Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2018 10:04 AM · On: February 9 (Part Two)

Wow Lindsay looks so bad Michael I hope the police will quickly find the stalker

Author's Response:

These two just can't cut a break. If it isn't Michaek, it's Lindsay. If it isn't Lindsay, it's the stalker. Hopefully things will clear up soon. or some of the players will be take off the field. Thanks!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2018 10:03 AM · On: BONUS! (February 11)

Brian is clever Justin will not notice the exchange?

Author's Response:

Oh...I have no doubts that Justin will discover the subterfuge. But how and why...I guess we'll see. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2018 07:19 AM · On: February 9 (Part One)

That was too damn funny...lovely chapter.

Thank u ..great team work.



Author's Response:

Poor Justin; I don't know how he'd deal with quintuplets. And let's not forget about poor Brian. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2018 07:07 AM · On: February 8

Fantastic...loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 11:48 PM · On: January 24

Love Michael smackdowns.  Especially when Daphne is the one doing it.



Author's Response:

Daphne is bad ass! Never enough Daphne, ever! Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 10:57 PM · On: January 23

Thank goodness that Blake has all the answers.  He and Ted need a sitter to watch Luc while they rest.



Author's Response:

Well, I don't know about all the answers, but at least he can tame Justin's inner drama princess. :) And they definitely do need a sitter to rest, and just be with each other. I'm sure that Auntie Em took care of that after hearing about Ted falling asleep in the meeting. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:35 PM · On: January 22

Messaging while apart is a smart move.



Author's Response:

It cetainly helps them to feel connected when Brian or Justin has to be away. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:22 PM · On: January 21

Awww.  How nice to see Brian and Deb talking.  I feel sorry for Brian having to get his Sunshine some lemon bars.  Mine wouldn't have done it for me.



Author's Response:

Lucky for Brian, they were at the Loft , so it wasn't as bad of a journey. Of course, he may have rethought his willingness to do it when he came home and found Justin sound asleep. lol! Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 08:12 PM · On: January 20

Trying to do a good deed is difficult.



Author's Response:

It is, and sometimes you need to learn when to ask for help. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 07:39 PM · On: January 19

What a lovely meal with the gang.  I dearly love when Justin let's loose taking down those who are out of line.



Author's Response:

Lindsay really did need to be taken down a peg or two. Her superior, I know better than you, attitude annoys me. So, I love when any character, but especially Justin, gets the better of her. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 06:47 PM · On: February 9 (Part One)

You have Jennifer very much IC here.  I enjoyed the bantering between her, Molly, and Justin.  Thank you for posting two chapters today!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Jen was a lot of fun to write here. I laughed the whole time she was teasing Justin and Molly. As always, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 06:46 PM · On: February 8

What a beautiful and thoughtful gift Brian gave to his husband! I love how he demonstrates every day how much he loves and cherishes hm.  Thank you for posting this story on here. You truly are a gifted writer, and I have been enjoying each chapter.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that this chapter was well received since it was giving me so many fitsyesterday and the day before. I was really worried that would affect the flow. Brian is just so wonderful in this story sometimes that I worry that I'm making him too soft at times. But, so long as everyone is enjoying, that's all that matters to me. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:26 PM · On: February 9 (Part One)

Lol that dream was so funny, them having multiples would be amazing if it comes true. I have a story planned for the future were they do with a twist if course. 

 

Molly was so funny as well and I love how you wrote Jennifer. Cannot wait god more and more xx



Author's Response:

I still want that quintuplets crack fic. LOL! I can just see Brian's face at that announcement. I had a lot of fun with Jen and Molly here. Plus I just wanted Justin to have an uncomplicated day. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:01 PM · On: January 18

It's nice that Brian cares, but this is a time when Justin should be spoilt.  Would it really hurt to let him have what he wants?



Author's Response:

In this case, it doesn't so long as he follows the guidlines set up for him by his doctor. But Brian is a control freak and just wants what's best for them both, so he's going through the first time father thing. Yes, he has Gus; but, I doubt he was really all that present during the pregnancy due to his acrimonious relationship with Mel, and the fact that he genuinely thought of himself as no more than a sperm donor at first. It wasnt until he held that baby in his arms that he thought, "OMG, I'm a father!" And it completely changed the game. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 12:06 PM · On: February 8

This made me cry very very happy tears, just what I needed today. Today is 14yewes since my mum passed. I’m so happy to see Brian doing this for Justin six a bonding experience for him Justin and the baby. As the baby proved by high giving him with the foot or hand. You really did yourself proud with this chapter. 

 

Hope you feel better x



Author's Response:

I'm sorry for your loss; even after so many years, it's difficult lose a loved one. I'm glad that it made you smile today of all days. Thanks!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 11:03 AM · On: February 9 (Part One)

Funny chapter ! i like the dream ! Thank you for posting 2 chapters!

Author's Response:

Tha dream cracked me up! I was laughing so hard I was in tears when I imagined it in my head. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 10:53 AM · On: February 8

Who would not want a massage like this?

Author's Response:

Deosn't that sound nice? Can you imagine how good that would feel after a long day of being on your feet with all that additional weight? Brian done good. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 01:25 AM · On: January 17

The Twinkie debate is on.  Frankly I think Justin will win.



Author's Response:

Rule of thumb? Somehow, Justin always wins. It may seem like Brian is in charge, but we all know who really runs that relatiosnip. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 09:15 PM · On: January 16

Nice to see that Brian isn't letting Mikey get away with shit anymore.



