Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2017 07:39 AM · On: SO RANCH…DRESSING AND RUBS
Awe Zee is so wonderful to help Sol and Menno like that so romantic. The rennno on the shop is sounding so amazing cannot wait to see how it goes when it reopens.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 10:08 PM · On: THE PROMISE, THE TALK & THE HOUSE
Hehe Justin you wicked boy, thst was hot hot hot.
ooooh never mess with a woman huh, that poor car.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 09:44 PM · On: LINES ARE DRAWN IN THE ‘SAND’
Lol I so wish I could have seen Lindsey's face when she saw the ring, that will really wind her up big style.
Wow that hat was a huge sentence for Craig, he deserves it for all he did the creep.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 09:21 PM · On: WHINING, WINING, DINING & INCISING
Talon you are brilliant, oh that really was a great move lol
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 08:57 PM · On: LYDIA, LOVE, DIAMONDS & SCUPPERING STUPIDITY
That was a beautiful chapter, Matt and Hunter so cute and Lyinda and Cara having such s great time. That was so lovely to read.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 04:48 PM · On: COCKTAILS, CLAWS, REVELATIONS & MONSTERS
Omg Michael what have you done, what on earth will Lindsey say when she finds out.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 03:30 PM · On: NEW YORK: MIND MESSING, TRUTH TELLING & THE BLAME GAME
This really shows that you really shouldn't tick off the wrong woman, lol love it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 02:52 PM · On: ALL IS NOT WELL IN NEW YORK…NOT WELL AT ALL
Poor Evelyn what a thing yo overhear I hope she milks him for everything and gets them both taken down.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 02:20 PM · On: THE ‘HONEST TRUTH’ & ‘HARD KNOCK LIFE’
Wow what is Michael going to do now. He really needs to understand his actions doesn't he.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 01:49 PM · On: JUDGEMENT CALL
Is it bad that I kind of feel sorry for Michael at the way Lindsey is treating him.
I wlul so so love to see. Video of Brian's food baby and what Craig is feint made to do that is just perfect.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 11:32 AM · On: HINDRANCE, HELP & HELLFIRE
I'm really loving watching the twats getting hit from all sides by different people. They have no clue what's happening and it's fun to see hehe.
As for Craig please keep it coming for him it's brilliant hehe
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 11:12 AM · On: RELIVING AND REVELATIONS
Wow if Michael is ticked off now I can't wait until the rest happens lol this is wickedly fun
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 10:27 AM · On: THE DIG, THE STING, THE GO FISH & THE OH NO
Awe Ralph and Talon are so cute, I hope they are happy.
lol go Jennifer, you so handled that extremely well, very proud of you. Criag got what he deserved.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2017 08:42 AM · On: THE WAITING GAME…TIME TO LEAVE…AND TIME TO ANNOUNCE
My heart aches for Zee and what her so called father is doing, he needs a serenade down and with all those in her corner they will.
Talon is great and I love how she is taking power back.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 09:34 PM · On: ALMOST NO PLACE TO HIDE, JEALOUSY AND A FATHER’S ‘GRIEF’…
Omg omg omg just when you think it can't get any worse, this happens, how on earth are they gonna get this fixed. If I were a violent person, heads would roll wow just wow
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 09:13 PM · On: PARIS…SAN FRAN…NYC AND THE RETURN TO PITTSBURGH
I wanna join in snd watch the show as well, can I join the guys plzz
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 04:43 PM · On: PARIS = HAPPY…NYC AND SAN FRAN NOT SO MUCH!
Jeez how stupid is Craigh, I really hope the book gets thrown at him. So proud of Justin for not cracking x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2017 09:40 AM · On: END OF THE TETHER AND BEGINNING OF THE END…PART 1
Craig is a right evil soinso isn't he I really feel for Justin.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2017 10:33 PM · On: HOT DIGGITY DAMN!
Oh that is excellent, I can't wait to see the.ook on Craig's face when he turns up and see he had been dueped
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 11:11 PM · On: CRACKS START TO APPEAR
Holy moly what is Grady up to, he needs a good wash after those two eeeesh.
