Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 04:13 AM · On: March 23 (Part One)

"Ok I'm need both fighters to go their respective corners in the ring and Chill the Fu@k out!!!! " And when the bell rings come out Loving!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Seriously. These boys and their tempers will be the death of me. But now that everything is out in the open, they can finally get to the healing and making up parts. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 08:49 AM · On: March 23 (Part One)

That's a good explanation and now it's Justin who slams the door! As they are both right in their way I hope there will be a real reconciliation LOL Lindsay is really rotten in your story, I hope she will not get up with everyone against her, Melanie has took things in hand. I also like as Drew knows Emmett well. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

They'll get there. This is yet another of those conversations that had to happen; and it was never going to be an easy one. Justin is just to passionate and hot-headed to sit back and say, 'That's okay, honey; I understand why you kept this from me.' Sort of like Brian and his reaction to the Lindsay and Simon situation... They are both human and thus flawed; if they'd handled this with sweet words and understanding, it wouldn't be Brian and Justin, it would be the Stepford version of them, and ick! No thanks! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2018 09:11 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part Two)

It's good ! Jennifer talked to Justin and Brian came home safe! So waiting for their talk on the morning.I love the children they give their full support to Justin. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Justin really needed that talking to; it's so easy to get wrapped up in your own perspective that you forget to look at it from the other person'e view. Jen telling him to consider how he would feel if the roles were reversed brought to light the fact that Justin woulnd't have handled it any better than Brian did. And it begins to foster an understanding between the two of them. This needed to happen. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2018 07:30 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part Two)

My stomach went in knots reading this as the tension jumped off the page. I loved the kids trying to cheer Justin up even if they didn’t know the reason why Justin was upset. Jennifer is right he should have told him but we all do things we think is best for some people that turns out to the wrong decision. I’m glad Brian came home and I do hope all will be ok. 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Sorry? LOL! Actually, I'm not sorry. ;) It was meant to be a tense situation. Those kids are amazing, and very thoughtful. Hopefully they will do the same for Brian at a later date. And Jen did good, pointing out Justin's culpability in this siuation. He really should have come clean long ago no matter his intentions. After all, you know the saying of good intentions... Brian was always going to come home as you'll soon see. He loves his Sunshine too much to stay away no matter how much Justin may have pissed him off. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2018 04:00 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part Two)

Glad that Jennifer told Justin the truth and that Brian came home safe & sound.  Hope their talk clears the air.



Author's Response:

Justin needed a few truths pointed out to him by someone who has been there and can easily relate to what Brian's feeling. Hopefully this new perspective will open Justin's eyes to just how hurt and angry Brian is feeling and they can work together from this point on. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2018 06:42 PM · On: The Aftermath (Part Two)

Wow I hadn’t come from Jen’s perspective either that was an interesting slant on the whole thing. I just thought everyone would have championed Justin against the viper I hadn’t factored the trust element at all.

Author's Response:

I know that we all want to rally around and protect Justin; and that's important in this time period. But Justin needed to face the fact that he was in the wrong, and who better to point it out than Mom? As with most people, we tend to focus on our hurt and our point of view, rarely considering others until they are pointed out to this. As Jen said, Brian is justifiably angry; his husband kept a pretty important secret from him for three years, and seemed to have every intention of keeping it from him still. That had to have hurt. I know that if I were in Brian's shoes, I would be so pissed at Justin, and extremely hurt that Justin hadn't trusted me to have his back. Justin needed to see that. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 10:46 PM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

It was perfect because this is the way Brian deals with drama and to make him all stepford would have ruined the credibility of the story

Author's Response:

I would so hate a stepford Brian; I shudder at the thought. Besides, this was more in line with the way he's handled things for most of his life - avoidance - and habits are hard to break. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 08:43 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

Chapter very powerful and emotional I understand that Brian goes away, times it's best to calm down sometimes it's worse! I love Emmett he's probably one of the few to know Brian well and he wants to protect Justin. Super chapter I love this story, thank you for being there every day!

Author's Response:

Brian needed to walk away at that point; with the direction that the argument was heading, it would have gotten hurtful and they might have said things that they couldn't take back. Better to come back at it with a cooler head. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 07:40 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

What an incredible chapter, such powerful emotions from al. All of the emotions are understandable because people who go through this are confused as to how to handle them. You handled writing this so perfectly to show each persons responses. I LOVED Emmett in this his strong side and the fact Brian found out it was Em’s handy work that caused Sap those bruises. 

 

You should be so so proud of yourself x



Author's Response:

It was an emotional chapter; and we'll still have a few more emotional chapters to go as the boys sort through everything and work their troubles out. And as always Em turns out to be my favorite character outside Brian and Justin. I just love him to pieces. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 07:04 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

Brian and Justin are both stubborn highly intelligent proud men. It figures they'd clash about this and I actually understand why Brian walked away. I have walked away from fights like this in my life and sometimes it helps sometimes it makes it worse. I look forward to seeing them work this out and come out stronger together because of all of this. I am also anxiously awaiting the rest of the fall out from this for Linds Blake is the perfect one to get that started on the Avenue. 

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Brian was right to walk away in this instance; they were veering away from the topic and heading into territory that could have been very hurtful, and wasn't really about the situation at hand, but potential reprecussions that hadn't come into being. At that point, it's better to get out of the argument until they could come back with a cooler head. As for Lindsay's comeuppanc; well it might be a few chapters yet as we deal with the boys, but it's coming. :) Thanks for reading! :)

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2018 04:14 AM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

I liked this chapter.  B&J's trouble always started when they weren't honest with each other.  Loved the Emmett/Sap story.  Love this story!!!  Bill

 



Author's Response:

They do; and sadly, the reveals aren't over yet, so I expect a couple more bumps in the road yet. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2018 01:47 PM · On: The Aftermath (Part One)

Glad Em talked to Brian and made him come to his senses. I expected Brian to be pissed and leave I wouldn't want it to be an easy fix right away lol When you have fights in relationships one person always don't want to talk about it when their in the heat of it you have to cool down first.

Author's Response:

Em definitely pointed out a few homw truths; but let's not forget Justin's part in this. Brian is justified in his anger and hurt. Brian was right to walk away when he did before it could get so much more worse for the two because of the hurful things they might have said in the heat of the moment. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2018 09:46 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

Oh my. I didn't think anything would ever better than the last chapter. This is so much better I am so happy Brian and everyone saw and heard all of that. I feel for Brian and Mel for the pain of what they heard but I know in the long run it's for the best. I adore Daphne who is just the best Bestie ever IMO and I love her reaction most lol. I am concerned for Justin with the chat he and Brian will now be having but I know they will get thru all of this crap together.

