Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Couple retreat
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2019 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

good one



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2018 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

That was terrific!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm happy you loved it :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 13

I do wonder about Pearson.  Is he a secret voyeur?  I wonder if Justin had done Brian first would it have been easier?



Author's Response:

No he's not but let's say that his methods as the entire cew's methods are very special lol. Maybe it would but at the end, they both enjoyed it and Justin succeeded to overcome a lot during this task.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 12

Even when you think you're ready, you're not.



Author's Response:

Justin is doing some progress but he still needs time to totally at easy with intimacy and revealing himself to Brian.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2018 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm wondering how they got to be partners.



Author's Response:

It's surprising regarding their differences on the intimate level but it happened lol.

Thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 10

Things are improving.



Author's Response:

They're improving greatly as Justin seems to finally be ready to be intimate with Brian.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2018 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

Thank u soo much for the excellent story...i loved it...great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm happy you loved it

Thanks for your all your reviews :-)

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

I love it how amazing Brian and Justin are together now. How much they both changed for the better!



Author's Response:

You're welcome and thank you for reading it :-)

They came a long way but they found each other. They shared they insecurities and fears to grow and move forwards. They changed a lot and now it'll only be for the better.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

A very lovely  story Brian was very sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, I'm happy you loved it.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

Great ending.  As always I will miss them, but am happy when it is a happy ending. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I love happy endings and I tend to write the end of my stories in that way. You'll miss them but there's still Forbidden fruit going on and I have other stories in store so stay tuned for more.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

Good on you Brian I am so glad that you gave them a piece of your mind what they did was really shitty. I’m so glad they left and flying with love they really did make it far and got through all they needed to. 

 

I hope that we see them go find their new home and maybe add a family and pups to it x

 

Fantastic work xx



Author's Response:

Brian was right to give them a piece of his mind and make them understand that they really fucked up lol. But in the end, thanks to everything they went through there, they leave the retreat happy, in love and being able to be intimate like they never were.

No it's not planned. It was the last chapter and I don't plan a sequel for this story.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2018 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Last chapter

Ah heureuse de ton retour ! ils vont bien profiter des résultats de cette retraite qui les a bien aidés à se trouver. Merci pour cette histoire, j'espère que tu en as d'autres en réserve !!!

Author's Response:

Heureuse d'être de retour aussi lol. Ils vont bien profiter de leur amour et de leur intimité retrouvée, c'est sûr. Oh oui, je suis en cours d'écriture d'une nouvelle histoire et chez d'autres idées qui ne demandent qu'à être écrites.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 16

Omg that scared me I thought something seriously bad happened my heart stopped. The emotions that Brian showed here were so strong and powerful they blew me away. The love is so strong between them it makes me so happy.

 

incredible work x



Author's Response:

I'm sorry that I scared you so much lol. I love happy endings most of the time, so Justin had to be fine in the end lol. Brian felt so much emotions thinking that Justin might be dead, so when it finally went out it had to be strong and powerful. They love each other strongly even if it took time to Brian to realise it.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

Ah ah finalement Brian craque et avoue ses sentiments mais ma foi il y avait de quoi flipper ! Ne m'étonne pas qu'il soit si en colère je n'aimerais pas non plus ! j'aime ce chapitre !

Author's Response:

Vu la situation, il n'a pu que craquer lol. Il a finalement avouer ses sentiments à la grande surprise de Justin. Il est très en colère en effet mais c'est sûr qu'à sa place, on aurait réagi pareil je penses.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2018 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  Brian finally could show that he loves Justin. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Brian finally revealed his true feelings to Justin. He realised them and coudln't wait to confess to the only person he ever loved.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2018 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 9

What a lot of background that goes to explain why they needed the retreat in the first place.  Now that things are in the open hopefully their relationship will improve.



Author's Response:

Justin had a heavy background for sure which explains a lot of his reluctance for intimacy. From then on, they"ll both try to make everything work.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2018 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

You traumatized poor brian to death...lols..that was outstanding chapter...the best oneee..like brian said"You never cease to impress me" loved it.



Author's Response:

I know I'm evil lol. Poor Brian but at least he revealed his true feelings and at the end, everyone is happy and in love lol. 

