Reviewer: bktush (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2018 03:20 PM · On: January 16
everyone see the boys are very much in love, everyone but fucktard and he wouldn't know love for anybody but himself.
Author's Response: And Michael never will; if he did, he'd have to admit to himself that he never has a chance with Brian and he's not willing to do that. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2018 09:15 PM · On: January 16
Nice to see that Brian isn't letting Mikey get away with shit anymore.
Author's Response: Oh no, not at all. That ship has sailed with Mikey still whining at the dock. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 09:37 PM · On: January 16
"But I never loved Lindsay the way I love you".
This sentence made my heart skip a beat. Gorgeous!!!
Poor Justin for being so hovered over by everybody. The next 5 months won't be easy for him for the hovering will only get worse I guess.
Michael should learn to mind his own business and stay away from Kinnetik. Cynthia is just itching to give him a beating he will feel for a long time.
And the entire staff "listening in" on Brian and Justin's antics? Hilarious!!
I'm getting so addicted to this amazing and well written story.
THank you for sharing this work with us readers.
XOXO
MeMa
Author's Response: Thanks! I got all gooey inside wriing it. The hovering is the worst and yes, I it getting worse before it gets better. And Michael just needs to be dropped kicked out the door. Soon...oh please soon. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 08:41 AM · On: January 16
Omg I hope Justin is actually ok, I can imagine how scared Brian was in that moment. Michael, he really has no concept of what is the right thing to do. I fear for the outcome after this.
Excellent work xx
Author's Response: In this instance, Justin really did just stand up too fast. With the changes in your circulatory system during pregnancy, it is quite common for your blood pressure to fluctuate and, in this case, drop, leaving you to feel dizzy or lightheaded.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:13 AM · On: January 16
Loved this chapter, Ashita! You had me a little worried with Justin's dizzy spell and the tissue warning. Glad he and the baby are okay. And that line from Brian: "But I never loved Lindsay the way that I love you." Swooned! I love a protective Brian, and an independent Justin. Add in Cynthia in take-charge mode, and you've got a great chapter.
Really enjoying this story! Thank you for posting it. ~Kim
Author's Response: Oh! I didn't mean to make anyone worry about the dizzy spell, as it was just one of those things that happen during pregnancy due to fluctuation in blood presssure and the changes to the circulatoy system. The tissue warning was just because my beta got all teared up when Brian made his little speech to Justin and she told me I should issue one. I love sweet Brian. :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 08:05 PM · On: January 16
Sweet, protective Brian is more than a match for stubborn Justin. He even rolled out the big gun - the "L" word. Another really great chapter in this amazing story. Mikey getting thrown out by Cynthia was also great!!! Bill
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I love Cynthia, and I wish there was more of her on the show. And Brian always knows the best way to get Justin to cave. :)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 01:57 PM · On: January 16
Dam that Micheal!!! I sure wouldn't want to be on Cynthia's bad side lol.
Author's Response: Michael is going to rue the day he ever garnered Cynthia's attention. Because she takes no prisoners. :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 11:18 AM · On: January 16
Aw I did love that chapter it had cheeky Justin 😁 fearful Brian 😳and then dominate Brian 🤨. But best of all Cynthia and Yasmeen two women determined to protect their boys😠😠😠
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the portrayal of Cynthia and Yasmeen. It's always difficult when you try on a new POV; especially for a character that's relatively minor on the show. But I love Cynthia (fanfic Cynthia especially) to pieces; so hopfully I got her voice right.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 07:38 AM · On: January 16
Sheesh .. that was soooo adorable and romantic.
Mikey is a little bit*$.
Author's Response: Agreed. God, I cannot stand Michael. Thanks! :)
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