Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Beneath the lie
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2017 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

I can't wait for Liam and Justin to meet!

Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2017 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

Hi Alois,

 

All through this chapter I wanted to see Brian and Justin meet up, but I know you will drag it out, but I love that at the same time. I know, I am twisted, what can I say? lol 

 

I am still wondering who Liam is, not! lol

 

Brian's life, so far that it has turned out for okay. Except I know his heart aches to be with his friend's, since he has been away from the Pitts. I am glad he has a friend to hang out with, though.

Justin is such a determined little shit, I am thrilled he is going after Brian! I am sure you won't make it easy ;)

 

I am excited to see how this story unfolds and that the mastermind Harry Malone gets his due.

 

Thanks for the entertainment, as always :)


Lisa

 



Author's Response:

Hi Lisa,

As always, your review is a delight to read. Thank you!

I know readers are anticipating the meeting between Justin and 'Liam', but you're right, I'm afraid, it won't be easy lol

Thanks for supporting this one, Lisa, it means a lot :D I hope everything is okay with you and your family <3

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2017 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

And now the pieces are coming together. Can't wait...more please...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting Monica! More next Friday :) 

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

So it seems that Brian stumbled on to an art forgery scheme and ended up in federal witness protection for his trouble. And obviously Carl knows about it. Stockwell being dead would be a good thing under normal circumstances, however in this case not so much. It made Agent Bennett's job so much harder ugh.

So, Brian aka Liam is hiding out in Lakevallee - a small town from what I gather. Of course the guy he f***s more than once, Connor, is an artist. I'm surprised he's not blonde then again there could only ever be one blonde artist for Brian. I'm sure Connor is just a convenience because I imagine gay men are hard to come by in such a small town. Not to mention he probably has to keep a low profile. 

I have to wonder if it's a coincidence that his good friend, Gabriel, owns an art gallery in Lakevallee or if it's somehow connected to the forgery case. Maybe Brian is helping with the investigation? Hmmm. 

I'm glad Justin followed his instincts and made the trip to Lakevallee. I think it very well could have been Brian who left the clue behind in the cafe. I'm curious how long before he and Brian cross paths and how that will go!

Awesome update and looking forward to the next!

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, for the delay in responding, Laura, RL is really busy (such news, right? lol)

Love to read your thoughts so much! Thanks for sharing them :) Lakevallée is a town of artists, as you've pointed out. I love to read your theories :D

Everything will be answered at some point (not quite yet though) but I promise some action coming soon!

Thank you again and I will have another chapter up next Friday :) 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

So, Liam aka Brian has been playing photographer while he has been MIA for the past few years. Has he been in a witness protection situation? Carl knows what is going on that's for certain. Now that Justin has arrived, I can't wait for stuff to hit the fan. Thanks for the update.

 



Author's Response:

You will have some answers soon, also it's going to take a while for all to fall into place. Next chapter will be posted soon and promise to be interesting ;)

Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

Hi, Alois!  I have just now had the chance to read Part 3, and OMG, I am loving this story more and more!  What you are so adept at is creating 3-dimensional other characters that you can see in your mind's eye. You don't just give us shallow characters that are rushed and dropped into a story, just to make the plot progress.  You make us learn about them, and in a lot of cases, care and sympathize with them; for example, in Connor's case.  Funny it would be the same name as the movie star guy you fucked Justin. ;) But I must compliment you on your ability to create such strong other characters in all your stories. :)

Speaking of which, I like how you have had 'Liam' aka Brian take up photography in his new life; that makes perfect sense to me, since he always seemed to enjoy taking photos on the show.  And I could definitely see him on a motorcycle as his mode of transportation.  I imagine there was definitely a time in which he had to grow accustomed to such a slower mode of living after being in the city. Perhaps you will give us some flashbacks on that period.

I also like how you are interweaving all the characters together to an inevitable meeting (at some point; something tells me that you are NOT going to just drop in B and J seeing each other that quickly, although I wouldn't mind).  Either that, or you will have them meet, but Justin might feel betrayed over Brian's disappearance and making him grieve for him all this time.  That is a LONG time to elapse; but if it meant keeping his loved ones safe, it is also such a 'Brian' thing to do.  He always showed how much he cared in actions, rather than verbally expressing it.

