Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Blaze of Glory
Reviewer: SaKha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 11

So sad and sweet)

Reviewer: SaKha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 10

It's quite late, so it's hard to find the right words but oh my god. The characters are complex, character development is brilliant, there is Brian/Justin relationship, plot and atmosphere in the same chapter, at the same time, just like that, I am honored to read this, it's so cool. It's like I can spot some things and understand they contribute to the general genius, but I can't quite grasp how all of this comes together and interconnects, so I'm just fascinated and overwhelmed. Thank you again!

Reviewer: SaKha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 9

So nice, so tense, so sweet, so believable. "I am ill at these numbers", my review is probably for shit, but I really appreciate you writing this.

Reviewer: SaKha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 8

Omg, it's really good. The scenes are extremely thought through and well-written. I enjoy reading this so much, thanks again!

Reviewer: SaKha (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is one of the best fics I've read. The dialogue is precise and funny, the plot is intriguing, characters' motivation and mindset are clear and logical, they are very real. I like how well-written the sci-fi part is, I like how well-written everything is, for that matter. Thank you for spending your time writing this!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

Brian really did treat this Justin as human and that was the right thing to do. I loved this and I so wanted it to continue to find out was the mission successful and did Brian save them. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing this fic. I know the theme is not your usual, and wouldn't appeal to most.

Your reviews and positive comments are much valued :) I am happy that you enjoyed it.

I hope that the ending is open-ended enough to allow you to imagine an ultimate ending that you feel is suitable.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh Justin, I wanna hug you. Your only belonging growing up and you have It away. My heart is breaking for your heart breaking. Good on you Brian for comforting him and letting him know he matters. X



Author's Response:

I know. Poor, poor Justin. He is a most unenviable situation. Thanks so very much for sticking with this story!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow I can’t even begin to imagine what is going through Brians mind after seeing the real Justin. This is getting more and more gripping. 



Author's Response:

Brian can barely handle one Justin, let alone two! I am being flippant of course; the reality is much harsher.

Thanks so much for reviewing - it is much appreciated!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow that was drama filled wasn’t it. The action and the gripping scenes were amazing. I loved how Justin and Brian handled that. 

 

Excellent work x



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for saying that! It definitely was not the easiest chapter to write. Happy to hear that you liked it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2018 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 8

I hope that Brian can concentrate more on his training soon because he might really hurt himself or others without knowing it. I do hope Justin and him get together x



Author's Response:

Hahahaha - very true about Brian's ability to hurt someone without the proper training :)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2018 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 7

This is getting even better and better and I am intrigued as to what is going to happen next and how Cynthia is going to work with Justin. I do hope Justin and Brian get closer and share feelings. 



Author's Response:

Aaaw, thank you!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

It’s getting more intense loving it.



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

Gosh I hope that Justin can get Brian in hand and train him so he is prepared for whatever they have to face. 



Author's Response:

Justin is nothing if not tenacious; and this Justin has the fate of the future riding on his success ;)

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wow Brian must be freaking out, I know I would until I knew what the heck was going on. 



Author's Response:

Can you imagine waking up one day with all this power that you have no idea how to control? Poor Brian!

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 3

Omg what on Earth is Justin going to do now 🤭



Author's Response:

This was my favourite chapter to write :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow I can understand why Brian would be not only confused but worried at what Justin was and saying and how he was acting. Lol I loved how he was with Micheal though. 



Author's Response:

Hahahaha! Poor Brian! For once, he is 100% justified in his reactions.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2018 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh this is such an interesting start to the story. What’s Justin’s mission here. Plus very sexy indeed x



Author's Response:

:)

Thank you for reading! Happy that the opening caught your eye.

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2018 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 12

I know this is the only ending that seemed right, yet I wish there was more and that Justin stayed here. Thank you for this incredible ride, Jessica. I hope you enjoy your life, and find peace and happiness elsewhere. Thank you for your wonderful gift of writing. Take care! Like you said, It's only time. Hugs! Annie



Author's Response:

Hi Annie,

Thank you so very much for your really kind words, your reviews, and all your good wishes and encouragement. I truly appreciate it!

And, you stuck with this weird story to the very end! I hope you enjoyed the ride, and all the very best to you as well :)

 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2018 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

I am sad to see this story end because I hoped for a better future for Clone Justin or Brian going with him. Maybe one day you might consider gifting us readers a teeny tiny sequel? Loved your story and it deserves 5 stars.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for reading this fic to the bitter end! I guess Brian is definitely not going with Justin, but you could (maybe?) imagine a more optimistic future for both of them...I guess which way I lean is pretty obvious lol.

Thanks again for reading, for commenting, and for your very, very kind words :)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 12

Sad to see this end and sad there will be no more stories. I've always enjoyed your work. I think the ending was perfect if sad but with this sort of story with two honourable characters how could it not be. Love Brian's last line. But there is still hope and that's what keeps us all going. I hope there is a future, somehow, for them and perhaps after all the swimming, cycling, reading, watching movies, and fighting the good fight, the call to put 'pen to paper' or 'play with the computer keyboard' will be strong enough to see some more of your wonderful stories. If not, all that stuff sounds pretty awesome and lots of fun and isn't that a big part of living - to enjoy life? Thankyou for all the wonderful stories you have written over the years and I sincerely hope that one day I'll see your name on a new story - if you do and need a banner, I'll be happy to give it another go.



Author's Response:

Hi!

I am so very happy that you liked the ending :) It was the only ending that was realistic for me, and also, it really mirrored the show's ending as far as it could be mirrored.It really was the ending I always had in mind when writing this story.

Thank you so very much for your reviews, for your encouragement, kind words, and this amazing banner! I truly appreciated your support :)

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

Really enjoyed the story. You write very well.  I tend to only read stories when I see that they are finished, because I have started stories, got really into them only for them to become abandoned. So hence I review at the end.

Thanks for your writing.

 

Deb



Author's Response:

Hi Deb,

Thanks so much for reading this fic, and also for reviewing! Your compliments made me smile!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

I want to thank you for writing this story, I loved it! My sister just gave me all 5 seasons of Orphan Black to watch for the first time, so I loved the clone aspect. I'm also a big fan of the resistance of Trump, that part was great too!

I understand how you feel about the lack of comments. I let it get me down this last year, and I pulled back from writing and posting. But I realized that I mostly write for myself, some stories just need to be written. I've been encouraged by other fangirls to feel positive when you see the read count.

