Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2019 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 53 - Last chapter

was ok

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 53 - Last chapter

so glad they got their happy ending... and that the gang is all friends. <3 



Author's Response:

Of course, they had to have their happy ending. It was a long road for them to be happy.

Thanks for reading and for all your reviews :-)

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 44

Brian is being such a scared dick right now... the one person who ALWAYS had his back is who is pushing away and only out of fear! ugh

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 42

Brian may be upset that Vance caught them, but to think Justin did it on purpose is just mean

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 37

congrats Brian... giving your first blow job and being good at it... although I had no doubt lol

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 36

I like that this Brian, even when scared, can tell Justin he loves him.



Author's Response:

Because he can't deny his love anymore. He's crazy about the little blond now lol.

Thanks for your reviews :-)

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 35

His heart made a choice, now his brain needs to get on board



Author's Response:

His heart made a choice and Brian's brain will slowly make one too. It won't be able to reject what he wants to be now any longer.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 34

I don't think Brian is afraid of the repercussions EXCEPT from the business side... just my thoughts

 



Author's Response:

He is a little not only from the business side. His life is totally changing and his family isn't open minded about homosexuality.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 33

Brian is still a little timid to try anything new... but sounded hot with them on webcams!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 32

congrats to Justin for PIFA!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 31

yay... brian enjoyed babylon... what can he explore next? lol



Author's Response:

Yes Brian is slowly exploring more and more things in this new universe. He feels more and more at ease.

Thanks for all your reviews since chapter 1. I really appreciate them :-)

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 30

sounds like a super fun day.... Lindsay will catch an eyeful when she wakes up lol

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 29

Leanne must know the marriage isn't a happy one since she agreed to the separation so quickly.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 28

gee, Leanne, if you hadn't been so mean and bitchy, your husband might want to see you every now and then... but why would he stay just to be yelled at!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 27

awwww, how sweet... Brian is ready to protect and defend Justin and he finally admitted out loud he loves him :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 26

wow... I was wondering how Justin thought it was his fault about Molly, but damn, his guilt is so strong he isn't even blaming the REAL guilty guys!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 25

I wonder if Leanne suspects Brian's true feelings... she seems so mean to brian.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 24

so glad Brian stepped up and is really there for Justin when he needs him.

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2017 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 23

I'm glad Brian has Lindsay to talk to, if he was left to his own thoughts, who knows how he'd handle things.

 

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow... I thought Justin was going to start off a little slower, like maybe a blow job... but ok, I'll take full on sex!!! WooHoo and Brian liked it!!! :) 

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 20

Follow your boner Brian haha

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 19

So glad Brian was relaxed and able to enjoy the evening... only a good sign of things to come!

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2017 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

baby steps it is for Brian...  take bigger steps!!!! lol

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2017 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 25

Brian was so beautiful with Justin the way be us looking after him that's true love. I hope that he tells his wife soon so he can stop living a double life and not have the pressure. 

 

You are writing a truly wonderful story, keep up the great work. Sorry I am slow at reading xx



Author's Response:

Brian is really caring for Justin during this hard time of his life. It will bring him to wonder a lot of things about himself and his love for Justin. About his wife, you'll have to wait.

Thank you very much, I'm happy your love it. Take your time, I'm glad you're reading it and take the time to review everytime :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2017 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 42

Ou là là pas bon, pas bon !! J'espère que Brian va trouver une pirouette ou alors juste être honnéte ! Je suis impatiente de la suite Merci pour ce chapitre qui va faire bouger les choses je pense!

Author's Response:

Pas bon du tout même lol. Brian va peut être te surprendre. Les choses vont pas mal bouger après ce chapitre mais est ce que se sera en bien ou en mal, toute est la question.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2017 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 29

Brian took the first step. Hopefully he will leave Leanne soon,



Author's Response:

For Leanne, it's going to be more complicated.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2017 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :-)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2017 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 24

My heart is broken for Justin, I k ow how he feels my mother died of cancer. Thank god Brian is there for him. 

 

Beautiful workx



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry for your loss and that you had to read this kind of chapter :-(

Brian was here and we'll be there for him in this difficult time.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 27

Sure hope more (many!)  Will be coming soon. So loving this....xoxox



Author's Response:

Don't worry, there's many more to come. Thank your for loving it and reviewing :-)

Reviewer: feet526@ comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2017 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 22

GREAT read...whole story! this beautiful chanpter, the forplay, was worth the wait.!!!

