Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2021 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 33

lol, bill. i don't THINK you would reneg on a promise. but, yes, time will tell!! still can't wait!



Author's Response:

New chapter is posted.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2021 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 33

yea!!! new story tomorrow.. can't wait!!! lol



Author's Response:

you do know the consequences if I don't deliver on a new chapter for tomorrow!  Time will tell.  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2021 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 33

 if I fail to live up to that promise I will stop writing this story.   

Um I would rather reread and wait, then to have you stop writing

 

Your reviews always make me smile!!!!! 

I generally amuse me when I write reviews, the fact you are getting the gist is enough to have me continue to review



Author's Response:

Glad we are both amused.  

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 33

So glad to see a new chapter.  I read these with a smile on my face.  I just love this series.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you are still reading and enjoying.  Thanks!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 33

This was fantastic and I cannot wait to see the brother visit granny and see the fallout from that. That will keep us all entertained. All the boys once again are amazing and John's birthday was perfect. So loved seeing a new chapter for this amazing story. 



Author's Response:

Glad to kknow you are still reading and enjoying this saga.  Eddie will relize thathis mother is the same take charge person she has always been.  John is aware of the massive improvment in his life since he came to live with his uncles.  Than for the nice comments!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 33

i  think that joan has made remarkable progress since she left rehab. she's friends now with roofer guys mother, been nice to debbie, eating out with the other ladies in the parish, helping and contributing to the food bank and had a truly wonderful lunch with john and peter. that's nothing to sneeze it.

i could easily see joan actually reach out to the priest to discuss brian's being gay and trying to understand him and his way of life. i think she's open to at least discussing it with him and i think/hope she could get the knowledge to find her way to acceptance of his lifestyle even if she can't so a happy-dance over it. and brian has it in him to forgive. he has taken care of his mother for years, in spite of everything and there's that confused part of him who doesn't want to see her die alone in her house... her acceptance of justin will mean a lot to him and seeing her develop a solid relationship with john and peter will also help a lot. they may never be best buds but i do think there is a real possilility of civil, semi-normal relationship developing. brian's bark is always worse than his bite with family.

i'm thinking something is going to push linds over the edge and it may be a refusal to show her  mediocre art. and i even feel a little sorry for mel with linds' issues. mel is overwhelmed and doesn't see what she can do to "fix" linds. she's been riding out the out of control lilnday and just grateful to see the susy homemaker linds  when she pops up. i think the nut house is in linds future... and i worry about jr being alone with linds when she's not doing well.



Author's Response:

Joan realizes hiw much she has missed out on because of her alcoholism and is determined to continue sobriety.  It is still difficult for her to abandon lifelong beliefs and fully accept Brian & Justin.  That may be beyond her capacities.  Mel amd Linds are trapped in a sad situation.  Lindsay is seriously ill and needs support, Melanie has to work in order to fullfill their financial obligations.  Not a recipe for sucess and porr JR is caught in the middle of it.  Not a happy household!!  Your reviews always give me food for thought and I appreciate that!!!!!!!!!!!!  Thanks,  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2021 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 33

Fantastic update.  We got a little of everything and everyone.  Can't wait until Granny Taylors son comes out and sees how well she is doing.



Author's Response:

Always happy to see your review.  Eddie will learn in no uncertain terms that Granny is firmly in control of her life.  Thanks for your continuing suppport!!!!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2021 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 33

My Sweet Baboo, So happy to see a chapter. Love Jen she sure handled the fools (the Hawkins father and son )Can't wait to meet Jen's brother, hope he's on Granny's side or poor Alice will be cleaning up a mess by the time Brian, Jen, and Granny finish with him,after trying to drug her mother Granny should have her daughter arrested she had no feelings for her mother just pure greed. I think Joan now has a clue what she is missing it's a shame she is her own worst enemy. Love and many hugs, your Sally



Author's Response:

Darling Sally, always happy to hear from you!!!   Jen has a history of dealing with Joe Harkins, now Frank knows she is no pushover.  Both of them are bullies used to intimidating people.  It takes a lot to intimidate Grandmom Jen.  The Harkins are not equal to that task. I think Granny won't need any help dealing with Eddie, she is just waiting to explain how things REALLY are to him.  I think it would be too painful to Granny to expose Kate's behavior to the world.  You are right Joan is her own worst enemy and is starting to realize how she has wasted her life.  Not quite ready to dismiss he long time beliefs and accept her son for the person he is.  Love and many hugs back to you.  I remain as always, your sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: mary48 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 33

just a thought... didn't granny cover a lot of what was happening with her and kate in the letter she sent? thought she told them she was moving to pittsburgh and that kate was trying to get her declared incompetent.... it sounds like they are totally in the dark about everything...



Author's Response:

That letter was sent before Kate's visit.  Kate is now trying to rewrite history about how she behaved when she visited.  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 33

Great chapter as always!!   I'm looking forward to Eddie's visit and for Granny to fill him on Kate's behavior.   I have a feeling he is in for a rude awakening!!!    I was very happy to see Joan getting along so well with John and Peter and them filling her in on everything Brian and Justin have done for them.    After going through the rehab, I'm not surprised that she is now more easy going, but was happy to see her being pleasant with Justin and even telling him they could be on a first name basis.    I am, though, still waiting for some kind of meeting with Brian and Joan, now that she is sober, as I think that would be very eye opening for him.   While I don't think he could forgive her for how she treated him growing up, I think it would be nice if they could at least be on even ground with each other.       