I know this is my first comment, but I read it all the way through in one sitting. That being said, I read it one my iPhone, and I always have trouble leaving comments from my phone. I had to wait until I could use my computer. I hope you don't stop writing, or leave the fandom. I was so excited to see a new fic from you! Anyways take care, and know that we loved your writing... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Author's Response:

Hi Kathleen!

What weird things to converge in a story - clones, Trump resisters, and QAF :P

So very happy to hear that you enjoyed this story! I remember you from way back when - you were one of the first people to say nice things about my first fic ever :) Thank you!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 12

Loved the ending. Using the line "It's only time" was very cool. It makes us hope Brian will one day see his Justin again. 

A sequel would of been great. If you decide to do one then let us know.

Take care!

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Author's Response:

Very happy to hear that you liked the ending! I did want the ending to have a small element of hope, so glad that it was picked up on as well :)

Thanks so very much for reading, and reviewing, and sticking with this story to the bitter-ish end!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2018 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 12

I was actually surprised when I saw this was the final chapter... I had just somehow expected there was so much more to tell. (Or maybe it was wishful thinking?) But I don't disagree with the way it ended. Not every story can have a "happy-ever-after," ending. The edginess of this entire story didn't lend itself to that type of ending. If this were a sci-fi movie, this would be a set-up for a sequel.

I'm sorry this story is your farewell to the QAF Fandom... I know things have changed. I posted a video/report on LJ about a Randy appearance. I got 4 comments. But I still post and report on the events I see. I do it for me, which is what it all started out to be when I first discovered QAF. It kinda "blew-up," in the midst of the Fandom resurgence which seemed to happen when the series ended. But it has slowly faded over the years.

I have enjoyed reading all of your work. If I have to be honest, I am more than a little sad that there won't be more to come. But I wish you well and good luck in all your future endeavors. 

Trish



Author's Response:

Hi Trish,

Thanks so very much for reading this story, and sticking with it. I did anticipate that given the genre, there would not be a lot of takers, so to speak. I tried to give some hope in the ending to those who'd really be keen on a happy ending, but for me, personally, the ending had to be what it is right. Yoy are right; there is always the ability to write a sequel, but I know that I won't be doing that.

You've been amazing right throughout, and I have loved seeing reviews from you :) Thank you so much for your support and encouragement!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 12

I was sad to see this story come to an end, Jessica. And while I had hoped the two of them could somehow stay together, I think I knew deep down it wasn't meant to be. 

I still feel SO sorry for Justin here. What a conundrum that is:  to be trained as a clone to do your job, but to also have feelings that color your every thought and move.  To have such a passion for art, and to be able to love someone; only to also know that you cannot fulfill those dreams.  I can't think of a more bleak situation.  But it was a realistic one. And that bucket list. You had me very emotional over that.  to have Brian insist Justin do that to give him the pleasure and joy that he knows Justin won't have in the future just shows how much he loved him. And that 18th one.  OMG.  How poignant.

I longed to see if perhaps there might have been a way some day for the two of them to meet again; if not in the Pitts, then in some other place. But I also know it's not meant to be.

This was a very unique story, and I enjoyed reading every word of it.  I'm sorry I won't have the opportunity to read more of your stories.  Perhaps one day; if not in this fandom, perhaps in another one (especially once the new site is up, and we open it up more to that).  Thank you at any rate for this story, and all the other ones you have posted.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Kim!!!

You gave me a Blue Ribbon - thank you so much! I am honoured and humbled.

This was the ending that I had written out from the very beginning. And while I was open to changing the ending, it just did not feel right to do so. I felt that this ebding was the most authentic one, and, I hoped, that it would be open-ended enough to hope to the really positive and optimistic readers. I *SO* felt for Cloney, especially through the latter part of the story. The bucket list was hard; normally (at least these days) we see it in a far more positive context than the original movie that started that phrase. But in this story, it's Brian's desperate bid to do something nice for the man he loves.

Thank you so much for everything. You have been an awesome reader, so encouraging, so positive, and always offering support and a boost to my sense of worth. I am incredibly grateful.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

Oh dear I loved the ending as sad as it was. I really enjoyed your story thank you for sharing it with us

Author's Response:

Aaaaaw, thank you! Awesome possum when someone likes my endings :D

Thanks so very much for reading this story, and for your comments. It's much appreciated!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

I find the ending sad but very fitting . It is only time, so maybe we will see you again. I love reading and QAF fanfiction just filled a void in my life. I hope for this reason you continue to write it must fill a void in yours also.. Good luck and god speed.

Author's Response:

Hi! Yes, I do find the ending sad as well. I was trying to go for this mix of sad/angsty/bittersweet...I just felt that a happier ending would not be in character for either Brian or Justin.

Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing, and that you enjoyed this trip :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2018 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 12

So sorry that you are leaving.  I am fairly new to reviewing.  Had problems with remembering my login.  But, I do try to review as often as possible now.  I sometimes wait until the end of the story to review because I have over 40 stories WIP that have been left in mid air.  It is extemely frustrating to the readers to start a story really get into it and never see it updated or completed.  Perhaps this is part of the reason for lack of reviews.  It is kind of like reading half of a book and something taking it away and no one can get a replacement for you.  As for this story, I found it very different, interesting and kept my attention. The ending was not what I would have wanted (I am a sucker for happy endings), but I thought it did give the reader the hope that someday, somewhere, they would meet again.  And, it was the end that the writer felt right with and that is what counts.  Good luck to you in whatever you do.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks a lot of reading and reviewing. I did figure that the ending would not be everyone's cup of tea.

As for WIP...at the very outset I had stated that this story was complete, and anyone can see that all my previous stories have been completed, with only one having a gap of several months to be completed. TBH, at this point, all the myriad of excuses just blend into one another. The message I've gotten is that readers can't be bothered to say 'thanks', and it's very disheartening. What encouragement is there to keep writing?

Another reason is that as an author, I am made to feel so guilty for wanting people to leave a comment on a story that they are so clearly reading. Not you, but I had a really vicious review a while back that I deleted, where it berated me for wanting readers to leave reviews. It seems strange that I should write, readers expect quality and timeliness, but I can't expect three or words in return.

Also, authors have many reasons for abandoning stories. I remember seeing a few here, with notes about the author having a personal crisis. Often, there are legitimate reasons. And sometimes, when you feel like there is no one out there reading or enjoying your work, there is zero motivation to keep pushing yourself to write.

Aaah well. All good things must come to an end!

I do hope that those who want to see a happy ending will see some hope in the ending, the same way you did!

