother.

So many questions and while waiting for the answers, good luck and stay safe.

Author's Response:

You are correct stressful for sure.  Craig seemed to have learned his behavior at his father's knee.  Ken says he believed his son's version of events, probably becasue he agreed with it.  Mikey didn't move to the moon and you are correct his landlady is going to find out about his lies.  Lindsay's behavior continues to be odd, we'll have to wait and see what happens there.  Andrea is no doubt regretting Jay evermet Peter or spent time with the Taylor-KInneys.  Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying.  Thanks!!!  Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2021 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 30

Great update.  I would have thought Justin and Molly would have walked out on lunch several times with the remarks his grandparents made.  I hope they can make them see the truth, but I fear that it may b too late.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I think Molly & Justin are committed to giving the Taylors a fair chance but it doesn't look promising.  Ken, especially, seems to think a lot like his son - Apple meet Tree!!  Thanks for the review, you know I love them!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 30

Great chapter.  Both Molly and Justin laid it all on the line to Ken and Janet.  I'm curious as to the outcome.  

I must reiterate how much I love this saga.  I'm hoping it never ends!



Author's Response:

Wow, never ends,  I guess that  means I have to live forever.  That is a VERY nice comment, THANKS!!  Ken seems pretty set in his ways, not a good thing.  Thanks for always taking time to review, that is what keeps me writing.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 30

Always happy to see an update by you.  Craig's parents seem to believe Craig's version of what happened over what really happen.  This does not bode well for them.  Love that Molly is with Justin 100%.  Linds has mellowed perhaps with the aid of pills?  Can't wait to see what happens next.  Moving will make it harder to work on additional chapters, but I know you can do it.



Author's Response:

Always happy to see your review, don't consider a chapter complete without it.  Dad especially seems pretty invested in Brian as child molester.  I don't see him ready to accept all of Justin's family.  Molly really does love her brother and of curse she really loves Brian too!  I think you are on to something with that "pills" idea, time will tell.  Beem busy painting, will be happy when move is done - end of this week, fingers crossed!  Thanks for all your suppport,  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 30

Go JUSTIN, he is fantastic in this chapter the way he spoke to his grandparents was perfect. I was so invested in the conversation I didn't want it to end. Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

Justin is looking out for his family.  Your comments are always so kind, thank you.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 30

I think Ken and Janet have their work cut out for them...   With Janet, I see that she is trying with Justin, but Ken, he really seems set in his ways and not one for change.    But I am glad that Justin and Molly are having this get together with them now to find out how they truly feel about Justin and his family, and depending on their response, just let it go and move on.                                                                                         

I do wonder about Lindsay, though.   Debbie had the feeling that something was off about her, and Debbie is usually spot on about these kinds of things.  I'm looking forward to finding out where this part of the story is headed...                                      

On another note, I hope all is going well with preparations for the move and it all goes well!!!  



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm not feeling the love from PaPaw.  He is not going to pass Brian bullshit test.  I feel sorry for Janet, I think she is looking for family to fill the void in her life.  Yeah I think there are still some issues with Lindsay, the pendulum seems to have swong quickly to domestic life.  Can't see it lasting.  Not as prepared as I hoped but all will be good.  Thanks for the good thoughts.  Always happy to see your review and know you are still reading and enjoying!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 30

Ok I missed this but I hope your move goes well, mine was a nightmare I would only wish on those I don’t like...

Mikey not sure why you wasted lines in this chapter, but I admit I look forward to him being fired by Brian.

Jay the kid is growing a backbone which is a good thing for him and bad for his Mom I see him at 50/50 with Mom and Dad soon because something else is going to come up where Mom can’t get him...

Brian and Justin and time alone, maybe soon they go back to those once a week dinners...

Memaw and Papaw, I admit I hate weird nicknames for Grandparents but these people deserve these dumb ones since they can’t get the clues Justin and Molly are throwing in their lap ACCEPT BRIAN or forget you have great grandchildren period end of sentence.

They bought into Craig’s lies and don’t seem to remember just how smart Justin is to the point they think he would fall in love with someone who would do what Craig suggested.

i can’t wait for more, because I think next chapter Brian should go back in the office and maybe someone will be fired....

