Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2017 02:24 AM · On: Just Answer
So good! I'm happy that everything is out in the open now!
Author's Response: It is good, but some secrets still linger.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 01, 2017 04:29 AM · On: Just Answer
This is a great story. I can't wait for the updates. Sad to see Reese leave- hop[efully he will figure it out and go back to their home.
Author's Response: Reece is too much like Brian for him not to react.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2017 07:26 AM · On: Just Answer
Omg I am really enjoying this story, so much misunderstandings hopefully being sorted soon
Author's Response: Oh, you may hate me with new chapter then.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2017 06:18 PM · On: Just Answer
Nice long chapter, love it.
I guess a father can forgive a child before a child would or could do the same.
Justin had no idea Matt had seen him and the fiddler. Lack of communication must have been the first lesson they taught the boys. Six years of wasted anger if only Matt had said something. If Brian had explained.
Its going to take a while for Reece to come around. Brian is so broken about it. I hope Reece runs to Alex. He'll need his friend, not Brian's form of pain management.
Now Hobbs is back in the picture. Homophobic as ever with a gay son. It's not going to be pretty.
Author's Response: Yes, much easier for the father. As for Hobbs....you'll see.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2017 06:08 PM · On: Pride
I have such a hard time trying to post a review. I only have my phone, so sometimes they go through and other times they don't. Please know I'm reading every chapter. I adore this story.
Now, it's about time for the boys to know their fathers. Truly know what pain, misery, and blatant stupidity they went through to get to where they are today.
Wobderful update.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2017 09:35 AM · On: Just Answer
Just read all chapters and I love this story. Hope everything will be alright in a few chapters. More please.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 07:14 PM · On: Pride
Hi, Heather! Such an interesting story you are weaving, with all these twists and turns. I love angst, so this is right up my alley! So happy that you are posting this story on here, along with some of your others. I am glad that Anna is safe, and that some of the truth is being revealed about Justin's injuries.
I will be looking forward to seeing how all these relationships work out, and some more of the background regarding the animosity some of them feel toward the other characters. Thanks for joining MW! ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like angst because more is a coming.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 04:08 PM · On: Treading Water
Omg...soo emotional...last part made me cry..soo sad.
Author's Response: I'm sorry. But i"m glad you're liking it.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 04:08 PM · On: Pride
Amazing...u made me cry..love it...thank u.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2017 02:05 AM · On: Pride
Outstanding. I think the video is a good idea. The kids do need to see what happened in the history of Brian and Justin. So glad that Reece did not sleep with Ethan. He is such a loser.
Author's Response: Yes, Ethan couldn't be his first, ick. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2017 02:20 AM · On: Treading Water
An intervention is exactly what was needed to get the family back on track. Please give us more soon. This story is fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it was needed. I hope I didn't take too long.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2017 02:18 AM · On: Behind the Door
Nooooo! Say it ain't so... Obviously, Hobbs did not grow out of his homophobic ways but his kid doesn't seem to share his views.
Author's Response: Nope he didn't to grow out of it. Sadly, he has a new victim to torture daily with his hate.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2017 01:14 AM · On: Planes, no trains and automobiles
OMG! Reece hooked up with the Fiddler!!! No wonder Brian lost his mind . But he is wrong for resent ing the boy because he should have A: explained and B: told Justin about it.
Author's Response: Brian is really in the wrong here but he'll find that out soon.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 11:01 PM · On: Treading Water
Anna being safe for now takes some weight off their shoulders somewhat.
About time some secrets be told. Loved the banter between Justin and Vic.
Wonder how matt feels about eating crow. Telling Justin he never had to face homophobia. He lived with it daily at home and school. Does Matt even recognize Hobbs from Blake's video of the prom as the guy whose truck he and Kenyon vandalized?
Ooh let's see what happens when they get to the fiddler's part of the story. Not going to be good for Brian, Justin, Matt or Reece. Reece is lucky to have a friend like Alex.
Author's Response: I love Justin and Vic. Reece is lucky to have Alex. Hopefully, you won't hate me after new chapter.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 10:37 PM · On: Behind the Door
Oy! Matthew can't do anything without pushing Justin's buttons. If he only knew.
Hobbs still a homophobe, has a gay son and just ran into Justin's kids. Can it get any worse? Yeah they could face each other in court.
Surprised them all when Pitbull!Justin showed up huh.
Author's Response: LOL, Pitbull!Justin. It's pretty harsh right now.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 10:30 PM · On: Falling Apart
Reece too much like Justin for Brian to protect all the time. Reece too much like Justin that the fiddler will use him to worm his way to Justin.
Truths have to come out. Enough hiding.
