Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Calgary Moon
Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2018 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ok so first of all, the joke of Brian with his body part getting stuck into Justin was just too funny lol.

I'm happy Brian spent some time with Henry, having so much fun. It's definitively a thing Brian would had love to do.

Now, I'm in a hurry to have this karaoke chapter girl lol.



Author's Response:

Lol I’m so happy you enjoyed it and liked that a Joke it cane out of nowhere lol. 

 

That chapter is next don’t you worry. 

 

Thabk you for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

Such a wonderful day starting with breakfast in bed.  Brian is getting to do things he's never had a chance to do before.  I'm not surprised that he would want to have a sleepover like the kids.  Interesting infor on wild horses.



Author's Response:

I’m delighted that Brian is getting to do these things he didn’t do growing up. He is seeing the fun through a child’s eye and loving it. I hope you like what’s to come and I’m sorry if my posting is slow. I am writing it’s just taking longer then I thought. im so glad you liked the info on the wild horses I was worried about getting it wrong. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xox 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2018 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

It's so great that Gus and Jenny are getting to have good times, even better that Jenny is included as if Brian wouldn't.  Brian loves Jenny just as much as Gus.



Author's Response:

I love that as well, Brian’s heart is huge and he wouldn’t want her to feel excluded or less loved because he did as a child. More fun times ahead. Thank you so much for the wonderful review it really means a lots to me xxxx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Thanks again but it's never enough to spend time with this lovely family Gus and Jenny are adorable!

Author's Response:

You are very welcome I am so happy you are enjoying the family time. It’s so great to write them like this. I have more fun things planned. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2018 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Gus & Jenny are so cute in this chapter.  Loved that they wait to see each other oprn gifts so they can enjoy their the reactions.  Wonderful chapter filled with happy family time.   A real feel good story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I’m so happy you are enjoying my story. I love writing these kids they make it fun to write. I have more fun times ahead planned. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxx

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 9

This is such a happy story and I love it.  It is so nice to have a story like this that gives us a smile especially on a bad day.  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I am so happy to hear that, bad days can be horrible I am having those lately so a story that can make you smile is good. I’m so glad my story can do that for you. I have more fun things planned and I hope I don’t keep you guys waiting to long. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 9

Breakfast in bed was really a cute attention from the kids. They do all enjoy their time there and they're all very happy and relax.

Now, I'm waiting for my karaoke girl lol.

 



Author's Response:

They really are enjoying their time there and the kids really are so cute. Lol the karaoke is coming in the next chapter I promise. I hope I write it right. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

That was soo much fun...great going...loving it.

Thanks for the update...take care ...xoxo



Author's Response:

You are very welcome, I am so happy you liked this update. I’m so sorry that it took so long. I have more fun things ahead. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2018 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 8

Brian is living his childhood fully.



Author's Response:

He sure is, he deserves to let himself be free to do so. I’m so happy that he feels comfortable enough with them to jet himself be a big kid. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2018 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 8

Another sweet chapter. I love the part with Brian and the cats and when Mary caught our lovers, talking naughty lol.

I can't wait to see Brian at Karaoke lol.



Author's Response:

Lol yeah I loved writing Brian with the cats and I will have fun writing him at Karaoke. This is a fun story to work on. 

 

Thank you you for the wonderful review and for all your support xx

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

Haha Big Brian  is scared of daddy  donkey lol



Author's Response:

Lol yeah, I think he wanted to jump over the fence 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 4

You have written this to make it feel like we are there watching it first hand. Great job  Hon

 



Author's Response:

That has made my day, thank you so so much xox 

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

Damn  girl you made me want to cry. Loving this 💕💖



Author's Response:

So sorry I made you cry, I am happy you are you enjoying this. I have lots more to come xx

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hi, Vicki - sorry I haven't had time to review each chapter, but I wanted you to know that I've been reading it.  Love how Justin's grandparents have been so welcoming to him.  This is a lovely story!  And I love the banner. It really helps me to create the story in my mind.

