Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 06:43 PM · On: The baby Hobbits in Oz singing about the Lolipop Guild in the Enchnated Forest with alll the midgets

Ha ha! Great chapter and poor Brian! He tries to handle the situation and Justin. And I love him for not being embarrassed. When Justin pulled him in the pool I thought for a short moment he would get angry...

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 06:36 PM · On: The Gay Avenger is at it again

You let them be so cute together, beautiful and also hot. I’m looking forward to their talk about a own baby. :-) And I’m also so looking forward to their marriage, reciting their vows! Thanks for their happiness and their sensibility for each other. You let them talk about everything. Another good point. It was missing in the show.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 01:21 PM · On: How Many Grandparents Does Gus Have

You manage to put in every chapter so many beautiful scenes – and so different scenes. I think with Ben, you choose the right person to bring Justin out of his silence and his hurt. I love these scenes between Sawyer and Justin and then between Sawyer and Brian. And it’s so awesome that not only Brian’s got his real father but Justin’s got a father, too. And then this really funny scene between Brian and this Mitchell guy. Makes me laugh!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 05:54 AM · On: Courtroom lies

Unbelievable what an asshole Craig is! How could someone be so hateful to wish your own son’s death. I feel so sorry for Justin and I’m curious how it continues and why he didn’t let himself be comforted at least by Brian.

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2017 04:55 AM · On: So we had our first fight. That was interesting.

You’ve given Brian real great parents. I’m so happy for him. Now there is a Mom and a Dad he can go to, talk, open up, trust, be loved. He’s already opening up so much. I think that shows how much he has longed for this.I always love those scenes with Brian, Justin and Gus – and now I have to include Sawyer!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2017 06:24 PM · On: First step for a marriage, not just a wedding.

You’ve made me so happy. Brian’s really matured – great! A few words about Emmett and Michael. Em is such a good friend and it’s so cute how he takes care of Justin. And – although I really really don’t like Michael very much – I must say, that “your” Michael is so different in a good way, he’s also matured. He speaks of family and it includes Justin! He accepts the love between them and shows that he is really a real good friend. He cares and isn’t as selfish as in the show. And also thanks for this hot scene – the fifth time! Could happen more often :-)

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2017 04:09 PM · On: No good ever comes from a run in with Joan Kinney

Hi again! It’s been a while but now I’ll continue to read this wonderful story. What a sad chapter. “Get the fuck out of my office” – How hurtful! I feel so sorry for Justin. And although I can understand Teresa’s motives to tell Brian everything, it makes me also a little bit angry that she'd been so stubborn not respecting Justin’s request not to tell Brian. For this, she simply doesn’t  know enough about Brian. And Brian… Yeah, he’d already changed a lot but some demons are very strong ones. And I think because he loves Justin so much, Justin is the person who could also hurt Brian the most. But, they’ve already come so far, they will make it. Again, great chapter!

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2017 01:48 AM · On: Epilogue

This was a great story.  Kind of an odd spot to end the epilogue though?.  Are Craig and his wife dead?  



Author's Response:

Just have to read the next story lol it's supposed to be a cliffhanger that's why it ended like that. Not odd at all

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2017 01:18 AM · On: We survived Britin's Jungle Juice Party 2014!!!

Love how you show what will happen if Michael starts pushing for people to take sides.  I think you nailed. it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2017 07:27 PM · On: And on the fifth day, there was Jungle Juice!

I can understand Justin being upset especially if he thought that Molly was able to do something he'd not been allowed to do.  I'd be pissed too.  It was very nice that Theresa told them the truth.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2017 03:14 PM · On: Such sweet mornings

Michael still can't see he's making a mountain out of a mole hill.  Justin's getting the wedding jitters.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2017 11:23 PM · On: Lesbians in the Backroom? Say it isn't so!

Sammy in drag, hysterical!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 01:56 PM · On: We survived Britin's Jungle Juice Party 2014!!!

