Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 04:22 PM · On: January 3

OMG Michael is an ass. How on Earth he thought asking those questions and accusing Justin of that was ok. I’m so glad Brian said what he said and did what he did. Jeez.



Author's Response:

Mikey's lack of regard for anyone other than himself has always amazed me. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 04:12 PM · On: January 2

Oh man, Michael and his jealousy that is going to get his ass kicked. Brian I wish you luck and I love how you care for Justin. 

 

Brilliant work 



Author's Response:

Michael is definitely a thorn in the side; Brian would do well to take care of that asap. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 03:31 PM · On: January 1

I know I shouldn’t laugh at Justin but lol the poor guy that’s gotta be hard. Brian needs to buck up and not drink like that when his pregnant husband needs him.



Author's Response:

Poor Justin is right; he does get his revenge later though. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 02:35 PM · On: January 26

Gus shouldn't feel bad, Brian was bound to find out about that video.  I think Mikey may get a second "talking to" about hsi attitude to Justin.  Bill



Author's Response:

Oh, Mikey will definitely will be getting a talking to; and it won't be pretty.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 01:08 PM · On: January 26

Hi, Ashita - I loved the imagery at the beginning, of a sleepy Justin using Brian as his 'pillow,' and how he didn't want to disturb his husband's sleep. :)

And that was an ingenious idea to use a You Tube video to demonstrate Michael's foolishness.  Geez, what an idiot.  IMO he is obviously jealous of Brian and Justin's love, and the fact that Justin is carrying Brian's child.  But you've got to LOVE a livid Daphne!  Love, love, love her character, here and on the show! 

I look forward to each chapter of this that you post. Thank you for this enjoyable story.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I do so adore a cuddling Brian and Justin; it doesn't happen enough. That YouTube video is definitely going to cause a lot of issues for good old Mikey; there is no way you can hide from evidence like that. I always felt that part of the reason Michael got away with his ugly behavior with Justin is now one ever saw it. He was always careful to be his worst when he and Justin were alone. But in this day and age (2014 for the story) people have cameras on their phones and the internet at their fingertips. There is nowhere to hide. Thanks!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 12:03 PM · On: January 26

Ah, oh, Justin's  in trouble, but maybe this will make Brian see the "real" Mikey.  This story just keeps getting better.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin really needs to stop protecting Brian from Michael's assholery. With this being so widely known, it will be hard for Michael to act innocent any longer.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 09:58 AM · On: January 26

Should we wait for the revenge of Brian, Michael has trouble to do unless Justin succeeds in appeasing Brian!

Author's Response:

Brian will definitely be getting he say on both matters eventually.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 09:31 AM · On: January 26

Oh dear Justin is going to try and protect Brian again against whiny Michael

Author's Response:

He does seem to do this far too often. Justin just loves brian and doesn't want him hurt by Michael's action. But this time, too many people have heard about it, so there is no hiding it.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 04:50 AM · On: January 25

Loved Brian's queen out over the Big Q clothes.  We knew that was coming.  Can't wait to see what he brings home for Justin from his shopping trip.  Enjoyed both updates today!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Justin really should have known that was coming and made contingency plans. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 04:37 AM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

Hot times in the old house tonight.  B&J busy at their favorite activity.  



Author's Response:

It's important to share common interests in a marriage. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 02:58 PM · On: January 25

Hysterical...thank goodness he stopped Em at least !



Author's Response:

There was no way that was going to happen if Justin could prevent it. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 02:36 PM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

This was HOT  Brian should go away more often

 



Author's Response:

I don't think either of them could survive it if he did. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 02:00 PM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

That was hot, hot, hot! And I loved the title - I could hear that song in my head - LOL! Thanks for the bonus chapter! ~Kim



Author's Response:

Yeah, as soon as I wrote it, I had that song stuck in my head all night! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 12:00 PM · On: January 25

Brian is devious ....lols...superb chapter.