Plus how on earth did Michael get that money really, hmm.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 10:03 PM · On: BUTLER’S REVENGE AND AN EXCELLENT ADVENTURE STARTS
I actually felt sorry for Michael, to be in that much pain and be uncomfortable is horrible.
Go Talon, I am proud of you girl x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 09:32 PM · On: A KICK ASS PARTY…AND FAAL SPOTS A FLAW
Lol omg I would be rolling around laughing as well at that video of Michael, but kinda felt sorry for him as well.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 12:30 PM · On: HOPE, REALISATION AND REUNION
Oh wow that was so awesome, true love back together 💕💕
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 11:56 AM · On: The Disc, the Deal, and the Dumbasses
😂😂😂😂😂 brilliant simply brilliant, I wish I had seen their faces when Zee opened that door and Lindsey and Michael saw her.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 11:20 AM · On: And the Claws Come Out...
I hope Talon can help bring down the terrible two and make them a laughing stock.
I am so happy for Zee, she deserves to he flying high and know she is not going to be run over by her dad.
lol and when she said she knew about her brother and the guys that was just the best abs so so funny p.
Really can't wait to see how their plan plays out now, really excellent work xx
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 10:47 AM · On: You Can't Fix Stupid and You Can't Change Ignorant...But You Can Give Them One Fuck of a Slap!
I'm so happy for Thomas, I can tell he will be a great fit with all.
Lol I'm so happy that Luther is getting rolled over by the others thst man is really a piece of work.
omg omg that was just the best, naked and good that just cracked me up so much.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 09:24 AM · On: Realisations...Some Better Late Than Never!
Wow that was so emotional and I can understand Brian's reaction on seeing Chris. I feel so bad for them all. How cou,d any father do that to their child. My breaks for them.
i so hope zee finds out about what Brian and Justin did I bet she teases them a lot lol
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2017 08:34 AM · On: Relief, Reconciliation, Realisation and 3 Become 5
Awe Zee is going to be happily shocked when she finds out how her brothers have helped her.
oh woe that was some revaluations by Chris huh.
Brilliant work x
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 10:12 PM · On: Enemies and the God of Coincidence Give What You Need
Luther really is evil isn't he I so wanna take him down myself if I could. I hope Craigh and Chris get taken down with him. Eeeesh lots of drama ahead I think. Loving it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 09:35 PM · On: Coming Home - A Son and a Brother
Wow things are all over the place, I feel for Ron and Nancy so bad. It's was love to see brother and sis share a grin at least, it's a start. Loving this so far.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 08:18 PM · On: Great-Grandma Was Indeed Right...
I hope Zeus isn't there to cause trouble, and there to help. I feel if he is there for good he can really take down their dad.
Lol I bet Lindz and Michael are so sorry they messed with them now hehe love it.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 07:22 PM · On: HERE COMES GOD
They really deserve that kind of success they really do.
Poor Zee how much more can she take, I pray he doesn't hurt her.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2017 06:45 PM · On: Zee Tells All...RTOAF Starts to Circle the Wagons
Perfect start to the next instalment, I love this family.
Reviewer: Suse (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2017 02:21 PM · On: GOING...GOING...GONE?
Once again you hit it out of the ballpark! Awesome storytelling. I have a sneaking suspicion we haven't heard the last from Michael and Lindsey. Great little cliffhanger in this last chapter.
Reviewer: mayapro81 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2017 10:18 AM · On: GOING...GOING...GONE?
Loved it...can`t wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2017 10:19 PM · On: Zee Tells All...RTOAF Starts to Circle the Wagons
Say it isn't so we are done, you said for now. So you will be continuing? Well, Lindsay and Michea; get their just rewards. Babies are born. Ronald is rid of Nancy, Yay! Lovely ending. Looking forward to so much more.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2017 02:38 AM · On: GOING...GOING...GONE?