I don't know what is up with Sammie, she usually is all ready for a good time? Glad mikey didn't show, he's always so doom and gloom so everyone is trying to find out--he justs wants to be the one to get all the attention 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2017 12:00 PM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

I have been totally enthralled by this amazing story and now on reaching Chapter 54 -OMG a total cliff hanger!!!  How am I going to sleep now damn it?  So good ...



Author's Response:

Go read the sequel!!!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 06:33 AM · On: And on the fifth day, there was Jungle Juice!

 66 bottles of booze even with all that fruit I'm surprised they are not laying all over the backyard! Glad the younger ones are not really drinking much of the hard stuff as for the adults tomorrow will be major hangovers

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 04:31 AM · On: Such sweet mornings

Justin's nerves are at a peak. wondering about Brian getting bored with him after the wedding,  about mikey wrecking  their wedding, Brian's anger with mikey, etc. with Sam coming early for the wedding she can raise  anyones spirits.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 02:52 AM · On: Lesbians in the Backroom? Say it isn't so!

 Where ever Sammie goes she's the entertainment and everyone loves her. With Sawyer and Teresa and many other family members at Babylon wonder how mikey will spend a tale about it

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2017 01:09 AM · On: Jello shots & Watermelon

Well it's going to be the night of drunks--no sleep, no sex, just craziness all around. As for mikey who cares what he thinks I mean only has two brain cells left.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2017 03:19 AM · On: Jello shots & Watermelon

Michael doesn't deserve to be best man.  Sammy is so in trouble for getting Justin drunk.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2017 12:38 AM · On: Sawyer three failed weddings

Come on now.  We know that Theresa and Sawyer were made for each other.  Do they want Brian to come from a broken home?  Sammy is going to have everyone too drunk to enjoy the wedding.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2017 08:53 PM · On: Sawyer three failed weddings

 My oh my wonder what Sammie can do with a whole week, I sense badlam.She is nutty as a fruit cake but it's hard not to love her, Just hearing what she pulled at Sawyer's weddings me LMAO, good thing she loves Brian and Justin

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2017 08:07 PM · On: If you behave I'll blow you in the bathroom

What a funny chapter! I love a drunken Justin and I love how Brian reacts to him, doing just what Justin or better what both need. And it’s somehow cute, how Brian tells Em to take care of Justin while Brian plays against Sam. And you’ve done a real good job, letting them stay in character but changing them and their relationship, letting them mature and grow-up together. I think it’s not easy letting Brian stay in his character but also “making him able” to live such a relationship and just being happy! I’m just so happy for both of them!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2017 06:40 PM · On: Challenge accepted

Hi again! Would have loved to see this scene when Justin asked Emmett to be a groomsmen! I can really imagine it! :-)

And then… What a beautiful scene! Makes me speechless, I’ve no words for it. How I love this moment between them. Why couldn’t there be a S6 where they reach this point in their relationship. They have gone through so much and they would have deserved it. I love how you let Brian behave, doing this for Justin. I remember this scene where he thought about buying flowers and then decided against it and I just sat there, thinking, hoping, screaming just buy one fucking flower…. So, thanks again!!!! Also for what Brian’s telling Justin about their first night and the meaning of it. Honest as always, not telling something stupid, just that something felt different making him acting different. I love this, because that already meant so much. This scene is so cute, beautiful and also hot. Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2017 12:31 PM · On: Epilogue

WHAT IS HAPPENING!!! This is a great story I love it but wtf is happening now!

Author's Response:

Oh soooo many things are happening

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 11:24 AM · On: Second parent found! Check! Everything I hoped for? Check! Check! Check! But Brian may have to stop and puke first.

  It's so great Justin found Brian's real mom and dad and they love him, want to meet them.Parents, uncles,aunts, and cousins at last he has family that loves him and none of them are bigots 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 10:25 AM · On: One parent found. Check! Everything I hoped for? Check!

I'm so happy Justin found Brian's mom and she isn't a bigot. I realize Brian's afraid she will reject him because he's gay, Justin's going to check out the dad,but from is mom he has no siblings but uncle and grandparents that so glad he has ben found.It will work out if Justin can help it.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 09:20 AM · On: I’m having flashbacks of surprise hustlers and uneaten picnic food.