Author's Response:

Oh no, not at all. That ship has sailed with Mikey still whining at the dock. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 08:54 PM · On: January 15

I don't remember being this way when I was pregnant.



Author's Response:

Most people likely don't. LOL! But, in canon, Justin was a very sexual being and had a libido that matched Brian's, so I can see it manifesting this way duing his pregnancy when his hormones are raging out of control. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 04:20 PM · On: January 13 (Part Two)

Mothers!  What do they know?



Author's Response:

I think the biggest problem sometimes is, when women pop out a baby, they somehow think they are experts because, of course, they went through it all. But my research shows that there really isn't anything called a 'typical pregnancy.' It varies from person to person; and just because a person experienced something in their pregnancy, doesn't mean their child or sibling will experience the same thing. Like, when I was researching the signs of labor for one of my first vignettes, the pain people felt was wildly different from person to person; like some barely felt any pain at all, and said it was nothing more than what they'd experience when having menstral cramping, whereas others felt like they were being ripped apart. It's been a very interesting journey through this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 03:37 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)

Love Yasmen.  Would love to read how Joanie went to the pearly gates and had her sanctimoneous self turned away.  Michael is going to get himself in so much trouble if he keeps on in this fashion.  Deb can't tell Justin how to deal when she didn't do so well with her one and only pregnancy who never grew up.



Author's Response:

I think I read a story somewhere where Joan got to the Gates, and was told that Peter wanted to talk to her personally; and she was all thrilled thinking she was about to commended for her righteous life and; well, that wasn't the case. I can't remember the title or who wrote it though. Deb...the Eternal Wet Nurse. Hmmm...I wonder if I can work that in somewhere into the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 03:21 PM · On: January 12

And so we meet the mystery man.  My guess is Ethan, but if you were really wicked it could be Hobbs.  Love how Jenny has no problem being part of this family and not someone left out.



Author's Response:

With his childhood, I have a hard time believing that Brian would ever play favorites. Not when there were hints that he got the worse end of the deal at home. Yes, Gus is his biological child; but Jenny is Gus' sister in every way that counts, and I can't see Brian denying her that place in his family. Plus, Justin would just love them both to pieces. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 01:39 PM · On: January 11

It must have been a good day for Justin judging by his meal.  With Brian willing to help him work the calories off it's going to get better.



Author's Response:

It was definitely a very productive day for Justin; and Brian is always willing to help with his 'exercise' regimen. ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 01:29 PM · On: January 10

So funny that Ted has to go to work to get some sleep.  With Justin feeling the baby things are going to get interesting, especially when Brian can too.



Author's Response:

Poor Teddy and all sleep-deprived parents. What I can't wait for is Brian starts falling asleep in places, because you know he's going to hate that. Things should definitely be much more fun once Sunbeam starts developing further. Although, maybe not so much for Justin sometimes. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 03:08 AM · On: January 9

So you are keeping us in suspense.  But if Justin wants to shout from the rooftop it must be a girl. 



Author's Response:

It definitely could be a girl; although, deep down, I think Justin will be happy with a healthy, happy baby no matter the sex. Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 02:59 AM · On: February 7

Only Deb would think Brian would be angry at Justin for telling the truth I actually rolled my eyes along with Brian lol. Great chapter

Author's Response:

Right? As soon as those words came out of her mouth, I was thinking, 'Oh, Geez...really Deb? That is so not helping your case." Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 05:34 PM · On: January 7

Chocolate syrup on mashed potatoes?  I gotta try that.  It's nice that the men in the family are thinking about Jenny.



Author's Response:

You know, I've had chocolate-dipped potato chips before and they weren't bad. Not something that I'd eat on a regular basis, but it was an interesting sweet/salty combination. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 04:00 PM · On: February 7

Another great chapter.  First Brian tells Mikey off and now Justin sets Deb straight.  It can't get much better than that, but I know the next chapter will be better.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I do hope that you'll enjoy the next one as much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 10:19 AM · On: February 7

Brilliant chapter...u go sunshine...loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin does know how to protect his man! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 09:14 AM · On: February 7

I hope Deb understood his lesson! I like Justin's determination to defend Brian and tell Deb his 4 truths very calmly. I think the settlement is not over! Thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Yelling at Deb never works; it will just make her close off her ears and start yelling back. Presenting it in a calm, dignified manner with visual proof to back it up is the way to go. But whether or not it sinks in...we'll have to wait and see. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 09:06 AM · On: February 7

Gosh I’m so proud of Justin, Debbie needed to hear that and as hard as it was Justin did an incredible job with it. I do hope that she takes on board what he said and the home trusts that came out. Lol I love Yasmeen she copped on to Justin so well that made me laugh. As for Brian he was excellent and the fact he is taking Justin away was perfect so perfect. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Yasmeen seems to have a sixth sense when it comes to the boys mischief and is quick to snap them back into line. It's her super power. :) And that talk with Deb was a long time in coming, and I felt that Justin was the best person to do it. If it had been Brian, Deb wouldn't have paid near the amount of attention to what he was saying due to preconceived notions. But Justin, he's always been able to get her to pause and think on things. Thanks!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 04:12 AM · On: January 4 (Part Four)

The perfect godparents were picked.  Love the name.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 04:06 AM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

Justin and strawberries!  The outfits are so cute, Brian will just have to suck it up.



