Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2022 04:55 AM · On: Post Trial
I adored this story and the worst story is an unfinished one. I'm so glad I read it!!!
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 01:41 AM · On: Day Four-Part Two
Great update. I like Justin's grandparents. I'm glad Brian was going to risk saving Justin, even if he didn't have the chance.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 01:43 PM · On: Day Four-Part Two
Very interesting couple of chapters it is difficult to see what is behind it all. Well done keeping the intrigue up. I look forward to the next chapter 😄👏🏽
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 01:23 PM · On: Day Four-Part Two
Justin was lucky that he dodged a bullet in this one.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 12:31 PM · On: Day Four-Part Two
This just goes to prove that the jury system is not perfect. Truth syrum that's the way to go. Then we have poor Justin going out for a night and getting drugged. Good thing the place was raided. Love Grandfather not to crazy about Craig. Is he part of the frameup as well?
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2017 11:10 AM · On: Day Four-Part Two
Hi, there - I didn't feel that way at all! I thought it was very clever the way you brought the two together without Justin causing a mistrial. And I liked how you described their feelings about the trial, and the pressure they were under.
Enjoying this story very much. I'll be looking forward to reading the next part. ~Kim
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2017 03:24 AM · On: Day Four-Part One
Michael is such an idiot and of course does moreharm than good. I like what Melanie had to say - spot on... Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope to have the new chapter up soon.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 11:44 PM · On: Day Four-Part One
I am worried for Brian. Mike's was the ultimate jackass as usual. I am trusting Justin to be Brian's ally on the jury.
Author's Response: Of course Justin will be but the question is how hard is the fight gonna be in the jury room.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 10:28 PM · On: Day Four-Part One
I'm glad the gang came through for Brian... even Michael, who did the best he could. I think he really does have Brian's best interests at heart, even though he sometimes takes it too far.
Author's Response: Yes, I didn't want Michael to be a bad person in this but not great either.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2017 01:48 PM · On: Day Four-Part One
Mikey, Mikey. What is he trying to do, get Brian electricuted. Lindsay really wasn't much better. Now Melanie surprised me and in a good way. I hope they come up with something that clears Brian and focuses on the real culprit.
Author's Response: Mel is awesome here lol. Deliberation is gonna be a uphill battle though.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 08:48 AM · On: Day Three
Absolutely love Justin's grandparents... Hate Joan Kinney - what a bitch. And Debbie dressed down???? That would be interesting to see. Sounds like the gang has Brian's back.
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 12:02 AM · On: Day Three
Very glad to see an update! So now we know who the real killer is. Like Brian, I'm not sure I can imagine Debbie in gray suit either and no red wig either!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2017 07:20 AM · On: Day Two-Part Two
Wow great chapter I am eager to read the next chapter thank you
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2017 12:11 PM · On: Day Two-Part Two
I'm sensing David is the murderer. And some of the jurors - I wouldn't want them deciding my fate. Then there are the cops - Brian is certainly in deep, deep, shit. Now what we need is someone to make a mistake that leads to what really happened - but that happening too soon would mean a short story...LOL Looking forward to more drama.
Reviewer: patou235vie (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 04:02 PM · On: Day Two-Part One
Une chose me taraude, que faisait Kip dans la maison de Brian vu qu'il était en Australie.
Je me pose une question qui connait le code pour entrée chez lui,puisque c'est une personne qui n'oublie rien.
Je suis convaincu qu'il y une personne derrière tous cela.
Une autre question 2 personnes possède une clef de chez lui(Mickaël & Lindsay), donc reste à voir, qui des deux a fait cela.
A bientot pour la suite.
Author's Response: Lol, yes you are spot on about all of that. This new chapter will answer most of it. Thank you.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2017 03:38 AM · On: Day Two-Part One
Great chapter. Love Justin's grandparents - what a hoot... I wonder if Justin or Brian will ever figure out that they met at the zoo all those years ago. This definitely is a set up - I wonder who hates Brian (and possibly Kip) enough to set him up with Kip's murder. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I love them too. You'll get a lot of answers in the new chapter. Thanks.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2017 01:10 PM · On: Day One
Glad to see a new story from you! Unique storyline, too. A new twist on Brian's involvement with Kip. I'll be looking forward to how you play this out. Thanks for posting this on here, and for being one of our writers! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad people are liking the stories.
Reviewer: patou235vie (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2017 02:47 PM · On: Day One
Comment Brian c'est retrouvé, sur le banc des accusés?
Et que faisait Kip Thomas chez lui, ou étais un piège monté contre lui, puisqu'il n'était pas chez lui.Reste à voir suspense!!!!!
J'attends la suite....!!!.
Je me permet de demander, quand tu finiras ton histoire "Breaking News", nous sommes resté sur du suspense, donc la suite,please.....!!!!bye.
Author's Response: Thank you, this new chaper you'll have a little from Brian's point of view. I'll be posting a new chapter of Breaking News tomorrow.
Reviewer: patou235 vie (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2017 02:35 PM · On: Prologue
Justin et Daphné sont incroyable(bons amis).
Il faut que Jennifer, quitte cet imbécile de Craig c'est un connard, puisqu'il pense qu'il est le maitre, mais c'est faut.
Il effraie ses enfants.
Author's Response: You'll like new chapter, I hope. Thank you
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2017 01:02 PM · On: Day One
Great start. I'm intrigued. I can just imagine how Brian would look sitting there. Something is definitely not right - all sounds a bit set up...maybe???? I don't envy Justin at all - it's going to be difficult for him. Looking forward to finding out what's going on.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the new chapter
Reviewer: Josie (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2017 04:35 AM · On: Prologue
So did Kip try scrafing? Interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. Hope the new chapter is good.
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