 



Author's Response:

I have moved a lot.  Always think I am well organized until the moves gets close!!  You seem to dislike poor Mikey, he just wants what is best for Brian  - or at least his version of what is best.  Jay has had a taste of real life and he liked it a lot.  Mom is not going to be able to get him under her thumb again.  I have known people called Memaw & Pepaw - seems more popular in the southern USA.  I went with PaPaw.  Whatever their names, Ken seems pretty clueless about what he needs to do to be a par of his great grandchildrens lives.  Their family loyalty deos seem to favor the son over any other members of the family.  Always interesting to read your comments!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 30


Super. J'avais envie de frapper ken. Honnêtement tel père tel fils.  Je serais parti du restaurant à sa place. Ils vont jamais accepté Brian.


Author's Response:

Heureux que vous avez apprécié ce chapitre.  Il semble que Craig a appris son comportement de son père.  Content que Justin ait cassé la mauvaise chaîne papa.  Je pense que tu as peut-être raison de ne pas accepter Brian.  Merci d'avoir pris le temps d'examiner!!!  Bill

 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 30

Wow....love the strong man Justin has become! So much going on and yet so much unresolved. Can’t wait for more!



Author's Response:

Justin has matured and is determined to defend his family!!! Thanks for the review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 30

Yep kick them to the curb Justin

Author's Response:

Ken seems to not be totally on board for the big reconciliation.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2021 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 30

an interesting chapter. the way michael runs his mouth, i'm pretty sure he will get caught out in his lies to his new landlady.

jenifer and peter gave jay very good advice and it seems to be working with andrea, so maybe there is hope for them yet.

i don't see craig's parents getting to see the children the way craig's father is acting. doesn't seem like he will ever accept brian and probably not have much interest in gus, john or peter either.

lindsay's complete turnaround was a surprise and i think debby is right to be suspicious of this new behavior.

when is gus going to get his clothes and toys? doesn't seem like that has happened yet. jr seems to be more accepting of gus' disappearance from her life. wonder if that will last...

can't wait to see how mel and linds are doing without gus and for lindsey to show justin and sidney her "artwork". and is lindsay so relaxed without gus that she has started acting like a wife and mother?

so many irons in the fire and so interested in seeing how it all plays out.

glad you are making your new home beautiful but hope you don't forget your loyal readers...  hugs

i'm assuming ben will file for divorce.

 



Author's Response:

Since Flossie has some connection to the GLC ceneter, she advertised the room there, there is an excellent chnace she will mett someone who knows Michael or Debbie.  Andrea not taking gthe chnages in her son's behavior in a positive manner.  Still kind of an uphill battle.  Craig might have ;earned his baehvaior at his father's knee.  Good point about Gus's belongings, he will want his toys.  I think I have the correct person in mind to retrieve them for him.  I don't think Lindsay just got a new attitude for no reason.  Maybe Linds and Mel came up with a good story about Gus's absence for JR.  I think Linds is till anticipating a show at Bloom Gallery, not sure that will happen.  Ben has been pretty forgiving of Mikey in the past.  Hopefully will have more time for writing once the mpve is done.  Thanks for your comments I always rnjoying reading them!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2021 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 29

did read it again



Author's Response:

I am always impressed by anyone rereading this long saga!

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 29

Great chapter. 

I loved the confrontation between Brian and Creepy. I seriously think Creepy needs to be institutionalized, he just seems to be sinking more and more into comic hero and supervillains fantasy world. Even with Brian telling him he is starting to hate him, Creepy still thinks he needs to be saved as if he was a damsel in distress due to Boy Wonder, the Supervillain. I know you always say that we can always depend upon Creepy being the same, but there comes a time when people (characters) have to think that Creepy needs serious help with his delusions and living in comic fantasy land. There is something seriously wrong with him not being able to face that fact.  Psychiatric help is desperately needed.  JMHO

I really loved that Molly and Granny had some one on one time and I loved how Molly handled her grandparents surprise visit. She is maturing nicely and knows and respects her brother and his reactions to things. I will be interested in her conversation with J&B about the Taylors seeing the twins.  I got a little smile when Granny did her sly little dig about staying with Justin and his family.

Loved the one on one time that B&J got to have and loved seeing Emmett & Rusty.

I'm wondering what is going on in Lindsay, Mel, Ben and the Horvath's lives.  Would love to catch up on them too if you feel like writing some on them.

Loved the chapter and anxiously awaiting more!!