I do hope you are feeling better!! Looking forward to more!!

WELL DONE!!

:)

 



Author's Response:

well, I'm glad to know that the reveal lived up to the intial showdown. It's always hard to gauge how much to repeat and what to leave out for the other characters introspection; so, glad that I found the right balance. The upcoming chat...yeah, that could get bumpy; but I'm sure that they will work things out in the end. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:46 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

OMG I CANT BELIEVE HOW THAY ALL CAME OUT. Good for Justin, but oh my goodness Brian. You could just feel his heart breaking with all of the new realizations. Awesome job!!! Hurry give us more!!!!



Author's Response:

Things certainly heated up there; hopefully all will be well in the end. Except for Lindsay; she can jump off a cliff for all I care. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:41 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

First off I hope that you are ok now and I am so very sorry you had to go through all of that. Know that we are here for you xox

 

Wow just wow that absolutely took my breath away several times. The power in every word rang out as I read along. Lindsey is a bitch of all bitches isn’t she. She has a venom inside her that she will try and bite everyone with who is is jealous of or wants power over. She didn’t expect the antidote to be Justin Tayore did she. Wow did he work her over and spit her out. That was perfect every single word.

 

my heart broke for Brian he is so confused and I’m sure that the hurt he is feeling will go once he sits with Justin and hears him out. I do think the hurt over Lindey will be harder.

 

thank you for this out of this world chapter xx



Author's Response:

I'm doing much better, thank you! :) Yes, this particular Lindsay is a viper in the nest and boy did she ever show it. it will be her end though, becuase Brian is through playing games and once he has had the chance to overcome his shock, and really process what has happened, I guarantee that will be one unhappy blonde. As for Brian and his Sunshine, things might be a little bumpy, but they'll work it out. They always do. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:33 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

"OMG"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS FU@KING PRICELESS!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was seating on the edge of my seat READING THIS!!!!!!! The house catching on FIRE!!!!! WOULD NOT HAVE MADE ME MOVE!!!!!!!! ( until I was done haha)
BRAVO!!!!!! On this chapter!!! I give you a STANDING Ovation!!!!!! You TRUELY are a gifted writer and I would pay to READ you!!:) and I'm CHEAP!!
Seariously though, Thank You. I needed that confrontation,It was Perfect! Glad EVERYONE got
to see it!!!
Can't wait for the next Chapter!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! I laughed throughout this entire review! I loved it! Thanks! Although, please do promise me that if the house is burning down, you will at least take the computer with you and get out if you can't put the story down. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 02:04 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

Wow how Brian can hold back and not explode Lyndsay? Justin and he have so much to talk about Sap it was a bit light in the TV show Thanks for the update, I hope you are better.

Author's Response:

I think Brian was still in shock. I doubt that Lindsay will be very happy once he has had a chance to process things. And the Sap story line was poorly executed in the show. It had so much potential to address serious issue and they glossed over it. Not cool. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 12:10 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

Hi, Ashita!  I hope you're feeling a lot better now.  As I said before, I admire how you can keep writing on such a regular schedule, and this is currently one of my favorites, so I look forward to each chapter. :)  Well, we got the Lindsay smackdown most of us, at least, were hoping for!  I was expecting that Brian being Brian would have rigged up some sort of surveillance system for the house, and what an eye-opener that was for all of them. Now, however, Justin has a lot of explaining to do with Brian as well. 

I always wished they had covered what had happened at Sap's party, but, as usual, they quickly glossed over that on the show, along with a myriad of other subjects/plots, and moved onto the next one. So, I'm glad that you covered that.  I suspect it's going to be a somewhat tense conversation coming up now. 

BTW, I LOVED your feisty Daphne here.  She was like a tigress with her claws out, ready to rip Lindsay to shreds!  I always loved her character on the show.

Thank you again for posting this very entertaining story on here!  Loving it!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Daphne was so ready to kick her ass; damn Liam for stopping her.

I really didn't like the way they handled the Sap party plot point. Because Justin was druggd against his will and violated at the very least, even if he managed to get away before getting raped. And then they just went on their merry way as if there would be no reprecussions for that. He didn't even have nightmares? Sorry, but I hae a tough time believing that Justin, a port-bashing Justin at that, just walked away from that without feeling a thing? And Brian, who is well aware of what a scum bag Sap is, doesn't even question the abruptness of Justin quitting? There had to have been at least rumors of what happened at those parties. It was really poorly handled.

And the conversation between the boys, that will be fun...not. Hopefully they will work things out though. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 10:33 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

How is Lindsay still alive. Oh My. 



Author's Response:

How indeed? Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 04:50 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)

I hope Brian isn't too upset.  Justin should have been more honest with him.  They always seem to get into trouble when they try to "protect" each other.  Hope you are feeling better, another great chapter!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm doing much better, thank you! And yes, Justin really should have come clean; but I can also see where he would want to eep it to himself since it would end up hurting Brian a great deal to know that Lindsay did this. Rock meet hard place. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 01:13 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Love reading this again.  Justin finally took Lindsay on and let her have it.  Now if Brian or better yet Melanie were listening in it would be icing on the cake.  I am worried though about why she was putting away her cell phone when he first found her?



Author's Response:

It needed to be done; now we get to see what happens in the fall out.  Thanks for reading! :)

 

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2018 11:37 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Oh wow this was awesome!! Oh how I wish this was canon!! I have hated Lindsay for pushing New York on Justin since the first time I watched the series. This is the perfect follow up to Brian letting Mikey have it. I think this could be my favorite chapter so far and that's amazing to me because so many of thses chapters have been so very very great. Looking forward to more!!