Author's Response:

And then having it turned on him in the end. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 11:36 AM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 09:42 AM · On: January 25

Ah fashion always a conflict, it's funny to read and watch them in this power struggle so futile!

Author's Response:

Brian should just give up; Justin likes his chino and t-shirts and looks damn good in them. Just enjoy it already!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 09:34 AM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

Very hot game !

Author's Response:

Those boys, they do love to tease each other. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 03:40 AM · On: January 24

Poor Mikey, he was so outclassed here.  Daphne took no prisoners, I bet Brian gets a good laugh out of this encounter when he hears about.  Really enjoying every new chapter!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Mikey really never stood a chance in that scenario. Brian will likely be torn between amusement and exasperation due to the fact that he'll likely have Mikey whining in his ear about it. And he'll find a way to make Justin pay for it. In a most pleasurable way, of course. Thanks!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 08:39 AM · On: January 24

Love daphne...splendid.



Author's Response:

Daphne is the best! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 08:18 AM · On: January 24

Go Daphne!! I really do love her and she is the definition of what a best friend is!! Thanks for this it is yet another huge smile I needed!! I think I'm looking forward to the fallout of the video now too lol. I hope Mikey is completely humiliated!!

Well done!!

:)

 



Author's Response:

I do too; and she wa so under utilized in the series. I really wish there had been more Daphne and Justin friendship scenes. Thank you!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 07:36 AM · On: January 24

About Dam Time!!!!!!!!!!!lol
" Brian please step up !! Yur next"

Author's Response:

Don't worry, Brian and Justin will get their chances yet. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 04:15 PM · On: January 23

Brian will NOT be happy to see his Sunshine in Big Q clothes and he will know the minute he sees them.  Blake should let Justin watch Luc while he gets his nap.



Author's Response:

Nope. I'm fairly certain that Justin does this on purpose though. Gotta keep Brian on his toes. :) And yes, Blake definitely should have let Justin help. What is with these stubborn, I can do it myself characters? *sigh*

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 10:00 AM · On: January 23

That's funny !! The Big Q !

Author's Response:

Justin is definitely asking for a queen out shopping there.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 08:50 AM · On: January 23

Lol naughty naughty Justin he is going to love pissing Brian off

Author's Response:

He does so enjoy the results of pissing Brian off. :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 07:05 AM · On: January 23

That was fun ...awesome..



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2018 03:30 AM · On: January 22

Great update, loved "a frustrated, horny Brian was a fun Brian".  What an excellent discription and so Justin.    Bill



Author's Response:

Justin definitely knows how to push Brian's buttons. :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 11:35 AM · On: January 22

Just love this happy, carefree and a little crazy, Brian & Justin.  Your imagination is wonderful.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I admt, they are a lotof fun to write. :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 09:15 AM · On: January 22

That was soo cute.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 08:13 AM · On: January 22

Lol more fabulous conversation between the boys. You have a wonderful slant on the boys and it sounds so in cannon

Author's Response:

They are a ton of fun to write in this universe. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 12:25 AM · On: January 4 (Part One)

Oh no!  Blake is in labor and Justin is worried he won't have some strange concoction to eat?  Poor Emmett.



Author's Response:

Well, the baby's gotta eat. lol. Poor Emmett indeed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 11:26 PM · On: January 3

Wish Brian had been a little more firm with Michael.  Loved what he said though.



Author's Response:

Don't worry. He'll get there eventually.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 09:36 PM · On: January 2

Love that Brian is finally seeing Michael for the spoiled brat he is.  Can't wait to hear how he puts the man in his place.



Author's Response:

He needed to see this a long time ago. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 04:47 PM · On: January 21

Wait til Justin really starts showing! lol Brian has no idea about those pain in the ass last 2 miserable months!!!