Holly



Author's Response:

Holly, so sorry not to have replied sooner.  Somehow I missed seeing this review.  Mikey is an interesting character, so sure he is correct about his view of Brian when all evidence is to the contrary.  By now you probably know how the Taylor gransparents meeting is progressing.  Also there are some of the catchups you requested, sorry again for my later response!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 29

Well I guess they thought they could just show up and that's that.  I really am not surprised.  I don't think Justin will let them see the babies so fast just because they did this. So proud of Molly but no surprise there either.  Thank you for all of your updates, I know life has to go on no matter how much we would like the updates  more regularly, I am grateful.  Please never change the way you write Brian and Justin so loving, strong and together.  I will always love this saga and silly as it might sound it has gotten me thru two deaths, one of which was my daughter.  When I was feeling so down I would just start to read it again because even with the problems that come into their lives they have their family and their love.  I will always come back to read this over and over.  Thank you again for this.



Author's Response:

I don't think any comments have touched me as much as this one.  What a lovely and generous compliment to say my story helped you cope with such a deveastating loss.  Thank you so much for telling me that!!!!  The Taylor grandparents do not know their grandson too well to think he would respond well to an ambush visit.  Molly may surprise you, she has some fond memories of her Taylor grandparents.  Of course she would never not support Justin.  Again I want to say how much I appreciate your comments and I feel proud I could help you cope in some small way.  I like happy stories and you can be assured my Brian and Justin will always have a strong connection!!!  All my best to you!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2021 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 29

Good for Molly!  Guess she told them. 

 I'm so glad you updated.  I just love this continuing saga.



Author's Response:

I know I am not the best at updating, I could say I made a new years resolution to do better but I don't belive in them.  Molly might surprise you......  Thanks for the review, I do love to get them and that is why I keep  adding to this long saga, it has been going for 7 years which I find hard to believe!!!   Bill

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2021 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 29

Love this story, except for Michael and not too sure about Ken & Janet.  Fantastic writing.  Sorry, but I have been having trouble giving a review.  Hope this gets to you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for perservering to leave a review.  Mikey is someone we can always depend on, he is always competely clueless.  Ken and Janet may cause some family friction and we can't forget they reaised Craig.  Thanks for letting me know you are still enjoying the story, I appreciate it.  Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2021 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 29

Sweet Baboo, sorry you were concerned a person with my name from a different country joined--took out my facebook, my groups, and my messenger. I've worked to these back all my friends and my work friends were removed I was finally able to read your wonderful chapters but was unable to review or respond, so glad to finally tell you about what happened I've missed you. Love your Sally



Author's Response:

Yes there was confusion at this end as well and I tried to send you a FB message.  So glad to have you back, I was truly concerned.  In this crazy time you never know what will happen.  I get my first vaccine shot next Tuesday.  Welcome back Darling Sally!!! As always your sweet Baboo.

 

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2021 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 29

good morning Sweet Baboo, I think Ken and Janet have a lot of gall to try and spring their self on Justin, it proves their about as stupid as Craig. They believed all the crap that Craig told as the truth, their meeting with Jen should have made them think twice before just appearing,kinda hope Justin and Brian won't meet with them, they never gave Justin a thought for years or Molly.Now with Craig gone they want to connect it's far to late to turn loving grandparents, Justin and Brian have survied a lot and don't need two-faced relatives bargeing into their happiness.Of course the mental midget is still around I just wish Brian would demote him to janitor, it's not a good idea for him to be in reception and talking garbage when new clients are around. I love your stories.Love your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, Well they did raise Craig & Brad - not a parenting recommendation!!  Justin would have no trouble kicking them to the curb but I suspect Molly might feel differently.  We'll just have to wait and see what happens.  We know Brian, Jennifer & Granny will be on the kicking team!  I always think of Mikey as deoendable, always the same, but not in a good life afirming way.  Glad to you back!!!!  As always your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 29

i didn't say anything about the "flavor"  of the story changing and not sure where that came from. my disappointment stems almost entirely from the long times betwween chapters. to me, that indicates losing interest in the story. and with so many very interesting irons in the fire right now, i hoping for more of that and less fluff in this chapter.

i'm 73 years old and hope to live long enough to see "the end" at the bottom of a page before i die. i chuckle as i say that, but it is true!