Thanks again.

 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2018 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

Finally getting a little time to catch up - My heart is still breaking for Justin and I'm so glad that Brian doesn't see the difference that Justin has had drilled into from the beginning of his life. Clone or not - he's still a person - and Brian is right - a hero. Shopping, popcorn and a movie - great 'normal' things to do. I could get into a long post about how every generation has people that others look to as expendible but I'll be good and refrain - your future clone world is so possible which should scare the hell out of people but then most don't notice it happening around them. We need more Brian's in our life - and if they are as good looking (who doesn't like something pretty to look at)- all the better.... Forgive me - the heat is getting to me (it's 34C - 93F) just a tad warm....LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

And it has taken me two whole weeks to respond, which is generally unpardonable, so please forgive me!

No need for you to refrain - EVER - from saying what you think and feel! And yes, the sad thing is, I based every little detail of Justin's dystopian future on things happening somewhere in this world, whether it is the U.S.A., India, or South Korea. Le sigh.

Next chapter coming up, and thank you SO much for sticking with this story, and for your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Jessica, I forgot to add that I loved the song you recommended. I listened to it, then I read the chapter. Hope you design a playlist for this fic.
It would be incredible. Thanks!

Author's Response:

:D So happy to hear that! I heard it on this incredibly sad and poignant episode of The Vampire Diaries.

I love your idea of a playlist, but I fear that I am way too shy about the music I listen to, to have the courage to post an entire playlist online. Sorry!

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 11

Now I feel like a whiney Shit! I'm all caught up now, and have to rely on your kindness to update.
Lol. I wanted to keep reading. I want Justin to feel better about himself. Poor thing. He's so pathetic. He just wants to have a normal life & eat some fucking popcorn. Lol. I want him to be happy. So sad.
Great update!
Happy New Year, Jessica!
Have pity on us poor souls dying here for an update! Ha!

Author's Response:

:D Whining is always welcome!

I *also* want poor Justin to be happy, which is a weird thing for me to say as the author writing this dreary story lol. Thanks so very much for your awesome comments, and I will be updating in a jiffy!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2017 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

Poor Justin coming to terms with what he could have been, Brian is showing strength and for once in his life supporting and caring about someone else

Author's Response:

Hi,

Sorry it has taken me inordinately long to respond. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. What could have been, indeed. While Brian has had a door open to a whole new world, Justin gets to see the life he could have had. I hope you enjoy the last chapter that is coming up!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

Justin believes there is no light at the end of the tunnel and no future for him. But he is a real person to Brian who wants him to enjoy life and the right to be normal. This update was nicely done.



Author's Response:

you summed it up very nicely!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter. Poor Justin my heart just broke for him.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

I agree,things are really quite bleak for Justin :(

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great update. Poor Cloney Justin! I feel terrible for him. His teddy bear, the cyanide capsule around his neck, all he thinks about is his mission. So sad.
Biggest shock...running into REAL Justin. How is this going to play out.
Compelling Daphne was cool. Now Brian knows. Loved the 'fake' news reference. You're brilliant, Jessica. Thank You!
Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Happy New Year to You! Hugs!

Author's Response:

Hi Annie,

I hope you had an awesome Christmas as well :)

What gets to me the most is the teddy bear (and you'll see why in the next chapter). The cyanide capsule was...when we started this story, Justin almost would have had to take it, if he hadn't managed a fairly violent escape.

Thanks so very much for reading this story, and for your wonderfully kind reviews. Thank you so very, very much!

Hope you have a fabulous 2018! *hugs*

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hi, my friend!  Was thrilled to see another chapter to this.  Such a bittersweet one, though!  My heart breaks for this Justin - trained to do a job, but at the same time experiencing the same feelings as humans.  I can clearly see his anguish in this chapter.  Bred to carry out a mission, but still unable to prevent wanting to be just 'an ordinary' person who likes simple things like popcorn and a movie.

I never thought I would feel this way, but right now I'm actually rooting for Brian and the clone Justin to be together.  How in the world you reconcile this I have no clue, unless there's a clone of Brian somewhere...but I'm intrigued as to how you will eventually resolve this. 

This is currently one of my favorites!  I hope you will update again soon.  Happy New Year!  ~Kim

 



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Yes, indeed this story becomes more and more angsty with each chapter. It's hard not to, though, given the theme. I really want to keep it 'real', within the context of this universe.

Justin, or indeed any of his team, could not have predicted the 'human' yearnings he would have, once coming here. And part of it is because Brian has accepted him as an equal, and as more than just a trainer. It's funny you bring up the popcorn; my beta mentioned, on an earlier chapter, how Justin takes such small things like Brian letting him sleep in to be such a valuable thing. Of course, he is as human as any of us.

For sure, the ending of this story will not be to everyone's liking, but honestly, it's what I think stays true to this Brian and Clone Justin.

Have a wonderful 2018 yourself!

 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

Always great to have an update... but I wanted so desperately to keep scrolling to read more!!!!

Is the movie review Justin is reciting based on a real movie?

Hopefully, Brian will be able to completely calm Justin. He does have a real connection to the awful "I'm less than," feeling. Justin can take some solace in the fact that Brian really does understand.

Have a Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

It is, in fact, a real review of the film "Better Watch Out". You can find the review here: https://www.theverge.com/2017/10/3/16375490/better-watch-out-horror-movie-review-halloween

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing. It's always a great feeling to see feedback.

You are so right, that Justin and Brian here have a lot of common ground emotionally speaking, even though their backgrounds are so very different.

Thanks so very much for your lovely review, and wishing you all the best for 2018!

 

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2017 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was great.



Author's Response:

:D

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 10

Finally got a chance to read this. What an amazing story this is!  I am so hooked on it.  I really feel for Justin in this chapter.  Trained for a mission, and afraid to feel, but also realizing he is falling for this man who he has been ordered to find as his 'mission'.

The two are discovering more and more about each other, and becoming closer.  Both needing each other, but for different reasons.

I truly love this story!  And as always, I will eagerly be looking forward to your updates. Thank you for writing this.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Aaaw, I am delighted that you are really enjoying this story. Given its nature, I honestly did not expect it!

I too really feel for Justin...I wonder what you'll say once you see how the next chapter unfolds.

Thanks so very much for your very kind and encouraging reviews :)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2017 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 10

Uh oh! Looks like Justin has some 'splaining to do. This is so exciting. Please update soon



Author's Response:

;)

Justin is forever having to explain secrets that he has kept hidden from Brian!

