Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2018 03:51 AM · On: The Truth

Great story, love it

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2017 03:38 PM · On: The Truth

Shame he missed it the first time.  Time travel seems to have its problems.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it has. Maybe someday Brian will believe Justin :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2017 10:21 AM · On: The Date

What is Brian up to?  Handcuffing Justin!  At least he got a great meal first.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2017 04:01 PM · On: The Date

What is Brian up to?  Handcuffing Justin!  At least he got a great meal first.



Author's Response:

Hehe, Brian's a complicated man. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2017 03:13 PM · On: Handcuffs

Sounds like Justin is getting what he wants.  lol. 



Author's Response:

Hehe, he just might be :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 04:52 AM · On: The Truth

Awesome ...that was really hot...lovely little story..loved it..the banner is wonderful too..thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this story :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 04:44 AM · On: The Date

Kinney is incorrigible.. wow..too good..loving it..thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked this chapter. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2017 04:11 AM · On: Handcuffs

Christ...that was soo funny...hilarious..thanks u for posting again.



Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm happy you had fun reading this chapter :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2017 10:43 PM · On: Success Is A Decision

Loved this story, very entertaining and would happily have kept reading way more chapters:-)



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2017 12:38 AM · On: The Truth

Justin spilled the beans about his superpower but Brian doesn't seem to be an impressed believer. But that's okay. At least he filled us in on what he and Justin were up to during those missing moments. Still loving this story and thanks for continuing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I couldn't really imagine Brian believing it without proof and Justin really couldn't prove it. Thank you for reading and leaving me comments. I appreciate them so much. 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 05:21 PM · On: The Truth

I have read the last 3 chapters but is it really finished? I love this story it is original and I would love to know more what Justin does when he goes back , It looks that Brian very much appreciated that and me too !!! Thank you for this story

Author's Response:

Unfortunately this is it. I can see from the read counts per chapter that people weren't interested in this. Originally this was how long this story was supposed to be. But I'm happy you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me comments. I appreciate them.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 02:49 PM · On: The Truth

Sexy chapter!  So now Brian knows. I wonder if that will change things at all?  Loving the playfulness of this story, Heidi! Thank you for posting this on here. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I don't think anything changes. Brian will probably never really know about Justin's abilities. I'm really glad you liked this story. Thank you for reading and commenting <3. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 02:40 PM · On: The Date

Love your sense of humor in this story!  The "little buddy" comments were too cute!  And he can travel back AND forth?  Hmmm...nice way to change things up, and present a different viewpoint each time!  If only we ALL had that power!  Lucky man, too, when it involves Brian, although with him, I might never get out of bed - ha!

Onto the next chapter now. So glad you posted more of this!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I so wish I could have that power. I know exactly what I would do! And I agree, I would never leave the bed if I had Brian and could go back in time :D. Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 02:37 PM · On: Handcuffs

Love the playful bantering here, and what is going on inside Justin's head whenever he wants to 'redo' something with Brian.  Enjoying this story very much, Heidi! And now onto the next part!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you for the sweet comment.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2017 09:46 PM · On: Bondage

Your story is funny and original.  Justin proved that persistence leads to success. I would hsve loved to read Brian's reaction about Justin's powers. Please give us a little more.



Author's Response:

I did write three more chapters (the last one is not fully written) to this but people's interest dropped considerably after I posted the second chapter. But maybe I could take a second look at those chapters and finish writing the last one. You'll probably be the only one giving them a shot but... don't know what to write here. Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this story. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2017 09:27 PM · On: Success Is A Decision

Loved this first chapter because it was as funny as the movie Groundhog Day!



Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed this. I've never seen Groundhog Day, maybe I should check it out :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2017 04:24 AM · On: Bondage

This is great. Although I do wonder what he missed out on by fast forwarding...LOL I am curious about how Brian would feel if he ever found out about Justin's gift. With his devious mind there are multiples possiblities...



Author's Response:

I'm pretty sure something very interesting things happened. 

I'm pretty sure Brian would be confused at first but then would like to have fun with it. Especially when he finds out that Justin can't remember what happens when he goes to the future.

Thank you the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Bondage

Time travel can be tricky.  



Author's Response:

Yes it can :). Thank you the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2017 01:24 AM · On: Success Is A Decision

Took a lot of snaps to get the right response.  If he can go back in time what else can he do?



Author's Response:

Brian is tricky like that. You have to do the exact right thing to get the right outcome. Thank you the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2017 12:43 PM · On: Bondage

That was very interesting and pretty funny with Justin who finally did as he wants; I'm looking forward to seeing Brian's reaction to his awakening with Justin who's gone!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Unfortunately people aren't interested in this story so this will be the last chapter. There's no point in writing something people don't like. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2017 07:34 AM · On: Bondage

Lols...that was funny as well as hot...u r too good...love it..thanks for the chap.

P.s.-what if brian knew all along that justin is a time traveller...lols..that would be hilarious.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoys this. Maybe it would be funny if Brian knew and actually remembered everything that happened. Unfortunately people don't seem to be interested in this so I'll end this story here. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2017 11:29 AM · On: Success Is A Decision

Justin is a persistent little shit,! Waiting for the next chapter !

You can be bored anytime ! Thank you !

Author's Response:

Next chapter will probably be up soon. I'm happy you liked this :). Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2017 07:26 AM · On: Success Is A Decision

What a lot of fun. You should get bored more often. Looking forward to what Justin gets up to next...LOL



Author's Response:

Hehe, I'll try to be bored more often :). I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2017 03:36 AM · On: Success Is A Decision

persistent little shit,omg..that was damn hilarious ...i loved it very much...this is what u thought when u were bored...lol..why dont u get bored more often..this is the mindblowing start...amazing...u r the best..thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Justin is persisten :D. I'm always thinking new plots. Especially if I'm bored. The thoughts that wander in my brain are pretty priceless. It's a wonderful place :D. Thank you for the comment.

Reviewer: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 09:40 PM · On: Success Is A Decision

Nice!

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