This was wonderful chapter. No matter how much Brian denies it he has a romantic soul. Brian and Justin bring out the best in each other

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 08:15 AM · On: The best news that a doctor could ever fucking give to Brian Kinney!

 What a shock!! Brian acts like it doesn't hurt but his birth record thing is tearing him up in side. He thinks his whole life is a sham. His true family was there for him when clearing his room and photos. I was glad Justin refused to throw it all out. Like Justin told him each day he heal a bit until the pain goes away

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 07:09 AM · On: Wrong body part that's swollen

Hope Justin can stay away from hospitals for a while, it's time to plan a wonderful wedding. Can't believe all the lies that Craig is telling, it would be so great if he would take a trip, how about to Mars.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 05:47 AM · On: We all fall down

Well Craig is the fucktard I always thought him to be. He took out three people right in front of the judge. I was really glad Molly didn't see his brutallty. I loved Melanie agreeing with Brian about the jerk. I figure three law suits against Craig will certainly delete a lot of cash

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 05:02 AM · On: A much calmer welcome home dinner

It's kind of strange for Linz and mikey to be rational loving people, but is nice especially for Gus. What Mel and Linz want to do is the sweetest thing ever--Justin a stepfather and Brian with his rights back. Gus is surrounded by loving mommys and daddies and a good life in front of him. wonderful chapter

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 04:14 AM · On: Secrets are a pain in the leg

Craig sure picks the wrong time and the wrong people to piss off. I love Brian telling him he would hit him so hard he would be shitting lesbians. Now is not the time to anger Brian or Jen.He's not that worried about Molly, he just wants to show power all he really shows is stupidity.



Author's Response:

Yeah he is pretty stupid lol that's why he's actually fun to write, because he's a moron

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Secrets Can Be Fun

Shame they had to lie to everyone, though technically some of it wasn't a lie.  But now everything will be alright until everyone finds out they were deliberately mislead.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2017 10:57 AM · On: Secrets Can Be Fun

  Glad Justin was welcomed home by all the family. Justin was missed and loved and all were happy he was home to stay.Now it's time for he and Brian to start their life they have waited so long. A feel good chapter

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2017 10:04 AM · On: Secrets Can Be Fun

 It seems that all the time Justin was gone Brian worked hard and really helped the gay community, of course keeping it quiet. He has become the man he wanted to be for Justin. Now it's time for their life together to start.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2017 09:03 AM · On: The Strange Phenomenon that is Brian Kinney

 I really love Sam, she's female Brian Kinney. I enjoyed Ted,mikey.and Em running around like the three stooges. Cynthia has been a favorite of mine. Brian and Justin can trust her. Can't wait for the family to find out Justin is home.



Author's Response:

Haha the three stooges. Never even thought of that. But oh so true

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: May 07, 2017 07:58 AM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

 The first chapter was great, I'm so glad Justin is home. Justin always said he did better art when he was happy. I don't think he would have gone without Brian pushing him as Linz entended. It's time for them to be happy and everyone else to mind thwew own business.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2017 02:41 AM · On: The Strange Phenomenon that is Brian Kinney

Things never change.  Ted told Michael and Emmett that Brian was leaving.  Why would they try to stop him and what is up with Emmett?  Brian looking like Samantha's brother, there is a story there I'm sure.



Author's Response:

Guess you'll have to keep reading to find out

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 10:54 PM · On: A second attempt at a Stag party.

Glad your're back! Will you continue and finish with, So we started our married life sequel ? I really love the continuation of Brian's family and I hope to see his parents Finally get married! ;)

Author's Response:

Yeah we'll have to wait on that one!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 07:08 PM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

One of the things that I like about this story is the review on how Justin got to this point.  Samantha is another thing.  She is outrageous, funny, witty and just plain fun.  Then we have Brian buying up Liberty Avenue and saving the district one building at a time.  Now is the perfect time to start their new adventures.



