Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2019 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh wow that moved me so much that mere words are not enough. I could feel Brian’s pain and anguish run through my veins. You really did better then the show at showing what this moment was like. Incredible work my friend.
Im still in Vegas but couldn’t resist reading one of your stories before I headed out for the day.
Love and hugs x
Author's Response: Wow! You have no idea how much I needed this. I'm so glad to hear from you and am honored that you would take time from such an exciting trip to read one of my stories. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, although the subject matter is far from happy. I hope you will check out the next two stories in this trilogy, which also includes Aftermath and Aftercare. It might help ease some of the pain caused by this story. Hope your trip is everything you wished for. Warmest hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2018 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good story; Even if the show seemed to skip a lot of what happened, from the moment the bashing happened to Brian sitting by himself in the hospital, I can really see it playing out as the way you described.
Author's Response: This is a very great comment, Cullengirl, because I wanted to be as authentic with the missing parts of what happened from the bashing to the hospital as I could be. If I achieved that for you, I am very happy. Thank you so much for letting me know that you liked the story. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2018 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story Grammy !! With this end we hope that Brian will recognize his love faster when Justin will pursue him Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you, Marie-France. This story was really only about how Brian felt and what he was thinking immediately following Justin's bashing. I tried to stay true to the actual scenes but include some that they never showed us, or at least what I think might have been going on between the scene when Brian scooped Justin up and held him and the final scene with Brian sitting alone in the hospital. I'm very glad that you liked what I imagined. Huge hugs, Grammy
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2018 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is going to be interesting to see whether you make changes or just give us insight into what was happening. I am wondering where Daphne is during all this.
Author's Response: This story is basically all about Brian and his reaction immediately following the bashing. I am considering writing a follow up involving the reaction of everyone else, including Daphne. The show never gave us any insight into any of the others until much later so it might be fun to try and imagine it. Thank you for checking out this story, YumYum and leaving a comment. Warm hugs, Grammy
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