Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 04:58 AM · On: March 23 (Part One)

Hmm 50 shades of Daphne.  Justin seems a little unreasonable, Brian has a good point that they have both withheld information that they should have shared with each other.  I am thinking he will realize that and they can clear the air.  Happy to see the update still love your story!!   Bill



Author's Response:

He is being a little unreasonable; but I feel it's more of him just reaching the end of his rope and thus striking out at the easiest target. Not that this was ever going to be an easy conversation between them; Justin was always going to be mad that Brian was keepingthings from him. It's just with everything that has been happening recently, he lashed out. But now, evrything is in the open and once they cooled their asses down, they can finally get to the real issues. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 01:02 PM · On: March 23 (Part One)

A lot of high emotions running throughout this chapter I can’t blame any of them. I think I would have felt the same in all their shoes. It’s protecting the one you love and it maybe not doing it in the right way. I do hope they can talk it out and sort it out. They need to band together to capture the stalker. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

That was bound to happen. They are already stressed and angry at the situation with Lindsay; and then we had the added stress of their first argument and Brian's subsequent flight. Adding yet another kept secret to the lot was only going to add fuel to the fire. An explosion was inevitable. But now that they've both come clean, hopefully they'll honestly work it all out. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2018 04:13 AM · On: March 23 (Part One)

"Ok I'm need both fighters to go their respective corners in the ring and Chill the Fu@k out!!!! " And when the bell rings come out Loving!!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Seriously. These boys and their tempers will be the death of me. But now that everything is out in the open, they can finally get to the healing and making up parts. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 08:49 AM · On: March 23 (Part One)

That's a good explanation and now it's Justin who slams the door! As they are both right in their way I hope there will be a real reconciliation LOL Lindsay is really rotten in your story, I hope she will not get up with everyone against her, Melanie has took things in hand. I also like as Drew knows Emmett well. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

They'll get there. This is yet another of those conversations that had to happen; and it was never going to be an easy one. Justin is just to passionate and hot-headed to sit back and say, 'That's okay, honey; I understand why you kept this from me.' Sort of like Brian and his reaction to the Lindsay and Simon situation... They are both human and thus flawed; if they'd handled this with sweet words and understanding, it wouldn't be Brian and Justin, it would be the Stepford version of them, and ick! No thanks! Thanks for reading! :)

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