Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2021 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well well while i wait for Stockholm syndrome im distracted by reading another classic of yours (that i loved) for the third time . Never stop writing like this YOU ARE A MONSTER OF WRITING  A BEAUTIFUL AND FANTASTIC AND TALENTED OH GODDDD



Author's Response:

I'm happy to see someone is still reading my older stories. I'm happy you have enjoyed this story so much. Thank you for the kind words :). Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2019 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

WHAT?!!!!! WHAT!!!! WHAT!!! WHAT!!
That was awesome. Love the last question and the answer. This was so fun. Going back for more.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this story so much :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2019 04:45 AM · On: Epilogue

Sequel????



Author's Response:

Sorry but there's no sequel :(. Thank you for showing interest thou :). 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2018 07:38 PM · On: Epilogue

loved this

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2018 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wonderful story, I really enjoyed reading it.  Loved the last chapter of pranks on Mr. Williams.  

Dee Dee 



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this story. Thank you for reading and the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2018 10:21 AM · On: Epilogue

Wonderful story!! Thank you, I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 12

"So it seems I've managed to disappoint half of my readers with where I took this story."

Disappoint? I don't see why.
Well, Brian is a bit OOC (a lot, actually :lol), but the story is well written and such fun :)))
I can't wait to reach the end :)

Author's Response:

Maybe this was just too OOC for people. I did mention it in the tags so it shouldn't be a surprise. But I'm happy you enjoyed this story! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 06:33 PM · On: Epilogue

After Williams was nice enough to get them together how can they be so mean?



Author's Response:

Because Brian and Justin did not approve the method that got them together. They hated the parties and constant pushing to get them to be couple-y. Also who would want their boss to talk about their sex life in front of everybody :D. Thank you for all the comments. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 15

Match maker, match maker.  Who knew that Mr. Williams was one.  Then we have a story within a story.  Cool.



Author's Response:

That we do :). I'm an evil one and tested if any of my readers would notice. You get a golden star my girl :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 14

They do have something in common.  They're both Harry Potter fans.  Me too.



Author's Response:

Yep, Harry Potter is pretty good :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 13

Should being in a relationship be this hard?  This is so funny.



Author's Response:

Not normally but hey, we're talking about Brian and Justin here :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 8

Comon Justin, you didn't even like Adam's kiss :(

Poor Brian.

Author's Response:

Yes, things are not peachy :(. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 12

Finally.  It looks like there is no longer any deception.  You've given us a story that takes us to places no one else has gone before.



Author's Response:

Yes, I decided I want to write something totally different that doesn't really have cliches. And yes the deception has miraculously wanished :) Thank you for all the comments. 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

" Ditch him, you already got me"
Perfect :)))))

I reckon your Brian is celibate, hmm :D
How did this happen?

Author's Response:

Ain't it? :D

No, Brian does not have an active sex life in this story. He spends all his time at work and doesn't have time for any kind of socialising ergo not meeting people. I decided to go with a totally different background for him this time.

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 03:28 PM · On: Epilogue

Hello, Heidi!  Congratulations on finishing your latest story!  I loved how both men seemed to be of one mind, and those scenes while Justin was reading that book..whew!  Hot! 

The prank seemed very complex!  I wonder what their boss's reaction would be?

Great job on this, Heidi!  I love the way you write them. Thank you for posting this, and for ALL your stories. I will enjoy any that you write in the future (hoping there will be more - I'm selfish!).  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim :) and thank you! 

This site is full of writers and I thought some people might... relate to their activities ;D. 

I guess we'll never see Mr. Williams's reaction but my guess would be that he's not really that mad. He will of course give the boys a lecture or something but eventually he won't be mad.

I have come up with an idea for another multi chaptered story that I really, REALLY want to write. Bad thing is I can't seem to come up with ANY scene for it. I just have a plot. Let's see if I one day can turn it into an actual finished story but that will probably be very long time from now.

I'm so happy to know you enjoy my stories and I think it is never selfish to ask for a story, not on this site :). 

Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is a very interesting start - I have a feeling our boys will be surprise with the outcome :lol

Author's Response:

Heh, maybe they will :). You have to read more to find out! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 10:15 AM · On: Epilogue

Read the last two chapters.  That was so funny.  Glad the boys found something in common.  Poor Mr. Williams, but he started it.