Thanks so much....



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'm happy you liked this important chapter .

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2017 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 27

Oh je ne m'y attendais pas  ! Quel amour quelle douceur après ce triste jour pour Justin ! Brian a compris comment  Justin avait besoin de tout son amour pour effacer l'enterrement ! Merci pour ce chapitre ! je n'ose imaginer la réaction de Leanne !



Author's Response:

Et oui j'ai préparé une belle surprise lol. J'ai trouvé que c'était le moment idéal pour Brian de révéler ses vrais sentiments à Justin.

La réaction de Leanne va se faire un peu attendre, un peu de suspens en plus lol.

Reviewer: patou235vie (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2017 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 27

Je pense que Brian était confus sur sa sexualité, et a refusé de voir la vrai vérité sur lui à cause de sa mère Joan et de ses principes religieux, ce qui lui fait de se marier sans vraiment aimer liane, comme il aime Justin.

Author's Response:

Je ne sais pas si dans mon histoire, c'est vraiment lié à sa mère. En tout cas, pas complètement. 

Je pense qu'il se pensait vraiment hétéro pendant une bonne partie de sa vie et que sa rencontre avec Justin a finalement poussé Brian à s'interroger sur sa vraie sexualité. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2017 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 27

Sorry I have not been able to review as much as I would have liked, Audrey!  But I wanted you to know that I've been enjoying this story's slow, sweet buildup, and I especially liked this chapter.  It had so many elements I enjoyed, such as Brian's protectiveness toward Justin, and his declaration of love for him.

I'm wondering at what point his wife will find out, and what her reaction will be.  Will she be angry?  Disappointed?  Relieved?  In a way, I think it's only fair that Brian be honest with her about what is going on, since he is in essence cheating on her.  I think now that he realizes how deeply he cares for Justin, and how different his relationship and feelings are for him than with his wife, he needs to come clean and end their marriage.  It will be interesting to see how that works.

Thanks for being an author on MW, Audrey!  I'll be looking forward to the rest of this.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

It's ok Kim don't worry. I'm happy that you're still reading and enoying the story. It's true that it has a slow buildup but I wanted their relationship to grow slow for being strong at the end. I'm glad you liked this chapter, it was an important one because Brian finally confess his feelings and made love to Justin for the first time. 

About his wife, their will a lot of steps. Brian has many reasons to hide his relationship with Justin so we'll see :-)

I"m very happy to be an author of this amazing website. Thanks for your review Kim :-)

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: April 21, 2017 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 27

OMG this is the chapter I was waiting for. Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you liked this chapter you were waiting for :-)

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2017 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 26

Oh mon dieu quelle tristesse et en plus Molly qui patit de ces homophobes ! Que va-t-il se passer à l'enterrement ? Pauvre Justin ! C'est bien que Brian se rapproche de lui comme ça !



Author's Response:

Oui triste chapitre. Molly victime de la haine que pouvait inspirer Justin. 


L'enterrement est le prochain chapitre. Brian va se rapprocher de plus en plus de lui, à travers toutes ces épreuves personnelles.


Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2017 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 25

Oh comme c'est tendre ! j'aime ce chapitre tout avance doucement Merci



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup. Oui les choses avancent et elles vont continuer dans les prochains chapitres.

Merci pour ton commentaire.

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2017 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 24

I had completely forgotten about Molly! I hope we learn soon what happened to her. And Justin going to Jen's funeral with Justin is a very sweet gesture.



Author's Response:

How could you forget about Molly? lol. Yes we'll know soon what happened to her. It's a very sweet gesture which show what Brian really feels for Justin.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2017 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 23

Ca fait des jours que j'essaie de valider un commentaire, le site me déconnecte systématiquement, j'espère que cette fois sera la bonne.

Trés bon chaptire, j'aime la progression de Brian qui arrive enfin à admettre la vérité à lui-même. Plus qu'à être capable de l'admettre aux autres!