Author's Response:

I understand the frustrations over waiting for updates.  Can't promise it will improve but I will try

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 28

 Hi Sweet Baboo, Jay's mother really confuses me I don't know if she's a control freak or a homophobe bbut her son doesn't need to be living with her or he will as messed up as she is. I was really happy Deb chose Joe instead of mikey coming back home.I like Joe he seems to look after Deb and certainly takes far better care of her than her own son, the fact that he stands up to mikey is refreshing. was glad Brian didn't let him used the loft, like he said he paid him a salary he should be able to find himself a place to stay. I always loved the way you wrote Jen, but I swear you have many wonderful characters up like Kevin, and Joe but one of your best is Granny she's a hoot really love her personality even Brian is charmed by her. Love, your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, I think Andrea is both of those things,  Jay is lucky to have found a friends like Peter.  Peter is smart and does well in school but stillhas time for a life.  I think Jay's stay at the Taylor-Kinney home was an eye opening experience for him.  Deb had developed a life for herself with Carl and they are both enjoying mentoring Joe.  Deb is realizing that Mikey is stuck and is showing some "tough love".  I do love my Grandmom Jen - Morher Taylor.  Kevin, loosely based on a real person, has really become a fan favorite.  I love the character but even more I love how popular he has become.  Granny pulls no punches, I think she will provide us with lots of good times.  Happy to be replying to your review after a period of silence.  That is a big relief to your sweet Baboo!!!!!!

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 29

Love this story, except for Michael.  And, not getting a good feeling about Ken & Janet.  Wonderful writing. 



Author's Response:

You are always so kind in your comments, thank you so much!!!!!  Well they did raise Craig & Brad, so we can't expect too much.  Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 27

hi sweet Baboo,enjoyed this chapter. I was glad Jay stood his ground with his mother the boy has no friends and must be lonely. I think she uses power to make herself important at the expensive of her child that's abuse in most peoples eyes. I'm convinced that mikey is mentally challenged he's just out of control. love, Sally



Author's Response:

My Darling Sally, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN??????  I have been really upset not to hear from you and was worried something had happened to you.  Glad to see this review!!!!!!!!!!!!  I think Andrea needs a hobby, not a good thing to put all your energy into your child - not good for mother or child.  Jay has seen how life pleasant could be with his visit to the Taylot-Kinney home.  I think Andrea is going to have her hands full tyring to keep him under strict control.  Mikey is something we can always count on, he is unchanging.  So, so, so, happy to see this review.  I missed you!!!!  I remain as always, your sweet Baboo

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 29

Everyone had a good weekend. Except Michael who took a shake again but did he understand this time I don't think he's so straight up in his boots full of shit when it comes to Brian, too bad for him, he's going to lose him . I think Justin's reaction is going to be terrible when he finds out about the unauthorized arrival of grandparents Taylor. I can't wait to read more. I read in one of your responses to the comments that you bought a house. I hope you will think of your poor readers every now and then for updates even though I know a house takes a long time. Take care of you..

Author's Response:

 I am not completel sure Mikey is capable of really understanding that people change and grow.  I am prettysure you are correct about Justin, he will NOT be happy about the grandparent ambush.  The issue will be his baby sister's soft spot for her Taylor grandparents.  Well you can't sat I didn't warn you but I will really try to update.  I always enjoy your comments, thanks for all your support!!!   Bill

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 29

Thank you so much for the new chapter. Michael is still an idiot. I don't know how Brian can still put up with him.

Author's Response:

Well Brian has had alo ng history with Mikey the idiot, I think he kind of expects,is disappointed but not surprised.  Happy you enjoyed this update!!!!!  Thanks for your review!!!!  Bill

 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 29

Another great chapter. Personally I don’t think the tone (or whatever it was referred to as ) has changed. Love the Michael tantrums. Also think it’s time for Justin and Sydney to review Lindsay’s “art work”...I can’t imagine its gallery worthy!



Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying the story!!!  Mary is a faithful reader and reviewer and just wants what we all want for the story to be the best it can be.  I agree abiut the art work review.  I planned that for this chaper but somehow the Taylor grandparents force their way into the story but not the house.  Thanks for the review.  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 29

i honestly don't think the flavor has changed all that much, bill; it is a wonderful story without all the misery and angst most b/j stories have and i'm happy to read a story where they are happy and together. to me, as long as they together as a solid team as they are in this story, there is very little angst... lots of excitement and issues to be dealt with but they deal with them as a team and to me, that is a good thing.

if i'm reading a book or a complete story, i don't pay much attention to how long a  chapter is or if one here and there has lots of fluff because i can move right on to the next chapter until i reach the end. i LIKE happy fluff and love the kids but there are so many irons in so many fires right now in the story, i'd like to see more of that too.

i love your writing syle and the way you present your characters. it's just hard to have to wait for so long for a new chapter....