Author's Response:

He is definitely in for a rude awakening thing. And I'm cerntain during those months, Justin's mantra from the Smut-mas collection willbecome his mantra!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 10:54 AM · On: January 21

Hi, Ashita! I'm glad it went this way, too. This was lovely! I adored the scenes on the show with Deb and Brian.  Thank God she was there to help and support him as a mother should. I thought this chapter was wonderful!   

By the way, I noticed there is a blue ribbon awarded on your story. Typically, they are not awarded until a story is complete, so I'm not sure how it got there. But it is certainly worthy of one, so we will leave it on there. a86;I suspect it may be our developers doing some testing. But this wonderful stories really deserves one.

As always, I will be looking forward to the next part. Thank you again for posting your story on here. I am really enjoying it. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you; I too liked the Deb and Brian moments and felt there was not enough of them. I'll admit I hadn't even noticed the ribbon until you mentioned it. But thanks nonetheless! Thanks always for the comments and reading! I do appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 07:55 AM · On: January 21

Soo sweet ...very very good.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 07:49 AM · On: January 21

Loving this side of the big bad Brian. 💋💖



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 07:36 AM · On: January 21

I loved this chapter as well even though Deb often made wrong choices she did come from a place of love most of the time. Seeing her worry about Justin and recognise Brian’s care is lovely

Author's Response:

Yes she did; I liked Deb for the most part, the notable exception being when she got on Brian's case for Michael braking up with David. Or really any time she blamed Brian for Michael's issues. While Brian certainly wasn't a saint, and may have encouraged the co-denpency to a degree, last I looked, Michael was a fucking adult and therfore in charge of his own fate.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2018 04:39 AM · On: January 21

Great Mother-Son moment.  I like Deb a lot in this story.  Terrific update!  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you! Deb will for the most part remain supportive, and when she does have, as another reviwer once put it, 'asshole' moments, it will because she doesn't have all the information. I, for the most part, liked Deb; but she does have a blind spot when it comes to Micahel and Brian, so that will cause issues at times.

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 09:36 PM · On: January 20

Lovely chapter... also luf Justin being pregnant and brian being so happy about it !

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! And I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 04:36 PM · On: January 20

Ugh baby registries so happy I never had one for either pregnancy lol. Nicely done by Brian too getting Justin to let him help with all of it. I'm truly enjoying the memories I am having thanks to this story of yours. Looking forward to more!!

Well done!

:)



Author's Response:

Registries are hellish. I remember filling one out and just wanted to scream by the end of it. Maintaining it was an even bigger headache, because occasionally things would be discontinued and you'd have to find a replacement and just...ugh. I hated it. I fully understand Justin not wanting to deal with it anymore.

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 04:34 PM · On: January 19

Oh I loved this chapter!! I adore it when Justin gets to stand up to Lindsay. Even better when Mel says nothing about it. Thanks for this you made my Linds hating heart very happy!!

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin should have stood up to her in season five. That whole going behind his back to Brian thing was utter bullshit, and if it had been me, I would have been pounding down her door to set her straight. That entire thing irritated the fuck out of me.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 04:22 PM · On: January 20

Fabulous work..thanks for the new chapter.

Take care of urself...get well soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 04:18 PM · On: January 18

Well I can understand Justin's want of his coffee while pregnant. My first pregnancy I gave up ALL caffeine. My second pregnancy however I did have my morning coffee but I was dealing with two year old twins so I think it was understandable why I needed it lol.

Well done!!

:)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, while I personally don't drink coffee often, I remember friends who did and tried the cold turkey method. It wasn't pretty. Especially when later they discovered they could have it in limited amounts. To be a fly on the wall during that discussion...

