Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2019 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 10 ~ Girl Talk

Ok proof you have written something in the last 2 months I am curious have you completely abounded Christmas presents and The Offer Still Stands. 2 of your better stories in my opinion. Could you either work on them or own up to abandonment so we can stop hoping for more. Thanks...

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2019 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 10 ~ Girl Talk

I will not want to be in Michael's place now that the prisoners know he has abused a child. Lindsay continues her delirium I just hope she stays locked up not to hurt anyone. Justin and Melanie have a good exchange. The computer was a great idea and I think Melanie can start seeing Brian differently. Great chapter my dear.

Author's Response: Oh poor Mikey, NOT! Yes he's in for a rude awakening as the word spreads about his abuse of his best friends son. I'm pretty sure Lindsay has an permanent reservation at the resort, she happier now than she's been in years. It was brilliant of Justin to bring Mel a laptop, she has a long road to recovery she she also has the support of her dysfunctional family. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2019 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 ~ Girl Talk

Love Justin's visit with Mel, not so much his visit with Lindsay. Michael not seeing how hurting Gus was a big deal.  Perhaps his fellow inmates could show him how painful his actions were.



Author's Response: Mel's realizes that Justin wants to be her friend, and help her. She'll soon realize that Brian really only wants what's best for her. Michael's blind to his actions, but he'll be getting a little help from his fellow inmates on the error of his ways. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

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