And I hope I'll never stop to impress you with my stories.

Thanks for your nice review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2018 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 15

Justin is more open now thats good ..he is getting confident...very good. Superb update ...thanks.



Author's Response:

Justin is more and more open sexually but also with Brian. Now they can talk and Brian is more receptive to his lover, less selfish about his need and he learned to listen.

Thanks for your nice review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 15

Hi, Audrey!  Justin, especially, has come a long way in shedding his previous fears. It's great to see how both men have changed and progressed in their relationship during this retreat. Thank you for such an enjoyable story!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! Jusrin really has come in a log way. He overcame his fears and his insecurities and he also learned to trust Brian. Both men changed indeed. The retreat wasn't only good for Justin, Brian also learned a lot along the process.

Thank you for enjoying it and for your review :-) Audrey

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 15

Good chapter.  They boys are moving forward and that is great.



Author's Response:

They are and some more progress will be done in the 2 next chapters. 

Thanks for your reviews :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 15

That was a perfect way of showing trust in each other and to show Justin he can believe in himself and to know he is loved and can take control when he wants. I loved that Brian loved the romantic sex and I hope he shows Justin he can so it back as well. Plus with Brian’s Help Justin can take that leap of faith and Jump with him, because together that they can do anything. 

 

Incredible work xx



Author's Response:

It was a perfect moment of trust indeed. Justin realised he can believe in itself and be able to please his man who's in the end as hard as satisfy as he thought. Brian enjoyed it because he maybe realised what his true feelings for Justin are. Brian will help him to overcome and this fear and let's see what happen with the jump.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2018 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 15

J'aime toppy Justin ça change ! ils ont l'air de vraiment bien avancer. En attendant le saut en parachute !

Author's Response:

Oui ça change car c'est assez rare. Ils font énormément de progrès et le saut en parachute va peut être consolider tout ça.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 14

Wow that task could have ended up being very different. Truth or Dare is a game that can either be funny or end up with someone getting hurt. I think this game thought our boys some lessons. That communication is very important in a relationship. That trust is very important and understanding each other. Give and take. It was fun watching them do the dares I hope that last one went well. 

 

Excellent work as always x



Author's Response:

It could have ended differently you're right. Some truth being revealed could have hurt our boys much more and some task could have ending up getting them more apart. It taught the boys a lesson too. They need to communicate more, they never really did and now that they do, they realise how their relastionship gets better. 

For the last one, you have to wait the next chapter :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2018 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi, Audrey! I finally have a day off (snow day for the school I work for - happy dance!), so I can catch up on some stories. I am really enjoying your story, and how  you are showing them slowly growing deeper in their understanding of each other.

Justin's striptease and subsequent plan to be in control of their lovemaking was hot!  And it definitely shows how Justin is becoming more confident in his relationship with Brian. And I like how Brian, too, is willing to compromise.

I will be looking forward to your updates! Thank you for posting this on MW. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim! I'm really happy you're enjoying my story because it's kind of an unusual one. I wanted their understanding of each other to be slow indeed to make it more realistic. They were coming from a long way and they're slowly succeed to feel better with each other.

It was hot and also showing how Justin became more confident in himself first and in his relationship with Brian, you're right. Bria also realised that if he wants to keep Justin in his life, he needs to compormise and take things easy as ling as it'll be needed.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2018 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 14

J'aime ce chapitre ! Ils sont tous les 2 en train d'évoluer et d'apprendre encore plus à se connaitre !Merci !

Author's Response:

Oui ils sont en train d'évoluer et de se rapprocher. Ils discutent enfin tous les 2, ce qui leur permet de mieux se comprendre.

Justin se décoince et Brian apprend à être plus à l'écoute et réceptif.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

Glad to hear our boys moving forward instead of backward.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

They are, they're keeping on doing great progress.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

The best one soo far...lollololol.

Justin is coming out of his shell..he is finally changing too just like brian changed ...thats a good progress.

Loved this awesome update...thank u.



Author's Response:

Really? Well, thanks I'm glad you loved it :-)

Justin is now more and more at ease with Brian because he opened himself about his past and moreover as you said, Brian is also slowly changing too. They both evolved which will make their relationship easier.