 

WELL DONE!!
:)



Author's Response:

I said this in another review, but it fits here as well. I always hated the way Lindsay totally disregarded everything that Justin said about not wanting to go to New York, pointing out that it wasn't his opportunity of a lifetime. As if, despite not being a working artist herself, she knew best. And then to go behind his back and manipulate Brian with the article, as if he were a child who didn't know his own mind. Ugh. That entire plot point pissed me off because why on Earth would anyone with half a brain run off to New York when they didn't have a degree, they had no job lined up and no real place to land; all because of one successful show and a review by a person they thought was a cunt? It makes no sense; it's the kind of impetuousness that belies Justin's true intellect (which the writers seemed to forget about when it suited them) and goes completely against Brian's belief that there is no glory to being a starving artist. Did the writers completely forget everythingthey'd established about these characters in that last season? Sorry, rant done. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2018 11:19 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

I am very proud of Justin telling Lindsay the truths.I hope Brian was listening outside!!!

Author's Response:

He really needed to get that off his chest; and Brian, as we now know, has a way to listen in... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2018 07:39 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Wow wow wow and around of applause to Justin. I am so proud of him for standing up to Lindsey and telling her some home truths. She really is one horrible person and needs to be told that she isn’t god. I would make her delete those pictures as well. I hope Brian was listening outside so he can add his piece of mind as well. I want Gus to live with them he would have a better life. 

 

Fantastic Work xx



Author's Response:

I always hated the way Lindsay totally disregarded everything that Justin told her about not wanting to go to New York as if she knew best; last I looked she worked in a gallery, and wasn't a working artist herself. And then to go behind his back and manipulate Brian, as if he were a child who didn't know his own mind. Ugh. That entire plot point pissed me off because why on Earth would anyone with half a brainrun off to New York with no degree, no job lined up and no real place to land based on one show and one review? It makes no sense; it's the kind of impetuousness that belies Justin's intellect (1500 on his SAT's, that's all I'm saying) and goes completely against Brian's belief that there is no glory in being a starving artist. Did the writers completely forget everything about these characters in that season? Sorry, rant done. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2018 07:00 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Omg wow now that was a major slap down and adored every word! I actually read it twice it was so good

Author's Response:

Justin wasn't about to relent until he had his say. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2018 01:49 AM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Wow Justin really told Lindsay off and she totally deserved it. I enjoyed rreading it, Thanks!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I do so love to give Lindsay or Michael a much needed bitch slap... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 10:03 PM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Well! That was quite a comeuppance from our feisty blond!  I always thought that Lindsay was jealous of Justin's artistic talent on the show, and might have had more than Justin's interests at heart when she urged him to go to NYC.

I'm like the others - I hope somehow that Brian and the others overheard what was said. My only concern is that Justin has become so riled up and angry that it might have negative repercussions for his health and that of the baby, similar to what happened before.  I hope not! But I love angst mixed in with a story, so I can't wait to see where you go with this. I continue to love the way you have portrayed the two men and how they express their love for each other.  Even Brian knowing when Justin needed a break, and massaging his belly in the previous chapter. Still enjoying your story very much!Thank you for posting this on here. ~Kim



Author's Response:

It's been a fun journey so far; and even when I have things planned out, the boys still find ways to surprise even me. I do agree with Lindsay being jealous of Justin's talent, especially towards the end. And I always hated the way she manipulated Brian into forcing Justin to go; there was just something fishy about the way she kept pushing it. Brian will have his moment too as we well know. And, yes, Justin's health is a remaining issue. I do hope that it won't have an adverse affect on him. So much happening all in one day... Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 03:10 PM · On: March 22 (Part Four)

Please!!!!Please Please ! Tell me Brian heard that!!!!
Yes!!!! Tell that Bitch Off!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Boy, Justin really handed her ass to her didn't he? As for brian, well, I guess we now know how that turned out. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Oz_ondi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 12:26 PM · On: January 1

Ch 86-Mch 22 part 4

Please, please, please tell me the motion sensor camera in the nursery caught every word spoken by Justin & Lindsay and people were watching it  all unfold while being transmitted to the media room like the unveiling of the nursery.

That was one mighty smack-down a lot time coming. Yay for Justin, hopefully Brian was watching it all unfold on camera. Bound to be some serious repercussions going to come out of that conversation.!



Author's Response:

Oh, I missed this review. I'm sorry! As you might have relized by now, yes everything was caught on camera for all to see, and they were indeed watching. Lindsay got away with nothing. And now, she will have to pay her dues. Thanks for reading! :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 08:23 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

Another funny and emotional chapter! I Lucile give to Brian the designer bag good idea !!

Brian shows Justin the nursery and then Juatin gives Brian his daddy gift. It's intense ! Thank you !

Author's Response:

Lucille had to get it for Brian; she knew that he'd love it and everyone forgets about poor Dad in the gift giving, so she wanted to remember him in a small way. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 07:50 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

Oh man I’m crying like Justin over how beautiful and funny and perfect this chapter is. I loved the idea of keeping all the ribbons to make a hat and the book to note the presents and who gave them to people. Lol I love that Lucile got Brian the designer bag that was brilliant. 

 

What nade me smile even more was the moment when Brian showed Justin the nursery that touched my heart so much. Then Juatin giving Brian his daddy gift. 

 

You did an amazing and beautiful job with this chapter xox



Author's Response:

I had fun with this chapter if you couldn't tell by the way it got away from me. Those boys just wouldn't stop bantering and let me get on with the chapter. :) But it was well worth it I think. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 04:26 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

So much emotion in this chapter.  Traditions from the past and new traditions started.  really a wonderful chapter!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you lied it! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 03:32 PM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

What a day.  I only hope that Justin doesn't go into labor.  At least he has pretty much everything he needs.  The only thing he doesn't need is for his stalker to show up.



Author's Response:

Well, so far it's only been Braxton Hicks contractions, but we'll see. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 08:45 AM · On: March 22 (Part Two)

Everything looks so good, I would like to be there!!

Author's Response:

So would I! *sigh* Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 06:27 AM · On: March 22 (Part One)

The first time parents get peed on. For boys it's normally a typical occurence, but girls girls there is normally a story behind it. Or the first time they get shit bombed by the baby. Or projectile vomited on. Sorry I'm a nurse, body fluids are an everyday entertainment. 



Author's Response:

LOL! I haven't seen either of those last two suggestions. And my mother is a nurse, so I understand the whole morbid or body fluid humor thing. I remember this one time when my mother brought home her leftovers from lunch in a biohazard bag because she couldn't find anything else to put it in; and I just rmember walking into the kitchen, opening the fridge and staring at it for a minute before closing the door and walking away because I just didn't want to know. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2018 09:52 AM · On: March 22 (Part Two)

Damn Brian is on a roll tearing into Mikey and then letting Linds have it too!! Loved every word he said to her. I wish she'd take a long long walk off a short bridge. Loved the altenating POV's for these two chapters I love seeing events from each of their eyes. Already looking forward to more!