Author's Response:

Hah, yes we really won't pity Mr. Williams, he earned it :). I'm happy you enjoyed the last couple chapters. Thank you for all the comments! 

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 1

Ha ha poor justin..... loving it so far 



Author's Response:

Heh, yes, Justin is in an interesting situation :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 07:31 AM · On: Epilogue

Thank you it was a funny story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. I'm so happy you enjoyed it :). Thank you for all the comments. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2018 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 15

Well here is a common point and reading leads to everything! Thanks for the recommendation this book looks very interesting

Author's Response:

You're welcome :). I also recommend readin Adulting 101 which I mentioned. It's is such a happy book and you will occationally laugh. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 11

Justin, give in to it!

 



Author's Response:

Yes, he so should! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

looks like the deception is not so deceptive.



Author's Response:

Yep, things probably just turned upside down with that :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 14

I'm glad that Brian and Justin finally found something that they have in common.   And they had a pretty good conversation about it as well.   

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

I'm glad that Brian and Justin finally found something that they have in common.   And they had a pretty good conversation about it as well.   



Author's Response:

Yep, finally a real conversation! They are slowly getting their things together. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

I was really freaking out with the way this was headed, but loved how Brian made his feelings for Justin known - in front of everybody!!!    It kind of reminded me of the movie, "The Proposal."



Author's Response:

Yep, I decided to make Brian confess in front of everybody since this is already really OOC story, so why not :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is awkward, they can do better without being drunk.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is very awkward :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wonderful chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm happy you think so :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 8

Brian is really doing  his best for Justin.



Author's Response:

Yes he is. Justin is just a little stubborn :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2018 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great update.  Took awhile, but the found common ground.  Great idea.



Author's Response:

Yep, finally :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 13

OMG Lucy helps them pleeease. These boys are idiots f they are not drunk.

Author's Response:

Heh, yeah, slightly problematic situation :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2018 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 13

I Love this story! Glad Brian went after him! lol that's something I would do too quit the job! lol in fact I have done that! after "our fling that I had with a co-worker went kaput! lol couldn't deal with him not liking me as much as I liked him hehe.

And remember if you Pleased 1 person out of the masses that's all that matters! And I am that 1 person!! ( but not really I see others like it too just trying to make a point ) People are something else lol seriously, don't let them get to you and you can't please everybody! Don't worry you got some appreciative fans out here! Through the Good, Bad and Ugly you gets My Support!!!

Author's Response:

That guy doesn't know what he's missing! Smart move from you :).

And aww, honey, thank you for the extremely kind words! I just want to hug you to say thank you. 

I'm glad you're enjoying this story :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter.  Love how this story is moving along.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm happy to hear that :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2018 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

Hello, Heidi - please don't get discouraged (I know, easier said than done).  I have LOVED this story!  And speaking of 'love,' I'm glad Brian finally admitted that he truly has feelings for Justin.  I was almost dreading that this was the last chapter, but now I'm delighted to know that you aren't done yet. 

If I could wave a magic wand and create more comments for you, I would.  I don't understand it, but I know it isn't motivating to spend so much time and receive little accolades.  But I have enjoyed everyone of your stories.  I like the humor in them, and how feisty you write them together.  I do hope you will keep writing.  THANK YOU for all the entertainment you have provided us.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! It's more about the read count this time. It dropped to half, so that's over 200 clicks gone. 

I'm happy you're enjoying my stories. I hope I can provide more of them in the future :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: chimoblu (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2018 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm loving this story. It's good to see Brian losing his cool, for a change.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2018 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 12

I don't know why anyone is disappointed.  I think it is great and can't wait to read the rest of the story.  Don't let anyone get to you, you can't please everyone all the time.