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 05:43 AM · On: January 20

Loved all the Brian & Justin give and take, so true to the characters.  Brian's comments about stuff from the BIg Q were hilarious.  Take care of yourself this is suposed to be a bad flu!!!  I would miss this great story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Brian's virulent hate for Big Q made me laugh. And thanks for the well wishes.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 12:02 AM · On: January 19

Woohoo go Justin I loved the smack Down! I especially loved the visual of Brian’s oh shit moment when he knew Linds was going to get ‘told’

Author's Response:

As soon as the words were out of Lindsay's mouth, Brian's first thought was, "Fuck, not again." He'd just dealt with the mother-hen duo and was not looking forward to dealing with Lindsay whining at him.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 11:24 PM · On: January 19

Another fun chapter. Loved Justin channeling his mother to out WASP Lindsay.  Ben covereing Jennie's ears and Gus just ignoring the cursing was great.  Hope you 100% soon!  Bill



Author's Response:

Yeah, Ben could tell that Justin was about to blow and took precautions. Gus on the other hand, is quite used to his 'family' and decided that food was more important. :) And thank you!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 05:41 PM · On: January 19

Well ...freaking awesome chapter...thank u for the update..take care of urself..take lots of rest ..and write whenever u are fully healthy again...there is no rush.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) And thanks for the well wishes. :)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 04:59 PM · On: January 19

Haha😀Go Baby

male/female pregnancy hormones are the best excuse for a good hitch slapping with no hard  feelings. 💋



Author's Response:

It is the perfect built in excuse. "Oh, sorry, I was just feeling a bit wrung out; you know how it is. No it has absolutely nothing to do with the fact that I think you'r a meddling bitch who needs to pay more attention to her own damn problems than sticking nosy ass into my life. Oops, sorry; did I say that aloud? My bad."

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 02:48 PM · On: January 19

Sorry u don't feel well, hoping for a full and swift recovery ( cuz " Aint nobody got time for that !!! )
*said in my Sweet Brown voice * ) :):)

ps I hope your getting my humor lol just trying to be a little funny

Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks! I have been enjoying them. :) And thanks for reading!

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 07:24 AM · On: January 19

Finally!!! I'm so glad Lindsey finally got put in the proverbial corner. I hope you feel better soon. 



Author's Response:

She really does need to be put in her place on occasion, and who better to do it than Justin. :) And thank you. :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 02:20 PM · On: January 18

Funny chapter! Loved Gus!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Gus does get a few zingers in now and then. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 11:36 AM · On: January 18

Loved this chapter! lol
As a coffee lover too I also would of been pissed at Brian. You don't mess with my coffee man!!!
" They're gonna be consequences and repercussions!! "
* said in my Eddie Murphy voice frm the move Life. *

Author's Response:

LOL! I have never been a big fan of coffee myself; I prefer to drink tea. But my ex was all about the coffee and you just did not mess with that unless you wanted to die. So, I channeled a bit of that into Justin.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 10:24 AM · On: January 18

Superb...very nice info.

Thank u for update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 04:44 AM · On: January 18

It is just so much fun watching Justin going thru his tantrums and Brian being Brian just never giving up.  And decaf also smells alot different and not in a good way.



Author's Response:

Poor Brian, Justin is just nearing his fifth month, so he is in so much trouble. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 04:35 AM · On: January 18

Brian really should know better.  His Sunshine will NOT be controlled.  Loved Gus in this chapter, not letting his Dad get away with anything.  Another great chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

No he will not; Brian really should have learned that lesson by now, but something tells me that he probably will continue to try and 'help.'

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:21 PM · On: January 17

Funny chapter, but can understand cravings.  Mine was bananas and I would have killed anyone who ate the last one.  LOL  Love the light hearted nature of this chaper, and I could just see Justin sneaking out and Brian watching him.  Benefits of watching the series, you can picture them so clearly.