Thank you for writing this.  I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I’m thrilled to bits that you are enjoying it and loving the grandparents, I love them as well. The banner is a great way to put that picture in your game as, Jan did a great job with it. I’m going to write more of this tomorrow as I plan on going nowhere lol   Thank you so much for the amazing review xx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is great...not only the kids living there childhood but also brian who did not had a good childhood growing up...i always wanted to see brian living his child life he deserves it..thank u for writting it.



Author's Response:

This means so much to me, you brought tears to my eyes with your kind words. You got what I was after showing Brian in this way. I have more planned for Brian I promise good times for him. 

 

Thank you you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lovely chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you ever so much 😊😊😊😊

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2017 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 4

Smiling right now...very happy to read this story..thank u for writting such a delightful story.



Author's Response:

You are very welcome and thank you for reading and reviewing my story it makes me so happy xx

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2017 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 6

Love the visit with the baby donkeys.  Lots of memories being made for everyone.  Great, feel good story.  Bill



Author's Response:

I loved writing that bit, it was fun and I wish I had been there with them. I’m so thrilled you are enjoying my story. Gonna write more soon I have tons in my head burstin to get out lol . Thank you so much for the brilliant review x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Aw so sweet a lovely chapter all this helps Brian really accept he is good enough to be loved truely

Author's Response:

I’m really happy you liked this chapter and got the lovely message out of it. He does deserve to be loved and maybe now he will believe it. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 6

t was very funny!! Brian who is scared of baby donkeys with Jenny who will protect him and the children have chosen beautiful names, they pay attention to the life of their father and uncle. Thank you for the update!

Author's Response:

Glad you found it funny we all need laughter don’t we. The kids really did pay attention and that is true love of a family isn’t it. Lots more to come. Thank you so much for reading my story and for the wonderful review xox 

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

Brian being afraid of the daddy donkey? That was funny. I was totally imagining the scene in my head of him, hidden being Jenny lol

The names for the babies are grear and the reasons why they picked up those names are really cute

Loved it Vicki :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me.  Lol I could picture it as I was writing it, it made me laugh as well. I hope I can write more funny bits for you guys. 

 

The names were really special so I’m so happy they picked them. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 6

So funny.  Jenny protecting her Uncle Brian.



Author's Response:

Lol I loved writing that bit, I could see it happening in my head so writing it was a hoot. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow that's a lot of horses.  Jenny naming the twins sounds like fun.



Author's Response:

It is a lot of horses isn’t it lol they are big on rescuing them. Jenny is such a great little girl and naming them was perfect for her x

 

Thank you so much for the fab review xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 4

It's a shame it took so long for them to get together.  Love the meal and gifts.



Author's Response:

I agree it is a shame it took so long but now they can reconnect and be happy. I’m delighted you like the gifts I thought they would be fitting and thes love them. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 3

The meeting with Justin's grandparents couldn't have gone better.  I was glad to see that Craig was disowned.  Serves him right.



Author's Response:

I loved writing this bit, I could see it clearly in my head, they love Justin and have hearts of gold. 

 

Thank you so much for the fantastic review, xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2017 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

What a wonderful flight.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I’m so happy you liked it. I would have loved to have been on that flight to witness the interactions between them all. 

 

Thank you again for the beautiful review it means so much to me x

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 5

The great grandparents are great, a real treat for Gus & JR.  Everyone is enjoying their time together.  Bill



Author's Response:

I’m loving writing the kids with their great grandparents and I have more planned with them that I hope you’ll enjoy. I can’t thank you enough for all your help and support. Thank you so much for the fantastic review xox

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2017 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great vacation for all of them in a magical place.  Bill



Author's Response:

I’m so happy you like the location and there will be fun things for them to see and doo. Thank you so much for the wonderful review it means the world to me xxx

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Lovely chapter the family are really starting to relax. The chapters are too short though Kim lol

Author's Response:

Lol I know, I tried making them longer but they told me stop. Stories have a habit of taking over lol. I am so happy that you enjoyed it and will enjoy more when I post. Thank you so much for the wonderful review x

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

Always that very sweet story I love ! No problems just love ! Thank you Vicky!

