I have waited so long for an update. Please tell me this will be continued. 

So many emotions and my god the pain is so strong, I don't know how anyone can cope with it. I was on the edge of my seat reading this and more tears if course. 

 

Please post more soon, we all need to know what is next. 

 

Fantastic work xx

I'm loving this fic! Wow, just wow! You're a great writer, keeping me on the edge of my seat with anticipation... I can't wait for your next update...

Hugs Kathleen 💟

Hi, 

Looking for an update on your story, I read that you have a little bit of a block right now. It's something I understand, I'm not a fic author (just a reader), but I'm writing a lot of academic papers and the fear of blank page is my worst enemy! So if you don't mind, I have a couple ideas... Feel free to get inspired or completely ignore them if they are not in your line of tought, I wont't be upset!

First, concerning the current situation with Justin, I don't think that the legal action against him should go really far. Not only does he has a lot of extenuating circumstances, but the psychological trauma he is in should not be difficult to prove, plus he was physically ill, running a really high fever that litterally made him passe out, which is documented by his medical record. I really don't see any prosecutor going ahead with that. I think an avenue could be that the action could be drop in exchange of an engagement of seeking psychological help. That would open interesting avenues because Justin had go through a lot of really traumatic events in his life and he always bounce back and get on with his life, but never got to really sort it out. So that make sense that he kind of reach his breaking point now and needs professional help. That can also provide interesting storylines regarding his relationship with Brian because supporting Justin in this process would put him really out of his comfort zone...

Second, I must admit that I hope that the discussion between Brian and Michael at the hospital will be a real wake-up call for him and be the end of the anti-Michael storyline... I'm personally not a fan of character bashing, althought I know that a lot of readers like it. The thing is that Michael was perfectly normal until around the last few chapters of your first story, so I don't think he should turn into a monster. However, I think the road of redemption should be difficult for him. He would have to realize he has to do a lot of work on himself and on his relationships (starting with his marriage) to regain the trust of the people around him. Obviously, things could never go back the way they were, but I think there should be hope there.

Last thing, I think that would be interesting to see a discussion between Brian and Theresa regarding her attitude toward Sawyer. Not that I think he should get involved in their relationship and try to get them back together, but I think that could be useful for her if Brian would share with her his own experience. Hear me out... I see a lot of Brian in Theresa regarding that aspect, I think they are really similar. She seems to me to be pushing Sawyer away because of a fear of change, the way she lives her life being if not completely happy, at least comfortable on an emotionnal level. I think she is as much afraid of happiness that she is of failure and hurt, all of this being jumping in the unknown... At least, that is my interpretation and it seems to me having a lot in common with Brian's attitude toward Justin before their reunion. So that could be good for her to hear about that and about how good and more in peace Brian feels since he stopped fighting it and just let it happens.

So that's about it! I hope it can help you a little bit. In any case, I want to say that I absolutely love this universe you created and I hope to be able to continue reading stories about it for a long time!

Good luck :)

Author's Response:

Wow that was so fun to read!!!! Thank you for such a long response. I had to laugh at a couple of thing you said, because I already am thinking of my story going in that direction, but I am not gonna reveal which things that you said are going to happen lol but I really love how people see these characters. I write them and see them one way, but it's so so cool to hear about other people see them. I actually never thought of Teresa that way, so thank you for giving me something to think about!!!! Thank you for the long review again! Any time you have ideas please please please share them!!!! Because it gives me something to think about and I try to incorporate what people say into my writing! So thank you again

Please do not keep use waiting too long for the update. 

When I discovered the story, I binged the first in the series and streight through to the next.  You have made the character very believable.  I especially loved the scenes with the drunk/high Justin.

This new story line is wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take us next.

Merci pour la suite, j'étais contente puisque j'attendais avec impatience de voir ce qui allait arriver, et bien c'est magnifique.
Il faut que Brian fasse de son mieux, pour aider Justin et appelle son ami Alex psy, qui l'a aidé après son agression de plus Craig Taylor est un bâtard, un vrai connard et homophobe, et plus un criminel j'espère qu'il a bon avocat.Parce que la famille de sa femme ne va pas le pardonner pour son acte.Teresa et Sawyer doit être présent pour les deux, et oublier leurs querelles amoureuse et soit des parents présent.
J'attends la suite avec impatience.

OMG! Thank you for FINALLY giving me a reason to jump up and down !!!!!!!! OMG!!!! lol, now I want the next chapter !!!lol

but seriously, WTF!! Craig pressing charges!!!!I hope he gets what's coming to him in Prison Big Time!!!!!
I think Justin just needs to talk to a shrink about all this, he's never really dealt with all that hurt and pain from his past, I can't imagine coping and dealing with a Parent that hates u so much they want to see u dead! That's some bat crazy shit!!! He's needs to realize it's not him it's all on his crazy father and yes he is Crazy!!!!im soooooo glad Brian is there for him.