Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5
Texas is a big state. Luck is with Brian for being able to find him so quickly.
Author's Response: Yeah it is and we could pretend more or less time passed before Brian found Justin :). i just magically made it skip. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 5
Haha is the game of the cat and the mouse! I just love it
Author's Response: And more of that will come :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 5
This is really getting good. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that. Thank you. And thank you for the comment :).
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm sorry but Washington state & especially the state of Texas are huge....how would Brian know which city to choose to fly to? I would thought Brian would have been smarted than that...how is he going to actually get Justin back to Pittsburgh, physically I mean?
Author's Response: It's called fiction.
Reviewer: guavejuice (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
What a great story! Loving everything about it so far.
Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you :). I'm so glad to hear that. Next chapter is already up. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 4
It was fun! Justin gave up too quickly and Brian just had to start again LOL
Author's Response: Hah, Brian wasn't the clever one after all :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 4
Had a chance, finally, to catch up and found 3 chapters - yay!! Justin, despite being a spoilt rich kid seems resourceful and very spirited. Definitely making Brian earn his money. Big mistake on Brian's part underestimating him - but it does make me wonder if there is more going on...
Author's Response: It ain't my story if Brian doesn't have to work for Justin :D. You have to wait and see if there is more goin on *batting eyes innocently*. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
Brain gave as goid as he got but just wasn't smart enough. He took Justin at his word. Didn't find out where Justin is/was staying. Big mistake in his part.
Author's Response: But he will be smarter from now on! :) Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
Should've known Justin gave in too easily.
Author's Response: Hah, yes, way too easily :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
And, Brian thought this would be so easy. Just knew that it wouldn't be. Great update.
Author's Response: Yep, Brian seriously underestimated Justin. I'm glad you lliked this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
Miracles do happen.
Author's Response: Yes, small but a still a miracle :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Brian may have found him by sight, but let's see what happens when he tries to talk to him. Should be easy if Justin likes pretty boys.
Author's Response: Heh, yes, it might not be an ordinary Brian/Justin meeting. You can go read all about it from ch 4 :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just read chapters 2 and 3. Love how this story is going. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanky you. I'm glad you've liked it so far :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well well well that didn't take long. I wonder how Brian will approach him....maybe he'll follow him until evening and then go up to him in a bar? Or does he just give Jennifer the information he has and leave, back to his life?
Author's Response: You can find out already because the next chapter is up! Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Uh, oh...our spoiled shopper has been found - ha! Something tells me he's just not going to go back willingly to Pittsburgh. Their first meeting should be fun. I like this cocky Justin - LOL! Really enjoying this story, Heidi. Looking forward to reading the rest. ~Kim
Author's Response: Maybe he will, maybe he won't We'll find out in the next chapter :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
Hello, Heidi! I'm playing catch up on my reading. This is such a unique concept! I like how you have placed Brian in the Pitts with the same friends, etc., but in a different role. And Justin - boy, is THAT kid spoiled - ha! Just saw that you posted another chapter - heading over there now. Thank you for posting this! This is a very interesting story! ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim! :). I'm glad you've enjoyed this story so far. Fourth chapter is up aleady too! Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh really it's so easy? I'm sure Justin will escape or they'll have a good time together haha!
Author's Response: Hah no, it's not that easy but we'll let Brian think for a moment it is :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2018 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2
It's good that Mrs. Chanders is ready to help Brian. Daphne didn't hace a chance. I can see his anger. Can she say where is Justin? We'll see! Thank you for the update.
Author's Response: Yep, usually adults understand these things better than teenagers who just want to live to the fullest without thinking consequences. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2018 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
Brian is smart but it's a good thing Daphne's mom is willing to help.
Author's Response: Brian probably would have had to run after Daphne to get the phone if he mom wouldn't have helped him :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2018 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
Washington DC.
Daphne didn't stand a chance. Time for some trickery on Brian's part.
Author's Response: Nope Daphne never had a chance. Brian's does anything to oget his job done :). Thank ou for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2018 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
That's awesome! I can just see angry teenage Daphne now. lol Will Brian 'pretend' he's Daph to get Justin's exact location then hop a plane? That's what I would do.
Author's Response: Thank you :). Let's hope you'll find the answer. The inerest to this story dropped 66,66% after the first chapter so we have a little problem. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment :).
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sounds like Justin is having fun. Hope trouble doesn't find him, but that Brian does.
Author's Response: Yep, he's living his freedom without parents. We'll see later if Brian finds him. Like there's doubt about that :D. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
Seems Brian will have his work cut out for him. Justin - talk about spoilt rich kid. Somehow I think there will one hell of a wake up call coming up - but will it be Brian or just real life delivering it - looking forward to finding out what's next.
Author's Response: Heh maybe there will be a wake up call or maybe not. I'm not giving away spoilers :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Yes another story thank you ! Good start ! Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she says anything. What about the credit card ?
Author's Response: Yeah I think it obvious Brian will find Daphne :).
Unfortunately Ted won't be in this story.
I'm glad you liked the beginning. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
so far so good Keep it coming OK
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooooooo yeah!!! Doing my new story Happy Dance 💃🏼 🤓 bring it on!!
Author's Response: Hah I don't think anyone has ever been this happy when I start a new story. I'm honored :). Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good start to the story and looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was afraid it would be too boring. I'm happy you enjoyed the start. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start! This is different, I like it!
Author's Response: I thought so. I had to write it when I first came up with the idea. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nothing but trouble ahead for Brian I think. Going to be a fun game of cat and mouse. Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she'll give Justin up easily..
Maybe Brian can get Ted to help find a paper trail if Justin is going to keep using his credit card to buy new clothes.
Washington DC or state?
Author's Response: Yes I can guarantee cat and mouse games :D.
The problems we who don't live in the us have. Washington the state :).
Thank you for the comment.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the start of this new story. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was scared it might be too boring. But it will pick up later. Thank you for the comment.
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