Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2018 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 12

Justin sure know how to make brian fall in love with him...sigh...that was so sweet ..justin making the moves breaking walls which are around brian's heart.

Author's Response:
He is sneaky in that way :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hello, Heidi! I'm sorry I haven't been keeping up with reviewing - I have a lot of RL issues going on at the moment. But I wanted to tell you I am thoroughly enjoying this story! Those antics that both Justin and Brian engaged in were a hoot! And now both men are starting to realize there is more than a client relationship going on here.

That last line was sad. Poor Brian. Something tells me, though, that he soon will have some 'company.' But those last two lines:
"The brunet let out a big sigh. His job was fulfilled but he didn’t feel satisfied. He felt lonely." Those were very powerful lines, and a great way to end this chapter.

Thank you again for this story - and for all the stories you have posted on here! I have enjoyed every one of them. XOXO ~Kim

Author's Response:
Hi Kim! :)

That's okay. RL can be time consuming from time to time.

I'm glad you liked the ending. As a writer it seemed a lot different to me so I'm happy to hear your opinion on it. Much better than my interpretation which is just sad :D.

Thank you for the wonderful comment.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aww. Brian seems a bit interested in the boy at this point. Wondering where this goes from here.

Author's Response:
Yep, he finally mans up :). Last chapter is up so you can go find out! Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: guavejuice (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 12

'Don't forget me, please,'*sigh*

OMG... no wonder Brian felt lonely afterwards.

Such a brilliant chapter. Thankls for sharing. I hope they wiil meet again soon :)

Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Love how Justin's attitude turned around. Glad to see his job isn't quite finished.

Author's Response:
Yep, Brian unknowingly turned his mind around :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2018 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh that was good. Now to get them back together will be wonderful. Great chapter.

Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.

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