This was a great story, with a great ending.   I'm not surprised at all that Melanie reverted back to her old self.   I don't think she really thought she ever did anything wrong, so it was bound to happen again.  I'm just glad Brian never gave into her and stood his ground.   She deserved what she got.

Love it so far, kick their asses

Wow...awesome..perfect.

Boy, a lot did happen.  Michael was no better and Melanie regrest.  At least JR is not suffering because of it.  Yeah...life is good for Brian and Justin.   A great ending to a fantastic story.

Poor mel...awesome chap...thanks.

Finally...he got what he deserved..superb chapter.

Finally...he got what he deserved..superb chapter.

Just managed to catch up on the last few chapters - Sundays are great for that... So much is going on. I sort of feel for Deb and Mel - being sucked into the Lindsay/Michael vortex - but only a little bit. But at least they are beginning to face the truth.  Michael in prison - all I can say is YES FINALLY... exactly what he deserves.

He is gone too..insane mikey..are u baby? Who needs others to take care for ,?? Fabulous story.

Awesome name..wow.

Michael got what he deserved and Melanie finally realizes that she's lost everything because of Lindsay.

I received your response, but I need to know which subcategories you want added. Let me know.  Thanks. 

Wow..wow...what a twist...amazinggggg.

Great work..thanks.

Oh...poor sweet gus..what have u done mel..?? Linds had stabbed her own wife too...i pity mel.

Omg...the unmentionable..cool name..lols.

I think Maya Taylor - Kinney

Means Gods Creative Power

Both of the boys are very creative  :)

Soo cute they are..love how debbie is by Britins side...u have done such a great work...thanks for sharing.

 

Aww..they are amazing together.

U go sunshine...such a sweetheart...great chapter.

Rylee Amanda Taylor-Kinney

I agree with the suggestion of Olivia, it's such a beautiful name.

Other suggestions:

Charlotte (Charlie as nickname) - "free woman"

Abigail - "father's delight"

Celina - "young warrior"

*Do not suggest Brianna or Justine*

 

Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

 

I didn't realize that this was a M-preg. I don't mind them but it took me by surprise. But it does explain Lindsay and what she did. Justin definitely needs to 'melt her like Dorothy did'. When Mel hears about what happen in full detail her head is going to explode. Brian is going to be 'all kinds of protective'...

Love how Justin let Melanie have it making her see her actions.  Hopefully she'll take the offer to heart.

Shame Even is bipolar, but nice that everyone was understanding, except maybe Jonas.  Looks like the next chapter will be goooood.

I take it that Mel never had rights to Gus and now Lindsay doesn't either.  Yes, Social Services actually did the right thing.  But what happened to Isak?

Love how somebody finally told Ben what had been happening right under his nose.  Can't wait for Michael to find out the results of his nastiness.

It's a good thing Brian heard everything and is okay with it.  Not fair that you know what the unmentionable said and we don't. <<pout>>

I can see Michael's head exploding when he hears about this...Can't wait

I wonder what you have planned for the interaction between Brian and Michael.  Hopefully it will include Brian 'explaining' to Michael that he knows everything now. Perhaps even have a talk with Debbie to help her start seeing ''her little boy" without rose colored glasses on...

Can't wait til Mickey and Lindz and Mel get their asses handed to them!
Love that they have support and family on their side! More please!

I'm a bit confused - what did Lindsay do? - I definitely need to know what she's up to... Brian certainly does know how to shop - I almost wish I had his contacts and the money to do the same (we're in the middle of our own renovations and ready to tear our hair out...LOL) It's good to see the gang siding with Brian and Justin - Emmett, Ted, Blake and Carl I can see as being consistent - I just hope that Debbie remains so too.  Looking forward to more.

Love how Justin explained the things he's been up to.  Justin seems to have everything in hand.  Now what is the bitch up to and which bitch is it?

It's so nice that Brian is deciding to join with Justin.  Learning that Brian knows Laura Lune, who is going to be so impressed with Justin is so right.

You have Justin accomplishing amazing things and making connections to prominent people. Very good! It's all starting to come together.

Then BOOM...

That last sentence/cliffhanger... my heart is racing.

Please Update Soon.

I want to see who and what she did. Is it Melanie or Lindsey?

Ahhhhh.....cliffhanger.....Nooooooooooo..... Which bitch did what???? Mel or Lindsay???? I'm not sure if I want it to be Mel with the law or Lindsay with her lies but either way I am so looking forward to Laura and Justin taking them down. I feel for Brian - so many people that he loved backstabbing him is heartbreaking. He really is better off without them. Looking forward to more...

I just discovered this story and love it.  I enjoy reading how Brian and Justin are working together to bring a reality check to the 'problem children' of Liberty Avenue.

Pitbull Justin, anyone who tries to take advantage of him or Brian needs to be very afraid!!!!  Love it,  Bill

Thoughly enjoying the pathway you are taking this story, can't wait for more

Now is that nice, leaving us with a cliffhanger?  I think Brian will fight the move now that he has Justin backing him.  Great story, can't wait for more!!  Bill

Justin is talking sense!  Hope Brian listens.  That move to Canada was very stupid.  Really enjoying your story!!!  Bill

Now they are talking and next on the list is Gus.

Love the beginning of this story.  Great to see B&J being hinest with other - that was one of their biggest failings.  Looking forward to more.  Bill