Author's Response:

label me confused

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2021 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 29

Hmm so many relatives I wonder what these new ones agenda is

Author's Response:

These relatives don't have much family of their own so they are looking to expand their horizons with great grandchildren.  At least that is what I think.... who knows.....  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 29

i told myself i would not start reading stories that are not complete after edom and wren left me hanging with unfinished stories. when i started this one, i didn't realize it wasn't complete and found myself so hooked on it i just couldn't walk away.

i'm not trying to anger you or hurt your feelings but i'm just so disappointed i have to tell you that it looks like you are losing interest in this story and that it will only get worse once you start working on your new house. chapter 28 was a good chapter, altho quite short. i thought we were getting some mel and linds in this one from what you said but other than two very brief interractions with craig's parents and michael, the rest of this also very short chapter is all huggy-kissy fluff.

i'll check back occasionally but not often as i know there won't be anything for at least another month and it will be even longer when you move into your new house.

this is my very favorite b/j fanfic story and i'm just feeling so let down right now, i had to speak up.



Author's Response:

Your comments have given me something to think about.  There are a couple thing I do disagree with:  5,000 words is really about avaerage for my chapter lengths.  There are a few that are longer but a also a few that are shorter,  When I started this saga (lo those many years ago) my chapters were much shorter and I did update more frequently.  I actually think that most of this story is "huggy-kissy" stuff but I do not frequently go back and read past stories. I am going to reread some past stuff to see if the flavor of the story has changed.  I am not angry or hurt.  I appreciate honesty from the readers.  If you make this story a favorite you will get an email when there is an update. To be honest I don't see my updating to get dramatically more frequent.  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 29

Great chsgter as always!!!    Wow, to look back from where it all started for Brian and Justin to where they are now - look how far they have come!!!    And Michael seemed to be this close to a beat down from Brian.   Michael still just does not get it!!  At this point, I don't see him ever figuring out that he is the problem, not Justin.    And what is the deal with Ken and Janet?   Molly was right - if they force their hand, Justin will hae nothing to do with them.   They need to work things out on Justin's terms, not theirs.   



Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed this chapter!!  I liked this trip to the loft got them thinking about where they were and where they are now.  I think the encounter with Mikey just reinforced how they feel about their relationship.  Mikey can always be counted on to be unchanging, like the rock of Gibralter for Liberty Avenue.  I think Molly will lobby for the Taylor grandparents to be allowed to visit.  Brian and Granny will be no votes and Jennifer will remain neutral. They obviously don't know thir grandson very well if they thought it was a good idea to try and force him to do something.  Thanks for the comments, always look forward to reading them!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 29

Just when I was beginning to think this would be a boring chapter of Brian and Justin having sex and the kids hanging Granny, Grandmom Jen, and Grandpop you throw in Michael hearing for the millionth time that Brian is happy, even I know he didn’t hear a word. Then you throw in an ambush by the Taylor grandparents. It sucks what Brian and Justin will come home to...

Not begging just hoping there is more soon...



Author's Response:

Hello my friend,  I think Brian would be highly insulted that you find his sexual activities boring.  They will come home to hear about the Taylor grandparents attempted visit which will result in an our=trage Brian and a thoughtful Justin.  I will try....  Always fun to read your comments.  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 29

Michael is so wrong in his thinking.  Will he ever learn?  Now we have two more people who might be trouble stopping by.   I guess it doesn't pay for Brian and Justin to go away.



Author's Response:

I like to think we can always count on Mikey to be clueless and unchanging.  I beleive he thinks that somehow Justin has hypnotized Brian.  They still enjoyed themselves, I don't thnik Mikey bothere them much, but there will be some toruble when they get home and find out about the Taylor grandparents ambush..  You know I ALWAYS look forward to your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill


Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 29

Super. Je doute que Justin les laisse rentrer dans leur vies. 



