Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank YOU! <3
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay! I agree with Bob, please continue this story...you showed us how the said goodbye...now show us how they say hello again. 🙄
Author's Response: I am working on Justin's perspective as we speak and someone requested Justin surprising Brian and I'll start that one soon! :) <3
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Jacquelyn,
Don't make a new story. I just removed the Complete on this one. It would be better to continue and develop this scene as planned. You might want to update the story summary as Brian and Justin's perspectives, however.
Don't sweat the small stuff; we all learn how to publish with the first one.
bob
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
You did such a good job on this, though it was a tearful scene.
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. Definitely kept the tissue box close.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I always hated how the show ended, with Justin going to New York and Brian staying behind. After 5 years, they deserved to get their happily ever after!! Your story perfectly summed it up and put me right back in that place. This was excellent for your first story!!
Author's Response: Argh! The way it ended was so PAINFULLY sad! But the more I think about it the more I'm okay with it and can see the poetics of the way it ended. At least they gave us an ending where we can headcanon their happiness and not have to work for it :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope to update with Justin's perspective by tomorrow at the latest :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hello! I'm so happy you decided to register with MW and post this! You write beautifully, and I loved how you wrote about Brian's thoughts and emotions during that scene, which is so bittersweet. Luckily, we have gifted writers such as yourself to expand upon scenes in the show.
I hope to see many more of these from you. Thanks for becoming a member here! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm flattered to have been invited! I'm hoping to update with Justin's side today :)
Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2018 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Excellent read - very well done. The in depth canon scene study, is a most interesting way to go, and rarely performed. Thank you for joining, and sharing your work with us. Most readers show up on the weekends. Welcome to Whispers (soon to be SSW).
There's an announcement about SSW.media in by bio list. Good stuff is on the way.
I'm looking forward to more of your work.
bob
P.S. I checked your story as 'Completed'. By your summary, ending comment and bio, it seems this is a one chapter story. Excuse me if that isn't correct.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I will be updating with Justin's perspective of the same moment but I can make a new story for it, no big deal :)
I'm so thankful to have been invited and I can't wait to write more! <3
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