Thanks so very much for your review!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2017 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great update! RL has been completely chaotic lately, so settling down to read this was a delight.

So much going on... I can't imagine how Brian is going to react to seeing the "real" Justin. I also like the "false" news/"fake" news reference, and how Brian and Justin seem so comfortable together at the loft - even though Justin isn't. The chat about Justin's bed was great. I liked the dinner with the girls too.

Justin noticed that Brian automatically said "we" when accepting the brunch date... I wonder if he noticed that he just asked Brian to take him "home."

As always, anxiously awaiting the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response - my browser decided to have a tantrum and refuse to log me in :)

As always, thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!

Brian's reaction will be very interesting (I hope), and Justin's too I hope shall be surprising yet IC.

I love that you noticed how comfy the two are together, and how Brian and Justin each have begun to think of each other as unit.

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow, just Wow!
Love this story so much.
Love Clone Justin. I don't know how you are going to resolve Two Justin's, but I'm ready for the ride. Lol. This Clone Justin is so smart & fearless. Happy Brian came to help him out, even though Clone Justin is more than capable to handle any situation. I want to hug him so bad. Something tells me Clone Justin is going to go through some major shit before this is over.
Thank you for posting, Jessica! Hugs to you, Annie

Author's Response:

Aaaaw, thank you so much for saying that Annie!

I'm glad that you like Cloney. I've grown really fond of writing him. He's one of my favourite Justins. You are completely right - Justin has a lot of emotional events in store for him before this drama is over.

I'm really grateful for your reviews and kind reviews. Thank you!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow that was a cool twist of fate. I love that Brian realized that Justin was using the compel trick on Daphane. 

I wonder what Brian is thinking when he saw two Justins.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

What will Brian do, indeed!

I feel bad for poor Cloney, but Brian has been left to think on his feet ever since Cloney walked into his life. And now he sees two of them!

Thank you so very much for still reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 10

My heart breaks for Justin - being a clone doesn't make him inhuman - he still has feelings, desires and hopes and despite being raisded and trained for battle he has such a sweet heart - love that he gave Gus his teddy bear. How the future treats to clones is horrible - and it relates so much to a lot of what goes on today if someone is in anyway different. Somehow, once Brian gets over the shock, I don't think he'll treat Justin that way. Looking forward to more - as always.



Author's Response:

I love waking up to reviews!

You really hit the nail on the head when it comes to Justin. He is a clone, but he is so very human at the same time. And the future is such a reflection of the world we live in right now. Sigh. None of it is very pretty.

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 8

I had to read the next chapter. Lol.
Love Justin cracking the whip. Brian looking up at him from being on his back. Hysterical! He has amazing combat skills, yet he seems so innocent at times. He doesn't know how to order from a menu or read a comic book. Feel so bad for Justin.
What is it going to be like when the Real Justin makes an appearance. Omg! Justin throwing the guy on the ground for grabbing his ass. He better get used to it if he has Justin's luscious bubble butt. Lol. Priceless! Amazing story. Thank You!

Author's Response:

You are so right that Justin is extremely well-versed in some areas, and yet so naive and innocent in others. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - it's much appreciated :)

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2017 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love this...Mexican food banned, I would die! Lol.
Coma cured with Epi Pens? Wow! Love the boys banter, back & forth. Cynthia, of course likes Justin. Lol.
Brian wants sex, Justin wants to complete his mission. Brian wants to learn hypnosis. Each chapter gets better. Great Work! Hugs!
Sorry! That some readers are not commenting. That sucks. I can understand your frustration.
I'm so enjoying this story. Hugs!

Author's Response:

Hi,

This is sad, but the banning of food was based on something that happened in India some months ago, with certain food items being banned. The world we live in today is falling apart, and I just created the future from an amalgamation of the world today. Which is not very pretty.

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing. Your reviews are great!

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2017 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh this story is getting so good.  Great writing.



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks so much for saying that!

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2017 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 6

Am I the only one who is feeling bad for Clone Justin?

I want to give him a hug & tell him he deserves to be happy. *Sigh* This is a fantastic story. When an author makes me truly FEEL for the character's, it is a gift they have. You have it! Thank you, Annie

Author's Response:

No, I feel bad for him too!

Thanks so very much Annie, for the amazing compliment. Great start to my day!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2017 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 9

New chatper - yah!! Sunday - time to catch up on reading - yah!! Penile fracture - ouch!! I have to admit I had to look that one up - and I think that it was the least the assailant deserved. I love this Justin - he is so strong, determined and dedicated to  doing what is right and he seems so tortured. I hope that Brian can show him that he is worth so much more and being a clone doesn't diminish that worth in any way. I do wonder about the 'original' Justin. Oh the sci-fi geek in me has my brain spinning in all sorts of directions. Looking forward to the next chatper.



Author's Response:

Reviews! Yaaaay :D

The images for penile fractures online are gross, TBH. I agree that it was the least the assailant deserved, but it's a huge (violent) step for Brian to have taken. He's officially crossed the Rubicon. So happy that you like Cloney! And yes, Clone Justin is definitely very tortured. More from where that came from ;)

Thanks so very much for this lovely review!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 9

Wow, wow, wow, Jessica! I don't recall the preview you sent to me getting this far, and I think this chapter is one of my favorites.  So many things I liked about it:  the slowly growing bond/attraction between the two of them, Justin's uncertainty and even innocence in some ways, but also being far too wise in others.  Brian's initial unwillingness to get involved, but then showing up anyway, even though Justin could have taken care of it on his own.

I can see in the future some emotional agony for this 'clone' Justin, and I am anxious to see how you resolve the fate of both Justins, b/c I have really come to be fond of this fighter from the future.

This is currently one of my favorite stories!  What a shame it would have been to not keep posting this, so I am more than willing to wait until you have time and the inclination to post the rest of it, and I'm thankful that you decided to do so.

Thank you for this unique story!  I am loving this incredible journey.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

I think I had sent you up to chapter 7, possibly 8, though I don't think so, as the only one who was aware that the Real Justin was lurking about was my beta ;)

I am so thrilled to read your review! I honestly didn't know how the violence quotient in this chapter would go down with readers. Glad it wasn't too much. You are very perceptive - indeed, much agony is in store for our Cloney. I too am fond of Clone Justin - it's weird, because from the very beginning, readers were let in on Justin's secret - that he was a clone. So I'm happy to see that people are invested in Clone Justin being happy, because they care about him, even knowing that he's not the real Justin.

