Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Asked too Much
Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2017 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Kathy...I loved this so much!

Although she changed her story, Debbie still gets me so mad how she coddles Michael. This is probably why I love the poetic justice of psycho/delusional Mikey stories.

I can't wait to read more, sweetheart. You're one of my fave new writers. *Hugs*

Author's Response:

Thanks Ms. Deborah :D

Debbie is give or take for me... she could be the best, but quickly turn to the worst when it comes to her baby!

Reviewer: kellankyle (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2017 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love this first chapter, Kathy! I'm going to go back and read All I Ask now that this is complete.

I always cringe when Debbie calls Michael her baby though. UGH.

Author's Response:

Thanks Deborah...

I cringe too... she never really let him fully grow up, but it isn't all her fault either LOL

Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2017 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I hope Debbie doesn't take Michael's side in all of this.  She needs to wake up and realize her son is not so innocent in everything.

 

I love that Brian and Justin are secretly married.  And their sex life certainly hasn't faded. lol  That was hot!



Author's Response:

Nothing would ever hinder their sex life... it's just as important as food for them!

thanks for reading :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great chapter.  B&J have their unique way of dealing with issues in their lives.  Loking forward to what Debbie has to say.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks Bill for reading and for leaving a review.

 

I hope this all works out.. it's still writing itself in my head lol

 

Reviewer: BlueButterfly (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

One thing Deb is right about, Mikey is still "my baby" and he acts accordingly since he never had to grow up. There's always someone else to blame, especially Brian their whipping boy.

Hopefully she'll listen at the dinner and not just attack, but maybe Carl will rein her in.

No matter what happens, I hope Ben doesn't go back to him. Do I see a glimpse of Ben/Em? 



Author's Response:

I agree, Debbie always tried to let Mikey have the easy way out of everything if she could... because of it he never really grew up to be responsible.

 

thanks for reading and leaving a review!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Ha ha!  I really like how they worked off their tension.  Michael is such a tool.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and for leaving a review

 

I would LOVE to work off some tension like that!

I totally agree, Michael is definitely a tool...great description lol

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2017 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hi Kathy, I loved the first chapter and hope many more will follow. In my eyes mikey is a moron, I've never liked the character or the man who portrayed him I somehow doubt that Debbie hearing all this will believe it, her baby can do no wrong. Thanks for story



Author's Response:

thank you for readingand leaving a review.

I'm working on ch. 2 now, but am a slow writer lol

I've never been a fan of Mikey either... I tried to write him in a good light once and it didn't feel right, so I have to make him a dumbass LOL

Reviewer: feet526@ comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Different...and very intriguing!!! Hoping for more, SOON!!! Thanks for a good read



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and leaving a review.

working on chapter 2 now, but please be patient though, I'm a slow writer LOL

Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2017 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!  I enjoyed reading it and I like the plot!  Eager to read what happens next.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing.

Happy you like it, and I am writing chapter 2 now, but please be patient... I am an admittedly slow writer :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2017 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

I do love looking at everyone's thoughts and can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and for leaving a review.

working on the next chapter now :)  but be patient, I am a slow writer lol

Reviewer: Linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2017 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh YES....this is going to be good. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and leaving a review.  I'm working on the next chapter now :) 

Reviewer: Elly (Anonymous) · Date: March 08, 2017 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow ... thanks for the sequel!

I hope for Ben that they come with a good plan to help Michael.

Yeah, there follow more chapters, I'm looking forward to it!!! Greetings Elly

 



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing.

Glad you are enjoying it.  I am still working on the next chapter.  Still figuring out how dinner is going to turn out :) 

I admit I'm a little slow of a writer, but I am working on it!

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2017 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

Superb ....i liked it...thank u for sharing.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for reading and leaving a review.... 

I'm working on chapter 2 now :)  hopefully it won't take too long :) 

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