Author's Response:

 

Justin sera ennuyé, mais je pense que Molly voudra qu'il les laisse rencontrer les jumeaux.  Bien sûr,  Brian sera un non et je pense que grand-mère ne sera pas à bord non plus.  Bill

 

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2021 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 28

You know sometimes you have to put some relatives and "friends" on the fringe of your life.  I think that is where Michael and Lindsay need to be.  I know she will have contact with Gus but that is all she needs to do. What art could she have that would be good enough for the gallery and if she does Justin needs to tell her to try another gallery.  All I see there is trouble.  Michael, lost cause.  I just think they are both just users big time.  Melody, I don't like but I also think she has also been used by Lindsay and Michael.  Not telling Jenny about Gus just goes to show how non of them care about anyone but themselves.  So love Granny and of course Jennifer one of my favorites.  Waiting for so much more.  I hope we get to see the twins grow. I so love how you have written so much love and strength between Brian and Justin.



Author's Response:

I think they kind of put themselves on the fringe but refusing to face change but you are correct that is where they belong.  Mel and Linds are not contenders for parents of the year.  We'll have to wait and see what Sindey and Justin think of Lindsay's art.  Glad that you are still enjoying the story and like Granny.  Of course I love my Jennifer, glad you do too.  Thanks so much for the review.  Hearing from the readers is what keeps this story going.   Bill

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter.  Sorry I am just getting to read it.  Too much going on to settle down and read.  Hopefully all the drama is over.  Fantastic writing.  Love this story so much.  Hope you have a good year. 



Author's Response:

My bad for not responding sooner.  Happy your are still reading and enjoying the story.  Thanks for letting me know.  Bill

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 28

Thanks for update! Happy New Year!

 

Okay, rant over.  Take care,

Deb L

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Deb, I agree!!!!  Don't want to stir up too much controversy.  Happy new year to you!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2021 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 28

Jennifer is such a good person not just for looking out for Joan but her boys as well by looking after the kids. That Andrea omg I want to kick her ass I'm so glad Mary stood up to her. The boys do need time on their own. I'm sure raising kids is very hard so doing this will help them more than they even know. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2021 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 28

Thank you for the new chapter, Bill.  It was just what I needed in this madcap frantic week.  I was getting worried about you so it was good to see you post.

It was nice of Jennifer to help out Joan and that Millie and Tucker helped get the house ready for her.  I hope Joan appreciates it and doesn't get upset that other people other than Jenn was in her home or that they cleaned up.  I like that she is being more....approachable? nicer? (not sure how to describe her at this point) but definitely an improvement.  Glad she is taking her sobriety seriously.  I hope she is starting to open her life up some.

Andrea is such a worthless person.  How horrible would it be to be to live such a closed-minded and malicious mentality life? I know there are plenty of people like that, but I can't imagine limiting myself that way. Not that my life is big or all that exciting (I swear I could live a very happily hermit life, I'm just a solitary person, doing my own thing, learning, reading, seeing what I want), but I try very hard to be open to new experiences and I would never go out of my way to so visciously hurt someone, especially someone(s) that had just taken care of my child when I couldn't. I don't understand people who want to live a life like that.  I loved Mary telling her off.  It is a good thing that the Washington PD are very aware of who B&J are and that they want nothing to do with riling Alice and Charlie up. I found that funny.

Can Creepy get any more pathetic?  What a loser.  Is he unable to live by himself?  Has he EVER lived by himself or has he just always been a leeching loser, expecting everyone to house his worthless ass? Loved Brian telling him no and also telling him off about the twins.  I can't believe Creepy actually voiced his fantasies about Brian staying with him at the loft and getting away from "Justin's Kids".

Again, thank you for the new chapter.  I loved reading it.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  Hope it comes soon as I will definitely need it to survive the next couple of weeks.  Hope all is well!

Holly



Author's Response:

2021 has been an "interesting" year so far.  I am good just a bad author for not posting sooner.  I have given myself 21 lashes with a wet noodle.

Jennifer doesn't like Joan but appreciates her struggles for sobriety and wants to give her the best chance to stay sober.  The question remains if Joan will appreciate Jennifer's efforts.

Andrea does not appear to have any redeeming features and seems to be an extremely unhappy person.  Like you I enjoy solitary pursuits.  I find that to be a blessing in this carzy time we are living through but it doesn't limit us when we don't intreact with others.   We will have to see if some truth is going to creep into Andrea's mind when people are all telling her how wrong her behavior is.

