Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Changed
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2018 02:52 AM · On: Invincible

cause no one notices.  bro

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 02:20 AM · On: Invincible

Wow this is a different mature, helpful Michael, nice to see.  I think Brian likes that no one knows him in NYC that he can melt into the crowd.  I don't usually like "sickness/injury" stories but you me hooked on this one!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm glad I've hooked you with this one, Bill. I wanted to make it a realistic portrayal of what it's like to have your life changed by an injury and permanent disability. I'm looking forward to seeing what you think of the rest of the story!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 12:29 AM · On: Invincible

Hello, Kari!  I am loving this story!  This was a very intense chapter.  I think you captured all of Michael's, Brian's, and Debbie's characters so well here!  I can see this happening.  And I like how you explained the progression of Brian's recovery and acceptance of his 'new life.'  I also like how you explained his thought processes regarding why he initially hid his injury from Justin.

Thank you for posting this story on here!  I will be looking forward to everything you post on MW.  :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you are loving it! Thanks for inviting me to post. I look forward to your future feedback!

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