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Oh, we haven't even begun to see what happens to Lindsay; as well you know now. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 07:16 PM · On: March 22 (Part Two)

Wonder what Deb & Jen will say when they see their nursery work changed.  Anoter fun chapter, loved devious Brian getting rid of the twinkies.  Bill



Author's Response:

They'll likely be unhappy until Brian pointedly reminds them that it's not their nursery; and then Denb will still be all huffy and Jen slightly abashed. Or, at least that's how I imagine them acting. I suppose we'll have to wait and see. And Brian to get rid of the Twinkies. Somehow, I have a feeling that will come back and bite him on the ass. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 04:14 PM · On: March 22 (Part Two)

Brian is so good in this , I LOVED LOVED LOVED how he handled Lindsay. She needs taking down s notch or two with her entitlement attitude. Brian doing all of that fodxJuatin even handling the mom brigade is amazing. Justin is going to be so happy and so proud of him. Lol omg the stories of Justin as a kind cracks me up and reminds me of a story I can’t mention here if my buster when she was younger.  

 

Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

Another Lindsay smack down was definitely needed; and the boys aren't through with her yet... Brian must have learned patience over the years, because I know that if I had been in his place, as soon as I saw them, I would been, "Oh, no you don't. Go home! This is MY project." It was sweet of him to put up with their antics for Justin's sake. Kid sotries are the best! :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 03:57 PM · On: March 22 (Part One)

This chapter was so amazing I don’t know where to start. Emmett was brilliant in the way he organized the party and held it. The games made me laugh so much the way Deb handled the baby doll and the reactions of people to it. When they said it explains a lot about Micheal I laughed so hard I swear. All of those games we’re amazing and I might note them for the future lol. Justin later face when his mother was telling stories of his childhood was perfect and funny the things kids can say can leave you covering your face lol. As for suggestions of baby firsts, the first time they grab your finger and look in to your eye and smile. The first time they realize they can make noise and get a reaction out of you. The first time they pee in your face when changing them. The first time they throw up on a stranger. The first time you change their diaper and have to clean the area of the embilicolcird and worry if you are doing it right. The first time they sleep in their own room. 

 

Hope they were ok. Thank you so much for this amazing chapter xx



Author's Response:

Em certainly did them justice. :) And while I love Deb, and don't think she'd really handle baby Michael that way, I couldn't resist a jok at her expense, and any time I get to bash Michael is a plus. The games were all ones I would have liked to have seen at a shower. It certainly would have been much more fun than just memory games and list matching. And Jen had far too much teasing Justin. I think mother's live for this kind of thing. Thanks for the firsts. I'll jot them down. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 12:02 PM · On: March 22 (Part One)

Looks like not only Emmett got him back, his mom did as well.



Author's Response:

LOL! Em did get a little of his own back. And I'm pretty sure that mom's live for embarrassing their children. At least mine did. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 12:01 PM · On: March 21

It's about time somebody else besides Brian got tortured.  But I fear Emmett will get back at Sunshine.



Author's Response:

Emmett will never be the same; he's seen a whole new side of his Baby. Emmett might have a little fun at Justin's expense, but it won't be too bad. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 11:59 AM · On: March 20

One day Brian is going to have information overload.



Author's Response:

Poor Brian...Justin loves to torture him so with those videos. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 10:21 AM · On: March 22 (Part One)

And the baby shower begins and Justin is hungry! Fortunately her husband thinks of everything haha !!

Author's Response:

I can't blame Justin for being hungry. I was salivating just from looking at the pictures; I can imagine how torturous it would be to be sitting there and able to smell all that food. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 05:36 AM · On: March 22 (Part One)

I was forced to attend one baby shower and it was not as much fun as this one seems to be.  Loved the "Cockporn" story!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

The shower is pretty much my idea of the ideal baby shower if I were to have one, and I didn't have to worry about a budget. But I have to agree; I've been to numerous showers and they are all boring as fuck. Pardon my language, but there really is no other way to describe them. I wanted the boys to have a bit more fun at theirs. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 03:01 AM · On: March 19

At last Deb's got it right.  I hope she can keep her promise, cause Carl will be on her case if she doesn't.



Author's Response:

We can only hope that she's had some sense knocked into her, but the boys are definitely on guard for now. Bad habits are hard to break, and deb has spent years coddling Michael and blaming Brian for all fo his foibles. So, we'll see. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 02:45 AM · On: March 18

Shame if they had video of Blaine shouldn't there be something showing the guy with the wolf on his jacket?



Author's Response:

They were hoping, but again, as with the loft, this guy seemed to know where the cameras were and dodged or avoided them. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 02:33 AM · On: March 16

I wish that Brian had been able to talk to Jennifer more about her getting sick.  I'd also like to hear what it was Brian wanted to say to Deb.  If nothing else I wonder if Ben finally gets a clue.



Author's Response:

I have to cringe here as I meant to write a throw away sentence here about Brian making a note to talk to Jen and ask her to get checked out. But I forgot. *looks sheepish* Let's pretend that Brian said something to her off screen and she took his advice. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 12:49 AM · On: March 15 (Part Two)

Two attempted druggings and Emmett has a piece of info that no one knows yet.



Author's Response:

Things are definitely heating up. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 07:49 PM · On: March 22 (Part One)

lol, back room Todd was at the shower!

Author's Response:

You gotta have Todd show up somewhere unexected just to throw the boys off. it always messes with their world when they realize Todd doesn't live in the backroom. LOL! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 10:33 AM · On: March 21

Oh yes, a lot of things happen in a week! I love the session of videos very funny! They were on the verge of catching the stalker or his accomplice it's frustrating! Thank you for this story being in B and J's daily life is pleasant. I'm waiting for Justin's reaction to Brian's baby shower gift!

Author's Response:

Welcome back! :) I'm glad that enjoyed the vignettes and stay tuned for the gifts, they're coming up soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 02:14 AM · On: March 15 (Part One)

So Blaine was at the gallery and had to leave?  Interesting.  I was hoping to see Lucille take on Michael.



Author's Response:

Blaine was spotted there. Hopefully, we'll find out why soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 01:53 AM · On: March 14

Deb has messed with things for the last time me thinks.  Once Lucille finds out what's upsetting Justin Deb is going to be in for it.