Author's Response:

Oui ça a marché pour mon plus grand plaisir de voir ton commentaire :-)

Merci beaucoup. je suis contente qu'il t'ais plu. Les choses progressent beaucoup chez Brian. C'est déjà un grand pas, de l'admettre àsoi même.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2017 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 24

Très triste mais adorable ! Doux chapitre malgré tout - Merci



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup Marie France. Les prochains chapitres seront assez tristes mais vont apporter beaucoup à notre petit couple.

Merci pour ton commentaire.

Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2017 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 22

Thank you so much for such a beautifully written chapter. I actually feel their emotion!

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the compliment. But we also have to thank Alois, an amazing writer who really helped me to write this first sex scene.

Thanks for the review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2017 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 23

J'aime Justin ! et les Doutes de Brian aussi ! Merci pour ce chapitre



Author's Response:

J'adore mon Justin lol. Les doutes de Brian sont compréhensibles et le rendent assez humain, je trouve.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2017 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 23

this story is getting better and better because of Brian's feelings and I like how patient Justin is. 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much rainbow. I'm really happy that you find it's getting better and better and not the contrary lol.

Brian's feelings will grow even more. Justin is even really patient.

Thanks for reviewing :-)

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2017 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

La scène de sexe était très bien amenée, j'ai trouvé, et très bien écrite. La réaction de Brian aussi, ça va devenir difficile pour lui maintenant de nier l'évidence, on comprend qu'il se sente perdu.



Author's Response:

Je te remercie beaucoup pour tes compliments sur le chapitre et sur la scène de sexe. 

Il ne va plus pouvoir le nier longtemps et va devoir commencer à exprimer les choses.

Merci encore!

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2017 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow, what an amazing chapter and first time for Brian. I hope he can reciprocate to Justin one day



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Finally their first time. Things will slowly change between them since this moment. It will reveal a lot of things for Brian.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2017 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 22

ENFIN! et toujours la douceur de Justin! Vous avez fait du bon travail les filles merci LOL



Author's Response:

Voilà tu l'as eu ton chapitre lol. La patience est toujours récompensée lol.

Justin est très douw avec Brian. J'adore mon Justin.

Alois m'a énormément aidé. J'ai appris beaucoup sur l'écriture de ce genre de scènes grâce à elle :-)

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2017 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 22

Very hot! I like how the story progresses.    



Author's Response:

Thank you. It will progress faster now they started to be intimate.

It was about time :-)

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2017 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 21

I like that Justin is very ckear with what he wants but does not push when he feels that it's too much for Brian. But I am a bit shocked that they almost had sex in Brian's bed, it's not respectful to his wife.



Author's Response:

Yeah Justin knows exactly what he wants because he's really mature. You'll learn later that he went through a lot. But he's also aware that everything is knew for Brian, who was conviced to be staight and only straight. He can't rush him.

Well it wasn't planned you know. Things heated up quickly, without thinking about the bed or the wife kol

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2017 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 21

proches ? ça n'a pas l'air Brian est vraiment coincé LOL Justin est super compréhensif et doux j'aime Justin



Author's Response:

Si si je t'assure. Continue de lire, ça arrive ;-).

Il est coincé mais il peut pas nier qu'il aime toutes les caresses et les baisers de Justin. Il veut juste pas se l'admettre alors il passe pour un coincé. Il s'est toujours cru hétéro, faut pas l'oublier lol.

Oui Justin est pourrait on dire est le plus mature des 2. Il sait que Brian découvre ce que c'est d'être avec un homme alors il est compréhensif. J'aimes bien mon Justin lol.

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 21

All in good time, Brian and Justin. There's no need for them to rush things.

Good chapter



Author's Response:

Oh they're not rushing things lol. 21 chapters and still no sex, it's a low rythm lol. But it will happen soon, very soon lol.

Thanks for redaing and reviewing ;-)

 

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2017 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

Brian is confused, Justin is jealous, Leanne is frustrated...It's a good thing Lindsay seems so positive, they all need a little help. I like your Lindsay.



Author's Response:

They are all doubting of sometging right now. I love jealous Justin. 

Well even if I wasn't always agreed with Lindsay in the show, I love the friendship she has with Brian. I always appreciated their scenes together, because it was showing a caring side of Brian. I wanted to keep this in my story. 

Reviewer: tam82 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2017 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ummm.This is heating up 😊



Author's Response:

Hi!