Thank you for this awesome review :-)

Reviewer: harperj (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2018 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2018 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was a perfect task for them both. They had fun and let themselves be free with each other and discover something new within them. I’m delighted to see that Justin enjoyed it as much as Brian did. I hope they enjoy their free time on the isl and maybe talk more freely and Justin can sketch some of the beautiful scenery there. 

 

Fantastic work as always 💖💖



Author's Response:

It think this task really helped them to make some progress. It was letting them in control and allowed them to have fun. Justin is feeling more and more comfortable now, seeing that Brian doesn't rush him anymore and does his best to make him feel better around him. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13

Progressive chapter...they have bonded well.

Naughty and amusing chapter...thanks.



Author's Response:

They have bonded well and make great progress. Things are going to involve in the right way now.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 13

Good chapter.  Happy to see Brian & Justin starting to overcome the problems they have.



Author's Response:

They slowly start to overcome them and it's only the beginning. With Justin starting to be more at eaase, things are going to involve easily now.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2018 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13

Ah ça avance à grands pas on dirait! j'aurais bien aimé voir les photos LOL Merci pour ce chapitre Brian qui est doux et Justin qui se laisse faire finalement!

Author's Response:

Les choses avancent et ce n'est qu'un début. Moi aussi j'aurais bien aimé voir les photos lol. Brian sait comment se comporter maintenant s'il veut que les choses s'arrangent et le résultat commence à se faire sentir.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2018 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 12

Excellent chapter my dear friend...story is going great.



Author's Response:

Wow thank you much my dear Navneet. I'm happy you still love it that much.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

Hi, Audrey!  Sorry for not reviewing earlier. My mother and I moved about a week ago, and we  just now had our internet restored.  I am glad the two men were able to make love at last, but I agree that it would have been a mistake to just leave and assume that everything was all resolved.

They will have to learn to compromise, and both will need to be able to accept each other the way they are.  It will be interesting to see how that occurs.

Thank you for posting this story on here! I am enjoying it very much. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim, don't apologize. I'll be moving out myself in a month so I know what you're going through lol. 

They finally succeeded to be intimate but Justin's doubts were right. Will it at last? That's the question. Compormises and understanding are on their way for them to be better. Brian will show another side and Justin might be full of surprise.

Thank you very much Kim and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2018 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 12

Ah ah quelque part j'ai trouvé ça drôle, ils sont tellement décalés!! il y a du boulot !!! Merci pour le chapitre

Author's Response:

Oui on le peut le dire, niveau décalage il sont pas mal lol. Il y a encore du boulot mais les choses pourraient évoluer assez vite.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow that was so intense, my heart was pounding right throughout that chapter. The tenseness was so strong off the boys. I can feel how much they want to be them again and to be happy and together. I feel they will do it if they follow the steps and what’s in their hearts. 

 

Thank uou gor writibg such an amazing chapter xox 



Author's Response:

Wow thank you Vicki. I'm glad you feel that way, reading it. They want to be together and they're both willing to take efforts for it, especially Brian. He's slowly changing toward Justin, showing that he cares more then the blond could think he was. 

Thank you for your very nice review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

They are making progress and that is good.  A different Brian is coming to light so I have faith that they are going forward, please.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

They are indeed making some progress. They succeeded to be intimate and to both enjoy it. It's a huge step. Brian is slowly changing toward Justin, showing that he cares. They're going forward.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oops lie went in instead of Love . I meant to say his love for Justin jump off the page. So sorry about that xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2018 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was so intense, I could feel the nerves jump off the page. It was so hard for Justin to take that step. Brian was so amazing I could feel his lie for Justin jump off the page. I’m so happy that making love so tenderly really was the perfect step to get Hustins trust back. 


 


Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Reallly? You could feel that? lol. It was a hard decision and it wasn't sure to be able to go the all way through it but thanks to Brian, he did and they had a wonderful and tender moment. It was the best way to do it if Brian wanted to win Justin's trust back.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

Soo intense soo romantic...wonderful chapter.

Thanks for the lovely update.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I wanted it romantic, tender and intense at the same time. I apparently succeeded lol.