Author's Response:

Justin should just give up on the sneakiness; he hasn't been able to fool Brian in a long, long time. Cravings a re a bitch, especially when it's something you can't eat. At least with Justin's, while Twinkies aren't a very healthy choice, they aren't detrimental either. Brian should just give it up; he is never going to win this battle.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:13 PM · On: January 17

"RUN BITCH RUN!!!" * Said in my Dave Chappelle voice*

Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:09 PM · On: January 17

"RUN JUSTIN RUN" * said in my Forest Gump voice*

Author's Response:

LOL! Sadly, he didn't get very far. Not that he was complaining in the end. :)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:07 PM · On: January 17

OMG I am a terrible reader. I have been reading this not stopped once to let you know how much I have been enjoying watching the boys deal with being pregnant and all the antics that Justin has come up with. 

Thank you for  time and talent in writing this😆💕



Author's Response:

I have to admit, Justin has been a blast to write in this story. He keeps cracking me up. And thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 06:09 AM · On: January 17

Lovely update..love it.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 05:40 AM · On: January 17

Lovd Justin sneaking out so carefully but Brian being on to him the whole time.  Brian sure doesn't like Twinkies and I don't blame him they are disgusting.  It is best he stick to twinks.  Fun chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Justin should realize by now that Brian is just too tuned into him for him to get away with such sneakiness. Thanks!v :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:13 AM · On: January 16

Loved this chapter, Ashita! You had me a little worried with Justin's dizzy spell and the tissue warning.  Glad he and the baby are okay. And that line from Brian: "But I never loved Lindsay the way that I love you." Swooned! I love a protective Brian, and an independent Justin. Add in Cynthia in take-charge mode, and you've got a great chapter. 

 

Really enjoying this story! Thank you for posting it. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Oh! I didn't mean to make anyone worry about the dizzy spell, as it was just one of those things that happen during pregnancy due to fluctuation in blood presssure and the changes to the circulatoy system. The tissue warning was just because my beta got all teared up when Brian made his little speech to Justin and she told me I should issue one. I love sweet Brian. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 08:05 PM · On: January 16

Sweet, protective Brian is more than a match for stubborn Justin.  He even rolled out the big gun - the "L" word.  Another really great chapter in this amazing story.  Mikey getting thrown out by Cynthia was also great!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :) I love Cynthia, and I wish there was more of her on the show. And Brian always knows the best way to get Justin to cave. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 01:57 PM · On: January 16

Dam that Micheal!!! I sure wouldn't want to be on Cynthia's bad side lol.

Author's Response:

Michael is going to rue the day he ever garnered Cynthia's attention. Because she takes no prisoners. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 11:18 AM · On: January 16

Aw I did love that chapter it had cheeky Justin 😁 fearful Brian 😳and then dominate Brian 🤨. But best of all Cynthia and Yasmeen two women determined to protect their boys😠😠😠

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the portrayal of Cynthia and Yasmeen. It's always difficult when you try on a new POV; especially for a character that's relatively minor on the show. But I love Cynthia (fanfic Cynthia especially) to pieces; so hopfully I got her voice right.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 07:38 AM · On: January 16

Sheesh .. that was soooo adorable and romantic.

Mikey is a little bit*$.



Author's Response:

Agreed. God, I cannot stand Michael. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 05:38 AM · On: January 15

Justin the sex maniac, this was a great chapter.  Wonder what the interfereing moms would have made of this encounter.  This contnues to be a wonderful story, I look forward to each update.  Thanks!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Justin would not be denied his smut any longer; I had to give in. They likely would have tried to talk sense into their Sunshine. And then Justin would have very politely, but firmly told them to but the fuck out. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 04:17 AM · On: January 15

HOT!!!!!! More please!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL...I'll have to work in some more smut somewhere. There is just usually so much to cover with the actual pregnancy that I forget to put in some fun times for the boys.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 02:50 PM · On: January 15

Well!  That was hot-hot-hot, and funny as hell!  I love how Justin came tromping into his office, commando-style, and how he manipulated everything so he could have his husband to himself.  I love an assertive Justin!  LOL!  This was great! Always look forward to your updates. Thank you!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

What Justin wants, Justin gets. He wasn't going to take no for an answer. :) Thanks! I'm having a blast with this 'verse.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 01:14 PM · On: January 15

Christ...hottttt...great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I finally felt the smut muse perk up again, and Justin was being a bit demanding. LOL

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 12:31 PM · On: January 12

Shit...who the hell was that? Ethan or mikey or??? 