Author's Response:

Sam is such a fun character to write. Glad you like her!!!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2017 04:47 AM · On: Sawyer three failed weddings

I love this story - I think I've read it twice in the past and it's on my favourite list for when I want to reread a long envolved story - I love those...  It will be read again.  Looking forward to new chapters on 'And then we start on married life' - need more, more, more - so greedy of me, I know...LOL



Author's Response:

Well the newest chapter is coming!!!

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2017 04:03 PM · On: Courtroom lies

I've read this so many times over on fanfiction.net. completely head over heels in love with it and can't wait to see what comes in the sequel. (Am currently rereading that one right now)

what I enjoy so much in this is that absolutely every emotion one could have is in this story. No matter how many times I read this, my absolute FURY over Craig never lessens. If anything it grows. I have to be careful when I'm reading this as there are times where things are just so bloody funny as well. I've laughed out loud in parts to the point where I get the eye from my daughter or a co-worker. (yeah...I know, but I need breaks here adn there) I've shed tears in parts...

Love every single member of Brian's new family. And boy...are there a lot of them. feel almost sorry for him trying to figure out who's who, but he's obviously lovign every moment of it.

So happy you are posting here. It's a favorite of so many readers. So many of us have recced it to others.

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2017 01:23 AM · On: Courtroom lies

I left a review for you over at fanfiction. Hope you get it.

Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2017 08:06 AM · On: I’m having flashbacks of surprise hustlers and uneaten picnic food.

:)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2017 10:09 PM · On: Wrong body part that's swollen

I am really enjoying this story but I am always sad when the chapter ends lol

Reviewer: jax (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2017 09:17 PM · On: Wrong body part that's swollen

I was liking this story until I realized that i read all 55 chapters 2 years ago and there is a sequel which I would love to read an update from. Anyways great story!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2017 08:57 PM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

Welcome to MW. Love this story so much. Thanks for putting it here also.

* hugs *

Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2017 08:57 PM · On: Wrong body part that's swollen

brilliant

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2017 02:57 PM · On: The Strange Phenomenon that is Brian Kinney

So happy Justin decided to come home to Brian. Can't wait to see where your story is going to take the guys and us readers. My radar pinged when justin's 'manager mentioned how much Brian resembles his wife's brother 😉.  This is going to be good.



Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see if your radar is correct

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2017 02:54 AM · On: We all fall down

I so want Craig to pay, pay, pay. How dare he punch Sunshine? And, poor Brian and Melanie. Love your story.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2017 12:34 AM · On: The Cat's Out of the Bag...And Someone Came Home

I adore this story! Thanks for sharing it with us. Will look forward to more.

Reviewer: shf1210 (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2017 05:12 PM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

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This story IS complete as was indicated in the notes.  Shf1210, please contact the author on their profile page about concerns to this story instead of airing your grievances in public like this. This is NOT the way we welcome new writers!

Thank you, SammyScaDoo for posting this story on here!

 

Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2017 04:38 PM · On: The Cat's Out of the Bag...And Someone Came Home

loving this  :)

Reviewer: patou235vie (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2017 10:20 AM · On: The Cat's Out of the Bag...And Someone Came Home

Merci pour ce chapitre, car j'attends la suite.
Coucou Sammy j'espère que tu vas faire la suite, de la deuxième partis, car j'ai envie de savoir qui est le mauvais et que tu vas suivre les directives de Peeta et que l'histoire se terminera bien.
Merci à toi.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2017 04:09 AM · On: The Cat's Out of the Bag...And Someone Came Home

Really great chapter.  Glad that everyone is happy to have Justin home for good.  Always happy to see a new chapter.  Bill

Reviewer: Ersilia (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2017 09:43 AM · On: Straightening Out Priorities

Hi! I saw your story in another site...but I was waiting for the sequel to be completed...is it completed now? Cause I'm one of those who can't read anything till it's completed in all its parts..If the sequel is not completed, I can happily wait for a little bit more



Author's Response:

Writing the next chapter now. So it's in the works!!!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2017 05:18 AM · On: Secrets Can Be Fun

Love that Brian is trying to make Pittsburgh safe for the people he loves.  Enjoying your story a lot!!!!!   Bill

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