Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2019 06:19 PM · On: Metastasis
Love it
Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2017 12:41 PM · On: Metastasis
Very nice.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2017 03:39 AM · On: Metastasis
This will continue in another story, Right. It's getting to good to stop here.
lah
Author's Response: I hope so - I am currently plotting. :) Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2017 12:23 PM · On: Metastasis
great story - thank you for writing and sharing
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing - I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 01:16 AM · On: Metastasis
Nicely done! I really enjoyed this story. But surely, you have more to tell us. What about the commission for Auntie Winnie. And you gave me the impression that Michael was not going to stop pining over Brian. More please and thank you...
Author's Response: I am so pleased you like my story! I do have ideas percolating. Most of what I want to write has been done (and done well) before, but that doesn't matter to me much because I can't get enough myself, it seems. Also, I want to expand on my OC's without having them take over the story. Cheers! Lynne
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 01:41 PM · On: Metastasis
Great story==loved it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 02:10 AM · On: Metastasis
Wonderful story, really loved it. Thanks so much. To sleep with a smile now!
Author's Response: I appreciate you reading - sweet dreams!
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 03:57 PM · On: Metastasis
Omg...that was amazing...i loved it ...it was both emotional and romantic...thank u for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:07 AM · On: Metastasis
Such a gorgeous story I loved it
Author's Response: I'm so pleased you think so! Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: greatjoy (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 07:28 AM · On: Metastasis
love the evolving partnership of Brian and Justin.
It is time for the two of them not to let other people interfere with their lives.
hope there's a continuation on this story....
Author's Response: My thoughts exactly. If you have ideas about the direction(s) you would like this to go, I am taking suggestions :) . Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 02:54 AM · On: Metastasis
Having read this before and loving it, I wonder it there is more because I was captivated by Aunt Winnie and want more. Plus I want to see how you take Michael down a peg.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting, especially that you like Aunt Winnie. I always worry about supporting original characters. Sometimes they seem to take over and detract from the story. What would you like to see happen to Michael? I wrote this to be a stand-alone, so I'm open to input :).
Lynne
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 01:40 AM · On: Metastasis
Absolutely loved this! Everyone was in character and it felt like a realistic extension of the show series. Great work!
Author's Response: What a terrific compliment! Thank you so much for reading my story.
Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 12:24 AM · On: Metastasis
Wonderful job!
I never believed stories where after Justin went to New York Brian regressed to his old pain management. In my opinion, presuming that is like believing he is frozen in time, incapable to change - concept, that is more likely in Michael's mind, than in reality.
This said, you have no idea how delighted I was with your story - thank you for writing and sharing it!
Looking forward for new one :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading - I'm glad you enjoyed my story! I agree that a post-513 Brian who reverts to earlier-season-type doesn't feel realistic for me. It's interesting how many of us seem to feel (and write) about Brian's growth but often reject that possibility for Michael. I'm not sure why that is. Perhaps it is rooted in canon inconsistencies and the trite (?) use of Michael off-and-on as a foil by which we can actually measure Brian's growth. Of course, many amazing stories posit that Michael and Lindsay must keep Brian 'forever young' so they have a fixed point of reference for themselves. And the wheel keeps turning :).
Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 10:55 PM · On: Metastasis
Just love the first chapter, it's so great that they still found a way to make their relationship work.
I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I will try to write more eventually.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 09:47 PM · On: Metastasis
Really good. It is funny how some people never get over budding in.
Author's Response: Thank you! I waffled about tagging it 'Anti-' and hope I'm on the line of realistic characterization instead, but it's rather obvious that I'm not a fan of Michael or Lindsay :).
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 05:49 PM · On: Metastasis
Hi, Lynne! I am so happy that you posted this on here! I had been eagerly waiting for that day. This is one of the best depictions I have ever read about how B and J could have reunited post Ep 513.
Thank you for this excellent story, and for posting this on here! We deeply appreciate that. a86; ~Kim
Author's Response: I appreciate the invitation, Kim, and should have posted sooner, but "I've been busy..." :/. Considering your own talent and that of other writers, you pay me an enormous compliment. Thank you. If I gather enough ideas to develop this into a longer work, I hope to take you up on your offer of a banner. All my best, Lynne
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