Superb chapter.



Author's Response:

Well, I guess we'll have to wait and see. They'll expose themselves eventually. :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 12:27 PM · On: January 11

Freaking awesome.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 12:25 PM · On: January 15

OMG That's hot !!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin just would not be denied this time!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 12:09 PM · On: January 10

That was sooooo sweet.



Author's Response:

Yes, too bad Brian couldn't feel the baby yet. But hopefully soon. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 11:46 AM · On: January 15

Lol the who,e pregnant horny thing is so ideal for these two

Author's Response:

It's not like they don't sex each other up all the time anyways. LOL!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 10:56 AM · On: January 9

Excellent



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 08:43 PM · On: January 13 (Part Two)

Interfereing Moms seem to be on the menu for everyone today.  Hope Deb & jen get the hint and back off but that is doubtful!



Author's Response:

Do mothers ever really stop mothering their 'kids'? I'm sure they'll back off for a bit, but it's in their natures to meddle. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 08:20 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)

Mikey!  What a creep.  He knew that news would send Joanie to see Brian.  



Author's Response:

He is indeed. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 02:19 PM · On: January 13 (Part Two)

Oh, I loved this chapter!  So funny with Justin's reactions to his 'mothers' words. And that 'delicate condition' - oh, I can see Justin erupting after that.  Love how Brian had to hold him back, and that 'easy, tiger,' line.  I well remember how Justin despised the infantalizing of him after the bashing, so this is so in character.  And I think you had both Debbie and Jennifer's characters written expertly. I could see both of them saying what they did, as well as joining together to make sure their 'baby' wasn't overexerting himself.

The two boys' love for each other shows so clearly here, and in your entire story. This is a joy to read!  Thank you for the frequent updates, too. Looking forward to the next part. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

If you couldn't tell, I really love when Justin is being a bitchy, little brat. Of course, had he stopped when he should have, and had actually eaten, he might not be as cranky. So, that's on him as well. I am glad it rang true to canon with him and the mothers. And Rage as always coming to JT's rescue. Well, JT's victims rescue, but close enough. :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 12:51 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)

Ooh...that was one amazing speech Brian made to his mom - ha!  So in character, too!  And I love his assistant, Yasmeen.  Something tells me that Michael is going to get it now - and well he should.  Once more, he couldn't keep blabbing about something!

Can't wait now to see how Brian handles the two mothers! Thank you for posting this on here. I can't fathom why you don't have many more reviews for this story, because you are doing an amazing job! Looking forward to reading the rest of your story, and any others you might post in the future.  :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I love when Brian gets to tell his mother where to stick it; there is not nearly enough of that in my opinion. Yasmeen is actully based off of one of my betas and her rants. She cracks me up. Mikey will definitely get what's coming to him eventually. :) As for the reviews, well, I can sort of understand why people might hesitate to read a WIP. I've been disappointed myself when I've gotten involved with a story and it's never finished. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2018 09:06 AM · On: January 13 (Part Two)

Oh dear trouble in paradise with the well intentioned mother’s but surely they know Justin! And who is the sneaky bastard snooping on our happy couple, is it Ethan I wonder?

Author's Response:

I thought I responded to this, but I guess not. Moms always think they know best and they are well meaning, but they are going about it in the wrong way. Thanks and sorry I didn't respond before now.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 08:01 PM · On: January 12

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Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 07:59 PM · On: January 1

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Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 05:19 PM · On: January 12

OH, NO, NO NO.   No problems for our happy family, please.  Sure sounds like that sneaky rat, Ethan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, we have to have a little angst. I'm sure the boys will be alright in the end.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 04:42 PM · On: January 11

Love this story.  OK, my guess for the delivery date is June 10th which just happens to be my late husband's birthday and our wedding anniversary so I must say a boy in his honor.  If I wasn't honoring him, my other guess would be identical twin boys on June 17th , my late parent's anniversary since my father was an identical twin.  And, you are not evil, just sneaky.  LOL



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I will note those dates on my tally sheet.