Author's Response:

I know, I have personal problem wtih not disappointing people. I'm glad you're ennjoying this story :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2018 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 12

Why are people disappointed it’s your story writers take it where it goes. I liked the explosion it was in danger of petering out good job

Author's Response:

Don't know. Read count went drastically down. I'm happy you're still enjoying this story :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2018 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 12

Oh, I like that! What a change is a 180 degree turn !! Thank you go to the loft to clarify the situation.Thank you for the update

Author's Response:

Heh, yes they will go to the loft. Let's see how that oes :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wow and now they do not know how to behave !! They must have a conversation they will be less stressed. Especially since everyone seemed to have enjoyed what happened in the bathroom and they are ready to start again

Author's Response:

Yep, things just changed in a big way and everything seems complicated. Not an easy situation. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great update.  Poor Justin, he's falling in love !!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked this chapter :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2018 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

WOW, JUST WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Now I can say I at least once in my life surprised someone thoroughly :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2018 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow now that took a turn that I never thought would happen sos soon

Author's Response:

I hope it wasn't an unwelcomed surprise :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2018 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great chapter!!!   Well, that was unepected, but definitely a welcome change!!   And without a condom as well.   That in itself speaks volumes!!



Author's Response:

Yep, it does say something about the boys :). I'm happy you liked the sudden change. Alcohol seems to affect our boys more than an average person. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2018 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 10

OMG I did not expect that !! And they do it raw!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I bet no one expected that :). I decided that in this story alcohol really is a magic postion. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2018 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 10

Love it and woww they are doing it raw.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the sudden change :). Thank you for the comment. 

*Big hug*

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2018 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 9

Will being drunk together bring them together? Hahaha!!

Author's Response:

All I have to say is I'm giggling here. Go read the next chapter, it's up already ;). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2018 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh this was good.  Can just see them getting drunk.  Great chapter.  Happy to know it will continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you honey! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter :). Next chapter is up so you can go read what happens next! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2018 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 9

That was very nice of Brian to get Justin all the art supplies, and I'm glad that Justin gladly accepted it and the request from Brian to back to being a "couple" for the party.  It really seems that things are definitey lightening up between the two of them.   



Author's Response:

Yeah, it is not an original idea but it does show Brian thought about Justin with the idea :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2018 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 9

A few drinks and they're the best of friends.



Author's Response:

Heh yes, there's kind of an explanation in the next chapter if you read between the lines :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 8

It's really not Brian's fault.  He didn't have any idea that Justin and Adam were seeing each other, so it was all just a misunderstanding.   He didn't do it on purpose. 



Author's Response:

No, it definitely isn't Brian's fault. It is just a coincidence but Justin unffortunately doesn't see it that way :(. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 8

I just love this story.  Justin is standing firm and Brian is groveling.  Great job writing this!  Brian is slowly becoming a rom@ntic and caring person.



Author's Response:

Aww, honey, thank you! I'm so happy to hear that :).

Heh, yes Brian is slowly changing! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 8

You've caught Brian perfectly if he ever wanted to say he was sorry to anyone.  Wonder what his next move will be?



Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that, it means a lot to hear it! Next move is pretty traditional but I hope you still like it. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Becz (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

"Because you have the social skills of a squirrel!" hahaha

That pretty much is my favourite line ever!! 

Great story so far, I am really enjoying and loving the fact that Justin doesn't just give into Brian, I like stories where Justin actually has a backbone. 



Author's Response:

Haha, I thought that might cause a smile or two :).

I'm happy to hear you're enjoying this! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 8

 

great chapter.  see Brian does believe in apologies.



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian does believe in apologies :). I'm happy you liked this chapter. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2018 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 8

Well, these are big steps forward for Brian who is really looking for a way to be forgiven. I think Justin is as surprised as me. Maybe this is the beginning of something

Author's Response:

Maybe it is :). Brian definitely is not comfortable with the situation and is trying to fix things. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2018 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 7

I think it's time that Adam learns the truth.  After all the truth will set you free.



Author's Response:

We'll see in the next chapter what will happen with Adam (which is posted already btw :)). He is pretty mad at the moment.

Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2018 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great update.  Oh, the plot is getting thicker.  Can't wait to see where it goes next.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2018 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 7

That was some story Justin came up with on the fly about he and Brian.   And Mike was pretty amused by it as well - Sandy, not so much!  



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin is a natural story teller :D. Mike definitely was more into it than Sandy :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2018 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow I'm almost sorry for Justin. The story of their meeting was very interesting I saw the head of the charming little couple collapse more and more !!

