Reviewer: Mychad (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2019 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hi! I just realized tonight that this new sequel of your story was uploaded, I must have missed it before Christmas, so I’m commenting just now. But on the upside, I was so excited to have three chapters to read right away!

I really liked the beginning, Craig’s death was a totally unexpected plot twist! I think it’s a good choice because after the failed reconciliation in the previous story, this part of the story really couldn’t go anywhere. And I find the apparition of the grandparents very interesting, I hope this could lead towards a more successful reconciliation storyline, especially with the grandmother who seems not to be as narrow-minded as the rest of Craig’s family (and possibly excited about being a great grandmother). That would be nice for Justin and his family to reconnect with her, at least if she is prepared to really accept all of them.

I was also very touched by Peter’s request to call Justin Papa. After all, that’s true that he never had a father and we know he is the kind of person who is craving affection and strong connections with the people around him, so I thought it made sense. But I also like that Justin told him that it’s ok for him to change his mind about it in the futur since he might feel differently about it when he advances in his teens... (although he could also opted for a more “grownup” term like Dad or Pops then)

And OMG, are the twins coming already?!? I don’t know how I feel about that, if I hope that they are going to be born now because well, we can’t wait that they do, or if I’m hoping that it’s a false alarm because a good month in advance seems like a lot, especially since twins are usually smaller than most babies even at term. 

Anyway, I’m very happy to see that this story is happening now and excited for what to come. Congratulations on your work! :)

 

Author's Response:

Glad you discovered the newest addition to my long saga.  Happy you approve of what is happening.  I agree that Craig's mother seems to be the most opened minded of that family.  Ken was probably the same kind of Husband & father that his son was.  He was in charge!  Alice said in the begiining that Peter just wanted someone to pay attention to him and Justin did that from the beginning.  It must have been a hug thrill for Peter to have someone pay attention to him.  I really appreciate all your nice comments!!!!  Thanks the the review!!!!!!   Bill

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2019 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great  Chapter, Bob.  I really liked how Brian and Justin bought the tablets so they could make payroll and severance for Craig's employees.  will be interesting to see if Molly and Justin are interested in getting to know Craig's parents.

Author's Response:

Always a pleasure to hear from you!!  Glad that you enjoyed this chapter.  I'm not sure about the grandparents, they gave us some mixed signals.  Sometimes the story goes in directions I wasn't planning.  Thanks for reviewing!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wow, wonderful chapter.  Love a happy Brian and Justin.  Great writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking time to review.  I am glad to know you are still reading and enjoying the story.  I appreciate your very kind comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good update!!   Yes, Brian and Justin have always been known to have silent conversations; they do a lot of their communicating that way.     And Michael is back at it again.    Will he ever realize that Justin is an owner of the company, who can come and go without anybody's permission?    Will Michael ever see Justin as Brian's partner?    NOT!!!   Goodness!!!     And good for Jennifer for telling Janet to contact Justin and Molly on her own, and leave her out of it.    It should be based on their decisions anyway, and not hers, whether they want to have any type of relationship with her and Ken.

Author's Response:

B&J understand each other very well and usually know what the other partner wants.  I think Mikey is unimportant to Justin and that Justin is kind of amused by Mikey's cluelessness.  Jennifer gave the same message to Janet that she gave to Craig in the past - she is not getting involved in solving other people's issues.  Glad you liked the chapter and grateful you took th etime to post a review.  Thanks you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!    Bill

Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sorry my Baboo, How much longer are the bosses at Kinnick going to let mikey to act like a dick, and let him be so rude to Justin? He is quiet open with his rudeness to Justin in front of employees and clients alike--no one owes this ass a job, he has no skill and no manners-kick him to curb, he can be an aging bus boy. Love Sally 

Author's Response:

Hello again Sally,  I think Justin is more amsued than annoyed by Mikey.  He also knows all he would have to do is say he wants him fired and Mikey is history.  That would hurt Debbie and put Bria in the middle, two things Justin would like to avoid.  JMO.  As always, your Sweet Baboo.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 3

I'm sure that most parents would like to believe what their children tell them.  It would seem that women are less likely to rule out the fact.  Can't wait to see how Craig's parents take meeting Justin and Molly and hearing their side along with reading the letter he sent.  Personally I think Justin should tell Craig how he was greeted by Michael, it will be good for a laugh at least.  Great chapter!!!

Author's Response:

I think most parents always want to think the best of their children and believe what they tell them.  It seems like some of Craig's homophobia might have been learned at home.  Ken didn't seem to think Craig was all wrong.   Justin may be too busy with new additions to reconnect with the past.  You gave me a good laugh by the "Craig" when you menant Brian - wow that would have Craig rolling in his grave and Brian screaming in horror.  Justin prefers to ignore Michael and not involve Brian.  As always, I am aways happy to read yur reviews!!! I feel like we have been on this long adventure together,  Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Bill

Reviewer: mrs_koki (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 3

Craig knowing his own friend/divorce attourney didn't share his own hateful views must've stung something fierce lol

 

Oh it's called Braxton Hicks contractions. Not Brackman hicks contractions.  XD

Author's Response:

Craig seemed pretty set in his ways and didn't pay much attention to anyone else's opinions.  I looked on the net to find the correct spelling , saw Brackman and didn't look any close, ma bad!!!  Thanks for letting me know.  Thans for taking time to review!!!!!   Bill