Author's Response:

I loed those outfits. :0 I knew that Brian would be horrified, but I though they were darling. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2018 03:47 AM · On: January 4 (Part Two)

Brian should have checked his message from Emmett.  Somehow I thing Twinkies for the twink will be around.  As much as Justin's eating will he have a lot of baby fat to loose once the baby arrives?



Author's Response:

Brian knew that Emmett would call him if it was really important. The messages he was getting were of Justin's breakfast. And Brian really didn't want to see them. Justin has a pretty high metabolism, so he'll likely have some weight to lose, but not as much as you'd expect. Which will annoy everyone.

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 10:23 PM · On: February 6

I wonder what you will have as Deb's reaction.  I hope Em has been having 'a little chat' with Deb and Ben, bringing them up to speed to what "little Mikey" has been doing.

Also, shouldn't Carl be having a 'talk' with Michael about eavesdropping....



Author's Response:

There will definitely be some talks going on for both Deb, Ben and Michael. Although by who, we'll have to see. :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 07:16 PM · On: February 6

Brains anger and upset was warranted big time. I’m so glad he had WM there to support him, he really needed that. I hope Deb takes Brian’s side in this as Michael really went way to far and may have caused damage that can never be undone. Of course he will claim he is being treated unfairly. 

 

Incredible work as always x



Author's Response:

Yeah, I cannot even begin to imagine having to face what he and Justin did in the hospital; and then to know that it was caused by a friend...well, Michael is lucky to be alive. Deb...will be Deb. But hopefully she'll realize what an ass Mikey is once she cools off.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 05:18 PM · On: February 6

"Sweeter then a MOFU!!!!!!!!!"

Author's Response:

Hahahahaha! I'm guessing you liked it then. ;)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 01:57 PM · On: February 6

WOW, WOW, WOW  Now that is what I call fantastic writing.  You made the readers feel every bit of the emotion going through Brian as he spoke to the idiot.  BRAVO !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad I managed to convey it well enough that you felt it as well. :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 11:50 AM · On: February 6

Yes that's Brian !!! Thank you for the update, great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2018 10:46 AM · On: February 6

Damn  Now that was Hot nothing like a Dom Brian  

Thank you for the update  😆



Author's Response:

A Brian in charge is definitely a beautiful thing to behold. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 05:55 PM · On: February 4 (Part Two)

I can’t blame Brian for being that pissed off I would be kicking heads in as well. Him and Em need to join forces and kick Michaels ass. I hate hospitals as well so I’m with Juarin here it’s not nice so I send hugs. This time in hospital better not affect the baby. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was so all for Brian to go apeshit on Michael right at that moment, but Sunshine and Sunbeam come first! But he will get what's coming to him.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 05:43 PM · On: February 4 (Part One)

Omg I wanna kick Michaels ass so bad right now. Why on earth would he do that when he knows that Justin is pregnant. If anything happens to that baby Michaels life won’t be worth living. Thank god for Emmett. 

 

Incredible work x



Author's Response:

LOL! I don't blame you; God knows Michael incites that feeling in me often.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 05:16 PM · On: February 2 (Part Two)

My heart broke for them. Their pain and anguish jumped off the page right into the heart. My gut is tight for them I’m scared as to what may happen next. Brian is so good to Justin and I think he is holding back on his emotions to keep Justin from falling apart. I pray they will be ok and this creep caught. 



Author's Response:

Those poor boys. And after such a wonderful weekend too! Someone needs his ass kicked.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 04:56 PM · On: February 2 (Part One)

Awe Brian was goood arranging that for Justin and himself. It’s just what they needed after all the walking they did. A massage sounds just about right at the moment lol

 

Brilliant  work x



Author's Response:

Yeah, when I would go away on acive weekends like that, I try to schedule a massage in at the end of it if I can to feel refreshed and revitalized. I wanted the same for the boys.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 01:42 PM · On: February 4 (Part Two)

Much better.  You are forgiven.  As long as Baby & Sunbeam are ok.  Of course, can't wait for Michael to get what he deserves.  Great chaper & story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! i'm so happy to know I won't be finding a mob with pitch forks outside my window! ;) And Michael will definitely pay for all this bullshit.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 12:07 PM · On: February 1 (Part Two)

I loved this chapter seeing how their day went and what they did. I had to laugh at Brian’s expressions at Justin eating that really cracked me up. I got chills when they spoke of the feeling of being watched. What will happen with that. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

I did want to show the day from their perspective, not the delusional idiots. Thanks!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 12:02 PM · On: February 4 (Part Two)

Hello, Ashita - as usual, I am playing catchup. But I can't tell you how much I am enjoying this story. And some of the phrases you used in this chapter were wonderful.  My favorite one that had me chuckling out loud was about Michael: "his check was about to come due and he'd long been writing checks his ass couldn't cash."  LOVED that!  Michael is going to pay, all right, I'm sure, just as soon as Brian can take care of other, more important issues.

And I always adored Em's and Justin's friendship on the show. I wrote one story of my own, "Stirring Up Trouble," where they were business parters and another one where they took a cooking class together, b/c I wanted to write more details about their relationship as friends. How I wish they would have shown more of that on the show, like they filmed all those scenes between Brian and 'his' best friend, Michael!  Because I think it could have been the same way with the two of them.

