Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2018 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 2
My sweet Baboo, I just knew this chapter was going to make me happy when it had such a lot about Gus and Kevin. When you started your three stories who would have guessed that John and Peter would be so protective of the little guys, even Joe got up and started searching for Gus and Kevin.Brian and Justin have turned into loving role models. That's exactly what John and Peter needed, enjoyed Patrick and Josh and the patience and love showed to Kevin was wonderful--and of course they all love Grandma Jen. I was afraid Lindz's entitled behavior was going to put a damper on everyones fun, but Brian won't let that happen, sorry Nina,Daddy, and Teddy Man have to be around the three grumpy pants Lindz, J.R., and Mel. So glad dumb ass mikey isn't there. If he was it certainly wouldn't be the happyest place on earth any more! Love ya, your Sally
Author's Response: Darling Sally, always so wonderful to hear from you!! This saga has been going on for a long time and there have been some chnages along the way, What hasn't changed is that B&J love and support each other. The Kinney women don't seem to make good mothers. Brian gets to relive some childhood fun through Gus and John & Peter get a look at a better life with people who care about each other and care about them. I think Tedy Man and his family will do there best to avoid too much time with L&M. Happy to know you are still enjoying the story. Your Sweet Baboo
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
What a wonderful first day. I'm assuming that it is Brian's first time there so he's seeing everything through Gus and Kevin's eyes. Mother Taylor is a God sent. I can't get over how Melanie and Lindsay are acting. I think if Ben had been there JR would have eaten her veggies.
Author's Response: I don't think Brian ever imagined himself at DW. He would do anything to make Gus happy and is enjoying both the boys excitment at all the new sights & adventures. I am always happy to see your reviews. I feel like you have been with me since the beginning of this long saga. I appreciate all the support!!!!! Thanks for reviewing!!!! Bill
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. I've never been to Animal Kingdom, but you wrote it well and I felt that I was there too. Loved Jennifer's talk to Mel. Mel is totally a novel. Great writing.
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure mel thinks of herself as a reference book but we know better. Happy you enjoyed the trip to Animal Kingdom. Thanks for all you nice comments, you know I LOVE to hear from the readers!!! Bill
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 2
No mother of the year award for Mel? Why am I not surprised. If she really didn't want to the why accept Brian and Justin's help financially? Could have just sent the kids until they were on more solid ground.
Lindsay's not happy because she has no control. Boo whoo. Let's see her go up against Jenn.
Have to give Brian credit, did very well his first day a Disney.
I liked how concerned the older boys were about Gus and Kevin. Thinking they might have been eaten by an alligator. Ha!
Author's Response: I think Mel probably thinks she deserves an award but I'm doubtful anyone else would agree. She is the one who keeps bringing up B&J's financial assistance they don't mention it much. I think Lindsay knows better than to challenge Jennifer, she is no match for her. I think it must have been hard to think about telling Brian that Gus was missing. Glad you enjoyed this story so far, hope that continues. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 2
Read both chapters. Great story. Love the idea of Brian at Disney. We all know he is enjoying it as much as the little guys. Can't wait to see where you take them next. When my grandkids were small we were at the Disney Parks so much that my grandson actually thought Mickey was part of our family. LOL
Author's Response: Glad to know you are still enjoying this saga of mine. I have been to DW a few times myself but as an adult so I knew Mickey was not my relation. I think Brian is looking through Gus's eyes, he always wants his boys to be happy and will do whatever that takes. Thanks for taking time to review, I love them!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2018 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
You go Jennifer, putting Mel in her place. The older boys certainly were worried about the little ones. What a nice family they all make.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Hi Dee Dee, Mel was no mtch for Jennifer protecting her boys. She was not going to let Gus's good time spoiled by anyone. Peter spread the alarm quickly but all was good in the end. Thanks for your review!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: shf1210 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2018 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
I loved this chapter. I really really really want a scene where someone publicly blows up at Mel someone unexpected so not Brian, Jen, or even Justin. maybe Blake or Ted although for some reason I almost want it to be Kevin pointing out what a brat JR is and his brother trying to shush him but Kevin with no filter just goes on. I think Grandma Jen would stand and applaud him and Mel might leave... Just think about it even if it is just Mel overhearing him.... Brian is gonna need a kid break at some point and I see Justin arranging that... Can’t wait for more.
Author's Response: It's been a long time, good to hear from you. Glad you are enjoying this update to this long, long saga. I love the idea of Kevin pointing out JR's misbehavior. I think that might just happen. You have given me some good ideas over theyears, THANKS. I always enjoy your take on the storylines. Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2018 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 2
YeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Monday! What a FABULOUS way to start the day! I cheered when I got my notification. thank you thank you thank you!!
What a fun time for the family. 99% of them are having a terrific time. Loved teh time spent with gus and Kevin at Animal kingdom! I really really want to go there too.
The only damper of course are Mel and Lindsey. Jenn though....WOW! She is wonderful! wonder if M&L will ever get over their attitudes? What is it going to take? Don;t they realize that it takes much more efforr to be bitches and it doesn't get them anywhere. I guess we'll see in following chapters if they ever learn. the tongue lashings they get are fun to read though I have to say. They both need to get the logs out of their asses.
Wonderful family vacation! Brian is holding up extremely well. I'm impressed. The time alone with justin will mroe than make up for all the smiley happy people he has to face during the day. lol
Thank you than kyou thank you!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response: Hi Elaine, I was anxious to get this posted on Sunday night so my favorite "Monday Reader" would have it waiting. Jennifer wasn't going to let anything spoil Gus's DW trip. Mel had no chance against Mother Taylor in her protective tigress mode. You are right Brian will need time alone with his Sunshine to keep on a even keel. That have a "magical day" always kind of got on my nerves! Thanks for taking time to review, you know how much I love to hear from the readers!!!!!!! Bill
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2018 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 2
WOW what a nice surprise to wake up to.:)
I am so jealous of the boys I want to go to DW now
Go Mother Taylor love that little slap on Mel, when are the "Munchers" going to grow up
Thank you for the wonderful update Love
~Teresa~
Author's Response: Hi Teresa, glad I gave you a nice morning surprise. Jennifer can slap someone down and remain a perfect lady. Thanks for taking time to let me know you enjoyed this chapter!!!! Bill
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2018 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 2
I was so happy to wake up and see another chapter posted in this incredible story and what an amazing chapter it was. I LOVED Jennifer taking on Melanie that made me smile and cheer for her. Gus is a good little boy and would never be intentionally rude to anyone he is respectful to everyone. Gus does need to live with Brian and Justin he would flourish more there and not be fed negative thoughts there. I love how Brian looks after them all giving even Jennifer money for spending money he is so great. The visit to the animal Kingdom made me smile and tear up at how beautifully written it was and I wanted more and more it was so good. I would love to know how the others got on. You did an incredible job with it.
Fantastic work 💕💕💕
Author's Response: Hello my friend, I'm so happy to know you enjoyed this update. Jennifer always looks out for her boys. Gus loves his Daddy & Papa and spending time with them. Brian always wants to be sure his family is taken care of properly. I sure it pleased Mother Taylor that she got handed spendign money along with everyone else. Gus & Kevin loved the zoo so I thought Animal Kingdom would be a great place for them to visit. Thanks for your review!!!!!!! Bill
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