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 03:43 AM · On: January 11

Justins stomach is amazing  



Author's Response:

Yeah, I really want to know where he puts it all...

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 12:36 AM · On: January 10

So still no baby sex, I can see you are going to torment us.  Love Ted falling asleep at the meeting.  Really loving each new chapter!!!!!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Poor Teddy; sleep just doesn't happen for new parents. And yes, I'm going to torture you for a while. Because I'm evil. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2018 12:26 AM · On: January 9

You are mean to keep us in suspense since we don't have a chnance to win the pool.  Loved their conversation during the ultra sound. Wonderful story!!!!!  Glad you got your internet issue solved, it's hard to be without it once you are accustomed to being on line whenever you want.

 



Author's Response:

LOL! I am a terrible, terrible person. I know. :) Yeah, it's funny, but I don't even realize how much I rely on the internet, until I don't haveit. I spent the entire week saying, "I need to do...oh, wait, I can't do that. Fuck!"

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 10:07 PM · On: January 10

OK I must have missed something   What is it a girl or a boy?



Author's Response:

You didn't miss anything; Justin is being stubborn and insisting on an information black out on this. Brian is just exasperated as everyone else.

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 09:48 PM · On: January 9

You stinker  What is it?   Better tell in next chapter



Author's Response:

Justin says that the 'gang' can't know; and since cranky Justin is someone I avoid at all costs, I will keep his secret. ;)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 10:28 AM · On: January 10

So sweet !

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Thanks! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 10:19 AM · On: January 9

Thank you it is a funny chapter and so good memories for me!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 05:54 AM · On: January 10

Aw so cute Brian letting Justin run his life at home he wouldn’t say it but the security he feels from a in control Justin completes his life. He runs his business he is the go to man but with Justin being pregnant he cannot control that all he can do is fret lol

Author's Response:

Yeah poor Brian; he wants to take care of and 'fix' everything for Justin and there is nothing he can really do in this case. He doesn't do helpless well.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2018 03:09 PM · On: January 7

Funny chapter..great going.



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Thanks you! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2018 04:37 AM · On: January 7

Chocolate sauce on mashed potatoes.  I'm with Gus that is disgusting.  Still enjoying your story a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

I have to agree. Personally, I don't even like gravy on my mashed potatoes most of the time; I can't even begin to fathom the appeal of chocolate sauce. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 10:02 AM · On: January 4 (Part Four)

Superb chapter...love the images u link with the story...great idea...thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I do hope other's like the links as well. I just find that sometimes it's easier provide a link, rather than try to explain something in words.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 09:55 AM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

Awwww....justin is damn right...loving this story.



Author's Response:

Pregnant Justin is so much fun.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 09:41 AM · On: January 4 (Part Two)

Fabulous...justin is soo cute.



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He's also right; labor takes a long time and food is a necessity.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 08:43 AM · On: January 4 (Part One)

Hilarious ...lollololol



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Thanks! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 04:03 AM · On: January 4 (Part Four)

Love Blake & Ted as Daddies.  Luc is a great name.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love all of the as daddies.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 03:55 AM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

I am loving this story.  Justin knows that being adorable even makes Brian want to coddle him.  The outfits are so Emmett!!!  Looking forward to more of this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you! Justin cracks me up in this and I'm having a lot of fun tormenting Brian as well.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2018 09:54 AM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

Omg Justin is just loving life and has Brian totally spinning lol. Another funny fantastic chapter thank you

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Justin does love to keep Brian on his toes. :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2018 06:06 AM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

Coddle a pregnant Justin? I'd much rather cuddle him lol. Geez I'd drive him crazier than Brian is. I really love this series of yours it's a smile everytime I read a couple chapters.