Author's Response:

She definitely needs to stop meddling. It's some what understandable that she'd want to help her child, but there is just a time where you have to let go and let them suffer their own consequences before you end up destroying other relationships you treasure. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 01:47 AM · On: March 21

Really enjoyed ths chapter.  Emmett being scared by a hungry Justin was great.  Still enjoy your story so much, a day to anticipate your updates could be a good thing.  Bill



Author's Response:

Emmett made me laugh; although, I'm pretty sure he exaggerated a little. Just a smidgeon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 01:05 AM · On: March 13

It's sort of scary to know that the stalker was that close to Justin and nobody knew.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's not good at all. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 01:00 AM · On: March 12

That was more informationn then I needed to know and I've given birth twice.



Author's Response:

I feel you; I was watching those videos and had many of the same thoughts that Brian did. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 12:20 AM · On: March 21

Hello, Ashita - OMG, don't apologize for needing extra time to update! I don't know how you do it as is, and every other day is still an amazing updating schedule that I envy.

I still am loving this story very much.  So many things I adore about it:  Emmett's nickname for Brian, Brian's love and protectiveness for Justin, the two boys being married, Justin's Twinkie obsession, Brian's gift to Justin...so many things. 

Thank you so much for posting this on here!  I look forward to each chapter, and can't wait to see where you lead it.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I know that I probably shouldn't, but I feel bad because I set a certain goal for myself with this story, and I can't commit to that goal any longer. When I set the daily updates, I never anticipated the chapters becoming more than around 2000 words. This month blew that out of the water with the 3-5K postings.

As I've said before, Iglad that you're enjoying my little jaunt and I hope that you will continue to do so. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 09:45 PM · On: March 21

Lol poor Emmett I really think he had no clue what he was in for did he. That really really made me laugh though. I do think the present that Justin is doing for Brian is such s wonderful idea and should be done for dads good work there. 

 

I cant wait to see Justin’s reaction to the room now. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

He certainly didn't expect that; for a long time, he thought Brian was joking or exaggerating about Justin's mood swings, but now he knows better. I love the Dad gift; people get so wrapped up in the mother and baby that poor Dad gets left in the dust. It's always nice to show your appreciation for them. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 09:33 PM · On: March 11

So Brian finally got Justin back.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it took him a bit, but he finally got there. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 08:45 PM · On: March 10

Brian is so worried about Justin, he just has to see him for himself in the flesh.



Author's Response:

Sometimes, you just get to the point where the only thing that will reassure you is to see and touch that person. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 07:40 AM · On: March 20

I haven’t commented for awhile sorry I have been busy. Justin is such a brat he knows Brian is so hating this but he is also revelling in his capitulation 😂😂😂😂

Author's Response:

I can understand the usy part; it's been pretty hectic for me as well. I'm glad that you're still enjoying the story though and Justin's antics. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 04:17 AM · On: March 19

We all get frustrated sometimes, RL can be a real bitch sometiimes.  Loved this chapter; Carl & Debbie's conversation and Brian overhearing Deb's honest feeling.  It was all great!!  Bill



Author's Response:

RL is always messing with our fun. :) I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 03:24 AM · On: March 9

Love this Jenny and Justin time.  She is so cute.



Author's Response:

Jenny and Justin time was fun; and it was nice to see Justin and Brian interact with her, since we usually see Gus. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 03:04 AM · On: March 8

Justin didn't have to work very hard to get what he wanted.



Author's Response:

LOL! He never does. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 10:21 PM · On: March 7

We're back to looking for the man in the wolf jacket.  Will this lead turn out to be helpful?



Author's Response:

It is an identifying trait, so those things are helpful in the end. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 10:13 PM · On: March 6

Lucky Deb and Carl and no Mikey to mess it up.



Author's Response:

It was definitely a blessing that Michael wasn't there. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 08:48 PM · On: March 5

No fair.  Exactly what did Lindsay do?



Author's Response:

Oh, well be learning this soon. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 07:38 PM · On: March 4

Nothing like a twinkie parfait for breakfast.



Author's Response:

Only Justin... :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 03:05 PM · On: March 20

That was great, lol I loved Brian's reactions to the videos that made me laugh so much. Justin was funny showing the videos knowing how Brian was going to act. They are so great together and how you are writing them is so good. I love a pregnant Justin. I hope he does cut the cord snd get to hold his baby first, I think Brian deserves that. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Poor Brian and Justin messing with him through the videos. He better watch it though, Brian may be tolerant for now, but eventually he's going to crack and then Justin will get in trouble. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 01:26 PM · On: March 3

Being bombarded with baby names can be frustrating. 



Author's Response:

I imagine that it is. I know I'd get irritated real fast and tell everyone to back off if I were Justin. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 12:37 PM · On: March 2

A look at Brian that you rarely get to see.  Then again Justin in tights is something not seen often.



Author's Response:

I doubt that we'll see it again either; Justin wasn't all that keen on them. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 11:27 AM · On: March 1

I've never been to a party that had so many party favors.



Author's Response:

It would be overkill for me too. But this is Justin and Emmett combined. I think overkill is the only word they would know. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 09:11 AM · On: March 16

GO BRIAN!! And Mikey for the love of God take this hint and just stay gone!! Of course I know it won't happen but a girl can dream right? Lovely couple of chapters glad the show went fairly well and that the boys were safe in the end. 

Well Done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Mikey is a persistent little bastard that just won't go away. I keep trying to write him out of the story, but the asshole just won't go away! But the show itself went well and maybe they might finally get a lead in this case. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 02:33 AM · On: February 28

All that over sushi?  Geez!



Author's Response:

Well, he does have his drama princess moments. LOL! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 02:22 AM · On: February 27

That was one scary dream.  At least it was a dream.



Author's Response:

It was acually based on a dream that I had a few days before. And if it scared the hell out of me, and I'm not pregnant, I can only imagine how someone who is would feel. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 01:03 AM · On: February 26

Feeding Justin is very important.  Touching his baby belly is a no no.  At least Brian doesn't know of his visit to Ben.