Woke up this morning to 2 new chapters - great breakfast reading. Good to see Michael and Lindsay get exactly what they deserve - had to laugh that Zee and Faal own Lindsay's debt....LOL
Sad to see the end of this chapter of their lives but looking forward the next.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2017 05:43 AM · On: PART I CONTINUED
Phew that was very hard for Brian and Justin to hear
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2017 02:26 AM · On: THE PEOPLE vs MICHAEL NOVOTNY PART I
I love how you ended the chapter with a typical Kinney quip.
Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2017 12:49 AM · On: Zee Tells All...RTOAF Starts to Circle the Wagons
Glad that you are okay and thank you, thank you, thank you for the updates to your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you for saying that. RL kicked my ass but I'm getting back out there.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2017 11:41 PM · On: THE PEOPLE vs MICHAEL NOVOTNY PART I
brilliant
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2017 06:51 AM · On: THE PEOPLE vs MICHAEL NOVOTNY PART I
I love Brian's suggestion at the end... It was great.
Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2017 11:37 PM · On: THE DESTRUCTION OF ZELDA...I MEAN ZEPHYR PART I
Just like the below post, I also have read all your stories twice all the way through. You have me hooked. I hope my previous post didn't sound mean. I'm just wondering if you plan to finish your stories.
Author's Response: No you didn't sound mean, I'm touched by your concern and pleased you like them. Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2017 08:32 PM · On: THE DESTRUCTION OF ZELDA...I MEAN ZEPHYR PART I
Just want to let you know that I adore this story. All three parts actually. But, where did you disappear to? Will you continue all your stories? Just taking a well deserved break? Let us know.
Author's Response: I'm back! RL kicked ass and laid me out flat. So have posted two, hope you enjoy.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: LEAM (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2017 03:39 AM · On: THE DESTRUCTION OF ZELDA...I MEAN ZEPHYR PART I
Update Update Update, PLEASE! Don't leave me hanging. I'm on the edge of my seat.
You usually update daily, but there has been nothing new for six days. Are you done, busy, not writing anymore, uninspired? I normally don't read WIP for this reason alone. Writers stop updating and don't say why and then stories end up unfinished.
Please update!
I want to see how this ends and what happens with Mrs. Peterson, Lindsey, Michael, Brian & Justin starting a family, and what happens with Bubble.
Author's Response: Sorry but RL kicked my ass and I was out flat. Have posted two now. Hope you enjoy.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2017 01:18 AM · On: THE DESTRUCTION OF ZELDA...I MEAN ZEPHYR PART I
I like how you wrote Justin's day in court. It showed a level of maturity to look back over his 'history' that I think the character would have had by this point.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2017 03:17 PM · On: WE CALL TO THE STAND…BRIAN, RAYMOND AND ADAM
I hope that when you write the part of Justin on the stand, that Justin suprises Michael and remains doesn't break, remains very strong and puts Michael in his place (leaving no room for an appeal).
Author's Response: But of course...this is anti-Michael and very pro B&J after all. Working on it this evening.
So glad you are still with me.
MissMeerlot
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2017 11:23 PM · On: BUBBLE...AND SQUEAK AS MICHAEL CALLS JENNY
Michael just can't help himself. Looking forward to him calling Brian.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2017 08:30 PM · On: BUBBLE...AND SQUEAK AS MICHAEL CALLS JENNY
wow - it has taken me about a week but i have read all three pieces - brilliant well done - looking forward to more :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2017 12:33 PM · On: BUBBLE...AND SQUEAK AS MICHAEL CALLS JENNY
Somebody must have dropped that boy kn his head when he was born he is so stupid lol I look forward to the next chapter
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2017 06:57 PM · On: Zee Tells All...RTOAF Starts to Circle the Wagons
Well it appears that Nancy has joined Lindsay and Michael as outsiders. So much fun. Lindsay was a great charter witness for Michael.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2017 10:55 AM · On: NANCY vs RONALD AND MICHAEL CALLS LINDSAY
Wow I am so involved in this story it makes me laugh how the bumbling duo just keep getting worse.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2017 10:26 AM · On: NANCY vs RONALD AND MICHAEL CALLS LINDSAY
Love what you're doing to Michael and Lindsay....LOL Interesting about Nancy and Lindsay - Ronald definitely needs that DNA done. Sounds like he's destined for a much happy life. Justin giving Brian a hickey - good one...LOL Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Foreverlove50 (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2017 01:54 AM · On: RONALD...THE REASONING AND THE RECKONING
I've been trying to get logged in so I could leave comments but gave up awhile back when I kept getting an error figure I try again
I LOVE THIS!!!!!