Author's Response:

Yes, it is a bit cruel :(. 

Heh, the couple didn't like Justin's wonderful "love story" a bit :D. 

Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hello, Heidi!  I do love a jealous Brian, BTW, so I hope we might get to see some of that flaring up at some point. But Justin is walking a fine line here once all his friends find out that he is 'supposedly' involved with Brian; especially with Adam.  He's trying desperately to be as attracted to Adam as he is to Brian, but I can tell deep down it ultimately won't work. ;) 

The question, too, is:  what will happen if they DO pull off this farce for their boss, and they return afterward?  How will they be able to deny their attraction to each other?

And I, also, like Brian's long-fingered hands. So beautiful. :) Really enjoying your story, Heidi, and the way you write  the boys' interactions!  Thank you for posting this. ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, no jealous Brian in this story :(. It would have made a wonderful addition to the plot though.

Yes, he definitely is trying to be attracted to Adam and ignore Brian. Bit of a dilemma here :).

I've noticed a lot of people here admire those hands so I couldn't resist :). 

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 6

Justin and Adam had a good time. How will they handle the following especially Justin with Brian as secret lover LOL How Adam will get out of the picture.

Author's Response:

Heh, I secretly enjoy it when my readers have no clue what will happen :). Fortunately you will soon find out! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 6

Darn, don't tell me I was wrong about Adam.  At least they both like Thia.



Author's Response:

You'll find out soon enough what is going to happen with this offensive Adam-situation :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 5

Interesting questions and even more interesting answers.  Somehow I think Adam doesn't stand a chance.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you aprove :). Let's see about Adam :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

It's going to prove interesting to see what Justin found out.  Was Williams refering to Justin or not?



Author's Response:

Williams was definitely referring to Justin :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

Terrfic chapter. Love this story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great chapter.  Love how they shared things about themselves. Great writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you :). I'm happy you liked what I came up with. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2018 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 5

Whether Brian was being serious with his response to that last question or even just playful to go along with the mood of the evening, I'd follow his advice.    I think Brian, beneath all his many layers, seems like a great guy.   I think the questions that Justin asked were very informative and gave Justin a glimpse into the real Brian that he hides behind at work.   

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Hah we'll see if Brian was just being playful or not ;). I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2018 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wonderful idea with all those questions. This way they learn a lot about each other. Maybe they feel a little closer now. Great chapter again!!



Author's Response:

Yep, I think fastest way to get to know someone is to tell things about oneself. I think they're at least more relaxed around each oter now :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2018 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hello,  Heidi - Still loving this story. Great idea to have them answer questions as a way to further convince others of their 'relationship.' I could see Justin doing exactly this, and how difficult the questions about family would be for Brian. 

 

Great job on this! Enjoying this story very much! ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far :) Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2018 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lol that was so funny and I think it actually helped both men ‘loosen ‘ up

Author's Response:

Heh, hopefully it did. I at least tried to make them seem a little more relaxed in the end. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2018 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 5

Well I'm sure they'll have a lot to discover about them Brian hides so much but Justin looks insightful. They will eventually get there. thnak you for the update.

Author's Response:

Yes, these questions revealed a lot about Brian and Justin is smart enough to read between lines :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2018 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian is so out of his element.    He really has no clue about relationships, but I am glad that he and Justin are going to be getting to know each other. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Brian is not like fish in the water :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2018 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 4

It's so funny. they will end up in a lot of trouble !!!

Author's Response:

 I'm so happy you're enjoying this story :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2018 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

Love it, thanks.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2018 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Great update.  Love that this story is so different and really funny.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm happy you think so. I usually try to come up with something that has not been written yet. In this fandom it is not easy :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2018 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Haha!  It's so funny watching Brian and Justin try to act as if they're together.  It's a great idea.



Author's Response:

Heh I'm happy you had fun reading this chapter :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2018 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great chapter,  Love how this story is going.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like this story so far :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2018 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well, they did start talking to each other, so that was a good thing.   I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.  



Author's Response:

Yes, it's a little process :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2018 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian feeling uncomfortable in the beginning. I’m curious what will happen at the next weekend. Why act the boss this way? 