Author's Response:

Yes, a hungry Justin is a scary Justin. We need to make sure he is fed at all times. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 05:24 PM · On: March 19

This was brilliant, to get an inner look at Debs emotions and reactions to what I’d houng on while preparing dinner for Brian and Justin. I love Carl talking to her,willing her to understand what she did and is doing and how it’s affecting the boys . The bond showsso cleR eve Brian talks, it really hit my heart big time. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, and hopefully Deb can continue her growth and she can repair the damage she's done to her relationshio with the boys. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 04:58 PM · On: February 25

So we meet the stalker and have more clues.  1.  He doesn't look the same.  2.  He's lost his memories.  But he remembers Justin.  I'm gonna guess Hobbs.



Author's Response:

Hopefully the clues will start to narrow things down. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 04:45 PM · On: February 24

When you think about it, Justin taking the bull by the horns was the best option.  Now sending Mikey to Seattle might not be a good idea.  Too close to Doc Dave if you ask me.



Author's Response:

There is that, if Dr. Dave is still in the area; I honestly hadn't even thought much about him when I decided on the area, but maybe there is something there. We'll have to wait and see. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 11:52 AM · On: March 19

Glad you are back.  This chapter is really showing that Deb finally is starting to realize that even though Michael is her son (and all mothers get that protective streak) she has to start making the right choices if she wants Brian & Justin to be in her life.  Michael is an idiot and it isn't all because of her coddling him.  He just thinks it is right to have everything.  And, thanks for the St. Paddy's day info.  Really had me laughing about the no drinking for Brian.  Getting an Irishman to not drink on St. Patty's Day shows just how much Brian has changed and how much he loves his Sunshine & Sunbeam !!!!  Great ideas and writing. 



Author's Response:

Hopefully Deb will mend her ways before she does irrevokable damage to her relationship with Brian and Justin. I do feel that her heart is in the right place most of the time, but she really does need to pay better attention to some of the things she says and does. And poor Brian, Justin so has him wrapped around his little finger. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 03:55 AM · On: March 18

Since this is fiction I don't think you should woory about actual facts.  A good story is more important and this is a really good story!  Bill



Author's Response:

You're right. I shouldn't get so anal about it all, but sadly, it's the former reporter in me. When you've trained for years to fact check and make sure that your portraying a subject with accuracy, it's really hard to let that go. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2018 01:44 AM · On: February 23

I do so love Justin giving Lindsay a melt down.  Really Mel should have a talk with her. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 10:06 PM · On: March 18

This case could be in law and order it’s so complicated. I feel for Brian, he really is trying so hard to protect Justin and his baby. I fear he may collapse from it all all the stars is not good. I love joe Carl is with him a real father figure type and Tak is great. I am sure that he will solve it, he won’t give up that’s for sure. 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

it really is getting complicated, but hopefully they'll get some info soon. Otherwise Brian might decide to go all Rage on everyone and that would be good. I've really enjoyed developing the relationship between Brian and Carl. It's one of my favorite tropes outside the 'let's make Brian adopted and give him a real family that loves him' trope. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 07:36 PM · On: February 17

This is one of the many chapters I enjoyed reading again.  Justin is not the naive kid he once was.  And I enjoyed the part where Brian comes home to a naked Justin because he's having hot flashes.  So funny.



Author's Response:

Poor Justin; I hate regular hot flashes on the rare occassion that they happen. I can't imagine being pregnant and dealing with them. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 02:58 PM · On: March 18

"Oh Nooooo" " I'm Scared!

Author's Response:

This thing just keeps ratcheting up doesn't it? Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 12:03 PM · On: February 16

At least Brian is not alone and he has a lot of people backing him in protecting Justin and Sunbeam.



Author's Response:

And it's a good thing that he's not alone; no one should be at a time like this. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 09:49 AM · On: March 16

Wow that was a powerful chapter it was great to see Brian’s raw emotions about everything that had happened his worry for them all. I loved Molly humming that tune it was a perfect comedy moment. I would love to see her go shopping with Brian, I think she would actually out shop him lol. 

 

Brians confrontation with Micheal really hit my heart that could not have been easy no matter what. Brian did the right thing in telling all that to him because holding back would have shattered him into a million pieces. 

 

Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

I imagine that coming so close to something like what happening at the gallery has to be nerve-wracking for the both of them. And Molly breaking the tension like that was funny, and they needed the lightheartedness with evderything that was going on. And I really doubt Brian is ready for a shopping trip with Molly. LOL. The confrontation with Michale was hard, but necessary for Brian. Sometimes, it's the only way you can get through to people. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 02:37 AM · On: February 22

When ya gotta have one, you gotta have it.



Author's Response:

Cravings are just one of those things that you can't explain; you've just gotta go with it. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 07:22 PM · On: February 21

Poor Brian.  Nobody is willing to help his trick Justin.



Author's Response:

I don't blame them, really; I wouldn't want to get on Justin's bad side either. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 06:55 PM · On: February 20

Has Ben wised up?  The custom wolf might be a way of tracking our stalker down?



Author's Response:

One would hope he has; but given the way he always let Michael walk all over him, I doubt it. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 03:21 PM · On: March 16

The stalker tried to take out Sunbeam!!!! WTH!!!!Shit just got real!!! "Oh no he didn't "!!! "Where my knife at" !!!!! This dude needs to be caught STAT! Justin better start seriously thinking about the people it could possibly BE from his past!!!!!!

I got a feeling he gna try "TAKEN "and then ah shit we gonna have to call Liam! But I also think he wants to KILL Sunbeam! And that is SO NOT happening RIGHT?!!!!! Cause if that's the case we gna need to call CLINT! Right away!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, this guy is a sick bastard and needs to get taken down asap. And Justin has indeed been trying to think of who it might be from his past, but with facial scarring, and plastic surgery, the stalker's appearance has changed enough that it's not doing anything but giving him the, you seem familiar, but I can't place you vibe. Hopefully something will click soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 03:14 PM · On: March 16

I doubt Mikey will just fade away, he is too delusionalfor that.  I think Brian should have had Jennifer go to a doctor,hope she is OK.  Great update.  Bill



Author's Response:

Agreed. I keep trying to write him out because he annoys me and he just keeps returning despite the fact. I doubt he'll stay away this time either. And oops!? I meant to write a throw away sentence or two about Brian taking Jen aside and asking her to get checked and forgot? Damn it! My apologies. I'll have to note it somewhere. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 09:56 AM · On: March 15 (Part Two)

Oh wow thank god kellie was there to prevent Justin from drinking that as he said what could have happened to the baby if he had. The more this goes on the more tense and complicated the case gets. If it’s not Ethan who I thought it was lol then who is it. I’m getting so nervous for them now. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

It was a lucky thing indeed; not only from the perspective of the baby being harmed by whatever it was, but then there is the added complication that Justin is allergic to a lot of drugs, including some common, over the counter ones. The damage that could have done...