Thank for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

So beautiful, so romantic.  Even a beast can be tamed by the right person.  Good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm happy that the feelings I wanted to express are felt by the readers. Exactly, Justin is the only one who can tame Brian. We all know that lol

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 11

Super chapitre, très doux très tendre ! Ils vont y arriver !! Merci très agréable à lire.

Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup. Oui je voulais que Brian arrive à se montrer tendre et qu'il comprenne que c'était le seul moyen d'atteindre Justin. Ils vont y arriver car ils vont apprendre beaucoup sur eux-mêmes lors de cette thérapie.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

Ah ça chauffe! Finalement c'est efficace cette retraite. J'espère que tu nous concocte une jolie scène d'amour même si tu n'aimes pas en écrire. Merci ce chapitre.

Author's Response:

Cette retraite va peut être être bénéfique au final lol. C'est pas que je n'aimes pas en écrire, c'est que j'ai l'impression d'écrire toujours pareil dans ces scènes. Alors scène d'amour ou pas? RDV au prochain chapitre lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 10

Hang in there boys!!! It will get better!!!

Author's Response:

We can just wish them to hold on and hope things will get better.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 10

That was beautifully written and marvelous progress.

Awesome...looking forward for more.

Thanks for update.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the compliment. They've done amazing progress, now let's hope it'll keep going in the next chapter.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

Omg...that was soo sad. Poor sunshine.

Best chapter..finally we knew more of sunshine.



Author's Response:

Sunshine went through a hard time in his past and he's still can't overcome it completely.

Wow thanks, I'm happy you like this important chapter.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 10

This was a perfect task a task of trust between them. It’s like the one where you catch the person who falls. That’s exactly what it must feel like afraid to not be caught. They really followed the instructions well and I’m so glad Justin handled it so well. 

 

I was not expecting that at the end of the chapter, I truly pray this goes well for them and that Justin feels the love and feels cherished. X

 

Brillliant work x



Author's Response:

It was indeed a task of trust for them. It's exactly the same kind of principle that the one who falls. They were careful, especially Brian to not rush and block Justin again by going wilder with the instructions.

The end was maybe unexpected but in a good way, I hope lol. The answer for this will be on the next chapter ;-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh we are making progress.  It is so strange to see Justin so timid and you are doing an amazing job bringing that point across.  Keep up the terrific work.



Author's Response:

We are making slow progresses yes.

It's a strange plot but I'm happy you think I'm doing a great job with it.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2018 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow ça c'est dur! Quelle souffrance pour Justin, je pense que Brian l'aime assez pour être aussi patient que nécessaire pour réussir à sauver leur couple. Chapitre bouleversant!

Author's Response:

C'est très dur, effectivement. Le secret de Justin était plus lourd qu'on pouvait l'imaginer. Brian l'aime suffisamment pour être patient et maintenant qu'il sait la vérité, il est en mesure d'aider Justin du mieux qu'il peut.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2018 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 9

😢😢😢 That was one of the most moving and emotional chapters I've ever read. You have written an incredible chapter and handled the topic in a brilliant way. 

 

Poor Justin, how could that evil person do that to him. I'm so happy he has Brian. I really feel he can help him come out of the cocoon he built for himself and be more open and happy and secure within himself. 

 

Will better watch out because if Brian crosses him he Is a dead man.

 

Brilliant work xox 



Author's Response:

Wow, I really don't know what to say. That's very incredible and very nice, thank you.

Poor Justin, he kept a very heavy secret for so long. Knowing the truth, Brian will be there for him and make sure Justin will be able to be more secure and happy with him. Justin will also be able to make progress on his own as he's finally relieved for this weight.

Oh yes, I'm sure he would be lol.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2018 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

Such an interesting chapter, the task was a really hard one wasn’t it. I think they both handled doing it pretty well. I did love that Justin didn’t kiss in his. Justin needs more help something in his past I fear is waiting to burst out and if it doesn’t soon I fear he may get more depressed and damaged. Brian is very good to him and the rock he needs to help him. I hope his next meeting he will tell them so he can truly start healing. 