It's for people like you that I decided to keep posting :)

 

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 9

That was intense. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope it wasn't too intense - I was a bit apprehensive, but ultimately decided to keep it pretty much as I imagined it.

 

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 9

I must keep missing the updates on this story so i have just read 3 chapters yay. So we see Brian is at last getting with the program of becoming a super hero yay😍😍

Author's Response:

:) Sometimes I miss notifications for reviews as well - never sure if it's the site, or my spam filter!

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing - much appreciated. Yup, Brian is now officially a hero! ;)

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 5

Donald Trump is President!!!! That's some pretty scary shit, boys & girls! Brian is surprised. So are we!!! Lol.

Poor Justin! Brian is draining his energy. Loved this chapter. Thank you, Hugs Annie



Author's Response:

Hi Annie,

YES! Trump is president! This story was actually a what-if that was inspired when Trump won the nomination, and then suddenly morphed into the horror show that has become our reality. Lol.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - much appreciated, as always.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 9

So happy to see an update! The perfect thing for a lazy Friday evening after a loooong week at work. 

There is such an inherent sadness in Clone Justin's outlook... even with the "more than just a pretty face," remark.  And I keep forgetting that there is a "real" Justin out there somewhere. I hope he can find some happiness before the story ends. Something more than "clean air and food he's only read about."

Looks like Brian is becoming accustomed to his new reality. I hope the boys find some solace in each other's company.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha - I know all about those endless work weeks!

You totally get it - yes, Justin is enveloped in a lot of sadness, and there is the big question about there actually two of the same people in this universe. Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2017 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update. I really find this story fascinating.

Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks so much for saying that :) I know it's a story off the beaten path, so am always happy when someone say they like it :)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2017 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 9

Such a good story.  Love that Brian is finally coming around to help Justin.  Keep writing.  Enjoy reading so much.  Happy Thanksgiving



Author's Response:

Aaaw, thank you so much for that sweet comment!

Happy Thanksgiving to you as well!

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2017 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2017 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 8

So happy to see this update. I can't wait for the two Justin's to meet. I would have loved seeing Clone Justin cracking the whip while training Brian.



Author's Response:

:D

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2017 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 8

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

:)

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2017 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 8

Wow! Well, that was certainly worth the wait! I loved the idea of Justin being such a taskmaster with Brian in the Gym, LOL! And the poor slob who had the nerve to try and cop a feel... Clone Justin better get used to walking around with real Justin's ass! 

I also love how innocent Justin can be about so many things, like ordering from a menu or his reaction the comic book. It's very endearing. Somehow, I have a feeling that the two Justins are destined for some kind of encounter. 

Anxiously awaiting the next part!!!

 



Author's Response:

CloneJustin doesn't suffer fools, in any manner or form :)

I love that you comment on how innocent he is in certain ways - that is so true, and it's in a way, the essence of both the real and clone Justins. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and sorry for the delay in responding!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2017 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 8

I really like this Justin, he is a fish out of water but so cute. Brian being jealous is always funny.

Author's Response:

Hahaha - I love writing jealous people, even if it is very subtle! Glad you picked up on it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2017 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 4

This is Fantastic! Clearly you are brilliant. I adore Brian's super human strength. He thinks Justin gave him liquid LSD. Justin has many talents. He bugged the girl's house. Brian is truly confused. He thinks Justin is a gun carrying thug. I adore this. Brian finds him lounging on the couch like, how did he get in the locked door. Truly a rollercoaster ride you're taking us on. Thank you! Annie

 



Author's Response:

Aaaw, thanks so much for saying that!

I am so happy that you seem to be enjoying it so far. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2017 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 8

Woke up this morning to finally have some free time (RL can be such a bitch - I'm about 2 weeks behind) and the first thing I noticed was the banner - I did a little squee and a happy dance...well a sort of seated weird happy dance...LOL  So happy for a new chapter. Looks like things are getting a little complicated for Justin - I can just imagine the current and future one accidently meeting...sci-fi geek in me is thinking up all sort of possiblities - hmmm...future Justin might just have to work out how to advoid that. I definitely love how Justin dealt with the guy wanting to squee his ass - how I wish and I think many others, would love to do that. Looking forward to more...



Author's Response:

:)

Sorry for the delayed response! Glad that you found the new twist interesting! And believe me - things are about to get even more topsy turvy!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2017 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hello, Jessica! So great to see that you've posted another part! Interesting as we find out more and more little pieces of the clone Justin's life.  And an intriguing change of role reversals at the gym! Having the REAL Justin around was a surprise! I wonder if they will meet face to face!

 

It was wonderful to read a new chapter of this!  Hope we'll see more of it soon. ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

I would have responded sooner, but I've been sick for a while.

Thanks so much for your review, and yes, Clone!Justin's life is about to get a bit more complicated :)

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2017 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is so fascinating. Justin is a clone, Brian is supposed to be a savior Lol. What he did to Michael!!! Hysterical.

He doesn't remember flying. So intrigued. Very scary at present day political climate. So loving this. You're a brilliant writer. Will get to next chapter as soon as humanly possible. Thank you! Hugs! Annie



Author's Response:

Hi Annie,

Thanks very much for reading, and for commenting. I very much appreciate your kind words and encouragement :)

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 7

That was great.



Author's Response:

:)

 

Thank you!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 7

I am enjoying your story so much because it is different and I would love to see where you were planning to take us. I wish you were getting more feedback from your readers because it really does keep a writer motivated. 

I will keep checking for updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks you very, very much for saying that. Indeed, some acknowledgment by those who are reading would have changed things for sure.

I really appreciate your support :)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

I want to give Justin Clone a hug. He seems so resigned to his station in life. Maybe training Brian can give him incentive to expect more out of life. 



Author's Response:

That's often the sentiment my beta expressed as well!

Cloney has led quite a sad life.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nena (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2017 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 7

I said it before and I repeat myself now: GREAT STORY!!! Absolutely love it because I am a BJ lover and a sci-fi geek, withi this story I get the best of both!!! Awesome!



Author's Response:

:)

Funnily enough, I'm really not a sci-fi person, so lord only knows how I wound up writing this fic ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! much appreciated.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 7

Just caught up on the last 2 chapters. Love this story. I really feel for Justin being a clone and that he doesn't feel that he deserves enjoyment in life but just duty. A future where comas can be dealt with simply - wouldn't that be wonderful - perhaps one day... I think the best line is when Cynthia tells Brian of Justin's 'report' on the staff - I couldn't stop laughing - now what is Brian going to do (with the stealing staff) - so much for Justin 'fetching coffee' and such...LOL  And what's with the ban of food - has future America gone mad?????? what a waste to the taste buds...