Anyway, thoroughly loving this story, and appreciate the timely updates!  I look forward to each one.  Loved the protective Brian in this one, along with how you wrote Justin 'squawking,' and Jennifer's entrance.  Keep it up!  Wonderful job. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! I'm glad that you're still enjoying it. The phrases were a lot of fun, but then writing Emmett is fun in general. Especially when you get the chance to explore his very complex personality. And Mikey needs a swift kick in the ass. Hopefully that will happen soon.

I so love Em if you couldn't tell; and I agree, I really wish they would have focused more on Justin's friendship with him. Actually, I just wish they had shown more of Justin's friendships period. I would have preferred that to the Michael and Brian Show. I could easily see Em and Justin as best friends.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 11:55 AM · On: February 4 (Part Two)

Super cute...jealous brian is sooooo adorable.

Damn...good going...i liked it.



Author's Response:

Brian's little jealous flair ups always amused me. For a guy who says he doesn't do jealousy, he sure did a good imitation of it at times.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 11:31 AM · On: February 4 (Part One)

Poor Justin...how much he loves brian...a thought of Brian hurting ...sends him to a panic attack...mikey is soo going to hell for this...he did not even thought of justins baby...i hope the baby is not going to suffer for this in future.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that has to be really tough. Especially to be slapped in the face with it like that. Not cool. Not cool at all.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 09:12 AM · On: February 4 (Part Two)

I love Emmett! He is a real friend! So waiting for the fight ! Thank you for the update

Author's Response:

Em is indeed awesome and deserves all the love!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2018 02:47 PM · On: February 4 (Part One)

Wow IMe too I'm going to have a panic attack!!
You just scared me i'm waiting for tomorrow and you can kill Michael or Brian can do that !!

Author's Response:

Poor Justin; Brian will take care of Mikey. Don't worry about that.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2018 02:28 PM · On: February 4 (Part One)

Well if it wasn't such a good story, WE would hate you right now.  You are just too good at cliffhangers !!!!!!!!!!!!  I may have to get up super early tomorrow to get the next chapter as quickly as possible.  Oh, and by the way, KILL Michael.  !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol! Sorry. As soon as I posted, I was just waiting for the lynch mob to show up with their pitch forks. I promise to make it up to everyone. :)

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2018 01:19 PM · On: February 4 (Part One)

Whhhhhaaaaaaat would you do that to us!!! So mean!!! Talk about a massive panic attack. Please don't let Bruan kill Micgael, cause I totally Forder murder in their future. 



Author's Response:

Poor Justin; he just can't catch a break right now.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 03:05 PM · On: February 2 (Part Two)

WOW, wasn't expecting this to happen.  What an amazing chapter.  Great job.  Can't wait for tomorrow's update.  Hope you enjoyed some of the super bowl party.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It was definitely was a bit more violent than I anticipated. But people like that, they only hold on until something kills the dream world they made up in thero head. And then, they are dangerous and unpredictable.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 11:31 AM · On: February 2 (Part Two)

Goodness...who the bastard did this.?? Brandon or mikey or ethan...?????? Damn...poor britin.



Author's Response:

The poor boys; they just can't catch a break lately.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 09:51 AM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Omg what will he do, that creep better not hurt our boys or I will jump into this story and kick his scrawny skany ass. 

 

I looooove Brian doing all that for Justin it melts my heart xx



Author's Response:

LOL! Feel free to give him a much deserved ass kicking! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 08:13 AM · On: January 31

Ooooh that was brilliant so romantic and funny and cute. What a way for me to wake up and read this. I love seeing Brian’s romantic side and I can’t wait to see what they get up to. 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Thanks! Brian does pull that romantic streak now and then. I think it's safe to say that Justin was happy with his surprise.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 05:52 AM · On: February 2 (Part One)

Wonderful...so romantic moments.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 02:42 PM · On: January 30

It is so hard I would imagine picking a name for your child. It has to suit them and grow with them. Not make them a target and mean something to you both. I can’t wait to see what name they pick and I still hope that Brian gets pregnant I honestly feel it would be amazing for him and make him feel incredible. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's difficult for sure. I know that I really get irritated with my given name. When I was born, it was something like the third or fourth most popular name for that year, and there were always one to two other girls with the same name in my class. Talk about confusing. Not to mention that I hate most of the ways people try to shorten my name. It's definitely something to really think hard on.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 10:00 AM · On: January 29

Wow that was amazing, so beautiful. I loved seeing Brian take those pictures helping his son but more so how he saw Justin and how he reassured him at how beautiful he was and looked. He really showed his heart and soul in this chapter and his insecurities. I do hope that Brian gets pregnant, I think he needs it and it will show him that he he overcame everything. 

 

Incredible work thank you for writing it xx



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really loved how that chapter turned out, especially as it wasn't a planned chapter. It was just one where I sat down and started writing. It's always nice when something unexpected comes out of your imagination. :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2018 09:58 AM · On: February 2 (Part One)

A sweet and good day !!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 01:52 PM · On: January 28

Omg I LOVED this chapter. I loved Leo and his wife they are adorable and I hope we see more of them. Lol I loved the interaction between Brian and Justin and Justin’s panic at getting his twinkies discovered lol that cracked me right up. 

 

Incredible work x



Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin and his Twinkies...this seems to be a struggle that will never end. As for Leo and Lucille, we should definitely see them at the showere or around then, as Lucille will hunt Justin down if hse's not invited.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 01:05 PM · On: February 1 (Part Two)

"Are you going to finish that?"  Ha!  I could so see him saying that!!  Too funny about Justin's ravenous appetite - and Brian's. ;)  Glad to see that even through the pregnancy, both men's appetites are being well-served.  They'd better take advantage of it now; I would be interested to see how they handle a newborn once Sunbeam is here.