Author's Response:

You are very welcome and I am so happy you love my story. I am loving writing this story. To write something like this after the dark first part is great. Thank you so much for the wonderful review x

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

What a delightful story with no problems or family members causing trouble.  We need one of these once in a while.  Keep writing.



Author's Response:

You brought happy tears to my eyes with this thank you so much. I am over the moon that you enjoyed it. I promise there is more to come. I have two chapters ready I just need to write more. Big hugs xx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 5

I really love the relation the kids have together aswell as Britin's one. They are a very happy family and I feel this trip will really help Justin to feel better.


Thanks for sharing :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I’m so happy that you are enjoying the kids relationship with each other. I love when kids support each other. This trip will really help Justin a lot and maybe heal Brian as well. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xox

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2017 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

Marvelous work..thank u.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I’m so thrilled you enjoyed my story. Lots more to come, big hugs xxx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 4

I love their wonderful family. The relationsip between Gus and Jenny is really cute. Brian can be proud of his SonnyBoy.

Loved the update Vicki, everything is so perfect for our lovers.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I love writing the kids interacting and our boys having fun. I hope you enjoy what’s to come xx

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

So nice to have a story that has no nasty Michael or Lindsay.  I enjoy when the two of them cause trouble, but once in a while a pleasant story is so much better.  Great writing job.  Looking forward to seeing it continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I agree no nasty people in this something light hearted. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxxx Lots more to come xx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2017 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

That is a wonderful family ! I love all of them! Thank you Vicky for the new chapter!

Author's Response:

You are very welcome and thank you from the bottom of my heart for the wonderful review. I’m so happy you like this family, I love writing them. Xxx

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2017 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

Justin's grandparents are soooo cute. They accepted Brian, Justin, and the kids without losing a beat.  We like Mary and Henry, they can stay.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I’m so thrilled that you liked them, I’m loving writing them. I have lots more planned with them. They love with an open heart 💕. This was the perfect way to end my day, I’m just in bed after going to a great concert. Big hugs xxx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2017 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Fabulous work...i love it.



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much, I’m so happy you liked it. Made my day xxx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2017 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 3

Fabulous work...i love it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much that makes me so happy that you do xx thank you for the fab review x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2017 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 3

Lol Sunshine Ranch so glad they have disinfranchised Craig because of his homophobia

Author's Response:

Me to, they are better people than their son. I’m so happy you read and reviewed my story. Thank you so much xxx

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2017 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sunshine Ranch, great name.  Good story.  Nice when there is no Michael or Lindsay messing everything up.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Awe thank you. I’m so happy you liked the name of the Ranch. Yeah I’m glad they are not there it’s just the the guys and Jenny having fun. Lots more to come. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2017 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

Justin's grandparents are very lovely !!.

I want to learn more about Mary and Henry

Thank you for this chapter, so sweet

Author's Response:

You are so very welcome, I am so over the moon you liked it. We will find out more in time I’m sure. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2017 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 3

Sweet chapter. I already love Justin's grandparents. The reunion was really tender.

They cut Craig from their lives because he didn't accept Justin? Well, it's a tough decision for parents but it was motivating by a good reason.

I'm looking forward to learn more about Mary and Henry and to read more about this trip.

 



Author's Response:

Oh I’m so thrilled that you liked it and the grandparents, I loved writing them. I hope you continue to enjoy them and all they bring. They have a lot of love to give. 

 

Thank you you so much for the wonderful review xxx

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2017 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

I've been catching up on reading and realized I'd missed the first part of the series so I got to read that too. I enjoyed it all.  Funniest part - Brian whining like a 3 year old - I would have wanted to put him in a time out too...LOL  Looking forward to everyone meeting the grandparents.