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.  I think you are correct about Eddie.  He is going to find out the truth from Granny,.  I think Joan realizes how much she has missed out on in life.  Her long time beliefs are difficult for her to dismiss and admit she has been so so wrong for so long.  Brian may be reluctant to meet with Joan because he doesn't want to be tempted to forgive her.  He has a very full life without her and may not want to dreg up his painful past.  Just a thought???  Thanks for taking time to review!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Argangel (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 33

J'ai adoré. C'était super.



Author's Response:

Vraiment heureux de savoir que vous avez apprécié ce chapitre.  Merci de me le faire savoir!!  Bill   

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 33

So glad to see an update thank you! Despite all it's nice to see Joan sober but it's a shame that she does not want to accept the love of Brian and Justin, she is really a loser, especially since she sees the happy life that the family has. Gus and his brother and sister are adorable. Ted and Blake's neighbor should be prosecuted for invasion of privacy (not sure that it exists!). Now I am waiting for Eddie to visit, he will surely get his mother reframe and he will be able to explain to his brother the lies and the jealousy of their sister. I wish Granny would press charges against Kate, in the end she deserved it. Lindsay is still so crazy. I can't wait to hear what's on her mind. See you soon, I hope not so long, take care of yourself.

Author's Response:

Joan is a sad person, wasted life.  She is not happy and she has never made anyone else happy.  Her beliefs are more om[ortant than people.  At least now she is starting to see where she might be wrong.  I always thought babies were fascinated by small children.  It is like they can relate to kids easier than full grown people.  The nighbor is like a lot of people who like to stir up trouble and attempt to act innocent about what they have done and try to act like a victim.  I think Granny will leave not doubt in Eddie's mind that she is fully capable of running her own life.  I don't belive Granny would ever play a role in sending one of her children to jail.  Lindsay is not well and getting worse.  Thanks for the review, I do love it get them!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 33

I love Gus interacting with the twins 


I am looking forward to Jen’s brothers arrival he will realize fast how wrong Kate is.


i hope Viola looks at Ted and Blake’s past as they were the lucky ones who have managed to overcome what her daughter couldn’t 


i am intrigued by the fact that Joan did not try to push John and Peter to see their Mom nor did you mention anything about her calling for John’s Birthday 


I wonder how bad Lindsay will react when Sidney and Justin see nothing worth showing in her artwork 


I don’t really mean this in a bad way but Joan being sober makes her a boring character 


Now I am going to start over at chapter 1 of this part of the story and with luck when I get to the bottom of chapter 33 there will be a next button for Chapter 34


I like Birthday presents as much as John, and mine is in October and I would love at least one Chapter to magically appear before the end of October if you can do 2 EVEN BETTER



Author's Response:

I am enjoying writing about Sonny Boy relating to Princess & Sunbeam.  They make a pretty cute & interestin trio.  I think Eddie will be quickly convinced that his mother is fully capable of handling her own affairs.  There will be a late card from Claire.  I think Joan just wanted to enjoy time with her grandsons and she & Claire on not really on the best terms after their last phone conversation.  Not sure Lindsay will get around to showing her art.  I think Joan was always a boring character, at least siber she is doing something positive for a change.  I will promise a new chapet on 10/1 and one later in the month.  if I fail to live up to that promise I will stop writing this story.   Your reviews always make me smile!!!!!   Thanks,   Bill

Reviewer: HJ1225 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 33

YAY!!!!  I was so happy to see this new chapter and it was so great!!  

Loved getting some updates on what was happening with everyone.  UGHHHH...that lying, conniving Kate.  I can't believe Jen's brothers are believing all the crap she lied about.  Hopefully when Eddie arrives he will get set straight and start helping contain his lying greedy sister and gullible brother, instead of causing trouble himself. I am really really looking forward to reading all of that and the fallout that Kate will suffer (and I really want her to suffer as anyone who would do that to their own mother should suffer - have I mentioned I get really vengeful??). Glad to hear Kate's lawyer got fired and censored.

I was happy hearing about what happened to Ted & Blake's nosy neighbors snoopy friend and that she was reprimended and suspended for what she did.  I hope Violet is understanding of Ted's past; that it won't be a problem with them adopting Nina. I would think she would know that both Ted & Blake are recovering addicts.  Hopefully she will be understanding about the arrest.

I really liked the Joan scenes and glad it was for the most part good for her and the boys and that she treated Justin much better.  I hate she still can't accept Brian's lifestyle, but she is starting to see the good too.  

I LOVE GRANNY!!  and Grandmom Jen!!  I just had to get that out. 

Glad we had no whiner in this chapter, but have to say that I still think Lindsay is batshit craycray! I feel Deb's concern and am more and more creeped out by the lalalaland she lives in, and her continued opinion that Justin has no say of what goes in his gallery. Creepy CrayCray!!

 I love this story and have been missing it so much!!!  I can't wait read more (especially about Eddie's visit and fallout) and I am begging you on bended knees bring it to us very soon!

Love this story!

Holly



Author's Response:

Hi Holly, happy to know you enjoyed this chapter after the lonf wait.  Kate is trying her best to get some control over Granny and her money.  She is doomed to failure.  I'm pretty sure that Granny is going to set Eddie straight about her being able to take care of herself.  I hate people who try to stir up trouble and try to play the victim when they called on their actions.  The great thing about writing a story is you can make events turn out like you want.  Joan is realizing what she is missing out on in life but it is difficult to overturn your life long beliefs.  Nice to see her making some progress in her view of life. I love Granny and Grandmom Jen too!!!!  Lindsay mental health seems to be getting worse instead of better.  Mel seems unable to unwilling to realize what is going on with her wife.  I get the distinct inpression that you enjoy my long sagq, thank you!!!   Always enjoy reding your reviews, thanks for all your support!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2021 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 33

Love the new chapter...well worth the extra long wait😉



Author's Response:

So happy your enjoyed it!!!  Bill

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