Yes it's starting to heat up and it will continue, stay tuned :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2017 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 20

Brian est-il prêt?  ah ah Suite au prochain chapitre. Justin jaloux j'aime bien merci !



Author's Response:

C'est une bonne question lol. Continue de suivre les prochains chapitres, tu verras ;-)

Oui un peu de jalousie, ça fait pas de mal lol.

Merci à toi pour ton commentaire.

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2017 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 19

I like your story.Too bad she's married, very complicated.    



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. Yes it's too bad but don't worry, things will be less complicated as the story will go by lol

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2017 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

Belle rencontre entre Brian Debbie et la bande! Je aime



Author's Response:

Merci Marie-France pour ton commentaire.

Tu es une lectrice assidue et tu commentes chaque fois, donc un grand merci :-)

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2017 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 19

Hi Audrey,

 

Brian discovering a brand new world, that was fun. I also liked how the 3 guys are fantasizing over Brian, it is nicely in canon. I really don't mind the slow build, it's logical considering Brian is not even admitting that maybe, possibly, there's a chance he might be gay.

Bea



Author's Response:

Hi Bea!

First thanks for your review. You're a faithful reader and reviewer so thanks ;-)

I loved writing this chapter. It was fun. We all fantasize on Brian lol. 

You're totally right about Brian but you know the fans of QAF are used to have sex, a lot of sex lol. So to have a Brian who doesn't sleep with Justin yet could be really not motivating. But believe me, when things will start to change between our guys, it will be a complete different story.

Audrey

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2017 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 18

Brian va-t-il se lacher ou rester coincé? Vite la suite 



Author's Response:

Brian va se lâcher...Promis dans très peu de chapitre, la relation de Justin et Brian va prendre un autre tournant.

Reviewer: cuivresdesax (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2017 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 18

Brian is so interested despite himself, he's like a cat that wants to touch but doesn't want his paw dirtied. The meeting with the boys should be fun!



Author's Response:

Brian is very interested by the gay life and Justin's life but he doesn't want to recognize it too soon. But soon, he will :-)

I think the meeting will be good.

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2017 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 17

Bien triste chapitre! Avec ce qui arrive à Justin cette non relation ne va pas l'aider vraiment J'espère tout va s'arranger parce qu'il a besoin de Brian là !!



Author's Response:

Oui triste chapitre pour Justin. J'en serai pas certaine...Toutes les situtations qui vont être liées à sa mère dans un futur plus ou moins proches, vont révéler des facettes de Brian.

Merci pour le commentaire Marie-France.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2017 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 16

Ah Mais il est un peu long à la détente Brian non?J'aime le calme et le controle de Justin face à cette situation délicate



Author's Response:

Oui un peu...Disons qu'il essaye de se persuader qu'il ne ressent rien pour Justin à part une petite envie d'expérimenter quelque chose de différent et il espère que pour Justin c'est juste aussi une attirance pour son patron qui ne durera pas.

Justin va être très mature dans cette histoire...

Reviewer: Aribritinxoxo (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2017 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

Its a little bit sad tho' for Justin. Feel like he's really in love with Brian and now when Brian kissed him back, he's even crazy about him. But then, Brian not 'that' into him.

 

Hmmm do we have a chance to see a jealous Brian? 

 

Lol Love your fic. Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Brian thinks that he's not that much into him...You know, he doesn't want to realise that he could have true feelings for Justin. But to accept to "date" Justin behind his wife's back is already a sign of feelings. And I think Justin kind of know it...

Jealous Brian? Hmmm I don't know lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes I will :-)

 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2017 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Brian continues to be very conflicted with his feelings.  Justin is a little vixen, tempting him!  I'm a little troubled, I guess, that he would flirt with someone he knows is married, but it's obvious that both men are attracted to each other.

I think Leanne won't be all that disappointed if things don't work out between her and Brian. I just don't see a spark there.

Interested in seeing where you proceed from here, Audrey. Thank you for posting on MW.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Yeah Brian he's still confused but I would say it's pretty normal when you suddenly realised that you're attracted by a young man lol. I think that Justin could have done that lol. But they're obviously attracted to each other from the start.

There are less sparkles betweeN Leanne and Brian yes but that doesn't mean she won't care.

Thanks for reading and reviewing Kim :-)

Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2017 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 16

:)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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