Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Project Rich Boy
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

Texas is a big state. Luck is with Brian for being able to find him so quickly.



Author's Response:

Yeah it is and we could pretend more or less time passed before Brian found Justin :). i just magically made it skip. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2018 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

Haha is the game of the cat and the mouse! I just love it

Author's Response:

And more of that will come :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 5

This is really getting good.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that. Thank you. And thank you for the comment :).

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2018 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm sorry but Washington state & especially the state of Texas are huge....how would Brian know which city to choose to fly to? I would thought Brian would have been smarted than that...how is he going to actually get Justin back to Pittsburgh, physically I mean?



Author's Response:

It's called fiction.

Reviewer: guavejuice (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

What a great story! Loving everything about it so far. 

Can't wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you :). I'm so glad to hear that. Next chapter is already up. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 4

It was fun! Justin gave up too quickly and Brian just had to start again LOL

Author's Response:

Hah, Brian wasn't the clever one after all :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 4

Had a chance, finally, to catch up and found 3 chapters - yay!! Justin, despite being a spoilt rich kid seems resourceful and very spirited. Definitely making Brian earn his money. Big mistake on Brian's part underestimating him - but it does make me wonder if there is more going on...



Author's Response:

It ain't my story if Brian doesn't have to work for Justin :D. You have to wait and see if there is more goin on *batting eyes innocently*. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2018 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brain gave as goid as he got but just wasn't smart enough. He took Justin at his word. Didn't find out where Justin is/was staying. Big mistake in his part.



Author's Response:

But he will be smarter from now on! :) Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 4

Should've known Justin gave in too easily.



Author's Response:

Hah, yes, way too easily :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2018 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

And, Brian thought this would be so easy.  Just knew that it wouldn't be.  Great update.



Author's Response:

Yep, Brian seriously underestimated Justin. I'm glad you lliked this chapter :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

Miracles do happen.



Author's Response:

Yes, small but a still a miracle :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

Brian may have found him by sight, but let's see what happens when he tries to talk to him. Should be easy if Justin likes pretty boys.

 



Author's Response:

Heh, yes, it might not be an ordinary Brian/Justin meeting. You can go read all about it from ch 4 :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 3

Just read chapters 2 and 3.  Love how this story is going.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanky you. I'm glad you've liked it so far :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

Well well well that didn't take long. I wonder how Brian will approach him....maybe he'll follow him until evening and then go up to him in a bar? Or does he just give Jennifer the information he has and leave, back to his life?



Author's Response:

You can find out already because the next chapter is up! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 3

Uh, oh...our spoiled shopper has been found - ha!  Something tells me he's just not going to go back willingly to Pittsburgh.  Their first meeting should be fun.  I like this cocky Justin - LOL!  Really enjoying this story, Heidi. Looking forward to reading the rest.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Maybe he will, maybe he won't We'll find out in the next chapter :D. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hello, Heidi!  I'm playing catch up on my reading.  This is such a unique concept!  I like how you have placed Brian in the Pitts with the same friends, etc., but in a different role.  And Justin - boy, is THAT kid spoiled - ha!  Just saw that you posted another chapter - heading over there now.  Thank you for posting this!  This is a very interesting story!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! :). I'm glad you've enjoyed this story so far. Fourth chapter is up aleady too! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2018 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh really it's so easy? I'm sure Justin will escape or they'll have a good time together haha!

Author's Response:

Hah no, it's not that easy but we'll let Brian think for a moment it is :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2018 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

It's good that Mrs. Chanders is ready to help Brian. Daphne didn't hace a chance. I can see his anger. Can she say where is Justin? We'll see! Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Yep, usually adults understand these things better than teenagers who just want to live to the fullest without thinking consequences. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2018 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

Brian is smart but it's a good thing Daphne's mom is willing to help.



Author's Response:

Brian probably would have had to run after Daphne to get the phone if he mom wouldn't have helped him :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2018 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

Washington DC.

Daphne didn't stand a chance. Time for some trickery on Brian's part.



Author's Response:

Nope Daphne never had a chance. Brian's does anything to oget his job done :). Thank ou for the comment. 

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2018 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 2

That's awesome! I can just see angry teenage Daphne now. lol Will Brian 'pretend' he's Daph to get Justin's exact location then hop a plane? That's what I would do. 



Author's Response:

Thank you :). Let's hope you'll find the answer. The inerest to this story dropped 66,66% after the first chapter so we have a little problem. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment :).

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like Justin is having fun.  Hope trouble doesn't find him, but that Brian does.



Author's Response:

Yep, he's living his freedom without parents. We'll see later if Brian finds him. Like there's doubt about that :D. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Seems Brian will have his work cut out for him. Justin - talk about spoilt rich kid. Somehow I think there will one hell of a wake up call coming up - but will it be Brian or just real life delivering it - looking forward to finding out what's next.



Author's Response:

Heh maybe there will be a wake up call or maybe not. I'm not giving away spoilers :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Yes another story thank you ! Good start ! Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she says anything. What about the credit card ?

Author's Response:

Yeah I think it obvious Brian will find Daphne :). 

Unfortunately Ted won't be in this story. 

I'm glad you liked the beginning. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

so far so good    Keep  it coming  OK

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Erbear4474 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ooooooo yeah!!! Doing my new story Happy Dance 💃🏼 🤓 bring it on!!



Author's Response:

Hah I don't think anyone has ever been this happy when I start a new story. I'm honored :). Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good start to the story and looking forward to seeing what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I was afraid it would be too boring. I'm happy you enjoyed the start. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great start! This is different, I like it! 



Author's Response:

I thought so. I had to write it when I first came up with the idea. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nothing but trouble ahead for Brian I think. Going to be a fun game of cat and mouse. Brian will find Daphne but I don't think she'll give Justin up easily..

Maybe Brian can get Ted to help find a paper trail if Justin is going to keep using his credit card to buy new clothes.

Washington DC or state?



Author's Response:

Yes I can guarantee cat and mouse games :D. 

The problems we who don't live in the us have. Washington the state :). 

Thank you for the comment. 

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the start of this new story.  Can't wait to see where you go with it.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I was scared it might be too boring. But it will pick up later. Thank you for the comment. 

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