 

You really moved me thank you for this amazing chapter xx



Author's Response:

The task wasn't easy but it won't be the hardest one. I think the two movies were pretty much at their images you know. Justin couldn't kiss a man he barely knew while he can't be intimate with his lover but what he did was already pretty much, especially from Brian's POV. Something is indeed waiting to burst, something very hard. If it doesn't come out during the retreat, it never will and their couple will never be ok. Brian tries his best to be here for him but this no intimate realstionship is starting to be difficult for him at the same time.

Wow thank you really. I'm happy to make you feel something with this chapter.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2018 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 7

Bou ça à l'air de plus en plus compliqué !! j'aime ça mais j'ai hâte de savoir.Merci pour ce chapitre.

Author's Response:

Les choses ont l'air de se compliquer et il semblerait que ce ne sera pas simple à arranger. Je suis contente que tu apprécies.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

Sad.  Brian who didn't believe in love wanted a relationship with Justin.  Justin has some kind of adversion to sex.  Will this resort help?



Author's Response:

Brian wanted to give a try with Justin but more like a partner. He doesn't call him his boyfriend and never said I love you to Justin. Justin has a real problem with sex but the reason will be reavealed soon.

I hope the resort will help.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

Justin has a problem with sex!?  How can you do that and have a lover?  No wonder they have problems.



Author's Response:

Having sexual problem can happen in every couple, I mean sometimes lol. They have issues because Justin really got one, deep inside him.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

Sad how just when their getting close together, the alarm goes off.  Aaron is flunking this as I doubt his partner would approve him putting the make on Justin.



Author's Response:

Yeah it was really the bad timing for the alarm lol. Aaron trying to seduce Justin while being here with his parnter is really not a good thing. 

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

They don't seem to be cooperating.  Boy, that snake was scary.  And at the end was a party. 



Author's Response:

In this task, they worked pretty much together. A snake is always scary.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 3

It's rather hard to see them going without sex for so long.  It wasn't Brian's idea to go to a couples retreat, yet why does Justin refuse to cooperate?  Hopefully things will come together for them.



Author's Response:

Yeah I know it's unusual to see them not having sex with intimacy problems but it's what fan fictions are for lol.  Justin doesn't refuse to cooperate really. They both have some issues they need to solve and the retreat is here to try to help them.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Looks like the first task didn't go so well.  Or did it?  Shame they are having problems.



Author's Response:

Well it showed that Brian was jealous so that he kind of care for about Justin but it wasn't a complete success.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 7

Damn...soo intense...justin had a lover before maybe that guy is the reason why justin is soo shy even with brian.

That was a great update...thank u..and happy new year.



Author's Response:

It'll get more and more intense. Justin had someone before Brian and that someone may have a thing with Justin's problem lol. 

Thank you and thank your for your review :-)

Happy new year my friend :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2017 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

That really tore at my heart. The task was a good task but a very hard task that really put them to the test. Justin's demand was needed because he did need to know that and to clear that up to try and heal. Brian's demand was a step to far to soon and I'm glad he saw that before it went to far. I do hope that Justin can see this and not hate him for it. 

 

Im loving this story x



Author's Response:

I know it was a pretty hard chapter and it wasn't easy to write too. It put them to the test indeed on many levels. Justin needed to clarify some points and see really what the one night stand with Damon meant to Brian. Brian's demand was maybe too rough but I think he needed to put justin to the test too. It helped Brian to realise that Justin's trouble was maybe bigger and more profound than he thought. Justin will see it, don't worry.

I'm happy you love this story and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2017 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

Je suis triste pour Justin il est vraiment perturbé mais Brian aussi il a l'air tellement surpris et paumé par le comportement de Justin! Pas facile cette affaire, merci pour ce chapitre et bonnes fêtes de fin d'année!

Author's Response:

Justin est plus perturbé qu'on ne le penses et la raison est aussi assez perturbante. On n'en saura plus très vite. Brian ne sait pas comment réagir et il a pris conscience dans ce chapitre que le trouble de Justin semble assez profond. Ce n'est pas une affaire facile effectivement.

Merci pou ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2017 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

Awww ...that was soo sad...poor sunshine.

Great chapter...love ur work..keep it up.



Author's Response:

Yes it was a very hard time for Sunshine. It seems that his fear and insecurity are deeper that we imagined.