Loved all their adventures today, and the ice sculpting idea was great!  Fit in perfectly with Justin's artistic passion.  Again, such a wonderful story. I look forward to each update!  Thank you. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Justin's appetite never ceases to amaze me. I didn't even plan half of it out; Justin just took control and that ws it. And I imagine they will be like any new parents, completely overwhelmed, tired, but happier than they've ever been. And as soon as I saw ice carving on the brochure, I knew Justin would be all over it. He's always excited to learn a new way to express his artistic side. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 01:02 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Hi, Ashita - well, you certainly have me guessing on just who this is. Could be Ethan; could be someone else that Justin met before that we don't know about from the show (?), or someone you will include in the story who is unfamiliar to us.  A different tone from the other chapters, certainly, but I like angst mixed in with some romance/humor, so I still enjoyed this part with the intrigue.  I always like reading how others view the boys together.  Of course, this one is obviously jealous and seething with anger over what he perceives as some injustice to him.  It will be interesting to see how this progresses.

And noticed this sentence:  "Sunbeam would be a year old then and he'd either feel better about leaving for a couple of days, or they could bring her with them."  Is that a clue, perhaps? ;)  You've been such a tease about not revealing the gender!  I love their name for him/her, BTW! 

Thanks again for such a wonderful story!  ~Kim

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 07:54 AM · On: February 1 (Part Two)

Marvelous...thanks.



Author's Response:

And thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 11:26 PM · On: January 19

Bravo to firecracker Justin!

To outwasp Lindsay and warn of the family in one go? Big bravo.

And Brian's final remark? The best!!

XOXO

MeMa



Author's Response:

She really needed it. Although, I doubt she will slink away just yet.

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 10:21 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

I think it's that boy Justin meet at Daphne party took his cherry.

So Justin is thinking they are having a Girl?? Interesting play there. Way to keep everyone  guessing  💖



Author's Response:

He may be having a girl, and he may not. Remember, just was convinced for 4 months that he was having a girl, so it could just have been a slip of the tongue. As for our stalker, we'll have to see how it pans out.

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 09:37 PM · On: January 16

"But I never loved Lindsay the way I love you". 

This sentence made my heart skip a beat. Gorgeous!!!

Poor Justin for being so hovered over by everybody. The next 5 months won't be easy for him for the hovering will only get worse I guess. 

Michael should learn to mind his own business and stay away from Kinnetik. Cynthia is just itching to give him a beating he will feel for a long time.

And the entire staff "listening in" on Brian and Justin's antics? Hilarious!!

I'm getting so addicted to this amazing and well written story.

THank you for sharing this work with us readers.

XOXO

MeMa



Author's Response:

Thanks! I got all gooey inside wriing it. The hovering is the worst and yes, I it getting worse before it gets better. And Michael just needs to be dropped kicked out the door. Soon...oh please soon. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 09:23 PM · On: January 27

Emmett is a really good friend to them both and he will do a brilliant job arranging the shower for them. I loved Brisn here as well truly perfect and funny. 



Author's Response:

We all need a friend like Em; he is the best. :) And Brian, making his Sunshine squirm as always.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 06:23 PM · On: January 26

That was such a sweet moment between them and you can feel the love Brian has for Justin jump off the page. 

 

Oh oh boy that video was unreal and I think that Brian is gonna bust a head over it. I can’t blame Gus for being wary of him seeing it. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Brian was not too happy to learn about it that's for sure. He's definitely going to be on the warpath once he tracks Michael down. And sweet Brian and Justin moments make my world go 'round.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 05:54 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Think the chapter went well.  Don't like Justin having another "stalker", but someone so beautiful is bound to attract the crazies.  And, a little cliffhanger keeps the reader interested.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was having fits with it as getting into the mind set was difficult.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 05:33 PM · On: January 25

Oh deary me, Brian found them and Queened out. Justin knew this would happen. I think Justin will be sorry he didn’t go shopping because lord k it’s ehat Brian will come back with it. At least Justin grabbed Em. 

 

Lol this made me smile thank you x



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin didn't think that one out too well. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 03:02 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Hmmmm.... who was that...brandon...or ethen or....someone else.....damn the mystrey...lovely update.



Author's Response:

The mystery is part of the fun though! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 02:55 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

I knew it!! Is that bastard Ethan!! ( who in real life i always thought Fab Filippo was a cute actor and he now looks even better with age, love Italian nice looking men) he is greatly delusional if he thinks Justin wants him! Can't wait for Brian to put the smack down on him too!

Author's Response:

I guess we'll have to see how this pans out; but I will say, that the stalker, whoever he is, definitely has no chance whatsoever with Justin.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 12:30 PM · On: BONUS! (January 24)

OMG I do need a fan down after that. Brian and a Justin sure make a hot couple don’t they. They really was a home coming to remember wow wee. 

 

Fantastic work xx



Author's Response:

Seriously, if that was the welcome home I'd recieve, I would definitely do the same as Justin...

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 09:18 AM · On: February 1 (Part One)

OMG is Ethan following them? He did not understand his lesson, I hope he will not hurt Justin or Sunbeam in his madness!