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Justin is adorable and deserves all the cuddles. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2018 05:41 PM · On: January 4 (Part Two)

I am soooo loving this story!!!!Thank you for it! :)
I really like the way you are writing the baby time line in this I almost feel like I'm having the baby too lol.
Can't wait for stupid Mickey to be finally told by Brian to kick rocks! cuz I know he will be/say doing something stupid!
Can't wait for the next update!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I like writing it this way, with little glimpses into the pregnancy. One of my betas biggest complaints has always been that there are not enough stories that show the actual pregnancy. It's usually glossed over, or the story starts in the aftermath. So this is for her, so she can enjoy a nice, drawn out, pregnancy fic. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2018 12:39 PM · On: January 4 (Part Two)

Lol Brian and ted. Omparing who has it worse stories and frightening Drew so funny

Author's Response:

Sadly, Drew isn't taking their warnings to heart; so, we might just see a pregnant Em yet. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2018 09:10 AM · On: January 4 (Part One)

Lol some of those cravings are awful

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Beleive it or not, I actually found a lot of those on a baby website. And they weren't the weirdest cravings I saw.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 09:58 AM · On: January 3

Superb chapter...loved how u shocked mikey to death..lols.



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A speechless Mikey, is a perfect Mikey. Too bad it isn't permanent. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 08:29 AM · On: January 3

Go Brian!! Give Mikey Hell lol. I do so love an overprotective Brian. I love a great Mikey bashing story even more. Thanks for this it was a very needed laugh. Can't wait for more!!

Well done!!

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Author's Response:

Protective Brian is my favorite; add that to a good Michael whipping, and I too am in heaven. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 07:11 AM · On: January 3

Lol very funny chapter and a favorite as I am. Anti Michael fan

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm very anti-Michael myself. I've never really liked the character, but once Season 3, episode 1 aired, it cemented my intense dislike of the character. Brian should have booted him out of his life for that comment.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2018 04:19 AM · On: January 3

This is a great story because it makes Michael out to be the idiot we all know that he is.  I love how so many  writers dislike Michael and write such good stories.  Thank you.



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I'll be honest, while I didn't really think much of Michael, and he really annoyed me in the beginning, but I didn't really start to dislike him until the first episode of Season 3. And then, after what he said about Justin, and to Brian of all people, there was absolutly no redemption for the character in my eyes. And then it continued to deepen as the series went on. So, it's very unlikely that Michael will be anything other than an idiot in my stories. I just can't treat him neutrally. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2018 08:40 PM · On: January 2

Good Brian is on the alert Justin is going to need him being his wing man during this time.

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Definitely. Usually, Justin can take care of himself; but, at this time, he should be focusing on himself and the baby. So, it;s good the Brian is being watchful.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2018 04:35 AM · On: January 2

Good one...liked it..thank u for the update.



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I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2018 02:44 AM · On: January 1

Oh I remember those days of pregnancy when smells were the WORST THING EVER.  For me 25 years later I still can not stand the smell of pork chops lol. Anyway this was highly amusing and I look forward to reading more.

Well done!!

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Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, smells are the worst; poor Justin. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 02:11 PM · On: January 1

I don't know who to feel sorry for.  Emmett who made bacon or Justin who can't eat it.



Author's Response:

Definitely Justin in this case. Justin loves Emmett enough that he won't kill him. But not being able to eat bacon? That is a true tragedy. :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 08:57 AM · On: January 1

Lol great start I look forward to the coming chapters

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 05:19 AM · On: January 1

Awesome...i like it..thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) And thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 04:32 AM · On: January 1

Love the banter between Justin and Brian. Poor Justin morning sickness sucks.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah, morning sickness is the worst. It really makes you hate those people who never experience it. lol! :)

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