Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2020 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
Sweet Baboo, Forgot to tell you how glad I was to see Kevin in Chapter 14. Always makes me feel good when Kevin is so accepted by the Kinney-Taylor clan. The child can find good in just about eveyone. My second eye surgery went great, check up in three months after that once a year on my glaucoma. Thanks for asking and I appreciate your thoughts and prayers. Love ya, your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, really happy to hear all the good news about your eye treatment!!!!!!! Kevin is one of my favorite "created" characters and he seems to be popular with the readers. Growing up I had neighbors who often mended a boy with Downs so that his mother had a break. There were not so many social services back then. Glad you enjoy Kevin's visits. As always, your Sweet Baboo
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2020 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
So when I tell you that YOU are wrong, do I get a chapter a week for March...
Author's Response: NO! Maybe if I was correct.
Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 14
Did I detect a little blackmail & from a priest too!
Can't wait for Mel & Lindz to find out B & J are going for full custody. I'm sure Michael will have something to say about that too. There may have to a pitts wide warning for screeching, screaming and whining!!!
Thanks. Looking forward to next chapter.
Deb L
Author's Response: Fr Bolton knew the right words to get Joan to agree. Blackmail for a good cause???? I don't think M&L will have a positive response but they have pretty much sunk their own ship. Michael will not be pleased!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for the review!!!! Bill
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 14
Please take Gus away from his mothers' house quickly. I'm sure the neighbors will cooperate. Gus is a little guy with lots of questions and an obvious ill being. Joan who agrees to be treated is a small miracle but it's may be too late. It was a pretty sweet chapter with all the family actions with the twins especially Gus and Kevin, and the nomination of Grandpop Tucker yesss! Thanks for the update
Author's Response: His mothers house does not seem to be a safe and nuturing place to be. It is a great thing that he trusts his Papa enough to confide in him. We will have to wait and see what happens with Joan. The twins generate a lot of happy feelings!!!! Tucker feels the title means Justin has acceoted him, let's hope he never finds out the truth. Grandmom Jen might kill anyone who disillisions Tucker. Thanks for taking tiem to review and to allerting us to the review issue. It prevented a serious blow to my ego!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 14
Father Bolton is just as stubborn as Joan, so he may be able to help her. I hope so, she's sick and lonely and the saddest part is she brought it on herself she chance to change her life but didn't when Jack died. Hope we soon find out if Gus gets to live with his daddy and papa. I loved "grandpop Tucker. Sweet Baboo, you did good,love Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, I always look forward to your comments. Fr Bolton knew what words to use with Joan - suicide is a "serious sin". Joan likes to think of herself as religious, certainly not a sinner. Plus he called her on all her bullshit, he had nothing to lose. We'll have to see how things work out for her. Next chapter will dealwith custody. Glad you liked "Grandpop' Tucker. I think he feels it means Justin accepts him as part of the family. Hope all is good with you!!!!! I remain, as always, your sweet Baboo
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 14
A simple day in the life with 5 kids and their friends I like it!
Grandpop Tucker is a little weird
I guess in the next chapter the shit hits the fan and lands all over Mel.
BTW I don’t see Joan lasting in rehab any longer then Claire.
I love the quick update any chance the next one is all ready to go... I know I am a little buggy but I am looking forward to Mel being served preferably at work...
Delay only due to MW issues
Author's Response: It will be an adjustment for Brian but I think Justin feels the more the merrier. Loretta Lynn was a grabdmother at 33, so Tucker is not a record holder. He knows he probably won't be a Dad - not with Jennifer anyway. I think being "Grandpop" makes him feel like he is really part of the family. Chances are Mel will be very unhappy and very frustrated in the next chapter. Joan has a death sentence hangingover her head if she continues to drink. That may be the incentive she needs but who knows???? You are the enternal optomist, next chapter all written LOL! Always glad to read your comments, thanks for the support!!!!!!! Bill PS - settle a dispute for me, I think you are a man but other admins think you are a woman - if it is not too personal let us know who is more perceptive Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2020 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter as always!! I like Father Bolton. He sure knows how to handle Joan. He actually got her to go the hospital for treatment!! And as far as Jennifer goes, I think it was very cool of the agent to tell her that the tenants below Melanie and Lindsey will be witnesses against them in regards to the case. Just more people on Brian and Justin's side. And poor Gus!! Melanie really needs a muzzle to keep her mouth shut about Brian. But I'm glad that Justin told him the truth; that eventhough Lily and Liam are babies and need his and Brian's attention 24/7, that doesn't mean they don't want Gus around. He is a huge help and loves to be around the babies.
Author's Response: I think Joan was ready for atough message, she knew what her issues were. I think being reminded that suicide is a sin (in the Catholic Church) convinced her to try treatment. I think the tenant information is a very good thing for Justin & Brian's case. Gus has to realize life changes but love continues. Gus does love those babies!! Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2020 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
This chapter was amazing. Lily and Liam are so loved by everyone and getting looked after by them all. Jennifer is a scary lady lol I wouldn't want to cross her. Gus needs to be with his dads and that talk he had with Justin proves it. Kevin gosh I love that child and you can see his spirit shine with happiness when he is spending time in the Taylor-Kinney household. That priest was so brave doing what he did after his talk with the nice lady at the church. Saying what he needed to say to Joan was huge. Even though I don't like her very much I hope the talk works and the help she needs is taken and taken well.
Incredible work can't wait for more and more and more xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice comments. Brian warns everyone not to get on the wrong side of Mother Taylor. Gus does love his fathers - they are the complete package he worships Daddy and confides in Papa. Grandmom Jen has said that Kevin is just all love. I think he is coddled and protected at home. With Gus at the Taylor-Kinney home he gets to spread his wings a little. Fr Bolton didn't worry about offending Joan, he just told thing like they are. We will see if the message sticks??? I appreciate the review, I love to get them!!!! Bill
Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2020 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
Fab chapter loved it.... thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Glad you enioyed it!! Thanks for the review!!!! Bill
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