Author's Response:

I don't think the stalker followed them there, but more like it was an unexpected surprise that they showed up in the same place.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 08:37 AM · On: January 24

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 best chapter ever. I loved how Justin cane back at whiny Michael and not killed him lol. Even better though Daphne she rocked that was incredible she is a ninja tbat girl lol



Author's Response:

Daphne rocks! There is not enough Daphne in the series. One of the best, but most underutilzed characters.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 10:16 PM · On: January 23

Pooor Blake, I can imagine how much the poor guy needs sleep and needs that break and alone time no matter how much he loves Luc. Justin is so funny as well over his clothes and not wanting to go shopping with a Brian. I can’t wait to see if he finds out where the clothes Blake gave him come from lol

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Babies are so hard on their parents those first few weeks. I feel so bad for Blake. And Justin...Drama Princess extraordinaire. Brian is so not going to be happy.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 07:36 PM · On: January 22

Lol who would name their child that Lordy that poor kid doesn’t stand a chance. The book made me laugh and the texts messages where brilliant. I could hear Brian and Justin reading these. Perfect. 



Author's Response:

I can't imagine naming a child Adelbert. I honestly dont even know if it's still used today. I did a serach for odd names and that was one that came up. That poor kid. And Jen just wants to make sure they are prepared.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 03:28 PM · On: January 31

Geezz with all that going on I Want To Be there for the wend lol!!!!
I want to go to All the festivities Right Now!
Dang You!!!!

Author's Response:

Doesn't that sound like fun? I want to go too. Well, Brian and Justin will just have to have fun for us.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 01:38 PM · On: January 31

Great chapter.  Have been to Geneva on the lake.  A unique town and just beautfiul.



Author's Response:

Have you? That's awesome! I have to admit, being on the west coast, I haven't been there, but I was looking up bed and breakfasts near Pittsburgh with certain amenities and that one came up. I loved what I saw of the area online.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 01:24 PM · On: January 31

What a lovely, romantic chapter!  That all sounds wonderful.  Lucky Justin to have such a thoughtful hubby. Thank you for another very enjoyable chapter. 😊 Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks! Gotta love a Brian that can plan out the perfect campaign; especially when Justin is the audience.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 09:33 AM · On: January 31

I love how Brian wraps a romantic weekend away in the guise of a working weekend. We know Brian would have just passed this off except he knows Justin deserves it

Author's Response:

Right? He's so transparent. If he didn't want to be there, he would have totally found a way to get out of it.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 08:23 AM · On: January 31

Brian so romantic ! I like his surprise !

Author's Response:

Thanks! Justin is a lucky, lucky boy!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 07:48 AM · On: January 31

Aww...beautiful surprise.



Author's Response:

I think Justin will be happy and reward Brian for this. So it's a win-win situation. :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2018 04:39 AM · On: January 30

Love the B&J together time.  Can't wait to see what name they chose.  Another great chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

I can't either. Just so long as it isn't Adelbert...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 08:53 PM · On: January 30

Wow so much happening in this chapter. Brian is pushing Justin and he now has technically cheated on Alex as he is his boyfriend. Justin has changed so much from his true self not drawing and then changing his hair colour, but he is reaslising that with Alex that’s not love that’s control.

Author's Response:

I don't think this is meant for me? I'll delete it in a couple of days, but I just wanted you to know so that you could maybe copy it and post it to the correct one. :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 05:00 PM · On: January 30

Love a happy Brian & Justin. And, you are doing that so well.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 04:02 PM · On: January 3

OMG. I just finished reading 25 days of Smutmass and reviewed, telling you I would love to see more of this. And here it is. 
Read chapters 1 to 3 in one go.  

This is one addictive story you are writing here.

Off to read the rest.

XOXO

MeMa



Author's Response:

Sorry I missed this review; I really need to look through the chapters for ones I've missed. And thanks! I'm glad you enjoying it!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 03:05 PM · On: January 21

OMG I loved this interaction between Brian and Debbie it warmed my heart so much. Brian needs a mother’s love so much and he has it in he. She has right, he does look after Justin very well. 

 

Brilliant work xx



Author's Response:

I loved this moment too. It wasn't even planned, which was the best part. It just happened, surprising even me. :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 02:52 PM · On: January 20

The stress I’m sure is huge even making a list for the family and friends of gifts. Brian is right Justin will need the help and support. There is nothing wrong with and I love that he loves Justin so much xx



Author's Response:

It really is. I remembering doing a wedding registry and God, that was such a pain in the ass. I feel for Justin; especially given he has to not only make sure to list things affordable for his friends and family, but also deal with Brian's queening out over the same items.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 12:21 PM · On: January 29

Hi, Ashita!  I love how your sex scenes are so erotic; you write those so well. I love the idea of keeping track of Justin's progress with Gus's project. Thanks again for a very enjoyable chapter! ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it and the project came to me when I was looking up something on You Tube and saw a similar video. I though it would be a cute way to have Gus invovled. :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 11:02 AM · On: January 19

I soooo loved this , I was cheering GO JUSTIN all the way through this. This was coming for a long time and I think all that needed to be let out or the poor guy was gonna explode. Lol now I can’t get the image outta my head if Lindsey with a dick 🤣🤣🤣



Author's Response:

Yeah, I really didn't need that visual; thanks a lot Justin! ;) It was definitely a long time in the making and Justin just finally cracked.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 10:29 AM · On: January 18

Brian, Brian, Brian don’t you know you never get between Justin and his coffee that is lie getting between a mamma bear and her cub. However I do agree on your worry over the caffeine. 