Speaking of which, I had never heard this expression before:  "hare off on a wild goose chase."  Interesting.  I'm more used to it being 'running off on a wild goose chase,' but I still knew exactly what you meant.  I love to see how writers express themselves at times from a different perspective. 

I adore a good suspenseful mystery, and this one has all the markings of that.  I can't wait to read the rest! Thank you for posting this one.  Loving it!  ~Kim



Author's Response:

You always write the most interesting reviews, Kim! Thank you so much for sharing all that with me, I'm over the moon.

I try creating interesting OC since the plots I come up with often have them, and I feel like you can't really enjoy a story if the OC is rushed. In that instance, the character of Connor is one I really love, fucked up but very interesting to write about. And I honestly didn't remember the name Connor from QAF, until my beta mentioned it LOL But since I like the name, I kept it.

Since the town I created is a town of artists, it was netural for Liam to become a photographer. And I couldn't resist the Harley as a mode of transportation. We will know at some point what 'Liam' is doing here and why he's still alive and never return to the Pitts. Also, why in a way, he's not the same man he was before.

Hmm, now, when is Justin going to meet Liam? Well, you will know soon, although, it might not turn out exactly like the readers expect * hint, hint * and no, I won't say more, ha! As for Justin discovering the truth, I fear you're onto something... we will see if and how they can overcome such a lie.

About the expression 'hare off on a wild good chase', we come up with it with my beta ;) I'm still learning the English vocabulary and trying to better myself, and Karynn helps me more than I can say with that.

I'm so grateful for your support and I adore the fact that you want to know more! Thank you for reading this one, I deeply appreciate that. Hope you're okay, my friend :) <3 

 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

OMG! Just the anticipation of Justin and "Liam's" reunion is killing me! Very curious about the details of the police investigation and exactly what happened to Brian that fateful night! 

This is SOOOOO good!



Author's Response:

Hey Trish!

And yay! I'm so excited to share more of this story with you! This is very interesting to write and I'm smiling as I read all the reactions to the unanswered questions; It's really fun to imagine a suspenseful plot.

Thank you for your review and your enthusiasm :) Love to read your comments <3 

Reviewer: Glo (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2017 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

Wow! Okay first of all...is Lakevallee in Canada? I was trying to figure out where exactly it is from your desription. Sounds lovely, it is a real place right? Now on to my theory: Liam is Brian who is under the witness protection program thru the FBI. And of course he's attracted to artists, duh! lol Love the Desperate Houswives & Harley references. And now Justin has come to town! Woohoo, things are gonna get hot around the lake! Although I cannot imagine Brian Kinney in a plaid shirt and a cap. This is going to be a very enlightening trip for Sunshine huh?



Author's Response:

Hey Glo! And no, Lakevallée is an imaginary town in Montana. It was easier for me to create one since I don't live in America and could imagine it as I wanted ;)

I so love your theory! We will know soon if part of it is right, since some questions will be answered as the story proceeds. Glad you like the reference to 'Desperate Housewives' and Liam's Harley! LOL And Liam's style is quite different from Brian's, right? Justin is in for some surprises...

Love to read your reviews! Hope all if well with you <3 :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2017 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

Wow.  Justin's arrived and I hope will have a chance meeting with Liam.  Then you have Connor to complicate things.  Who is the mole?  So many ways this could go and I'll enjoy seeing what you do!



Author's Response:

So many questions, right? And believe me, it's only the beginning LOL. I'm so glad you want to know more Phyllis! Thank you so much for the support, as always <3 :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2017 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Lakevallée

Oh mon dieu ! Est ce que Liam est Brian ? Je crois que j'aimerai ça ! Super chapitre Alois, vraiment on
rentre dans l'histoire petit à petit avec juste ce qu'il faut pour se poser plein de questions ! Merciiii

Author's Response:

Je crois que tu as deviné! et je suis super contente que tu sois toujours intéressée pour connaitre la suite! Ce chapitre était essentiel pour introduire de nouveaux personnages qui auront un rôle important dans cette histoire, qui sera surtout centrée sur Brian et Justin.

Encore un grand merci Marie-France! J'espère que tout va bien dans le sud :)

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