Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2018 02:13 PM · On: March 31 (Part One)

Lol a sick Justin is a scary thing. He really is to stubborn for his own good. Poor Brian he was only trying to look after him, I think he would have done a good job with it. As for the northern and Anna they all did their best to team upon him. I loved that Justin ran to hide lol that really made me laugh 😂

Thank you for this brilliant chapter x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2018 07:52 AM · On: March 31 (Part One)

Oh dear Justin is a very scary man when he is ill so different from Brian who is just as scary only in a more drama queen way!

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2018 02:05 PM · On: March 31 (Part One)

You did it again. This story is so addictive. Love all those cute lines you come up with.

Thank you for the update, glad that RL has eased up some for you.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2018 01:14 PM · On: March 31 (Part One)

Hello, Kristina! I was very happy to see an update to this. I have to tell you that you came up with a couple of doozies in this chapter that had me laughing. The first one was hysterical: ""It is illegal and I look horrible in orange, and I would be missing out on years of glorious sex. I will not kill my husband." LOL! Especially about the not looking good in orange part. Loved it!

And this sentence, to me, was pure genius: "...he knew that it was futile; Brian had caught the scent of his fabrication and was now going to hold on like a terrier with a bone." That is a GREAT line!

I really am enjoying this story immensely. So glad you are writing and posting it on here. As always, I'll be looking forward to more - and to your 100th chapter!! Wow, that's amazing! ~Kim

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2018 11:30 AM · On: March 31 (Part One)

Well, Brian means well... I know that he seems like its hovering, but he just wants to be sure that Justin is okay.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2018 08:09 AM · On: March 31 (Part One)

It is true that it is annoying when you are a little sick and everyone comes to see you and do not leave you alone. It's a very funny chapter!

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