Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2017 11:57 PM · On: Shattered Glass
I love the way you wrote Gus in this story. What a loving caring little boy. Brian and Justin are great parents. Can't wait for the sequel. Triplets wow, they have a busy life ahead of them. Great story and wonderful writing.
Dee Dee
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love writing him and I agree they are great parents. I have lots planned for the sequel just doing my research at the moment before I start. And we still have to see what Brian has planned for Jennys birthday don't we.
massive hugs xxx
Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 09:52 AM · On: Shattered Glass
Oooh. I like the beginning of this, so cute, and then the sadness with all Gus' pov. Such an amazing contrast. I can't wait to find out what the girls have to say for themselves.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, this means the wot,d to me. I love writing Gus, so I'm so happy you liked it. Thank you so much for the wonderful review x
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2017 01:30 AM · On: Shattered Glass
I'm really loving this fic so far, and your writing is coming along nicely. Great job Darling!!!
Hugs Kathleen
Author's Response: Thank you ever so much that means the world to me, I'm so happy you are enjoying it xx
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2017 05:41 AM · On: Shattered Glass
Hi Vicki, It surprises me how parents fight and assume small children aren't hearing and paying attention. There was no fighting in my home or never done when I was around. How scared Gus must have been to being under his desk and trying to be brave for his baby sister and how brave to try to get to his daddy--he acts more grown up than the mommys, worrying that he can't carry his sister and their only hope was their daddies. Your stories about Gus always tugs at my heart strings .
Author's Response: You are right thry didn't even think did they and mine never fought either. Kids hear and see everything. Gus has a massive heart and he is protective just like his dad. Your words mean so much to me I can't thank you enough xx
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2017 01:43 AM · On: Shattered Glass
Poor little Gus...Having to do all that on his own just to protect his little sister. I can't imagine what Brian and Justin must have been feeling when he showed up! Anything could have happened to him...Good thing they're there for him. :)
Author's Response: Gus is just like his dad isn't he, a strong little boy, Brian and Justin love him so much and want to be there for him. JR is lucky to have him as a brother. Thank you for the wonderful review x
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2017 04:25 PM · On: Shattered Glass
Wow...that was great ...i love this fic...waiting for more...superb work.
Author's Response: I am so happy that you love this story, words can't express what it means to me. There will be more tomorrow I promise x
Reviewer: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2017 02:12 AM · On: Shattered Glass
What is Lindsay up to,why she change the papers or why did she files a new one without telling Mel?That must be a punch to Mel's gut,knowing that your partner is going behind your back and betrayed you?And what could be Brian's reaction to all of this when he learns about the papers??Maybe it will push Brian more to get Gus to stay with him and Justin.
I loved to see Gus and her sister together like everything is fine now...
Thank for updating and sharing..
Reviewer: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 03:40 PM · On: Shattered Glass
What's wrong with women?Are they out of their mind,roughly fighting while small kids are around??Poor Gus,cannot take it anymore..It's a good he's a smart little boy and knows how to find a way to get out of the house to get some help,but it was dangerous as well...Thank God it wasbthe brother who works for Brian who he bump into..Now the girls better be watch out,bcoz there's storm coming their way,from Brian is already bad how much more to add Michael and Debbie...I just love to see they tear them into pieces of which they totally deserve...
Just the beginning already loved it,so i'm looking forward for more chapter..Thanks for sharing.😘
Author's Response: you are most welcome, those girls need to wise up and put the kids first. Thank god for the guys and Gus's huge heart. xxx
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Shattered Glass
Wonderful to see another story from you. And, a nice long one, too, so there is a lot to anticipate! So many questions--how long has this been going on? What in the world is wrong with Linds and Mel? How dare they expose the children to anger and violence! I wonder what Michael's reaction will be? Gus is so brave and so thoughtful. Thank goodness he bumped into the right person. I'll be anxious to see how this plays out for everyone.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Gus is def his fathers son isn't he looking after people. I'm sure Gus will tell his dad all and those girls are gonna have to face Brian and Michael. Thank you so much for the review, I cannot say how much it means to me. Hugs xx
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:50 PM · On: Shattered Glass
Wow, what a start!!! Lucky for everyone that Gus ran into someone who knew him. Linds & Mel are going to feel the wrath of Brian and I hope it is swift! Looking forward to more. Bill
Author's Response: Fir sure thank god for David, oh the girls will def feel Brian's rath we know how much he loves his son. There will be another chapter today. Thank you so much for the review it means everything to me. Hugs xx
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:26 PM · On: Shattered Glass
Really intense story. Do the girls even know that Gus has gone? Gus would feel happier if he knew that Mikey had his little sister safe. Can't wait for another chapter!
Author's Response: It is a very intense start alright and Gus is such a brave boy. There is more drama ahead. I'm posting another chapter today xx thank you so much for your review it means so much to me. Hugs xx
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 09:31 PM · On: Shattered Glass
I love it and you have 14 chapters already goody a long fic yepee
Author's Response: Oh thank you soooooooo much, I'm filled with joy that you love it. I have no clue how long this will end up, it has a life of its is Lol lol . Thank you so much for the beautiful words and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Big hugs xx
Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 07:11 PM · On: Shattered Glass
Jeebus mother fucking christmas! Holy shit! I want to reach into this story already and bitch slap those 2 women! Oh I hope that Brian and Michael are able to keep the kids. I hope they force those 2 to get the help they obivously need. I don't trust either of them at the moment though. anticpating how those phone calls are going to go. And that physical violence is in the mix too. No plce to those 2 kids at all!!!!!
My heart was stuck in my throat at what gus had to hear, never mind when he was out on teh street so scared. thank goodness he came across Dave!! That the poor guy was able to get to his daddy. what a sweetheart looking after his baby sister.
I have to say, in just 1 chapter I'm already revved up and am eagerly anticipating this story. Glad you have at least 14 chapter already. Hoping you post regularly.!! lol. I can see myselg chomping at the bit read one after another.
Terrific start.
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response: Lol ŷou made me laugh out loud. Yeah poor Gus was so brace wasn't he, his only thought is to get his sister to safety. There is lots more to come and some new faces I hope you'll enjoy. I wanted to slap them myself and I was writing it. There is lots more to come and I truly hope I don't let you down with Sony of it. Your reviews always have me smile.
Ill lll be posting one a day, I'm gonna try writing more Friday I can't tomorrow as I'm going to a country music concert.
Big hugs xx
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