Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2020 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 13
did read series again and will read it more times. I marked the Muncher bashing, just love it
Author's Response: I am always impresssed when someone tells me they reread this wgole long saga. I sometimes look back st certain chapters to refresh my memory of events but have never read the entire story. Happy to know you are still reading and enjoying. Thanks foryour comments, I love to hear from the readers - that is what keeps me adding on chapters. Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2020 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 13
My Sweet Baboo, Been up all night and so glad I found your latest chapter { having early surgery on my second eye for catract surgery and stents for glaucoma and was afraid I'd sleep and miss my appointment} I hope Gus doesn't spill the beans about living at daddy's ! Gus is being abused and turned against Brian. He needs a stable home life an unconditional love he sure doesn't get at home. I loved this chapter, Jen letting Brian know what Mel doing and saying to Gus, getting in a pop corn fight, and seeing Brian "cook", I like the bonding of Jen and Brian. Love ya, your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, hope alll goes well with your nedical treatments. Please let meknow how things go, you are in my thoughts and prayers. I am like you, always have toruble sleeping when I know I have an early appointment the next day. I think B&J's lawyers will be spiling the beans and Mel will NOT be happy. For soem reason she thinks she is in control of the situation. Mother Taylor is going to annihilate her. Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter, I can imagine Mother Taylor's expression when she emptied the bowl of popcorn onto Brian. Always love to ready your comments. Sending all positive thoughts your way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As always, your sweet Baboo
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2020 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
I'm so pleased that Jennifer convinced them that they needed to seek full time custody.
Author's Response: Jennifer is relentless when fighting for her boys. Mel should be afraid she has angered Mother Taylor! Happy your are still reading & enjoying. Thanks for ebing such a loyal reviewer!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 13
Melanie has sure messed with poor Gus' head. They need to get custody of Gus before she does permanent damage.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: i think Gus is confused by Melanie's actions & comments. Gus has always been a happy guy and really loves his Daddy & Papa and doesn't understand why Mama is critical of them. Thanks Dee Dee for the review!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 13
I think Brian and Justin have made the right decision. Now to get past Melanie's try at stopping it, cause you know she will. With John and Peter around Gus will never feel left out. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Hello my friend, always happy to reasd your comments. Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying. If Gus joins the household full time there will be adjustments for everyone. Thanks for your continuing support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: LucretiaSeeks (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 13
I am the world's worst about reviewing - usually because I don't know my password! But I retrieved a new one tonight so I could say that I love your story and I appreciate all of the effort you put into it for our enjoyment. Thanks for a great update!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review, I REALLY appreciate it!!!! Happy to know you are still enjoying this long saga. Bill
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love Mother Taylor more and more. Mel really is a bitch and Lindsay doesn't seem to do much to stop her. I hope Brian and Justin quickly get custody of Gus and get the girls reimbursed for everything they paid to help and they weren't even grateful for it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: She is always looking our for her boys. Linds is medicated and Mel is out of control, not a good situation for sure. I don't think the custody battle will last very long, but who will triumph???? Thansk for your review, I always appreciate them!!!! Bill
Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
Really enjoyed this new chapter. Mel needs a slapdown, the self righteous bitch! I think she will be suprised about Joan testifying on her behalf. Joan is a total bitch but only she herself can mess with her family not some outsider like Mel, who is a lesbian as well!
Thanks
Deb L
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2020 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 13
Just love it. darn the Munchers. Make them pay the money back too.
Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the latest update. The Muchers are about to be hit by the Taylor-Kinney hammer, it won't be pretty. Thanks for the review, I love to get them!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
Trying to decide if I want Mel to fight which be a better read or just to be forced to give Gus up which would be better for Gus but kind of boring to read.
Mother Taylor is a tigress and don’t even think about trying to take a swipe at her pack she will draw blood...
i think that house will be chaotic and fun for all and Ms Lily will have 3 big boys and her Fathers to wrap around her little finger.
Fingers crossed you have the next chapter written and ready to go...
Author's Response: I suspect it will fall more into the better read category. Mother Taylor is not to be trifled with, Brian warned M&L not to get on her bad side!!! They should have listened. I agree with your chaos prediction and Lily will indeed rule the roost as the Queen. Looking so much likeJustin, Brian especially will never be able to resist her. Nice thought about the already written chapter. Always enjoy your comments, THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
great update! poor Gus, feeling so anxious. thanks for the tender care you gave to his fears and showing him the love of his fathers. the cwazy lesbians better watch out! thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Gus is getting lots of attention from all his family. Grandmom Jen will insure his attention needs will be met. the cwazy one should be very afraid. Thanks fort aking time to review, I appreciate it!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 13
Loved the update!! Poor Gus. Melanie and Lindsay have no idea what they are doing to him with the constant remarks about Brian and how he and Justin don't have time for him. I say Brian and Justin go at them with everything they have and then some. And I'm sure they will have all of their family and friends on their side as well!!!
Author's Response: Really glad you enjoyed this chapter. M&L are clueless. Several people have pointed out to Mel that she shouldn't made rude comments about Brian in front of Gus. Jennifer pointed out that tryingto make Gus love his Daddy less would NOT make Gus love his Mama more. Thanks for the nice comments, you have been a great supporter of the story!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great update. Want Gus to be hppy and Melanie is ruining that. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Happy you liked this chapter. I always appreciate your kind comments!!!!!! Thanks!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great update. Want Gus to be hppy and Melanie is ruining that. Wonderful writing.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
Great update. Want Gus to be hppy and Melanie is ruining that. Wonderful writing.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh wow poor little guy being torn between parents it happens so much in real life. I worry a little that they asked Gus if he wanted to live with them because Mel and Lindsay will not give up primary custody
Author's Response: Wow fast read & review. I think a Taylor-Kinney hammer is about to descend on Mel & Linds and they will have no idea what hit them. If Mel pisses off Grandmom Jen any more she will be lucky to escape with her life. Thanks for all your support, I appreciate all your reviews!!!!! Bill
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