Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Shattered Glass
Reviewer: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2017 10:58 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

I'm hooked.  I love that Gus feels safe with Brian and Justin.



Author's Response:

I'm so over the moon you like thid, I love Gus with them and feeling safe is very important for him right now. 

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and I hope you enjoy the rest xxx 😍

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 10:04 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

I've been reading another huge story that features Mikey and Lindsay as the biggest loosers ever, the auther called them Wankerboy and Twatzilla, lol.  So reading your Mikey is a breath of fresh air!  Concerned, connected and aware of all Brian does for him and the family - and grateful for it! I'm amazed that Mel gave up JR so easily, but it looks like your Mel loves her daughter and knows they are behaving poorly as parents.  I like that.



Author's Response:

I'm overjoyed you like these versions of them, I normally write them different but I wanted to show this side to them as well and I am happy you saw that. You are tight, Mel wants what's best for her little girl right now. Thank you so much xx

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 01:46 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Brian, and his Sonny Boys... Sweet...

Hugs Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 01:46 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Brian, and his Sonny Boys... Sweet...

Hugs Kathleen

Author's Response:

He loves them doesn't he, I love how he is with them. Thank you so much xx

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 06:35 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

How they didn't even check on Gus speaks volumes--Brian is never an asshole when it comes to Gus's welfare. In my eyes Linz always put herself before  Mel, JR, and especially Gus, Mel is smarter but living with Linz would drive anyone bonkers. They're very luck Brian wants to help his sons mommies and make it plain he won't have the children live in constant fear.  



Author's Response:

You are spot on, he is never that when it comes to Gus he knows what it's like to grow up in a house like that and doesn't want it for his son. He'll help them for sure. Thank you so much for the amazing review x

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 01:46 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Sometimes I wonder what Brian would do without Justin.  He's so supportive and loving!  Not that Brian isn't...but you know what I mean.  :)  The girls really have a lot to answer for.  Nothing can excuse this.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean and you are so right, he js lucky to have him, they are lucky to have each other. The girls need to wise up that's for sure. Thanks so much for the review x

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 01:32 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Aww such a sweet ending to this chapter.  Boy Linds and Mel sure have a volatile relationship.  Kudos to Brian for taking charge.  And I'm glad Michael seems more mature in this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much that means a lot to me. Brian will do anything to make sure his family is safe and Michael will as well I'm sure. There is lots more drama to come xxx

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 01:03 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Incredible that Linds and Mel had no idea that their child had left the house! Bad enough not to check on Gus during all of that time, but to fail to check on J.R. who is just a baby?? How could they leave her alone for so long? Awful. They deserve everything that is coming to them. Whatever their problem is not an excuse. They are the ones behaving like immature brats. Loved seeing Brian taking charge and laying down the law to L. & M. And, it was good to see Justin being such a great dad to Gus. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much that mean more then I can say. I do agree with you, to not check on the kids is so wrong and anything could have happened and look what did happen. Brian loves the kids with all he is and Jusfin the same. So much more to come. Xx

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 12:11 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

I hope he takes them to court and wins. Let them have visitation. Would serve them right. Never even bothered to check on either kid. Shameful on the girls' part.

Author's Response:

The girls should feel shame for this happening, to not check on your kids is neglectful. There is so much more to come and I hope you enjoy it. Thank you so much for the review, means everything to me xx

Reviewer: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 09:16 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

What a nerve,Mel is the one who has the guts to get angry,but not as angry as Brian is..Seriously though they didn't know that Gus was gone??What an irresponsible parents..I think they should solve the problem for the kids and then fix their own problems either get back together or not as long as they work together for both kids..

Another great chapter,thanks for sharing..

Author's Response:

You are so right they should have known their child was gone from the house, I mean shouldn't parents check on their kids? There is a lots of tension and balls in the air right now. There is lots more to come. Thank you so much for the wonderful review it means everything to me x

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 05:49 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

A sweet, tender and heart wrentching moment between Justin and Gus. Oh how my heart aches for the poor little boy. thank goodness he was able to get to B&J. That he's now feeling safe and secure. He's going to have a lot of questions and concerns in the near future I would imagine. He must wonder why his mothers are behaving in such a way. Was surprised when you clarified that Lindsey smacked Mel. I thought it was the other way around. The girls are really going to have to get their shit together now!! Brian will follow through. Micheal I think will do everything he can to grasp onto Jenny as well. both men will do whatever it takes to keep their kids safe and secure. Both physically and emotionally.

Terrific update! Definitely really getting into this. You always write such emotionally charged stories. doesn't matter what the emotion is, whether it be anger adn frustration and concern as in this one, or heart warming and loving like others.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm blushing now. I always thought Gus and Justin would have these moments if the show went on so it seemed fitting. This wasn't an easy chapter to write and it gets even more emotional as it goes on. There is much the girls need to do. The guys will hold onto the kids tight and make sure they feel the love from their dads. Xox

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 04:04 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Poor Brian.  This must dredge up lots of bad memories for him.  Glad that Mel was at least a little cooperative and realizes they have a problem.  Another great story from you!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm sure it must be for him and he is in protective mode now and Brian like that is not to be messed with. There is lots more drama to come. Thank you ever so much, I'm over the moon you like it x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 03:08 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

They might still call Brian an asshole, but when it comes to the kids he treats them the same and with respect.  Something the girls aren't doing.



Author's Response:

You are spot on, the girls just focus on what's good for them what makes them look good. Brian puts the kids first when protecting them. Thank you sooooooo much for the review xx

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