Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2019 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
i'm confused. Did I not read it right. Who is Chloe's dad? And when are you updating this?
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2018 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 7
strange
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter!! I'm glad they are having a great time on their date!! And I am so happy that Brian has decided to stay in New York. Now, he just needs to fill Justin in on that fact as well.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Looks like I read 7 before 6. Shame Justin doesn't remember Daphne.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
OMG. Justin's mother moved and didn't tell him. Now that's cruel. How is Brian going to tell Justin what really happened? What happens when he meets Daphne?
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Love this story. You are an amazing writer.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2018 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 6
Seems like it is getting closer to Justin finding out the truth. Craig is such a A-hole. Looking forward to all the twists and turns I'm sure are coming...
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
I am so thrilled about Brian informing Adrian about his and Justin's past. And Daphne handled herself like a trooper. I am loving this story so much. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
I'm glad that Brian told Adrian the truth about what really happened all those years ago, and who he really is. It is unbelievable the lengths that Craig went to to get his son out of Pittsburgh. I wonder if he fed the same false information to Jen and she thinks Justin is dead as well.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2018 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Love how this story is moving along.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 5
Is there a possibility that Brian could talk to Adrian and Scott and tell them about how Justin's father lied? Surely there are records in the paper that would show the truth?
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hello, there! First of all, NO need to apologize for RL! I can certainly relate to that.:)
Grrrr - I could strangle Craig for lying to Justin about the baby, and for dredging up horrible memories for Brian. I wonder how Jennifer fits into this scenario? Did she go along with it? (Sorry if you mentioned it in a previous chapter; I'm juggling so many things lately, I could have forgotten). I also like how all the kids are getting along, and how you were able to set it up so Brian wound up with both Gus and Jenny.
Now I'm intrigued as to whether or not Justin will remember on his own eventually what REALLY happened, or if Brian will have to tell him at some point.
Loving this story, and all your stories! I am so happy you decided to post them here on MW. Looking forward eagerly to the next part. Thank you. ~Kim
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great chapter!!! I can not believe that Craig told Justin that Brian attacked him with a baseball bat. What a horrible lie to tell him.
Here's hoping things calm down for you soon!!
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2018 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great update. Love this story. Sorry that RL isn't great, but hang in there.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2018 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Craig is abviously being a shit again - I wonder if Jennifer and Molly know that Justin is still alive - but wouldn't his aunt tell them? or has she been lied to as well, is she even his aunt???? - so many questions.... I wouldn't put anything past Craig. Looking forward to what's next.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2018 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
What did Craig do? Not only to Justin, but to Jennifer and Molly, too, that they are no longer in contact with Justin? I'm looking forward to Brian and Justin's playdate, and can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2018 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
What the hell did Craig do? There is no way Jennifer & Molly would have nothing ot do with Justin willingly. Will we learn more about what happened to them? And who is Chloe's dad? Please don't tell me it's fucking Hobbs?! Oy! This is different and I like it but I'm kinda confused about a few things...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2018 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
I'm gonna take it that Jen doesn't know that Justin is alive. How did Justin get hurt and how did Brian end up with Gus and Jenny?
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2018 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Justin's memory loss and his dad's actions are raising so many questions for me. The main one is , did Craig lie to Jennifer and Molly? There is no way they wouldn't have been at his side unless they believe Justin is missing or dead. And, will Brian realize Lily may be Gus's little sister? Thanks for another great update.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2018 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 4
great chapter. love how this story is moving along.
Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2018 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
Like this story already,can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 2
I'm quite intrigued, looking forward to questions being answered.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
Fantastic chapter. It gives us background but doens explain how Justin ended up with two girls. I'm glad to see he has friends.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2018 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
Glat that Brian called Justin about that play date. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all plays out.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2018 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great update. Love how this story is moving along.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2018 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 1
I am hooked already!! Obviously that hit on the head caused amnesia, since Justin has no idea who Brian is, but I'm wondering if Justin's two girls are Brian's as well? And I can't believe that Jennifer would have faked his death and moved him away just to get Justin away from Brian. I seriously can not wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2018 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 1
Can I just say Wow! because I think I'm hooked on this story already? Great start and and i will be on pins and needles until the next update.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2018 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well this is interesting and I assume it’s not Justin coming for dinner as they didn’t exchange addresses
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2018 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start. It makes me wonder if Jennifer or Craig had something to do with Brian thinking Justin was dead. With four kids between them, they are going to have an interesting time getting to know each other...again. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG, I am so intrigued already! I can't wait to read about how this all happened. Eagerly looking forward to reading more. Thanks for posting this on here! ~Kim
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a great start to a new story. I just know this is going to be good.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! You really go all out. Now I need to know who's coming for supper. Glad to see that Justin is alive, but with two kids? The story behind that is going to be good.
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