Your comments about lack of reviews - once I was a lurker when I first started reading fanfiction - it took me a long time to gain the courage to leave a review - the first time was totally nerve racking - even now something that should take a couple minutes at most takes me triple the time (you should see how long it takes me to write an email - OMG). Always trying to say something positive and being careful of not coming across wrong - it's so much easier to speak words and give the right meaning than it is to write them - Writers amaze me, especially when their stories grap me and keep me enthralled and your stories always do. Please don't become disheartened - I think there's a certain apathy in society today - people have forgotten the niceties amongst all the shit happening in the world today - but there are still those of us who will always appreciate and hopefully we'll remember to let you know that we do.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi!

Your take on Clone!Justin is perfect. He's been thinking of himself as second-class all his life, because of the world he comes from.

Banning food - funnily, I was inspired to include because of the current Hindu fundamentalists in India, banning beef products and beating up anyone even suspected of eating beef. It seems so absurd, and yet, it's actually happening in this world right now. I wanted to find a way to change that slightly and include it in Future!America.

I really appreciate your comments about how hard it is to leave a review. I very much appreciate receiving that insight. At least for me, while long, well-written reviews are great, I think it's just the spirit that counts. I've gotten reviews in French that were so complicated that I needed Google Translate ;) but I truly appreciated the effort the reader made to just comment, in a manner and language that s/he found easiest. I think even a few words 'keep going' or something, is acknowledgment and encouragement.

I've seen your reviews frequently, and I have always been grateful for it. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 5

Lol Brian is so irritated he cannot get a grip on who or what Justin’s angle is. I am enjoying the nod to current events and Trumpy

Author's Response:

Oh Trump. Le sigh. THis was supposed to be so much funnier as a fic, because when the idea was conceived, Trump was just a reality TV star...and now, here we are.

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting! Much appreciated!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

Lol I am looking forward to the Ben meeting, Justin is struggling trying to keep Brian focused

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks so very much for reading this weird little fic, and also thanks very, very much for reviewing :)

Yeah, Brian is a tad difficult to focus for now. Justin has his work cut out for him.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

Lol how Justin still has Brian wrong footed. Brian wants the skills he can exploit his advantage but Justin is wise to Brian lol

Author's Response:

:)

You got it!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 7

OK. The ending was funny as shit. Sometimes people don't write because they are not sure if they have to critique the whole chapter or just say Hi.

Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks for your comment. I think writers appreciate any feedback as long as it is not trolling, or unconstructively negative.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 7

Hello, Jessica - I'm sad to think I won't have the pleasure of reading more of this intriguing story.  Each chapter makes me come up with more questions about what's going on, and gives us just a little more insight into Justin's life in the future.  I love the little details about his special abilities that you provide to us in this story.

I read your author's note, and I have to basically agree with you.  Yes, in this modern, social-media, portable-device world, it makes it a little more difficult perhaps to leave a review on a smartphone, for example. But I have often done it, and it is not that hard to do.  Too often, the read counts are exponentially higher than the comments/feedback that are left, and while some writers can receive fulfillment and satisfaction out of just the act of writing itself, I personally, like you, need the feedback if only to know that others are interested in what I am writing.  So I understand your discouragement, and can only hope that when you desire you will give us the chance to read the rest of this amazing story.  It's great that readers 'like' a story on our FB page. But if a writer isn't a member on there, they will never see that.

You are a gifted writer, and should you never write in this fandom again, it would be a big loss of yet another writer who has left QAF.  I really hate to see that happen, but only you can decide what is best for you.  Please know that I have enjoyed this story immensely, and hope that you will one day return to post the remainder of it.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

You know I value your friendship, your encouragement, and generosity. Your reviews are just an example of how kind you are.

Like you said, the act of writing is encouraging, but I need human interaction. I guess different people get affirmation in different ways. It is discouraging, and it's reached a point where there is no means of getting my point across, so I am just going to admit defeat and walk away. Ah well, it's been a great 7 years :)

I look forward to chatting with you when I get back to town. Please know that I think you, and the work you've done on MW is nothing short of spectacular.

 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2017 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 7

Is it wrong of me to hope that you suffer from a perpetual case of masochism? ;-)

There is just so much good stuff here... "Mexican food was banned, but a coma could be cured by an EpiPen."  Just great! I also like that now that Brian has kind of accepted that Justin is from the future, he's getting into the "mood" and already looking for ways to work the system - who needs 7 years? LOL! I just love the banter between the boys and Cynthia too. 

I'll be here. Waiting. Checking back. Ready to read the next part. 



Author's Response:

Hahahah! Oh man, I love your sense of humour :D  Thanks (obviously) I truly appreciate your review(s).

You're right, of course, Brian is definitely looking to work the system. Our Brian will definitely find a way ;)

 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2017 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 6

Hello, my friend.  Honestly, I can't figure out why there are not more reviews for this inventive, unique story.  But I want you to know that I, for one, am enjoying it immensely, and find it fascinating to read.  You have created all sorts of questions that I hope we will find the answers to, such as why Justin is a clone, and how Brian will (hopefully) evolve eventually into the hero he needs to become.

Very interesting how many foods have been banned in the future. Clever way to show how different nations were being sanctioned based on being allies or enemies.

I'm very sorry for the lack of comments on this story.  If only more readers would leave even a smidgen of support, it could make the difference between staying or leaving the site as a writer, and that would be a real shame with the talent you possess as a story weaver.

I hope we will have the chance to read the rest of this time, b/c I am eager to do so.  *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hello, my dearest Kim,

I truly appreciate your kind words. It is comforting to hear what you say, and I am relieved that you do enjoy this.

I am really done though, with this reader base and fandom now. It's too disappointing and offensive. I just can't be part of an exploitative relationship where readers take and take and take and refuse to give anything back.

Save for the 4- 5 of you who actually leave reviews, this experience has left a really sour taste.

I do very much appreciate the support of the few of you.

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2017 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

That was terrific. I bet it is Ben who will teach Brian how to meditate and control his breathing. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Ben has always been one of my favourite characters. Really grateful that you're still reading and enjoying this story. Thanks so much for your review :)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2017 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ooh, so the plot thickens... enter Zen Ben. 

