Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Beneath the lie
Reviewer: Cabaret Fan (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2017 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

I can understand Justins decision to go to Lakevallée...I'm curious what Justin may find there!



Author's Response:

It's going to be interesting :) 

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

OMG! OMG! My heart shattered into pieces thinking Brian was dead but then I remembered your declaration that this wasn't a death fic. Phew! However this didn't stop my heart from threatening to jump out of my chest. Good grief, if all chapters are like this I may not survive lol.

I'm elated that Michael is actually an adult here. It's a shock that he of all people got through to Justin. Even though Justin seems to only be just making it through the day, at least he's not killing himself with drinking, drugs, and random sex anymore. We have Michael to thank for that. I never thought I'd thank Michael for anything lol.

Could that have been Brian in the cafe? I don't think it was a coincidence that the patron left that particular magazine behind. It was Brian giving his sunshine a clue because he knows the boy is brilliant and would try to find him without letting on to anyone else that he's alive. What I don't know is why after 6 years? Hmmm. I could be totally off here but that's what I'm thinking, at the moment anyway.

I'm assuming Brian faked his death (with help obviously) to protect his loved ones, particularly Justin and Gus. There has to be something much bigger going on here then just the death of Jason Kemp. I'm so curious about what Brian stumbled on to. Drug ring? Human trafficking? My inquisitive mind is working overtime lol.

It will be interesting when it's revealed that Brian is alive. Not that I think that will happen anytime soon. I'm thinking his family will not react well, at least at first.

I'm anxiously waiting for your next update!

Laura



Author's Response:

OMG, I loved to read your review!

I know this chapter was hard to read, but I promise it will be worth it! And you know me, Michael won't ever be a bad guy in my fics, and he does succeed in knocking some sense into Justin here. Impressive, I know although if one man truly cares about Brian apart from Justin, it's Michael.

I LOVE your theory! I won't say if you're wrong or right of course, but I promise you will know if it's a coincidence or not at some point, and why six years have passed. And also where is Brian... well so many questions,  and I adore reading your thoughts on them.

Next chapter will be updated on Friday. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

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That's me being speechless!

Poor Justin!

Thank goodness for Ben and Michael and Ted.

I'm not sure how I'll be able to wait for the next chapter~



Author's Response:

:D 

I will take it as a good sign! 

The next chapter will be up next Friday. Thank you for sharing your speechlessness (Is that a word? LOL) with me!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

Hi, Alois! OMG, I am so hooked on this story already! And as usual, you evoke such emotions in your story that just pulls the reader in. I'm greedy for more! Can't wait to read the rest of this! Wil be eagerly waiting for the next part. Thank you for writing and posting this. Loving the plot. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hey Kim! And aw, your review makes me so happy! I had a great (if I can say that lol) time writing Justin in this chapter. It's hard but also very revealing of how much Brian means (meant?) to him. And this is just the beginning since a lot of revelations are coming... Be prepared for the ride! I truly hope you will enjoy this one, since I have such a great time writing it :)

Thank you again for your support and friendship <3 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

Wow! Justin really hit rock bottom but he managed to claw his way back. But the incident that has him motivated him into making the road trip...has my radar pinging.  I don't feel like it was coincidental. Please give us more soon .



Author's Response:

Justin is strong, although Brian's death hit him hard. And it's a good thing your radar is pinging, since Lakevallée has many secrets to reveal * hint * Now, to know if this is a coincidence or not, is another question... ;)

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The photograph

Snif ! j'ai eu quelques larmes, j'aimerai tellement que ce soit Brian! Je suis impatiente de faire ce voyage avec Justin et voir ce qu'il va trouver ! Super chapitre Alois ! Merci

Author's Response:

Ce chapitre a été à la fois dur et émouvant à écrire, mais je suis heureuse de t'avoir donné envie de connaitre la suite! Le voyage de Justin commence dès le prochain chapiter, avec de nouvelles révélations :)

Merci à toi pour ton soutien, j'adore lire tes commentaires :D

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