Thank you very much for your kind work and your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2017 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lol I had to laugh at Brian’s tantrum over the alarm, finally getting close and that happens. I am really sad that Justin hit Brian I do think they need to talk about that and not do it again. Brian really loves Justin I’m sure he is just trying to sort out not tricking anymore and just be with him. That I think is the problem and once that’s fixed they will be ok. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

Yeah I love writing Brian's part with the alarm. He doesn't hit him intentionally actually. Brian loves Justin but he's unable and unwilling to tell him and to admitt it. It's one of the problem thay have but Justin has also a deeper problem that we don't about yet.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2017 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was cute one ...they are getting closer ..thank u for update.



Author's Response:

They are getting closer for now but this story will be a rollercoaster. A step forward foolowed by a step backward. It won't be easy for them to really be and stay close.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow ça va être une longue thérapie! Est ce qu'Aaron est là pour susciter de la jalousie ? Merci ce chapitre fait un peu grincer des dents !!

Author's Response:

La thérapie va être longue et difficile, surtout pour Justin. Disons qu'Aaron ne va pas complètement disparaître lol.

Merci oour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow that was amazing, that task was really hard and scary. The snake 🐍  was scary for Brian and Justin and I’m glad at how they handled it. They really worked well together I seriously enjoyed reading this xx



Author's Response:

It was a very hard task to do that's right. I know snakes are my biggest phobia lol I don't know if I would be able to handle it as well as they did lol

They worked as a team for this task, but will it last?

Thanks for your word and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 4

The story is really awesome...loving it..looking forward to more ..thanks for the update.




Author's Response:

Oh thank you, I'm so happy you love it. I was taking a risk with our lovers not being sexually active but I'm glad to see people appreciating it anyway.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ohh m gggg...superb update..great going.



Author's Response:

Thank very much for the compliment and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

That was awesome..loved the jealous brian test..lols...thanks.



Author's Response:

Brian is jealous, that's a good sign of his real caring for Justin.

Thank for your review :-)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well I would have died if a snake walked over me! But I can see some improvements happening with the boys

Author's Response:

Oh I would have died too, I have a bog phobia of snake lol. There's some improvements yes but will it last? The retreat will bring many revelations and tensions.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ah ah ça avance petit à petit ! Justin a l'air vraiment perturbé, est ce que leur séjour suffira ? Merci pour la mise à jour!

Author's Response:

ça avance vraiment petit à petit. Justin est plus perturbé qu'on ne le pense et que Brian ne le penses. Seul l'avenir nous le dira lol.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4

It seems that they are getting a little closer.  Hopefully they will overcome their problems if that is your goal.  Good chapter except for the snake !!!!!!



Author's Response:

They're getting closer at least they try from time to time but many things will happen and maybe it won't stay that way. All I can say is that I love hapoy endings lol. I know, I hate snakes too lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2017 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Wow that was a brilliant insight to what’s going on. Both of them have different issues that really need to be talked out and sorted out. I think if they don’t fix this on the retreat it might break them. I loved hearing Brian speak and that underlying pain he has. 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Thank you Vicki. They both have issues to fix indeed. They need to talk abou them but we still don't know everything. Some secrets are still unleashed especially on Justin's side. The retreat is their last hope.

Brian will express himself like he never did before through the reatreat. He's shocked to see how Justin can see him.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2017 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 3

J'avais du mal à adhérer à un Justin qui ne voulait pas de relations sexuelles, bon je comprends mieux, Brian a été "rugueux" pour une première fois. J'espère que ce séjour va les aider à corriger leurs frustrations! Merci pour ce chapitre

Author's Response:

Oui je sais que je prends un risque en portrayant un Justin qui a du mal avec le sexe mais cela peu être aussi intéressant si cela est motivé par une bonne raison, ce qui est le cas. Leur première fois avec Brian étant un peu "rugueux" avec lui n'est qu'une des raisons. Il y a en réalité une raison plus profonde.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh oh...Brian is pissed, but now he knows why Justin isn't so eager for sex with him.

I hope they can solve their problems.