Author's Response:

Oh that thrills me to know that you have read that as well and enjoyed it. Lol Brian does have that wanna put him in time out mode doesn’t he. I really hope that you guys will enjoy meeting them. Lots more to come soon. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 2

Marvelous work..thank u.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me xx

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2017 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great chapter I am looking forward to the next chapters

Author's Response:

Thank you so much I'm so happy that you enjoyed it xxx

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2017 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm still loving this story. I love the relationship between Brian and Justin, the way they understand each other without a word.

Jenny is just precious. I love the bound between Gus and Justin. Brian's reaction to the cockpit thing was so cute.

I hope everything will be fine with Justin's grandparents.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that you are loving my story, that means everything to me. Lol Brian is a big kid at heart and seeing the Cockpit I'm sure mad him feel really happy like a child at Christmas. Justin and Brian do have a strong bond they came through so much together. I love writing the kids they just write themselves and coming across really well thank god.

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2017 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi, Vicki!  What a sweet story!  I love how you express how B and J feel without having to speak, and how they treat Gus and JR with such love and respect. 

 

I grinned about Brian's reaction to being invited into the cockpit.  Ha!  Like father, like son. ;)

 

I'm anxious now to see how Justin's grandparents react to his visit with Brian and the two kids.  Thank you for posting this on here, Vicki.  It is always a pleasure to read your stories, and we are blessed to have them on here.:)  XOXO  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Awe think you, I'm so happy you are enjoying it. Lol yeah Brian is a big kid isn't he and there is more of that to come. I do hope that you like the reaction when I next post it. I'm loving the story and now that I can breathe again I can write more.

 

Thank you so much for the review xxxxx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2017 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2

It's a wonderful chapter ! jenny and Gus have a really good travel with brian and justin ! Thank you for the update !

Author's Response:

You are very welcome, and I'm so happy you liked it. Jenny and Gus love hanging out with the guys so I'm sure they will have a great time. Hugs xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2017 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

Love seeing how Jenny is enjoying her plane ride.  This is a wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm over the moon that you liked this chapter, you have made my day. Jenny really did enjoy it and she loves her uncle Brian.

 

big hugs xx

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2017 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Road Trip, road trip, yay! I am going to enjoy this story. Happy to see the guys happy and the munchers being so pleasant. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I really hope you enjoy their trip, I have lots planned for them. Thank you for the review it means so much to me xx

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2017 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great beginning, looking forward to more.  Glad that Bob was such a help to you!  Bill



Author's Response:

Ong Bill I'm so sorry I miss wrote the name I feel so bad, I hope you can forgive me. I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter and thank you for reviewing. Xx

This happens all the time since we admins have a hive mind existence. Frankly, I thought you were referring to my work on the new upcoming website. Bill is a huge help and we are very proud of him, and grateful for his assistance. ~bob

 

 

Reviewer: BritinLover (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love this first chapter. I love your writing skill and the relationship between Brian and Justin is funny and so tender. After what Brian found about Justin in the previous story, it's great to see them happy.

I love their relationship with the kids too. I'm waiting for the next chapter :-)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this and how they are with each other. They need a lift from the last one so I hope this will be it. I have lots planned lol. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like this beginning! Thank you for continuing the story I can not wait to travel with them!

Author's Response:

Oh I'm so happy and I do hope you enjoy the journey with them. I'm having fun writing it I must say. Thank you so much for the review xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can see I'm going to enjoy this story.  Wonder what Michael says when he finds out they are taking Jenny. Which I think is a great idea.  I loved Brian's response.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Brian really is a good dad and uncle. Xx

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for everything, couldn't have done it with you xxx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Awesome start...lovely plot...looking forward to more...very very nicely done...loved it..thank u for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I was so nervous about writing this and posting it. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it. Big hugs and thanks for the amazing review d84;d84;d84;

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