Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2023 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
I loved this. Just wanted to let you know.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2021 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
did read it again
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2020 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 2
This had never so twisted. Oh, loved it so much.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was a lot of fun to write but I had to think about it. Prompts are always a great way to start a story.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2018 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
good one
Author's Response: This was written for a QAF gift exchange. Maybe one day, I'll expand it and write some more in this universe.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2017 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
What a sweet story! You left it open for more and it sure would be nice...hint, hint, hint...
Author's Response: Thank you. I probably will eventually write more in this universe. RL just has to slow down.
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
Wow. Chapter 2 actually made me blush.
Great story
Author's Response: lol
Author's Response: lol
Reviewer: Calliesky (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2017 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
I have a feeling u are located in the Bay Area :) I'm in Walnut Creek. I love stories set in SF
Author's Response: It looks like I didn't see this review- thank you for your comments. I do not live in the Bay Area- but I did visit there and these are from my memories
Reviewer: Clairelp (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2017 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
a second part would be amazing - lovely story - well done
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm on vacation next week and may have some time to write- possibly the muses will be inspired.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2017 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
Wow this story was brilliant, I read it all in one go it's why I'm reviewing on the last chapter. I loved their chemistry and the banter between them. It was hot and sexy and sweet. You have to write more plzzzzzzzz pretty plz with sugar on top.
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful praise. I said I would think about adding to it, but I needed to finish Fatherhood first. I may rethink that decision as Fatherhood just doesn't want to die. lol
Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
great story
thank you for writing and sharing
Author's Response: thank you- I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is always great to hear that my readers enjoy my work.
Reviewer: Nukefan2012 (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2017 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Really enjoyed this story, and all your others too!! Hope to see this with a sequel as well as your other stories continued to completion. Especially Fatherhood!!
Author's Response: Nukefan2012- Thank you so much for the kind words. I hope to finish Fatherhood, especially since I started writing it almost 2 years ago as a short story ( lol). I hope to write a seqeul in the near future.
Reviewer: nena (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2017 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
This is really a great story, and I like where you left but......you know curiosity and all........I'd really love a sequel, in could be interesting the interaction with the rest of the gang!
Anyway this I really liked!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking hte time to let me know you enjoyed the story. I will probably write a sequel, RL has slowed down some and I should have some time soon.
Reviewer: Barbara Cummins (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
good story, really liked your descriptions of SAN Francisco
Author's Response: Thank you. Hubby and I went there in 2009 and saw a lot of the places I described. Having been there it is much easier to describe. I'm glad you liked the stroy and thanks for letting me know.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2017 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
lam Torn.
I did like the way it ended cuz it leaves it up in the air to the readers imagination
BUT
then again I want more ( that happy ending) to see how this plays out, how they come together as a couple, family unit if you will. ( which is a wonderful thing! Hehe)
I has always enjoyed you journey's to "getting there" as you do tell a story WELL. (stripper, missed opp, etc and my all time fav the Pains series)
so yeah I'm torn 50/50 lol so I'm say it's a draw lol
Author's Response: It is always nice to hear from a reader that they have read many of my stories. I too love he Pain Managment series. It is probably by favorite. I'm glad to know that you enjoy my style of writing. It is always nice to know that your readers enjoy how you write. Probably will continue the story but if you have read my stuff ( obviously you have) you know that I like angst too. So that being said, there will probably be some snags if this continues.
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2017 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 3- Reunion
I think it would be nice to keep this story. I'd really like to enjoy the development of their relationship.Thank you!
Author's Response: thank you- glad you enjoyed it
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2017 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
"What the fuck is people watch?"
That line made me laugh so hard; like Brian couldn't even fathom just sitting, being at peace, when he could be out fucking. So perfect! Great start! I hadn't seen this fic anywhere else so this is all new for me. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. So glad that you are taking a chance on it and like it. It means so much for the readers to tell me they like a story. Second part is posted now.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1- Vacation time in the City of Brotherly Love
Fantastic storyline. I'm sure this meeting of the two will produce results that we'll all love.
Author's Response: Thanks, as always for your support. Hope you enjoy the story
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