I kinda forgot that this Justin was a clone... it's rather sad to see he has such a bleak outlook. It's also rather sad that any Justin has been deprived of food, LOL!



Author's Response:

Enter Ben, stage left ;)

Oh man, that is such a hysterically funny thing to say, about Justin being deprived of food!

Thanks so very, very muh for still sticking with this story!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2017 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 5

Loved this banner between Brian and Justin. Can't wait to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

:)

So happy that you liked it!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hi, Jessica - another intriguing chapter!  Brian is slowly beginning to realize that what Justin is saying must be true, although he's confused as hell.  But he can't deny what is happening to him, and knows that on some level he has to trust Justin, or he's liable to wreak havoc in his present state. And I like how you have taken present day events and interwoven them into the story line for the future.

And can't wait to hear more about this enigmatic 'Professor!'  As always, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.  XOXO  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim,

Yup, Brian is between a rock and a hard place - he doesn't want to believe, but he cannot deny what he is legitimately experiencing.

I love how the Professor is such a person of interest! I never thought readers would at all be curious about him.

Thanks ever so much for being so supportive and encouraging!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2017 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 5

I am loving this - love sci-fi stuff - I'm such a geek... Plus I have so many questions. And perhaps it's wrong of me to say - especially as I'm not American - but Trump - what were those voters thinking!!!!!! I thought our politicians were bad. But I can see how the future Justin is speaking of could now happen if it's not stopped in it's infancy - I love that Brian is the hero. Can't wait for more...



Author's Response:

:)

Ask me all your quesions! SO happy to hear that you're loving this - especially as most readers are as silent as the grave. I'm not American either, and I completely echo your sentiments.

Thanks so much for your comments!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2017 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

That was some awesome speech.

Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and welcome to this story!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2017 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 5

Please, Brian! Come and save as all from this disaster! I'm sure Justin will be able to convince him. 



Author's Response:

:)

Yes indeed, we all need a saviour. I also think Justin will be able to convince Brian of a thing or two. Thanks so much for reading, and for your reviews. I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2017 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, wow... poor Brian! He must be convinced he is losing his mind. I felt the tension of this chapter from the first word through the last. Going to have trouble waiting until next week for the next installment!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! So happy that you're still enjoying this story!

Really relieved to hear that you felt the tension, because I was afraid that this chapter was a let down in terms of pace, following the action of the last chapter. Next installment will be up before you know it :)

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2017 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

Oooooh! Brian's super strength is kind of scary. I bet he will be all ears for whatever Justin has to tell him at this point. The Stud is about to learn how tenacious Justin can be. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

:) I'm glad you liked this chapter, especially since I personally felt that it was a bit slow, given the previous events.

 

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2017 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Brian...he has had a difficult time of it - he should have listened to Justin but then everything Justin said sounded a bit unbelievable and then the gun freaked him out - yes Brian's life has become 'bizarre'. Good thing Justin bugged the girl's house. Now to get down to business - I sense it's going to be quite a ride... Looking forward to it.



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree! It's hard to believe what Justin said, and Brian did the more logical thing of assuming it was all a bad trip...unfortunately for him, Justin was right!

Brian's life still has many topsyturvy changes in store ;)

Thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2017 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hi, Jessica - I'm extremely late to the party, but I finally had a chance to read your latest chapter. As usual, I'm loving this story!  The time travel element, the way Justin found to locate Brian, Brian's confusion over what is happening, especially over his sudden, 'superhero/Rage-like' powers.

 

I'm intrigued by all the pieces that have yet to come together, and am enjoying this story very much. Will be looking forward to your updates, my friend.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

No worries - I think you've read most of these chapters previously anyway. I'm more grateful that you're reading this portion (again), and reviewing it too. It's nice to have someone enjoying it!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2017 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow that was great. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for still reading and reviewing! Much appreciated :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2017 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well things are taking an interesting turn.  Perhaps Brian is Rage afterall.



Author's Response:

hahahaha - maybe he really is!

Thanks so much for your reviews, as always :)

Reviewer: nena (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2017 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is a GREAT story!!

Can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much for reading and reviewing. Happy to know that someone likes it so far :)

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2017 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

That was terrific. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Glad that you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2017 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 2

Poor confused Brian. Flying, developing Superhuman powers, unfamiliar weapons...no wonder he thinks Justin is under the influence. Next time, have Justin take out Michael instead of compelling him. Just a thought.  Love this story.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha! Oh, Brian - there's a lot more in store for him!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2017 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love the way you had pod/clone Justin and Brian meet. I do believe this is the first futuristic Syfy QAF story I have ever read. This first chapter is fascinating.



Author's Response:

Aaaw, thank you! Really appreciate your comments :)

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2017 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 3

Ow, wow... so much going on here! And some of it a little too close to our current reality for comfort. Or maybe the dynamic that is Brian and Justin will save us too?!?!? On the edge of my seat here!



Author's Response:

This story was just a lark, when it was started last spring. Then I abandoned it because I knew it wouldn't be done before November, and it would be too far-fetched to publish post election.

And then we all woke up the morning after in a parallel universe. The similarity to our current reality is by no means a coincidence, and you are right, it is decidedly too close for comfort.

This was my favourite chapter to write :)

You reviews are very much appreciated - thank you!

 

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2017 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is so exciting - had me on the edge of my seat. So Justin's a clone - that answered some questions I had. This back and forth in time, relucant heros (even if Brian doesn't yet realize) - just love it. Doctor Who, sci-fi fan here and this is right up my alley.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

:D

I woke up to your review. Thank you so much! I know that this fic is clearly not everyone's cup of tea, so I am really happy to see at least a few readers enjoying it!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

This story is so clever, Jessica! Loving the twists and turns in the plot. And now that we know Justin is a clone, I'm wondering where the genuine one is? Is there a real Justin running around in the past where Brian is? And I wonder how this other Justin will get through to his reluctant hero. ;)

This story in a way reminds me of that song, "Silent Running." I was always fascinated by that as well.

Can't wait to read the rest! You've definitely got me hooked! Looking forward to the next chapter.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Hi Kim!

Thank you so very much for your compliment :) I truly appreciate it!

This was my favourite chapter to write, though I was very apprehensive before I started the task. I have to go find the song you have mentioned...very curious now!

'Reluctant hero' - I love that term!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 3

This could so be true.  It's scary.



