Reviewer: tjazz (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2018 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this series so much that I decided it was time to go back to the very beginning and re-read all 138 chapters you’ve given us so far. Looking forward to the rest of the Disney World adventures, not to mention the arrival of the twins.
Author's Response: Wow that is amazing to go back and reread the whole saga. I am always impresed, humbled & grateful when someone does that!!!!!! Disney is finsihed and we will move on to the twins soon. Thanks for the review, I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2018 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
Bill:
Don't know how I missed this update. Guess life is just too busy. Loved how Justin and Gus stood up for Kevin in the "Small World ride" but I would not have expected any thing different. J.R. is a handful and the girls are obviously not caring for her and teaching her like they should. loving how all the kids want to be with Grandma Jen.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Just posted number 4 which finishes up this story. Will be starting the next story soon. Thanks, Bill
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2018 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hope you are doing well!!! That was a great chapter as always!! I can't believe that Mel is letting JR get away with that superor attitude of hers. Good for Jen for not letting her getting away it, either. And Kevin hit the nail on the head, what he was saying about JR. I can't imagine any good parent putting up with her.
Author's Response: Happy to know you enjoyed this chapter, sorry I made you wait so long. JR is a brat, in Sickness & Health Ted tells Viola that he & Blake may spoil Nina but they will not let her be a brat. Too bad Mel doesn't get that message. Thanks for the review, always great to hear from you!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 3
I just love this! Jen absolutely cracks me up with her handling of Melanie and Lindsey. What a fun trip for everyone at Disney. Seems like Brian is enjoying himself as well. So glad for the update. I’ve really missed this story.
Author's Response: I don't think Mel & Linds are as amused by Jennifer as you are. Disney is a good place to have fun, Brian seems to be making the best of the trip. As long as he has alone time with his Sunshine he can probably withstand anything. Sorry for amking you wait so long for the update. Thanks for the review they inspire me to continue!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 3
My sweet Baboo, As usual I failed to address situation within your story, the act of two boys that found shoving and useing hurtful words like retard against Gus and Kevin, then the two boys mother ask if Gus couldn't make friends with regular people instead of retards! So we see how the womens treatment of others made an impression on her children and she found nothing wrong in talking that way! This is much the same way that Mel and Lindsay treat Kevin, as if he was invisiable. Our person in the oval office often treats people like this--he calls mexicans animals, lazy, rapist,etc. black men and women are ex cons, drug addicts, act uppity, and dishonest in every way, women are only good for groping and fucking on occasion and no doesn't mean anything. Other countries sit back and openly laugh at us and have interest in coming to our aid and oh yes gays are trying to break up hetro marriages. This man has to be mentally challaged or has a serious illness. If your heart didnot break when you saw babies and mothers torn away from each other than it's to late for us. The way our leader talked about the late senator from Az. and made fun of him dying of brain cancer I knew all was lost if he was mean and petty in McCain's final days and now almost 600 children may never find their parents Trumps responce? Well, they won't try to come here again, we showed them what we could do that's Trumps legacey, McCains will be honer, duty and love of country.Trump even made fun of John being a POW. I'm not now or ever will be a GOP supporter but I would never take his actions it's not about party it's about the right way to treat others. Sorry about the soap box but this chapter hit a nerve about teaching your children principles, manners, etc. your chatterbox Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, nothing wrong with a twofer review!!! It is tough when hurtful words come from the top. I find it very discouraging that so many people seem to support that type of behavior. Trying not to be too political but 100% percent agree with you!!! Glad that my writing gets you thinking about the state of the world!!!! Love you, your sweet Baboo.
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 3
My sweet Baboo, I feared I'd never hear from you again. I greatly missed your wit-isms and your wonderful characters.It didn't take long to love Kevin and Joe. As usual Mel was truly a bitch and Grandmom Jen put her and her rude brat of a daughter in their place, she (Mel) sounds like mikey Brian and Justine have plentey of money it's only fair that they pay for anything and everything those c--ts want. Mel is always critizising that Gus is a mini Brian, but there is no way Brian and Justin would allowed Gus to be as selfish as JR or let Gus tell everyone what to do even adults, maybe that's why everyone loves Gus and can barely tolerate the mini bitch ! I know you have lots of responsbilites and not enough hours in the day--but face it, your writing and the way you flesh out your characters make people happy and just love you when a new chapter appears your a very endearing person to many of us. your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, sorry to cause any seperation anxiety for you!!!! I can always count on you for unqualified praise, which I apprecite so much!!!! I just got a little lost and unsure about where to so with this story. I do think it is hard for Mel that Gus looks so much like Brian but she is truly a c--t. Thanks for the ego boost along with a review!!!!!!! As always, you sweet Baboo.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
There is a difference between a regular acting kid and a total brat , I hope Mel sees that soon. I love how you write about Disney, it is one of my favorite places.
