Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2017 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 - You can stay here
I know Connor has feelings for Gabriel but he's so jealous of Justin being in Liam's life! He seems a little sneaky to me, I'm on the fence about that guy. Don't know how I feel. Of course he's going to stay at Liam's house...nice! Please tell me we don't have to wait much longer for a kiss at least?
Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2017 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 8 - You can stay here
Hi Alois!
I love the Liam/Justin/Connor dynamic! They are like old friends and banter is very easy between them. I really like Connor, especially when he's being so playful.
How nice of Justin to volunteer to deliver his painting to Gabriel. He's fitting right in!
I enjoyed Connor pushing Liam's buttons by inviting Justin to stay at his place. Liam's reaction was predictable.Liam can't let Justin go. He sure is playing with fire and we all know what happens when you play with fire! Ugh, I see heavy angst coming soon.
Leave it to Justin to play matchmaker and recruit Liam to help lol. That is going to be one interesting dinner for sure.
As always, a wonderful chapter! Looking forward to the next. Thank you!
Laura
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like Connor, I have such a great time writing him! Justin is a sweetheart, isn't he? LOL
You might be onto something about heavy angst coming. Although, the dinner will definitely be an interesting one ;)
Thank you so much Laura, for you ongoing support! I think I will have a new chapter up very soon, maybe even today. I will contact you via Facebook, since there will be some changes with the posting. But I'm finishing this story :)
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2017 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 8 - You can stay here
Wow! Love the banter between the boys... I sometimes forget while I'm reading that Justin doesn't know what WE know about Liam. I can't imagine what will happen when he finds out. I guess he's staying long enough to figure it out, LOL!
I love that Justin has found a renewed love of sketching.
Connor is adorable! That's going to be a very interesting dinner party...
Author's Response: Hey Trish!
Aw, I'm so glad you enjoy the banter between them. And yes, it's hard sometimes to remember that Justin doesn't know. I have a feeling it won't be very long now before he discovers the truth, now that he's staying ;)
Justin is feeling very inspired at the moment, I wonder why...
I'm thrilled you like Connor. I have such a great time writing him LOL
Just to inform you, I'm not sure I will keep posting this story publicly for long, for a lot of reasons. If it comes to that, I will continue writing it and share it directly with the readers who are interested to know more. I could also change my mind in the next couple of weeks LOL.
But whatever I will do, thank you so much for your support on this, I really appreciate it; and I promise to finish this no matter what :)
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2017 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 - You can stay here
Ah oui ça va être amusant, il me tarde de lire la suite ! J'aime de plus en plus ces 4 hommes avec tout leurs sentiments inavoués ou compliqués c'est vrai que l'on ne connait pas encore vraiment leurs vies et leurs passés, et Liam et Justin qui se rapprochent tout doucement.
Merci pour ce chapitre Alois, je suis frustrée de lire que tu ne posteras pas aussi souvent je suis tellement accro ! Mais bon je comprends il y a aussi la vraie vie ! Fais pour le mieux ma chère amie pour toi et tes lecteurs affamés!
Author's Response: J'aime tellement lire tes commentaires, Marie-France. Ca fait vraiment chaud au coeur :)
Je posterai les deux prochains chapitres, mais je ne suis pas sûre de continuer après ça. Pas de panique, je continue à écrire cette histoire et compte bien la terminer! J'ai juste des interrogations plein la tête et ne suis pas sûre que je veuille continuer à poster sur un site public, pour pleins de raisons. Mais je te promets que si je décide d'arrêter de poster pour le moment (et je n'ai pas décider pour l'instant!), je t'inviterai dans mon doc (il suffit d'une adresse mail) pour que tu puisses toujours profiter des nouveaux chapitres :)
Encore un grand merci Marie-France, pour ta gentilesse et ton soutien!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2017 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 - You can stay here
OMG! And here I thought things were looking up.
Author's Response: It would be too simple LOL
Thank you Phyllis! Love reading your thoughts :)
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