Author's Response:

Mr. Williams is little bit of a romantic who loves love. I always let my readers make their own interpretations but I do have a pretty good theory. Unfortunately I can't tell you at this point because of huge spoiler alert even though I never explained it in the story. Maybe we can come back to this once I finish posting the story. That is if I remember :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2018 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

Lol me thinks Brian is starting to see advantages to this arrangements

Author's Response:

Hah yes there probably is something going on in Brian’s head :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2018 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh yes it's so funny !! Again again they are so uncomfortable. I like it because I'm waiting for the fireworks hihiht. Let's see how they will spend the week.

Author's Response:

Hah you have to bear a little longer until the fireworks :D. I'm happy you you're enjoying this story. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love the reactions from Justin. He doesn’t makes it easy for Brian, wonderful!!



Author's Response:

Heh, he refuses to take Brian's bullshit :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great update.  Can't wait for "the date".



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will try to upload the next chapter in the morning before work if I have time. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

I have a feeling that Adam won't be admiring Justin for much longer if Brian has his way.



Author's Response:

Hah, maybe, maybe not :). Not giving away spoilers :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love the back and forth between Justin and Brian in the instant messaging, and it seemed Brian did listen to what Justin had to say with the "Hello Taylor" in the hall.   Treating him nicely - good going on Brian's part.  I'm looking forward to seeing how the big day goes....



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian actually took Justin's advice. Let's see if he continues to keep it up :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2018 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2

I love Justin and how he knows how to put Brian back in his place he must have been so surprised by the answer that he was speechless 'fine' haha it's funny. I hope that Adam will make a brief visit after Saturday !!

Author's Response:

Heh, it seems Justin will always be able to put Brian in his place one way or another in my stories :D. Let's hope Adam doesn't stay too long :). Not giving away spoilers! Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

I wish I could see Justins face. the way they reacties to each other, I like that. Can’t wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Actually I too would like to see Justin's face. I bet he can do an amazing deer in headlight impression :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh yes more of this story! i like the start it's funny and I would like to know how Brian and Justin will manage this saturday and maybe a sequel? Thank you for your new story.

Author's Response:

Is someone asking for a sequel already? You are the sweetest! Don't worry, the big Saturday will happen quite in the beginning of this story and there will be plenty of chapters afterwards so this story is definitely not ending after the party :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hello, Heidi!  Oh, this is a hoot!  I was waiting for the two of them to answer simultaneously with completely different answers as to how they met and fell in love, but I laughed when Justin heard his name called in response to the boss's question, and your description of his reaction. 

Oh, this is going to be good!  I love fics with angst, and I'm sure we'll see a lot of that as the two duke it out before they give in to their feelings.

So glad you've started a new story!  Thanks for posting it on here.  Can't wait to read the rest. :) ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi there Kim :). 

Giving different lies about how they met would have been an excellent idea! Shame I didn't come up with it when I wrote this, I would have definitely included it. 

There won't be too much angst but a little bit yes. The tags might give a slightly wrong idea. There really weren't that much happy tags that fitted this story. I'm not even sure what I would use if there was. 

I will post next chapter later when I have edited it :).

Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well.....this is fun. I do hope that Justin makes Brian's life hell (well a little bit at least)...LOL



Author's Response:

Hah, I took things a little more serious this time and there really won't be any kind of torturing... Well at least between Brian and Justin, but hope you will still like this story :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2018 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 1

I like it and hope you continue.  It's obvious Brian and Justin don't really care for each other that much.   I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress between them. 



Author's Response:

I will continue :). Nope, the boys are definitely not interested in each other :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2018 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1

Lol I think it is going to be a very difficult night for Brian and Justin

Author's Response:

Heh, maybe it will be, not govong away any spoilers though :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2018 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

More Please.



Author's Response:

Will post more later :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2018 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Something tells me denial is not going to work on this one.  Those two are meant to be.  Should be fun.



Author's Response:

Nope, denial is not going to be good here, I can tell you that :D. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2018 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, please, continue this story.  Love it already.  It is going to be so good.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.



Author's Response:

Guess I will continue then :). I'm happy you enjoued the start. Thank you for the comment.

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