Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2018 02:46 AM · On: February 1 (Part One)

I guess it isn't "ian"gold or Brandon, Justin would know them right away. With the heavy clothing I guess the nut doesn't realize Justin's exspecting. I hope he doesn't ruin a perfect weekend for the guys



Author's Response:

It wouldn't be anyone that Justin would immediately recognize that's for sure; he would have noticed them around otherwise. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2018 01:21 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

This mystery man sounded more like Ethan than Brandon, but Justin didn't recognize him?  So the mystery man is still a mystery.



Author's Response:

Well, people can change over the years; I've met up with people I've known in the past and not even recognized them. But more importantly, the person was covered near head to toe in clothing; so, Justin didn't get a good look at them. So who knows...well I do, but...;) Thanks!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 09:51 AM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Omg what will he do, that creep better not hurt our boys or I will jump into this story and kick his scrawny skany ass. 

 

I looooove Brian doing all that for Justin it melts my heart xx



Author's Response:

LOL! Feel free to give him a much deserved ass kicking! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2018 01:02 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Hi, Ashita - well, you certainly have me guessing on just who this is. Could be Ethan; could be someone else that Justin met before that we don't know about from the show (?), or someone you will include in the story who is unfamiliar to us.  A different tone from the other chapters, certainly, but I like angst mixed in with some romance/humor, so I still enjoyed this part with the intrigue.  I always like reading how others view the boys together.  Of course, this one is obviously jealous and seething with anger over what he perceives as some injustice to him.  It will be interesting to see how this progresses.

And noticed this sentence:  "Sunbeam would be a year old then and he'd either feel better about leaving for a couple of days, or they could bring her with them."  Is that a clue, perhaps? ;)  You've been such a tease about not revealing the gender!  I love their name for him/her, BTW! 

Thanks again for such a wonderful story!  ~Kim

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 10:21 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

I think it's that boy Justin meet at Daphne party took his cherry.

So Justin is thinking they are having a Girl?? Interesting play there. Way to keep everyone  guessing  💖



Author's Response:

He may be having a girl, and he may not. Remember, just was convinced for 4 months that he was having a girl, so it could just have been a slip of the tongue. As for our stalker, we'll have to see how it pans out.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 05:54 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Think the chapter went well.  Don't like Justin having another "stalker", but someone so beautiful is bound to attract the crazies.  And, a little cliffhanger keeps the reader interested.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was having fits with it as getting into the mind set was difficult.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 03:02 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

Hmmmm.... who was that...brandon...or ethen or....someone else.....damn the mystrey...lovely update.



Author's Response:

The mystery is part of the fun though! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 02:55 PM · On: February 1 (Part One)

I knew it!! Is that bastard Ethan!! ( who in real life i always thought Fab Filippo was a cute actor and he now looks even better with age, love Italian nice looking men) he is greatly delusional if he thinks Justin wants him! Can't wait for Brian to put the smack down on him too!

Author's Response:

I guess we'll have to see how this pans out; but I will say, that the stalker, whoever he is, definitely has no chance whatsoever with Justin.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 09:18 AM · On: February 1 (Part One)

OMG is Ethan following them? He did not understand his lesson, I hope he will not hurt Justin or Sunbeam in his madness!

Author's Response:

I don't think the stalker followed them there, but more like it was an unexpected surprise that they showed up in the same place.

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