Author's Response:

This story was started on a lark, before the election. And now, it is scary as to how true all of this could be, just as you said.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 2

I loved how Justin reacted to Michael and what he did was so cool. I wonder what other powers Justin has. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Author's Response:

Hehehehe

Thanks so very, very much for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate it! Next chapter will be up in the next few days.

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2017 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is great. Love the way Justin is so confident in this setting. 

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Author's Response:

:)

Thanks! I love writing a confident, strong Justin.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2017 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 2

Oh, wow... well I didn't see THAT coming! Although Future Justin certainly does talk a lot like present Justin! Poor Brian... I'm sure his head is spinning.

Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad that the story is (thus far) not predictable. I should be posting an update on Sunday or Monday.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2017 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 2

I couldn't help thinking that Michael's focus on Brian is so strong that even the commanding voice of Justin's didn't make a difference - well not until he compelled him...love that he won't be just walking in anymore - hopefully Justin's order will 'stick'. I always hated how everyone just walked into the loft whenever they felt like it - especially Michael and Lindsay. Secretly I kinda hoped Justin would shoot him - oh well, maybe later.... Poor confused Brian - it's something that belongs on the movie screen not in his real life. I can't wait to find out what happens next...



Author's Response:

Hahahahahahahaha!

Your review is so funny! Love it!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2017 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG, this chapter was hilarious!  From Michael being misconstrued as an intruder, to Justin's babbling about being wrong about Brian, to Brian's confusion about what was going on.  It's almost like Brian is supposed to be Rage in real life here.

This is such a unique story! I'm enjoying it immensely.  Looking forward to the rest of it. 

Also, please let me know if you want any subcategories added.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

So sorry for this delay in responding, but now I can finally type with both hands. I love your review! Thank you so much! The next chapter should be up Monday-ish (and it's my favourite!)

 

 

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2017 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

This a very different story. Can't wait to see where you take us....



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Next chapter should be up soon - and I had the most fun writing it!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2017 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

I've already said it, but I really like your idea. Also love the humor in this chapter. Thank you :)



Author's Response:

Hi!

Thanks so much for leaving a review! As always, much appreciated :)

Glad you enjoyed the humour. I had fun writing it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2017 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 2

This explains a lot.  I think I saw this movie somewhere.  Future Justin might have blown it when he replaced Original Justin because without OJ Brian can't become the hero he is.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

I think everyone is underestimating how resourceful Future!Justin might be ;)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2017 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very intriging. Justin seems out of place and much more mature than the 17 year old original 'Justin'. Plus it looks like he has some powers. Considering the movies the story is inspired by I'm very intrigued indeed. Definitely need more, more, more. Can' wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Justin is definitely not quite the same person as we're used to seeing ;)

Update coming up soooon

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2017 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

OK, wow! So that was not what I was expecting when I saw you had posted the first chapter of a new story this morning! I have SOOOO many questions and my mind is all over the place trying to figure out what's going to happen next. I must admit, I am not a huge fan of the movies you mentioned the Fic is partly based on... I am familiar enough with Terminator and Robocop though. Don't know the other ones at all!

I had seen the announcement on the MW Facebook page and that you had posted on LJ too... but since this is where I read it, this is where I left the comment. :-)

I'm all ready for part two!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it.

Don't worry - the fic is not a adaptation of either of the movies, though I was inspired thematically, in parts. So even if you aren't a huge fan of the movies, I hope that you'll still enjoy this story. 

Questions are good - I was hoping everyone would have a lot of questions when they read this chapter.

Again, thanks so much for letting me know your thoughts :)

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2017 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing start to this story! I was hooked on the summary before I even made it to the chapter! You always write such original stories. They are such a joy to read. I can't wait to see where you are going here, but I do see the clues as well. My writer's mind keeps looking at the movies that are part of your inspiration. Such varied themes, you could go anywhere! LOL. My reading time is very limited, but I couldn't resist this one. Looking forward to the next update. :) 

 



Author's Response:

Aaaw, thanks so much! Your review is way too kind :)

I would have done the same thing you did and looked at the inspirations to gauge the direction of the fic. You will see soon enough, which direction this is headed. Now if only I could learn to write stories that didn't start from under the lamppost!

 

 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting start!  Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

:)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! This time next week, there shall defnitely be more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Now this would be something to see.  What happens next?



Author's Response:

Hi there! So happy to see a review from you :)

 

Next chapter will be up next week, which usually comes around before we have a chance to do anything at all :P

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry, had to continue. It seems Justin is different. Could he have special powers? Time travel, etc. Wow, so excited for more. I knew Brian couldn't resist a dare " to fly"



Author's Response:

I lOVE this! I was so worried that no one would pick up on the fact that Justin is different. Time travel, special powers...so happy that you picked up on all the little clues :D

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

Omg! I'm so intrigued. I never read a version of the first sex scene anywhere. So looking forward to where you take this story. It's brilliantly done. Thank you, Annie



Author's Response:

Hi Annie,

Thanks so much for your sweet words :) Your review is much appreciated!

I do hope you will enjoy what this fic has in store.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry forgot to mention...the banner is awesome..great work.



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks! I made a back-up, just in case!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh...wow...thats one hell of a plot..totally different just like ur other stories..very interesting...looking forward to more..i love ur work..thank u soo for sharing.



Author's Response:

Hi!

I try to make my stories have something new or different in it, because I feel that readers have no reason to read the same old-same old. Especially after a decade of fanfic, readers will get bored reading the same meet-cute + commitment phobia, right? I hope so, in any event :)

Thanks ever so much for reviewing and reading; you know that reviews mean the whole world to writers!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi, my friend!  So many things I love about this already.  The possible time travel connotation, the confident Justin, his 'unique' qualities- already demonstrated by his ability to compel the drunken man - and the inference to 'another blond' - the REAL blond. Plus, what exactly is IN those red vials?  And I knew that Brian would not be able to resist both Justin or his 'dare.'

OMG, and after that chapter I now have to wait another WEEK!!?  Sigh...but you definitely have me intrigued.  Can't wait to read the rest!  So happy to see you posting a new story. You are such a talented writer. Thank you for choosing to post it on here. :)  ~Kim



Author's Response:

You are the BEST!

Your reviews are so warm and encouraging, and you're such a wonderful person :)

I'm really thrilled that you picked up on Justin 'compelling' the drunk man, but more importantly, to the notion of a 'real' blond? What could this mean? Is Justin not a natural blond? Or... ;)

Thank you for all that you do!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2017 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh this sounds interesting thank you

Author's Response:

:D

My first reader! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you'll enjoy this fic as it unfolds.

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