Ahhhh...adn Ethan, everyone's favorite for the stalker. Yeah, sorry about that. I felt he was too obvious, and really far too much of a narcissist to work in that role. I guess we'll have to keep waiting. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 09:38 AM · On: March 15 (Part One)

That is so creepy isn’t it. I can’t blame Brian for being worried and for Emmett to get worried as well in case he somehow helped without knowingly to hurt Justin and Brian. This is getting very very strange and Eathsn that boy makes me itch in a very bad horrid way. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Brian was wise not to drink it; I would never even think of taking an open drink without it being poured or opened in front of me. Too many bad things can happen if you aren't paying attentin. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 01:53 AM · On: February 19

Looks like Justin can count on Yasmeen. 



Author's Response:

Yasmeen definitely has the boys back in this. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 08:04 PM · On: March 15 (Part Two)

Lucky Kellie spotted the attempt to spike Justin's drink with something.  Hope they figure out the stalker before he can do anything.



Author's Response:

He is indeed lucky she spotted it; there are so many things that could have gone wrong had he drank it. And not just with the baby, as things are further complicated by Justin's allergies. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 07:38 PM · On: March 15 (Part One)

Hope they find this guy before he doesn anything to Justin.  Hope Lucille finds Michael!  Another great chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm sure Lucille will put him in his place. :) And the stalker...*sigh* He needs to be tossed in a deep, dark abyss and forgotten when they get his hands on him. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 05:33 PM · On: February 17

Interesting way of heating things up.



Author's Response:

Literally. lol Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 10:46 AM · On: March 14

Poor Justin running all over the place wearing himself out like that then add the stress of something hot to do with Micheal. He did not need that fix he . Lol I love the Browns they make me laugh and I love the tenderness they have for our boys that makes me so happy and I hope that we see lots more of it. I wonder howBrian will take the news about Micheal, I bet h he will blow up. 

 

Brilliant work as always xx



Author's Response:

The Browns are fun to write; and I'm happy that my beta gave me the prompt for adding Leo Brown as an outside POV. It's really turned out well for the story. :) And Michael...ugh. The less said on him the better. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 03:57 AM · On: March 14

Love Lucille & Leo.  Stil worried about that stalker.  Hope you continue to feel well and treat us to daily updates.  Bill



Author's Response:

Lucill and Leo are so much fun; I never expected them to become a bigger part of the story when I did that first prompted vignette; but I am glad for that as I never know what Lucille is going to say next. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2018 03:43 AM · On: March 13

This chapter is a little scary.  We start to see the stalker's plan and it is not a good one.  You really keep things interesting.  Bill



Author's Response:

It's definitely not good for Justin. Hopefully he'll be found before he can enact said plan. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2018 11:36 PM · On: February 16

Little Luke has wormed his way into eveyone's heart.  Brian hears the bad news about Bloom's Gallary.  But he's not alone.  Emmett, Ted, and Carl will help him watch over Justin and Sunbeam.



Author's Response:

That he does, and that's what matters. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2018 07:54 PM · On: March 13

Wow the guy is getting worse and worse and he even spoke to Justin. I’m so nervous for him now. What on Earth is gonna happen. My heart is in my throat now. 

 

Fantastic work. I’m sorry you had a migraine, I suffer from those as well so I feel your pain. Big hugs xx



Author's Response:

The stalker is really starting to escalate. Hopefully he'll be found before anything happens to Justin. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2018 11:55 AM · On: March 14

Ugh I feel bad for Brian and Justin that they have to pay the price for however Mikey schemed to get back in with Deb. He just needs to go away forever. Looking forward to Justin's show happy The Brown's are there I really like them in this. Looking forward to more as always.

Well done!

:)

 



Author's Response:

Deb just needs to grow a backbone and boot him to the curb. And I'd do it if I thought Michael would actually stay away. But I know for a fact that he won't because he'll never beleive that Brian is serious. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2018 07:32 AM · On: March 14

Come on now! We all know Stupid Michael is going to show his true colors and Brian gonna have to
give him a beat down ( which by the way I am looking forward to with great anticipation! I got my popcorn ready! hehe and please spare no blow by blows descriptions on said smack down)

Oh yeah! Glad your feeling better!

Author's Response:

Of course he will; it's how he's managed to hang onto Brian's coat tails for so long as it is; no one sees him for the master manipulator that he is. I have to agree; I think he is due another beat down here soon. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2018 07:22 AM · On: March 13

Ok Its not Ian or else I think Justin would of recognized him. So I'm gona go with someone from his New York time?
All I know is this Crazy dude better not hurt Sunbeam in any way or else it's on and popping!😠
Brian will have to kill this Fool then!!

Author's Response:

I can now say that you are right on that. :) It's not Ethan/Ian. LOL. I know people were guessing him, but he always felt too obvious in my head. Plus I felt he was too wrapped up in himself. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2018 02:24 PM · On: February 15

We know there is more to Sydney's gallery story then what he's said.  But Brian does have a point.  Justin needs to be careful.



Author's Response:

Yeah, he definitely is hiding something...  Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2018 04:01 AM · On: March 12

Poor Brian, pointy elbows & boring videos not a fun evening.  Glad RL worked out for you.  Loved this update as always!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Brian definitely had a rough night; I dont blame him at all for his inability to take it seriously. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2018 02:40 AM · On: March 12

"I need a fucking Twinkie"  - ha!  That could be interpreted a couple of ways there, depending upon whose perspective it is. :)  I really like seeing all the changes and phases that Justin is going through, and how - despite Brian's reactions sometimes - it is so clearly obvious how much he adores his Sunshine. Loving this story! Thank you.  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

That it can! :) This story was created for the express purpose of showing those phases, actually. My beta, who is a devoted fan of mpreg, was always complaining that most stories don't spend a lot of time on the actual pregnancy. Most of it is glossed over, with only the occasional glimpse of the ins and outs of what a pregnant person goes through. So, I said, 'your wish, is my command. I will make you a story where where the main focus will be all the ups and downs of pregnancy.' Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2018 02:37 AM · On: March 11

Hi, Ashita! Sorry for the delay in writing another review; I'm playing catch up.  Having Brian pretend to like these names was ingenious! I think that is what I like most about this story - all the creative ways you come up with various elements of their pregnancy period - Justin's obsession with the Twinkies, especially. Love that!

