Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 21

OMG. I love granny. She is a hoot.

Author's Response:

Granny is going to be lots of fun.  Happy you like her!!!!   Thanks for your review!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 21

I love Granny so much! She quickly understood that she hurt Brian with her money and apologized, I'm sure they will get along well both and will succeed in blocking Kate. We can understand why she didn't want her mother to go to Pittsburgh if she wanted to declare her incompetent to take her money. Putting Larry and Granny in contact is excellent Kate will not understand what is happening to her.

Mel has been to see Debbie as a last resort and there is really a problem in this house especially with Lindsay who does not take care of JR at all.

I burst out laughing when Granny discovered that we could block numbers with these new phones I recognize myself completely in there !! Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Really glad you enjoyed Granny.  I think she will be a lot of fun.  She and Brian both believe in saying just what they think so they are sort of kindred spirits.  Mel know that Debbie will not hold back on expressing her opinions and concerns.  Thanks for the review, always great to read your comments!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 21

Loved seeing the update for the new chapter!!   I wasn't surprised at Brian's initial reaction to the money that Granny gave him and Justin.   He is a very proud man who loves to help out anyone who is in need, but has never been one to accept money being given to him.   Granny did the right thing in speaking openly with Brian and telling her side of things.  That really went a long way with him.   

And I don't know what to make about what is going on with Mel and Lindsay.  Things are definitely not right in that house, and even before Debbie stopped by and had basically the same reaction, I'd say that JR is being horribly neglected.   Lindsay would rather be in her studio by herself then brush her child's hair and get her dressed for the day.  And who knows what she JR does to keep herself occupied all day.  I truly feel sorry for her.



Author's Response:

I always love seeing your comments.  I think Brian and Granny understand each other.  She really regreted insukting Brian and let hi know how much she repected him.  Poor JR, bad gene pool, there really isn't anyone who can take her on fulltime.  Thanks for the review, everyone knows I love to get them!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill

 

PS all the authors on MW LOVE to get reviews.  Don't forget that is the only "pay" we get for our stories.  Thanks

Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 21

Ok I love me some Granny and need a lot more of that.

How long will J.R. last with Deb before Carl puts her butt in timeout. My guess not long.

Why do I now see all of Granny’s other children on the other side of the locked gate trying to get into BRITAN and the Sheriffs department hauling them all away...

Somehow I figured Granny had serious money and I get why Brian was pissed but I also liked that he could be reasoned with. BTW I think he will call her Granny in front of Kate to piss Kate off...

This story just gets better and better with every chapter, FYI I would pay you to edit just to get early peaks at chapters....

Ok you read my review now go write more Granny

NOW!!!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying Granny.  I always worry when I add a new character that readers won't like or accept them.  I think Kevin is the most popular created character.  I agree about Carl and if Mikey shows up he may put them both in timeouts.  I see Brian & Granny forming a mutual admiration society - neither of them takes any crap.  WOW this review is all positive, I must have caught you ina good mood.  Thank you for your comments my honest & reliable reviewer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2020 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 21

What a fantastic chapter.  Granny is a pip.  Kate is not going to get her way, I hope that Brian will help block anything she tries.  Love that John blocked Kate's number.  Mel doesn't seem to learn.  By getting Deb to help with JR, she's going to find that the times she's let her daughter get away with things are going to come back to bite her on her ass. 



Author's Response:

My friend, as you know I always look forward to your comments.  Always happy to know you are still reading and enjoying.  Granny knows what she wants and I don't think anyone will sucessfully stand in her way.  Older folks (me) don't always know everything about cell phones.  Someone showed "Blovl" to me a couple years ago.  I agree that Debbie's help is going to be a double edged sword for Mel.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1  Bill

Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2020 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 21

Granny is the granny of Brian's dreams. Love the subplot. 



Author's Response:

Brian might just start to have a grandmother experience at this late stage of his life.  Glad you are enjoying Granny.  Thanks for the review!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2020 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 21

I so love this story,series. You have given it its own life. The addition of Granny is going to be fun... Thank you for sharing your wonderful story with us....   :)

 

 

Hugs  ~ Teresa~

 



Author's Response:

What nice comments, thank you so much!!!!!!  I like Granny and she is going to be interesting.  I am happy you are still enjoying the story.  Thanks for taking time to post a review!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

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