 

Lol this was brilliant x



Author's Response:

Yeah, very bad idea there. Never get between a person and their only source of caffeine. And it is a concern while pregnant, but Justin is keeping well with in the limit of whathe can safely consume.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 10:02 AM · On: January 17

Lol oh Justin you are so cute. Sneaking around for your Twinkies and cakes. I love that Brian was on to him and what will he come up with to stop him from eating them. 

 

Loved yhis thabk Hank you for writing it x



Author's Response:

Brian should just give up this pipe dream. Nothing will keep Justin away from his Twinkies.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 09:15 AM · On: January 30

So romantic..very good writting.

Thanks a ton for the update...xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 08:41 AM · On: January 16

Omg I hope Justin is actually ok, I can imagine how scared Brian was in that moment. Michael, he really has no concept of what is the right thing to do. I fear for the outcome after this. 

 

Excellent work xx



Author's Response:

In this instance, Justin really did just stand up too fast. With the changes in your circulatory system during pregnancy, it is quite common for your blood pressure to fluctuate and, in this case, drop, leaving you to feel dizzy or lightheaded.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 08:22 AM · On: January 15

Lol that was brilliant, a horny Justin is a very funny Justin. I loved that Brian was surprised by it and at how Justin rescheduled his appointment just to have sex. I think Brian better prepare for more of this lol. 

 

Thank you you for making me laugh first thing in the morning xx



Author's Response:

When Justin wants something, nothing will stand in his way. :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 08:03 AM · On: January 13 (Part Two)

I cannot blame Justin for getting annoyed, I know they mean well but hovering people can make you think things you’d never do. I’m so glad Brian arrived home when he did because Justin may have blown his top if he hadn’t. 

 

Brillliant work x



Author's Response:

Yes; they really mean well, but they are going about it in all the wrong ways. Justin is not someone who will put up with others telling him how to live his life as proven over and over again in the series. They really should have known that trying to manuever him into doing things their way was going to fail.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 03:30 AM · On: January 29

Good choice for Leo's wife and so nice to have such a different, loving Brian.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I love Helen Mirren. So much class; and she just seemed the perfect foil for the actor that played Leo, whose name I can't remember at the moment. And Brian, always there for his Sunshine.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:18 PM · On: January 13 (Part One)

Grrrrr Joan really pisses me off and wow I wanted to bitch slap her for talking to Brian like that. No mother should ever do that it’s not human and it’s not heart or motherly. 

 

Michael better run because Brian will be after you. 



Author's Response:

Joan really should not throw stones; she is a horrible person, and I beleive that there is a special place in hell just waiting for her.

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:07 PM · On: January 29

The was definitely the fireyest, most passionate, sexiest thing ever!!! AMAZEBALLS!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:05 PM · On: January 12

OMG, who is that and what are they going to do. I am so worried now 😱



Author's Response:

That is the question on everyone's mind; hopefully they will stay away and nothing will happen to our lovely boys.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 08:19 PM · On: January 11

That’s really wonderful Justin doing the artwork himself, it’s a good feeling I bet to be able to do that for your child. I can understand Brian’s concerns I would be as well just in case some harm comes. 

 

I hops Brian gets to feel that ripple soon be amazing and such a bonding moment I bet. 

 

Wonderful work 



Author's Response:

I can't imagine Justin not doing the work; and Brian is right to worry as there are some real potential dangers when it comes to painting while you're pregnant. Which is why I researched it to find the best possible tools and suggestions if you're planning to do it yourself. Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 06:01 PM · On: January 10

You are making me fall more and more in love with these guys. Lol poor Ted he is a hover parent and poor Luc I suspect will have him as a helicopter one as he grows up. 

 

Bruan is so so good to Hustin and I hope he gets to feel that as well soon. 

 

Beautiful work x



Author's Response:

Thanks! I feel for Ted. It's a very damned if you do, damned if you don't situation. Hopefully once Luc's sleeping pattern's even out a bit, they will get some sleep and be less annoyed with each other.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 10:29 AM · On: January 9

Oh wow happy tears just what I needed today do thank you for that. I loved that visit to the hospital and seeing them interact in such a sweet and loving way. It’s how it’s meant to be in that situatio. It should fun and happy and one to remember for a lifetime. Lol I was hoping they would be told they were having twins or triplets lol or quads could you imagine Briana face lol. 

 

I really cannot thank you enough for this beautiful chapter, it had such feeling in it 💕



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it and that it made you smile, even if it also made you tear up a bit. I love sweet moments between these two as they were so rare in canon. I suppose I should stick closer to canon, but this is my universe and in it, Brian has grown up quite a bit since the end of Season five.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:52 AM · On: January 29

Awww....never a dull moment in lives of Britin...that was so beautifully written.

Thanks for the lovely update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) Brian and Justin definitley make life interesting for each other. :)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:40 AM · On: January 28

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:31 AM · On: January 7

Poor Gus and Jenny, no child should have to put up with thatzm. I hope Gus gets to go live with Justin and Brian. I had to laugh at the reaction of Gus after tasting that food and Justin just causally saying what’s wrong with the very odd combination lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, especially given everything that Brian went through in his childhood, and the fact that he gave up his rights because he wanted Gus to be raised in a loving, stable home. I don't see Brian being very happy with what's happening in Muncherville. Justin and his food cravings are far too much fun.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:28 AM · On: January 27

Awesome...brandon where the hell he come from.?? 

He is after our sunshine..better watch out Britin.

P.s -loved the invitation card and the cake..perfect.