Soooooooo glad he dumping out the trash!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. So glad you like it.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 04:17 AM · On: A PARENT'S LOVE
Well now, Michael is still an idiot and he can keep digging his own grave - certianly doesn't need any help....LOL. Zee pregnant - how lovely - I can just imagine it now - one little girl is going to be very spoilt - only in a good way. There are too many level headed people in the family for it to be anything else. Can't wait to see Lindsay's head explode. Good on Ron for making an effort - can see him becoming a good addition to the family. Nancy, on the other hand - well, as they say 'the apple doesn't fall far from the tree'......
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2017 10:22 PM · On: A PARENT'S LOVE
Very diabolical but we love it. A baby, very interesting turn of events.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 05:49 PM · On: AND JUST WHEN YOU THOUGHT HE COULDN'T SINK ANY LOWER
Love the surprise. Showing that he even manipulated Vic's will was a great addition.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2017 11:39 AM · On: AND JUST WHEN YOU THOUGHT HE COULDN'T SINK ANY LOWER
Damn could he be any more vile? Seriously I hope he rats himself out for every evil things he has ever done. I want him to end up in prison for so long he will die there!! oh and congrats I think you've made me hate Mikey thru this series more than any other Anti Mikey story I have ever read. In this fandom those are my favorites well that and Anti Linds stories. Looking forward to more as always!!
Well done!
:)
Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 09:21 PM · On: MEET BUBBA, A RUN THROUGH FOLLOWED BY THE REAL THING
I am finally caught up and current on this fic. I love the way you have written Michael and Lindsay. I laugh every time Michael is in court and his inability to help himself. I love your writing about food so much. Very interesting. Also love the way Justin and the others can't stay away from the food or the kitchen while cooking is going on. Not to say how Justin can't keep him hands off of Brian's plate and food.
Dee Dee
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 04:02 PM · On: MEET BUBBA, A RUN THROUGH FOLLOWED BY THE REAL THING
I really like this story. I can't wait to see what you have planned next in the court room, especially with Joan.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 07:32 AM · On: MEET BUBBA, A RUN THROUGH FOLLOWED BY THE REAL THING
Michael's attitude needs serious adjustment. A pity Albert can't tape his mouth shut. The way he's going he'll probably end up in prison for the rest of a probable short life - I wouldn't expect his fellow prisoners to put up with his crap for long. Can't wait until the prosecution has their turn - Michael is sooooo going down...... It's a shame about Nancy - was hoping for her to decide on a happy and more healthy life with Ronald and not the greedy one she was leading - maybe there is still hope for her. As always, looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2017 11:07 PM · On: REALLY HAVEN'T THOUGHT THAT THROUGH HAVE YOU
I wonder what you have planned for Michael. I wonder if you will ever have him wise up or if he will end up spending his many, many years in jail complaining and end up in solitary because nobody wants to be near him without trying to kill him.... ;-)
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2017 05:35 AM · On: REALLY HAVEN'T THOUGHT THAT THROUGH HAVE YOU
I just finished reading and reviewing 'Love at First Bite' to refresh the page and have another chapter of Rattle. Happy lunch time reading.....I am so looking forward to seeing Michael go down... And poor Zee - the kitchen - I can see it now - all those boys covered in flour...LOL and the best line - "You. Bed. Now" - just love a commanding Justin.
Reviewer: Riaaaaa (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2017 04:39 PM · On: MICHAEL vs PSYCHOLOGY...AND THE RECUSING OFFER
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Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2017 08:41 AM · On: MICHAEL vs KIER...FRATERNISING, THE PASS AND WTF
Things are just getting worse for Michael - he is certainly an idiot but then after everything he's done he derserves it. I can't wait to see what you do with Craig and Joan - their homophopic attitudes won't go down well in a coutroom. Looking forward to more
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2017 03:19 PM · On: MICHAEL vs PSYCHOLOGY...AND THE RECUSING OFFER
Umm well Mikey is a dumb ass but we knew that. Thank you for making it truly clear at the end of the chapter. LOL I can not wait to see just how many years the idiot gets at the end of all of this. Still loving this so much can't wait for more!!
