Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 02:33 AM · On: March 16
I wish that Brian had been able to talk to Jennifer more about her getting sick. I'd also like to hear what it was Brian wanted to say to Deb. If nothing else I wonder if Ben finally gets a clue.
Author's Response: I have to cringe here as I meant to write a throw away sentence here about Brian making a note to talk to Jen and ask her to get checked out. But I forgot. *looks sheepish* Let's pretend that Brian said something to her off screen and she took his advice. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2018 09:11 AM · On: March 16
GO BRIAN!! And Mikey for the love of God take this hint and just stay gone!! Of course I know it won't happen but a girl can dream right? Lovely couple of chapters glad the show went fairly well and that the boys were safe in the end.
Well Done!!
:)
Author's Response: Mikey is a persistent little bastard that just won't go away. I keep trying to write him out of the story, but the asshole just won't go away! But the show itself went well and maybe they might finally get a lead in this case. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2018 09:49 AM · On: March 16
Wow that was a powerful chapter it was great to see Brian’s raw emotions about everything that had happened his worry for them all. I loved Molly humming that tune it was a perfect comedy moment. I would love to see her go shopping with Brian, I think she would actually out shop him lol.
Brians confrontation with Micheal really hit my heart that could not have been easy no matter what. Brian did the right thing in telling all that to him because holding back would have shattered him into a million pieces.
Fantastic work as always x
Author's Response: I imagine that coming so close to something like what happening at the gallery has to be nerve-wracking for the both of them. And Molly breaking the tension like that was funny, and they needed the lightheartedness with evderything that was going on. And I really doubt Brian is ready for a shopping trip with Molly. LOL. The confrontation with Michale was hard, but necessary for Brian. Sometimes, it's the only way you can get through to people. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 03:21 PM · On: March 16
The stalker tried to take out Sunbeam!!!! WTH!!!!Shit just got real!!! "Oh no he didn't "!!! "Where my knife at" !!!!! This dude needs to be caught STAT! Justin better start seriously thinking about the people it could possibly BE from his past!!!!!!
I got a feeling he gna try "TAKEN "and then ah shit we gonna have to call Liam! But I also think he wants to KILL Sunbeam! And that is SO NOT happening RIGHT?!!!!! Cause if that's the case we gna need to call CLINT! Right away!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, this guy is a sick bastard and needs to get taken down asap. And Justin has indeed been trying to think of who it might be from his past, but with facial scarring, and plastic surgery, the stalker's appearance has changed enough that it's not doing anything but giving him the, you seem familiar, but I can't place you vibe. Hopefully something will click soon. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2018 03:14 PM · On: March 16
I doubt Mikey will just fade away, he is too delusionalfor that. I think Brian should have had Jennifer go to a doctor,hope she is OK. Great update. Bill
Author's Response: Agreed. I keep trying to write him out because he annoys me and he just keeps returning despite the fact. I doubt he'll stay away this time either. And oops!? I meant to write a throw away sentence or two about Brian taking Jen aside and asking her to get checked and forgot? Damn it! My apologies. I'll have to note it somewhere. Thanks for reading! :)
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