Author's Response: Yes, couldn't agree more..
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 09:01 PM · On: News
Looks like the Taylor-Kinneys have a full house and several rebellious offspring on their hands. Great start to this story, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's hectic there that's for sure.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 06:26 PM · On: Love Doesn't Exist
Poor Justin. Having to deal with nine kids, one who care less about him because his thoughts are so so wrong about his father, all male, all that testosterone. One irate husband who's husbsnd is keeping secrets from him and when he finds out the shit will hit the fan.
A daughter he doesn't have any idea if she's dead or alive. I guess that will make him stronger. Here's hoping.
That fucking fiddler just can't let Justin be. Has to try and worm his way into a place where there is no room for him ever. Jerk off!
Author's Response: It is a lot of emotions, and It's only getting bumpier. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 03:40 PM · On: News
I just wanted to say welcome to the site. I already read your first story out to lunch and liked it. I can't wait for you to finish Breaking News. Safe Passage is one of my favorite movies. Being a mother of seven myself.
Author's Response: I'm hoping to finish quickly. Thank you for the welcome.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:40 AM · On: Behind the Door
Omg..i saw that coming..i ssoooo knew it was that hobbs and his son..wow..fantastic ...i sooooo love ur fic...thank u for posting..waiting for more..thanks.
Author's Response: Aww, shucks you make me blush. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:30 AM · On: Falling Apart
Brian told justin half truth now justin misunderstood him..god...this is exciting..lovely.
Author's Response: Lol.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:21 AM · On: Love Doesn't Exist
Oh wow...it keeps getting better..wow..now we know..jesus..ian is a real creep..he is causing troubles all around...someone should teach him some lessons..interesting going..i love it..thank u.
Author's Response: Sadly, the Ian situation is only going to get worse.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:12 AM · On: Planes, no trains and automobiles
Omg ....ian first justin now his kid...bastard ...i sooooo dont like him...ok now we know why brian hates reece...hmm..now matthew what is his problem with justin..i am going to read it now...thank u.
Author's Response: No one likes Ethan, me included. I'm so delighted that you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:46 AM · On: News
Wow...awesome start...a bit confusing for 10 kids..but i am sure i will enjoy it..thank u for sharing..
Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully, you won't stay confused.
Reviewer: runtoyou (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 01:48 AM · On: Planes, no trains and automobiles
Matt is Chris biological son
Author's Response: Wow, I'd never even thought of to do that. Now, I feel stupid. Sadly, in a chapter 5 that makes it kind of impossible. That would have been a great idea though. I'm sorry I didn't think of it.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:29 PM · On: Planes, no trains and automobiles
Ewww, Ethan! Always around to cause trouble. Poor Reece. So glad for the quick update.
Author's Response: It's all up to date now up to 5 now. I hope you enjoy the new chapters.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 06:04 PM · On: Planes, no trains and automobiles
Reese resembles Justin, Ethan's on the prowl. That only means one thing. Trouble for the Kinney- Taylor household...TROUBLE ahead.
Any news on Anna?
Please update as quickly as possible. Other site is up to chapter 5 but again I can't post there.
Author's Response: I will update again here at midnight. Reece does look a lot like Justin, Ethan can't be the only one to notice, I'll give you that. A little hit of things to come. Very much trouble ahead.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:23 PM · On: News
Hi, Heather! Welcome to MW, and thank you for posting your story on here. I love an angst-filled story, and this one looks like it will be filled with a lot of that. Looking forward to reading more. 😊 ~Kim
Author's Response: Thank you for the warm welcome. I do a lot of angst, lol. I can't wait to post more.
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:20 PM · On: News
Woah! Ten kids? Interesting start. I'm anxious to find out why Matthew hates Justin and why Brian and Reece don't click.
Author's Response: It is a lot of kids. You'll get your wish very soon.
Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 02:49 PM · On: News
Read this on another site where I can't comment, I'm glad you posted here.
I hope Anna is safe and okay and that they get news about her soon. Brian is going nuts.
Can't wait until you post chapter 2. I have so much to say.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm posting as soon as can.
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 02:25 PM · On: News
Catches you a very beginning, WOW 10, What's w/tude between Brian/Reece he is a true part of Justin?
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 4 now, it'll have what's going on between Brian and Reece, it'll be interesting to say the least. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 01:45 PM · On: News
I love the start ! Even I'm lost with all their children haha xo
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll add a cheat sheet to chapter two, I'll be adding it at midnight but I'm sure you already saw it on the other site.
Reviewer: Barbara Cummins (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 01:31 PM · On: News
Very interesting start, caught me up right away.
Author's Response: I'm so glad. Thank you.
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