Well done!!
:)
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2017 03:18 PM · On: MICHAEL vs PSYCHOLOGY...AND THE RECUSING OFFER
I've read all three parts of this story over at another site but I'm not able to post reviews there.
Anyway, why was Michael allowed to walk around the courtroom instead of being led back to jail? Couldn't he had threatened the gang then?
And why were they still in the courtroom after the lawyers left?
I understand plotline and all, but really?
Author's Response: I'm glad that you are reading, but as I have said at the start of the court proceedings, a few chapters back, I have taken liberties with legalities, to show how Michael thinks he is a law unto himself.
MissMerlot
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2017 02:04 AM · On: TRIAL TIME...SOMETIMES ITS GOOD TO TALK
I can't say how satisfying it feels to see Michael getting what he deserves - at least the beginning of it...I can only imagine what a jury will think of his attitude. As for Lindsay - well Karma can be a bitch. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 03:30 PM · On: HERE COMES THE GROOMS AND IT'S CHRISTMAS!
Why is it that everytime I read one of your stories I end up feeling exhausted from laughing out loud? And RAVENOUS! Omg, the food in your stories....... yummilicious.
Just wished I had a bit of a bigger budget to spend on food like that.
Keep up the updates and I;ll try to keep up with the reviews.
Thank you for this lovely update. It made the sun come through the thick rainclouds that are covering my country.
XOXO
Meriam
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 08:19 AM · On: HERE COMES THE GROOMS AND IT'S CHRISTMAS!
I just love this universe. Love all the characters, all the twists and turns. I have to admit I'm really enjoying Michael get everything he deserves. Lindsay has behaved badly but nothing like Michael. Now that I've caught up - at least with this story - Love at first bite is next. Looking forward to what's next...
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2017 12:10 PM · On: DISHONESTY, DELAYING AND DENOUEMENT
Oh my this just gets better and better!! Love the Christmas Cards being sent to the idiots I'm so glad it is driving them even more crazy lol. I truly can not wait to read the trial Mikey is such an idiot thinking he will win this. I really do love this 'Verse of yours and as always I look forward to more!
Well done!!
:)
Reviewer: vinie65 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2017 01:41 PM · On: THANKS FOR THAT…
It can be the END lol it' such a great story
Thank you for sharing it
Author's Response: Hiya, no not finished, going to add the rest of the chapters over the weekend.
MissMerlt
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 07:34 AM · On: WHINING, WINING, DINING & INCISING
Lindsay preggers?? Oh please don't let that happen *shudders*. Still totally enjoying this waiting to see what else happens to all of the assorted idiots. So much fun to read love the case of giggles I get reading. Looking forward to more as always!
Well done!
:)
Reviewer: Dragonstar94 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2017 02:46 AM · On: WHINING, WINING, DINING & INCISING
I'm loving this story,
Reviewer: vinie65 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:30 PM · On: The Disc, the Deal, and the Dumbasses
I love your stories even if I didn't take time to say it, I say it now. I love it even if I'm a
little lost with all the member of Zee familly lol ; I will need a memo lol.
thank you for sharing this great story and the two others.
Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 08:27 AM · On: The Disc, the Deal, and the Dumbasses
Can't being to tell you how happy I am to see you started posting this new story. Loved the chapters so far you've made me laugh so hard reading this Linds and Mikey are so dumb. Can't wait to see what else happens to them and Luther and Craig too as I am sure you aren't done with him either. Thank you so much for continuing this lovely saga for yours.
Well done!!
:)
Reviewer: tjazz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:54 AM · On: Enemies and the God of Coincidence Give What You Need
I was beyond excited to see that you've continued the story. Great chapters (1-5)!! I look forward to what you've got planned with the family next.
-Tiffany
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