Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2018 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

Why does Brian continually give Michael a free ride? I know they have history but eventually Brian will realise any debts are paid! Plus Michael still insults Justin and Bree and Brian said nothing I know he is barely standing and a fight at that time would have probably knocked him out but still... I am probably moaning because I seriously cannot stand Michael lol

Author's Response:

Good morning, Chris. You have asked the $100,000 question and to be honest, I don't have the answer either.

Every family has a member that is a Royal pain in the butt but you try to love them anyway.

Maybe we should just blame Debbie because she raised him and the apple never falls far from the tree. 

However, they both have good hearts despite their myriad of shortcomings. Thank you for the review.

 

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2018 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

You say I have no love for Mikey? Yeah... something like that. And you didn't even need a vowel! You got it on the first try :)



Author's Response:

You are such a riot. Michael isn't an evil person but he is clueless and petty, but Brian loves him.

I agree with Bree who once said, if he knew better, he would do better. Thanks for  the feedback and even though

This story has been writing itself longer than I planned, I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2018 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

Stupid is as stupid does. Michael is such a dumb-ass. He just can't help himself, can he?

IMO, Brian was way too lenient with Michael. Brian should have told him this wasn't about Mikey's little feelings, but about what was best for Brian. Why did he call him and have him come over and tell him right away? I thought he was gonna wait for Sunday. Maybe Michael's queen-out could have been tampered down if Brian told Michael with the rest of the family. Just let him try and say,  “Those silly kids have no idea what to do for someone who is as sick as you are. No wonder you’re just skin and bones."   Bree would have chewed him up and spit him out, hearing him say something like that. What did Michael think Brian would look like after a month of chemo? A picture of health and beauty? Those "kids" probably took better care of Brian than Michael ever could have. And the, Are you cured?  is an even bigger sign of his stupidity. Cancer doesn't get cured.  It will go into remission, because there can always still be cancer cells in your body for years after your treatment is complete.

If I was Bree, I would told Horvath to arrest Michael for stalking and assault. She is only 16 - Michael should have never grabbed her. What if she wasn't a black belt? He could have seriously hurt her. And the police should have arrested him for making a false report. Michael wasted valuable police resources. Deserved a fine in my book. (Guess you can tell I'm not a Mikey fan!)

Word on the street says you got your ass kicked by a girl.  Yeah, take that Mikey! The "kids" should give an exclusive to the local newspaper. Or regal it at the Sunday dinner.  How much do you wanna bet Michael can't keep his mouth shut and breaks down crying to Debbie, before Brian has a chance to tell her, himself? (Ooooh... I'd love to see that happen!) Because just like canon, Michael told Justin they shouldn't say anything to Brian, and what does Michael do? Shows up there, and the first thing he does does is cry and tells Brian he knows. So, Michael deserves the Wrath of Kinney!

Good chapter! You spun Michael so well. Looking forward to your next update.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

Hey Cathy, thank you for your strongly worded review.  If I didn't know better I would think that you had no love for Mikey, Lol! Brian was performing damage control when he decided to fill his pal in about his condition because Michael is a loose cannon. He would  have been running around the burgh and shooting his mouth off until Debbie and the rest of the gang descended on Brian. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2018 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

Well, Michael remains Michael the asshole he is. Luckily Brian did not tell him anything before he'd rather kill him with his moans. Bree is so great!I love her.

Author's Response:

Michael is like death and taxes, you can run but you can't hide. If you ask me, Bree let Michael off easy because she could have snapped him like a twig.

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter and I appreciate your reviews. There will be more next week. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2018 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

Michael is the biggest drama queen.  Couldn't tell the truth if it bit him.  If Brian had told him, he'd probably be dead from all the 'help' Mikey would give him.



Author's Response:

Michael is the kind of son only a mother can love. His one saving grace is that he

cares for Brian unconditionally. Too bad he suffers from delusions. I don't know how Ben put up with him. 

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave me a review.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2018 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 FREE AT LAST

Great chapter.  Oh that Mikey is just so annoying and you write him perfectly.



Author's Response:

Hey there, Happy Gamma. I think you speak for everyone who loves to hate Mikey. 

Thank you for the review and I appreciate your comments.

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