Author's Response:

Brandon is like a bad smell, he lingers for far longer than he's wanted. But Brian will protect his Sunshine. Weren't those cute. I looked up gender-neutral shower ideas and the invitation was one of the first things I saw. It was so perfect and just lead the way for the rest of the shower.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:17 AM · On: January 26

Opppppsssss BUSTED...lols



Author's Response:

Yup! Justin should really know better than to try and hide things from Brian. He will never win that game.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 09:14 AM · On: January 4 (Part Four)

Awe Blake’s baby sounds so cute and the name well the poor child lol . The guys are so funny the way they were talking about the choice and Brian making them gross out with the turkey baster comment lol. 

 

I can not wait to see how Justin’s pregnancy goes and how Brian is with it. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I would have gone for something else, but I asked my betas for names and that's what they chose. LOL! Ah, Brian...that really was TMI. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 07:23 AM · On: January 29

This shows how much hurt words can inflict. Justin is beautiful but Mikey’s words at a time Justin feels uncertain were taking root. However Brian has them back on track together

Author's Response:

They definitely can. And Justin is typically very self-assured, but Mikey also knows where to hit him for the maximum hurt. That little weasel... But as always Rage was there to save the day.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 06:11 AM · On: January 29

Brian was so sweet to make Jsutin feel so much better about the chnages to his body.  One more great update.  Bill  



Author's Response:

Poor Justin. He's just had so much lumped onto him in short period of time; plus, when you get to the 'I can't fit into my clothes' phase of pregnancy, that's when the reality of it sets in and you think, 'Oh, fuck; what have I done?' Thankfully, Brian was there to nip it in the bud before it could spiral out of control.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2018 06:06 AM · On: January 28

Loved the interactions with the Browns.  Lucille is a hoot.  Your story just keeps getting better & better.  I love it!!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was a little worried about this chapter as Leo Brown doesn't have enough screen time to really develop a voice. So, when my beta threw that my way when I was trying to figure out what outsider POV I should do, the challenge both intrigued me and made me want to pull out my hair.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 06:49 PM · On: January 4 (Part Three)

Lol omg Justin is just to cute I swear. Brian and the guys are making me chuckle with their chatter about the boys food and I can’t wait to see how Blake gets on.



Author's Response:

Poor Brian has had to face the brunt of Justin's cravings. So food is a touchy subject for him. And pregnant Justin is so much fun to write.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 04:45 PM · On: January 28

Love the Twinkie war!

Author's Response:

Brian is never going to win this! Never! So says Justin. Somehow, I have the feeling brian isn't going to stop however. ;)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 02:47 PM · On: January 28

A really good chapter with something totally different for our "boys".  Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks; I wanted to show a different part of their life. Still baby focused, but to show that there is a life going on outside that.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 01:03 PM · On: January 28

I so love this story, and look forward to each new chapter.  The part about the Twinkles was just too funny! I love the protective Brian, and Justin and Emmett planning the shower from the previous chapter.  Thank you for posting this extremely enjoyable story! ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you and others are enjoying all these little snippets of their life. Brian really needs to give up on the Twinkies, but somehow, I doubt he will. Protective Brian is so much fun, and we'll see more on the shower later since it was interupted by the asshole. Pardon my language. Thanks as always!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2018 09:48 AM · On: January 28

The two couple are a stunning team ! I love this chapter !

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad that you like it as I was having a hard time writing it from such an undefined POV.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 05:38 PM · On: January 27

It's Brandon!!!! Or It's Ethan!!!!!!
Right??????????????
OR are u gonna be slick and throw in an UNKOWN!!

Author's Response:

Well, that is the question...I guess we'll have to wait and see. Mahahahaha! Yes, I am evil! :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 04:11 PM · On: January 27

What a shower it is going to be.  Another really great chapter.  Just kick Brandon to the curb before I want to kill him.  Ha Ha !!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...oh Brian will keep his Sunshine safe. We likely haven't seen the last of Brandon, but Big Bad will kick his ass if he gets too out of hand. And thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 01:04 PM · On: January 27

Lol living with Brian is never boring one minute he racing to protect ‘cough jealous’ actions and the next he is winding up and teasing everyone

Author's Response:

Brian does keep things interesting! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 12:01 PM · On: January 4 (Part Two)

Oh man in labour all that time and said nothing. I hope it goes ok. I loved the conversations in this one it was like being there listening to them. I loved how they cared and talked about what they were each going through with their partners. 



Author's Response:

I had a friend who did that once; totally nuts. And I love a good, strong Ted and Brian friendship; followed by a stron Jsutin and Em and a Brian and Em friendship. I wish we saw more of that in the show and less focus on Mikey.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 11:41 AM · On: January 4 (Part One)

Lol omg this was just to funny. I needed this, this morning as I wasn’t feeling well and needed a cheer up. That food made me want to throw up my lord the mixtures they came up with made me shiver, I am on Brian’s side here. These guys really did cheer me up so I thank you for that so much. I cannot wait to see more xx



Author's Response:

Yeah, their eating habits are enough to scare anyone. And funnily enough, they are all based on actual combinations I found on various websites. And they weren't even the worst of them. I'm glad it made you smile though. :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 10:20 PM · On: January 26

"WHACHA TALKIN BOUT WiILLIS???"Y
Came to mind and would of been my immediate response LoL ! :)
So love this!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah, Brian was none to pleased to have been kept out of the loop. Thanks!

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