Author's Response:

Brian is pissed and he has a first clue about why Justin isn't so eager for sex with him. But he will discover that their first time isn't the only reason and that something deeper is also responsible.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 2

I think it's a good sign that Brian is jealous, he get a little payback for his cheating with Damon. ;-)



Author's Response:

It's a good sign indeed. He got a little payback and it also shows that he cares about Justin more than he would say and more that Justin would think.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2017 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start...I'm excited for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hou la la pas facile le Brian, mais c'était assez drôle finalement et la jalousie est là même si elle n'est pas au même niveau pour les 2 !!! Merci vite la suite!!

Author's Response:

Non Brian ne va pas être facile dans cette histoire lol. Les 2 étaient jaloux et je dirais même que Brian l'a exprimé de façon assez explicite.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

What a first task, that sure was a good test to see how much each cares and cares enough to be that much jealous. I’m sure this will help clear the underlying issues and help them sort them out. 

 

Excellent work xx



Author's Response:

It was already a pretty intense first task lol. They were both jealous and we can even say that Brian was the most jealous one, the one who expressed it the most. We'll see if the therapy will be enough to overcome their issues.

Thank you and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is very intriguing and you already have me hooked. I want to know why Brian did that and how he can get Justin to forgive him. He better not do it again. Justin is very right to want answers and to fix their relationship  because they love each other. 

 

Brilliant work. Very proud of you x



Author's Response:

It will be an intriguing and different story from what I already wrote. I'm glad to know you're already hooked. You already have kind of a clue of why Brian did that. He's not planning to do it again, at least if they succeed to fix their relationship. I think they do love each other despite everything.

I'm happy you're proud of me and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 2

This is getting good.  Can't wait to see where they end up (hopefully together) !!! Good writing job.



Author's Response:

All I can say it's that I love happy endings lol.

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2017 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's sad that Brian is being a pill.  First he wants Justin but than he pushs him away.  Will a couples retreat help?  Can't wait to find out.



Author's Response:

Brian will have very fluctuanting feelings and behavior throughout this story. You need to read to find out lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2017 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow...what a start...lovely plot..looking forward to more...banner is awesome too...perfect.



Author's Response:

The start is intriguing as the entire story. Brian and Justin not having sex and having some issues on this topic is really risky lol. 

The banner is awesome thanks to Alois. 

Thanks for your review and I hope you'll love this story too :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2017 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ah et oui superbe bannière !

Author's Response:

Oui grâce à la talentueuse Alois :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2017 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Début intéressant ma foi ! Vraiment original de voir Justin si réfractaire au sexe, qu'est ce qui a bien pu se passé pour le laisser si frustré et incompris ? J'ai hâte de voir comment il va faire accepter ce voyage à Brian ! Merci Audrey pour cette nouvelle histoire !

Author's Response:

Oui je prends un gros risque avec le fait que leur vie sexuelle soit très compliquée et que Justin y soit si réfractaire. Frustré et incompris je ne sais pas, je dirais plus mal à l'aise à l'idée d'être intime avec Brian. La réaction de Brian sera dans le prochain chapitre.

Merci pour ton commentaire et j'espère que tu aimeras aussi cette histoire :-)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2017 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, Audrey!  Ahhh....troubles between them.  Poor Justin - and Brian!  I feel for both of them, actually.  Intriguing start!  Looking forward to hearing more of how they got to this point, and what happens in the future.  Thanks for posting so many stories for us to enjoy on here, Audrey.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim. Yes, they're having some serious issues together. You'll feel even more through the story. I know it's an intriguing story but I wanted to give it a try. 

I'm always very happy to write and share my stories with this great fandom on this wonderful website.

Audrey.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2017 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sounds like this is going to be a really good story.  I love when Brian & Justin are happy, but that is fairy tale so when they have some problems, it is like real life sets in.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I hope it's going to be a really good story lol. It will be very different for sure. They have some real issues in their couple. I'm agree, it's more like life sets in.

Thank you for your review :-)

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2017 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

So intrigued.  why us Justin having issues? Great start. 



Author's Response:

It is intriguing you're right. It won't be a common story as Justin will have some real issues with intimacy.

Thanks for your review. I'm happy you loved the first chapter.

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