And using the Justin 'lookalike' in connection with the stalker was a great idea! I'm loving the combination of light banter, humor, and mystery/angst in this story.

I think this is one of my current favorites, and I eagerly look forward to each chapter. Thank you for posting this very entertaining story on here. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks, this story has been a lot of fun so far; and the sheer amount of research that I have been doing for it has been interesting. Hopefully, I'll be ab;e to continue to keep the right mi of all those ingredients. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 05:37 PM · On: March 12

Lol that was a lot of fun. I could picture them watching those videos and Brian making all those comments. Thank you for making me laugh and smile today xx



Author's Response:

Brian was definitely unimpressed by the videos; which I didn't blame him after a while because even I was wondering why there were so many video for basically the same information. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 05:16 PM · On: March 11

Oh this chapter almost killed me with laughter!! Horrid name choices (NOT a Twilight fan) and well I am a Glee fan and Quinn was alright at least it wasn't Rachel that Brian suggested lol. I just had very strong memories of fighting with my kids Dad over my daughters names the second twin didn't have a name till she was two days old because we couldn't agree lol. Thanks again for the reminder it's been fun reading this because of them and it's all memories I am very fond of.

Well done!!

:)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I despise everything Twilight. So, when I was trying to come up a prank for Brian to pull on Justin, and my beta suggested that I do something with suggesting horrible names, I immediately thought, Justin would despise having a kid named after a Twilight character. And LOL on the name issue. I, myself, remember all the arguments I had with my ex-fiance over baby names. Justin's aversion of names from TV shows, movies and popular books is actually a reflection of my arguments with my ex. I seriously wanted to kill him for some of his suggestions. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 03:00 PM · On: March 11

Lol 😂 that was so funny, Those names are priceless. I could see Hustins face in my head snd the smirk on Brian’s face while teasing him. 

 

Brilliant work c



Author's Response:

Yeah, Justin was NOT happy. And Brian had far too much fun with it. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 02:08 PM · On: March 10

Wow I can’t imagine how angry and determined Brian was running after Blaine and then nothing. That has to be awful for him as he want me to protect his husband. I honestly love how Brian cares for Justin those tender moments are beautiful x



Author's Response:

I can only imagine how frustrating and terrifying it must be for Brian, knowing that this person is out there and he has no idea who it is, where he is, or what he can do about it. Helplessness is not an emotion Brian has ever handled well, and I hate to see what will happen if he ever got his hands on the guy. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 01:54 PM · On: March 9

Mere words are not enough to tell you how beautiful this chapter was. You have a talent for this I wish I had. I loved seeing Jenny with the boys and their bond is incredible. I hope we see more of this. 

Thank you for writing this 💖💕



Author's Response:

This was a fun and lighthearted chapter. Something I really needed due to all the tension that's been building with the stalker. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 01:07 PM · On: March 8

Lol Justin is so funny trying all his charms on Brian. Plus Brian really made me smile in this the way he is with Justin we need lots more of this so thank you for creating it god is to love and enjoy xx



Author's Response:

Justin really tried; But Brian was able to resist for now. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 01:00 PM · On: March 12

No offense taken.  It was really funny having Brian of all people have to watch these videos.  Glad RL is better for you. 



Author's Response:

And to think, Brian has six more 'classes' to go; he's going to love that. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 03:23 AM · On: March 11

They are awful names, Justin should have known Brian wasn't serious.  It ws partial payback for the whole triplet thing.  Bill



Author's Response:

He should have, but he was giving him the benefit of the doubt at first. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2018 02:48 AM · On: March 11

Forgot about the triplets ,  I want to know the sex of this baby, along with everyone else.  Loving this story

 



Author's Response:

Justin is probably wishing that Brian forgot about the triplets too... as for the sex of the baby, well, that will come. Eventually . :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2018 11:59 AM · On: March 11

Chaptter very funny ! I'm really waiting for the name they will choose! I leave a week I will comment on my return I am sure that many things will happen for a week! Later.

Author's Response:

They've already narrowed down their list quite a bit, but they want a few names to consider, because sometimes, you look at a child and thinhk, that name just doesn't suit them. The final decision will be made the day of the birth. And I hope that whatever is taking you away for a week is fun and you enjoy yourself! :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2018 11:51 AM · On: March 10

Oh bad Brian was 2 fingers to have an explanation with Blaine!

Author's Response:

That has to be frustrating, to being so close to getting an explanation and then to have it slip away... Poor Brian. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2018 02:38 AM · On: March 10

Interesting twist on the while stalker thing.  I hope Jenny went home and doesn't find Papa J naked with Uncle Brian.  Love your story!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

LOL! Yes, she is safely at home. They dropped her and Gus off at school that morning as it is Monday in that verse. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2018 02:18 AM · On: March 9

Hope RL treats you well!!!  Loved this chapter, seeing things through Jenny's eyes.  Great that she gets to witness true love.  Bill



Author's Response:

Jenny was fun to write; and it was a challenge as it's been a while since I was that age. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 08:49 PM · On: March 10

Ok what's up with Blaine running from Brian!!!!!??
Brian needs to find him fast! and get a drawing of what Stalker looks like!!!Stat!

Author's Response:

That is a good question. If I were to hazard a guess, he was afraid of getting innvolved because let's face it, the stalker is creepy and not all there. But I suppose we'll have to wait and see what his true motivations are. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 03:07 AM · On: February 14

A Valentine's Day that neither will forget especially once they get around to eating Emmett's meal.



Author's Response:

It was a sweet gesture. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2018 12:39 AM · On: March 8

They seem to be putty in each other's hands.



Author's Response:

They do know how to work each other well. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2018 10:21 AM · On: March 9

Thank you for this lovely chapter! Jenny is a lovely girl too !!

Author's Response:

Jenny was fun to write; although, trying to stay at the mental level of a nine-year-old was challenging. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2018 10:09 AM · On: March 8

I like when they play cat and mouse! Let's wait to see the result

Author's Response:

I like to think that they both win when it comes to these games. :) Thanks for reading!

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