Author's Response: It is a same to let a child being a brat because no one wants to be around them. Glad you are enjoying the Disney sojurn. Thanks for taking time to post a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh I was so happy to see the chapter update thank you d84;a039; Kevin is a lucky boy he has so many people helping him make memories and become more confident in life. Mel is blind to her daughters tantrums which is surprising I would have thought it would have been Lindsay. But then again the waspy thing is appearance so she just leaves everything to Mel. Love Grandmom
Author's Response: Sorry I made you wait so long for this update!!!! Kevin is lucky, we all need a support system that we can depend on. Mel is not practing very good parenting with her daughter. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate them!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great update once again, I was just re reading Sickness and Health and here pops up a update. Works everytime LOL :)
~Teresa~
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this new chapter. Hope you enjoyed your visit to "S&H". Thanks for the review, you know how much I love getting them!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great chaper. Love Disney. Too bad Brian didn't ride ""It's a Small World". Always a favorite at any age. What a brat, JR can be. But between Mel & Mikey what else could we expect. Lived in Fl. for years and my grandkids were little, we went so often that they considered Mickey family. We hadn't gone for a month or so and my then 3 year old grandson came to me and said we needed to go. I didn't know what he was talking about and in his way he explained that he needed to see his brother. Since he only has a sister, that was confusing, then he said that his "brother" Mickey missed him so much. We all had a good laugh and quickly planned our next trip. Of course, none of us adults were complaining about another trip to The Happiest Place on Earth !!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what is next for the family. So much to see, so little time !!!! LOL
Author's Response:
That small world song really says with you for a long time after the ride. Poor JR does not have the greatest gene pool to draw from. Disney is an amazing place, with something for everyone. The story about your grandson made me laugh out loud, kids have such funny ways of looking at things. Thanks for taking time to review!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am so glad you added my suggestion though I have to admit I almost wish Mel had told Kevin to shut up so Jennifer could jump down her throat about the willful brat she is raising...
Gus needs to run into the bullies again maybe this time with Patrick (not Kevin like you had in last sentence) and John so they are with bigger boys so the kids are afraid to even say a word.
I was hoping since your story is story of the month there would be a new chapter now can it be less than 3 months until the next chapter pretty please...
Author's Response: I'm not sure that Mel would have made it out of the room alive if she said anything to Kevin. I will try my best not to take 3 months to update, I was a very bad author!!!!! It was very nice of the other admins to make "Sickness & health" the story of the month. Thanks for the review, always good to hear from you!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 3
So happy to see a new chapter of one of my favorite stories. This was so brilliant and I laughed out loud at what Kevin said to his mum. I can picture her face aftercit. I am so happy that Jennifer didn’t back down in dealing with J.R. that child needs a lot more stern talking to as she can’t get away with what she is doing. I’m so glad Gus Kevin and the others are having such a great time. Even if that meant in the line tried to ruin it. I hope Justin gets Brian into the tunnel of love before they leave that would be so funny.
fantastic work x
Author's Response: I imagine Roxanne was torn between being happy Kevin was having fun and annoyed that he ended the call so abruptly. I'm not sure backing down is in Jennifer's vocabulary. So happy that you enjoyed the latest chapter!!!!! Thanks for the review, Bill
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2018 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
I have to say that I enjoyed their day almost as much as Gus and Kevin did. Gus is so well behaved. I wonder where he learned it since JR is anything but. Nina is a much nicer and grateful girl.
Author's Response: I think Gus is who Brian would have been if he had decent parents. JR is Mel's daughter and she needs a firm hand that she is not getting. So happy you are still enjoying this long saga!!!!!!!! Thanks for the review. Bill
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