Mikey remains Mikey, nothing much effects him.  He just keeps bobing along.  Thank for for your remarks they are always interesting to read.  I appreciate your support for the story!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2021 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 28

This was so heartwarming.  That little weasel, Michael is so nasty!  Good luck to him finding a roommate and place to live.  I'm glad Brian told him off.  What a horribly homophobic woman Andrea Fuller is!



Author's Response:

Happy to know you enjoyed this update.  Thanks so much for your kind words.  I think good luck to whoever gets to be Michael's roommate  LOL.  Andrea ceratinly doesn't appear to have any redeeming charater traits.  Hopefully she will see the light, time will tell.  If Peter gets his Papa and his Grandmom Jen stirred up Andrea won't know what hit her.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2021 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 28

Hey there and Happy New Year!!   I was so excited to see the update!!   I think it was very cool of Jennifer (and Tillie) to help Joan by getting groceries and clearing the vodka out of the house.    They also cleaned and did a load of laundry.   And actually, I'm proud of Joan; she really seems to want a change in her life and and I personally hope she is able to reach out to Brian.   I know he is really angry with her for everything she did - and said - to him since he was a kid, but she is really making an effort here, and I think even Brian would appreciate that.   I know it takes a lot to forgive, but just the fact that she's trying is a positive in my book.   

And then there's Michael.  He is so out of reality, its not even funny.   He honestly expected Brian would want to live with him.   I'm glad that Brian nixed that as well as Michael staying at the loft, too.   Even Emmett told him no, though I bet that even if there was a spare room available at his place, he still wouldn't let him stay there.       



Author's Response:

Happy New Year, sure is interesting so far.  Tillie and Jennifer are good people, willing to help people who need it.  Hopefully Joan will continue the good work she started in rehab.  It might not be too late for her to have a family.  Mikey exists in his own reality.  Always enjoy reading your comment.  THANKS!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2021 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

two things, i think. first, i've always liked jennifer and even defended her. the only issue i have with her was the tuition for jr. that was a biggie to me, and it certainly will be interesting to see how that play out when it's time to acturally pay it and everyone finds out she's still in private school. but i'm like brian is with joan. i know she's had a miserable life always been disliked, even hated, her whole life. but i think she is also a very strong, some would say stubborn!, person in some ways, determined to keep people away from her and not changing her mind about that, at least until now perhaps. if she can stay sober and allow tillie and maybe the priest into her life a bit, she could open up a whole new world for herelf with brian and the grandkids. it would be kind of nice if she could have an epiphany and make some changes in how she acts.

secondly, don't you think yoy may be a little "overly harsh" about david? i doesn't sound like  her son ever complained too much to his dad before he met up with the kenney's and it's often too tempting to take the easy route when no one is prodding you to do differently. but it seems his eyes are open now, probably even more after josh's dad talks to him about andrea's behavior so i'm thinking he could pretty easily decide he wants custody of jay to raise him with his new wife. it sounds like his fiance really likes jay and would be willing to have him live with them.

redemption would be a very good thing for both joan and david with their respective issues... just a thought...

 



Author's Response:

I was just giving you a hard time over Jennifer but I do think that she is as close to perfect as anyone can get.  I personally know of someone like David.  Rather than have to deal with an ex-wife they ignore their child.  I find that behavior reprehensible.  Maybe Andrea would not be as overbearing with her son if David voiced his disaproval.  Jay said he wasn't sure his father would really want Jay to live with him.  However misguided Andrea is, at least she is interested in her child and doing what she thinks is best for him.  I think poor Jay like JR has lost out in the parent lottery.  I don't think a father should need to be prodded.  That is what makes life interesting, difference of opinion.  I still love you!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2021 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 28

Thank you for starting my New Year with a new chapter.  Best chapter yet.  Andrea is in for a shock.  So is Joanie and Michael.  Can't wait to see what mischief you have planned for Brian and Justin's get-away.



Author's Response:

You are always so encouraging and supportive!!!  I so appreciate you.  Anyone who enjoys this long saga should thank you for all your support from the very beginning.  I never thought at the beginning I would still be writing this long saga.  It has been going on for more than 7 years!!!  Andrea needs to get taken down a knotch or two for sure.  Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying!!  Bill

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